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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

PART III

(Disclaimer : When I pen down Sukor moments, I am able to go bold, my thought flows, but when I want to pen Ragkor moments I am subtle. I wondered why? It's the same MeeJay and VJ in specific... But then I realized it's the way VJ had brought out Raagahv, his character with utmost respect, love and pure unadulterated love, I could not go bold, but when the journey is taken further, I thought there is the need for it as sometimes lust and love helps with the emotions and turmoils...Though I made them blossom with the roses still I was not explicit. In the subsequent section Dessert, I have gone a bit bold as I thought it was required, but nevertheless if any of you feel uncomfortable or vulgar please raise alarm so that I can edit it please.)

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But suddenly these words were ringing in his mind

I don't know what I will do with my grandsons. Being very rich, there are people out there who will be eyeing to create problems and also I worry about the safety of these boys.

You came as a blessing as but for you I would have died leaving these kids as orphans. Can you stay with me for some time please to help me. Shyaam Lal was accepting the same and requested Raaghav and Girija to stay behind.

He felt uneasy!! Why suddenly I am remembering Bade Maalkin's words. Maalkin please take care of this happy family. He prayed...

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Raaghav drove the boys dropped them at School. He drove to the plantation, went through certain documents, changed into his uniform and went to the tea rows.

The hyena came behind to the plantation gate... Read Rishab plantations... The security guard smiled and asked him what he wanted. He said he wanted to meet the owner of the plantation as he is a consultant and also a plantation expert and gave a Rs. 500/- note to the security guard. The guard Govind Seth, refused and said, hamara saab hamey achasey kaayal rakthenge insliye, doosro ko paisa lene ka zaroorath nahi. He politely refused and asked him to share his details to pass it on to the office so that they will call him and fix the appointment.

He wrote the details:

Name : Kishore R..

No.:

Profession : consultant, termite control expert.

He smiled, so everything is too straight... he spoke to himself and went away. He saw the plantation from far away...

He was waiting for the appointment and he was asked to come at 3 pm in the evening.

Raaghav was with the workmen and he was enquiring about the workers' leg and asked him take rest unless he got the clearance from the Doctor.

Shyam Lal and the Lawyer met Raaghav had few talks about business and about workmen's insurance.

One of the worker brought up the concern that in a particular part of the plantation the tea leaves were shrinking and there was a need for an expert to help as the current expert has gone on vacation but can be called. Raaghav is very particular in his workmen's work life balance and avoids calling anyone who goes on vacation.

By then he got the information from the office that a consultant has been given appointment for 3 pm. But Shyaam Lal said that he had to meet the Plantation officials and cannot be with Raaghav and that he can go ahead and meet the consultant.

He asked for the name and took the details... R??? why it was not filled... He pondered?

He ushered his thought..When Raaghav asked what he was thinking about.

Raaghav finished his chores, met the technology expert to discuss about the new machines and packaging materials. He gave approvals for fixing fire and electric circuit alarms along with few CC TV cameras at the vintage points to avoid any mishap as the workmen slipped and fell as the flooring was cemented and there was no warning sign placed though the plantation had the most modern facility with CCTVs and shuttle vehicles to mobilise the women especially those who were pregnant. Rishab Plantations had won the Best Factory to work award for the past 6 consecutive years and needless to say Arjun was the one who told his daddy to place CCTVs as it was placed in their schools.

It was 3 pm...

Kishore the man waited at the gate with his goggles and cap and pipe. Waited in the corner seeing Shyam Lal left the factory. He was taken into the factory after the security clearance process. He met Raaghav, shared his expertise in tea plantation especially with that to pest control and Raaghav was impressed and felt at ease and asked him to come the next day to check upon the area which had the problem. He shook hands, smiled looked around and was escorted till the gate.

He stood in front of the gate... Soon you will be mine... He laughed wickedly. He saw Shyam Lal's jeep and quickly got away. Shyam Lal was checking the visitors register along with the CCTV footage which he normally does and when he was about to look at Kishore... Raaghav called him and he went to meet him.

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The boys were happy when they saw the two wooden boxes thinking it contained big bars of chocolates or some game console... They opened to see two slips... it said... my dear Arjun and Aayansh, this is from your grandpa Rishab. I am happy that you were able to grow happy to get this box on your tenth birthday which is very important. Please meet Shyam Laal if you are extremely happy after a week to get your gifts.

Arjun the smarto was surprised and AAyansh was excited but said lets take this to daddy and go to Kaka and get the gift..Arjun said as daddy and mummy says we must listen to elders words and be patient. It's a gift so we shall meet kaka after a week and get it... Daddy knows we always get covers on our birthdays so this is nothing new to be told. We shall show them the gifts after we get it like we always do. Aayansh was bit impatient but he knows Arjun always is right...

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Raaghav and Chakor picked the boys from the school, the girls were waiting for them and was jumping happily at the boys who ran to them. Arjun was too attached to Aditi, while AAyansh to Ananya though all four were too attached to each other. The girls were jumping in the buggies... when Aayansh asked mummy when will they stand up and walk with us, I am excited to hold their hands to play ring-a-ring- a roses.

Chakor smiled and said they are already one and soon they will put their feet to hold and stand and then their first steps. Raaghav teared when Ar ran and hugged him, daddy why are you crying... He said I remembered that day when you both stood up holding my legs and extending your tiny fingers to hold mine... Chakor said and you did all by yourself... Ar and Aa said but daddy mummy this time we will first hold their fingers, Me Me both were jumping... So were the girls too giggling with their single tooth not understanding anything...

Girija walked with their evening snacks and also with two arm bands black in colour which was the sacred thread that she had organized from the pandit for the boys. Raaghav attached the small locket with OHM symbol on it and they tied it to the boys biceps... Daddy whats this... This is for your protection and also to ward away the evil as my Lions are turning smart, the parents laughed. He said at any cost this thread should not be removed he said.

But daddy and mummy what about the girls Aa asked... they said the roses have the Lions to protect them always.. the boys hugged and said yes we will not only them but few more... Raaghav smiled when Chakor said... No Ar and Aa no more as we have to be responsible citizens and we are foursome and our country is already highly populated. Raaghav face fell and Chakor did not fail to notice it smiling...

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The homework session was done and the boys as the norm was had dinner together and were in their parents' bedroom which was huge as it had the girls cradles though they had their special fairy themed rooms when they grow up.

Ar would hug Raaghav while Aa would sing the Lohri with Chakor he was good in singing and both would kiss the babies while Aa would kiss Chakor in her eyes and Ar would hug Chakor and leave for their rooms...

But unusually, both the boys ran back and hugged Raaghav and asked him to lift them holding his biceps and he swirled them...

He went with them to their room and asked the boys, sab teek hai na, is there anything worrying you Ar... No daddy but I feel weird and sometimes dream as we are being pulled away from you... Raaghav held them tight to his heart and said AR and AA none can pull you away and I will die the moment anything happens to you both. Both the boys placed their fingers on his lips and said Daddy please we love you... donot say such things... He showed them the black band and said this is powerful and blessed by the gods, so nothing evil will befall on us.

He put them on their beds patted them till they slept and left their room placing kisses on their foreheads.

He walked back to his room but with a worried thought...

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The DESSERT ( a bit bold...read at your risk)

He walked to his room, Chakor was in the restroom to change into her nightwear and Raaghav kissed the princesses and went to the other room and changed to his pyjamas and and his sleevless thin T . He slept when Chakor came in her yellow colour simple skirt and a tops and kissed her angels and smiled at Raaghav and slept holding his hands. The lights were switched off while chanduji was witnessing his adories...

Raaghav got a message and without disturbing went very slowly to the balcony without switching on the lights.

Ananya wriggled a bit and Chakor woke up knowing it and quickly cuddled her close to her sitting up with the pillows decked behind. She slept holding the little one...

Raaghav walked back to the room when he got just mesmerized at what he saw...

Chakors side small bed light was on, it was very mild... she was sitting upright sleeping with her lips parted in smile holding her angel. Her tops was rolled up as her angel has had her midnight dessert and had slept in her arms suckling...

She was looking absolutely ravishing with that mild light on her, her disheveled hair strands, her mildly exposed bossoms which was making him go crazy... But... her tiredness had taken over her while the angel was happy with the sweetness in her little lips. He very very carefully lifted the little one who was way happily snoring to bliss and put her in her cradle.

He turned back to his queen, sat beside her, held himself and very slowly tried to bring down her tops and unintentionally his thumb brushed her peaks and she jerked. She saw him close to her, his hands stopped holding on to her tops while fingers were touching her bare sides...His eyes on to her as he didnot expect her to jerk... It was unexpected and she blushed completely looking at him, and then lowering her eyes...

He did not realise his voice was turning husky as he said, "I didn't know this was my princess's dessert time. His lips touching her ear lobe as he did not want to wake up the babies...She blushed completely as his hands was still creating that ripples which was touching the sides of her bosoms and his thumb still there.

He continued, I know my son flirts at the eyes of his mummy but... she... continued yes this sis of his is naughty as she wants her dessert everyday... Chakor was very intermittently nursing the babies due to her work and also the babies were growing fine but Ananya would grab her midnight dessert everyday... Raaghav was not aware of this... she could not speak as the mere touch of his made her shiver...She lifted to see his face when she saw his face change at the mention of the boys... Raaghav she cupped him... what happened, something bothering you??? He held her close, and his act was making her exposed part stuck to his T which had the well toned torso.. She jittered a bit as she was getting aware that still his hands was around her with her half exposed part and its was hardening more, but his thought was slithering... He said I don't know why suddenly the boys were scared, dreamt of being taken away from me... Also suddenly there is some pesticide in the tea too... She cupped him and soothed him leaning on to him and said don't worry everything will be fine, just that the boys are growing...

He said if anything happens to any of you, my breath will... she put her fingers on his lips...shhh nothing will befall...He hugged tighter and she was on to him, blushing more biting her lips and both realized their bodies were getting heated. He held himself as she was tired and said lifting her chin, their bodies together, my princess is lucky for she had her dessert but if you allow can I go have a peg as I am too...she knew he was tensed and need a drink though he has completely stopped but the boys words are just hounding him.. She said looking into his eyes, caressing his cheek, Raaghav your princess had the dessert while my king can have his dinner... pursing her lips... do you need a peg still... she asked him, he was stunned, surprised, his hands slipped through her tops for reaching for the feast...his eyes lusting. He said ... That's dinner with Wine, my exotic one...he slowly moved and placed her to the centre of the bed... But... We need to be responsible citizens, he winked... Hmmm yes ofcourse I know how to be responsible she said winking at him... You need not worry!!! that was enough for him, a go from her...

He kissed her fervently, thanking her as she turned to be his exotic wine...he relieved his tension as her love was making him relieved, revived, go crazy..Inspite of her tiredness she was helping him destress, which he knew so he handled her beautifully, preciously and soothingly as he soothed himself in that bliss . He knew she will be the most responsible citizen too as she knows to take care of everything better...

Not leaving her lips, he pressed the bed headrest button and brought down the special curtains which are attached to the ceiling which falls around their beds as when they go into their other world they don't want any one to see.

It was needed, they imbibed, infused held each other, strengthened each other as it was needed very much for the storm which they would be facing in the next few days..

Till then let them sublime in this bliss, devouring each other...

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Kishore said, Mr. Raaghav, the tea plants have been affected so need to do the pest control for the same. Raaghav said fine we shall go ahead

Chakor and the boys walked in to Raaghav's office...

Are they your boys??? He asked... Yes my sons... He said proudly.

Hello boys!!! He extended his hands... They said Namaste Uncle...

He looked at Chakor, she is your... Our mummy said the boys...

Hmmm mummy, Arjun and AAyansh held her hands....

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART IV

The day dawned and Chakor woke up to the roses whining while Raaghav was already off to wake up the boys. He was checking upon their projects and schedules for the day. Arjun was always into adventure and projects while Aayansh was into the soft skills of music and painting.

They set off to the school. Raaghav said Chakor that he will be visiting AZ in two weeks to check out there. Chakor was active in the development though she had not visited yet, as the kids were too young and Raaghav was not in favour of the kids and her to travel that long distance and he was scared that whenever she visited AZ something ill luck may strike.

Though she wanted to visit the villagers, she restricted herself as she did not want to upset him.

Raagahv dropped them and set off for his plantation. Shyam Lal called him saying he will be going to meet the wholesalers who had few issues with the quality of the supplies... He said Raaghav to meet Kishore and he will be back by noon. Raaghav always ensured that during every important business meetings Shyaam Lal was there as he regards him with high respect. Shyaam Lal has trained Raaghav and even says that he handles it well though he feels very honoured the way he was always respected next to Rishab the Owner. He treated Raaghav as his own family and he had an extra vigil over the boys.

Shyaam Lal was indeed worried as this is the first time in the history of the Rishab plantations that there has been a quality issue and the wholesalers who had dealt with Rishab Plantations had high respects for Raagahv after Rishab and does not want the information to go into the market.

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Kishore was there in the office as was called by and he was taken around the plantation.

The plantation was huge and was well maintained but there was a specific area which was down the hill and was bit rustic and had a small damaged building. He asked what it was and Raaghav said it was the old godown which has been pulled down as its accessibility by shuttle is difficult.

He inspected the plantation and found the workmen very sincere and was aware of every action of the management, but as Raaghav was still in his business attire he did not know that Raaghav also works with them.

Kishore said, Mr. Raaghav, its good that only a particular area is affected and once they sign the contract they can start the spraying of the pesticides. Raaghav said fine we shall go ahead and to meet Shyam Laal with the contract papers.

Kishore was taken aback, he said I thought you take decisions, Raaghav said ofcourse but the contracts are normally looked by Shyam Lal and the legal team and then comes to his signature.

Shyam Lal called Raaghav saying that he should meet the wholesalers as the issue of quality could not be sorted out. Raaghav excused himself and asked his other staff to carry the discussion with Kishore and asked him to come in the evening to meet him along with the contract. Kishore said this guy is very smart so I have to be cautious for the initial days and then go ahead. He said he will send through the contract as he has another meeting to attend to.

Raaghav rushed driving to the wholesalers office. Chakor called him to find if he would pick her from the school as her session was over for the day but he told her about the issue. He was worried as this was the first time that there has been quality issue with the stocks sent and it was sad they did not check it well before. It was mainly due to the insects which were damaging the leaves... and this plantation caters to the domestic market. Chakor realized he was tensed, he was sharing his concern when she said why don't you talk to them and tell them that you will replace their stocks with the international quality that was sent for export which was sent from the plantation which was in the higher altitude, to set against this. He felt it was a good idea and quickly called Shyam Laal and shared it. He reached their office in the meantime. Though there will be a cost incurred by the plantation but the goodwill of the company will not be affected and also the wholesalers will not suffer a loss. Shyaam Lal was very happy and was thinking himself about Chakor's smartness and spoke to the legal team and got the concurrence. The wholesalers were extremely happy as they will not incur any losses and promised that they will support Rishab Plantations till the insect clearing process is done.

Maidam has a solution for every problem... He smiled...thinking about the last night happenings as to how his tension was soothed...by his Chakor...and returned to his office, while Shyaam Lal stayed behind to organize for the checking the stocks which has to be replaced.

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Chakor called Raaghav and told that she was bringing the boys to the office, as the school had declared half-a day and they can go home together.

Chakor and the boys reached the plantation.

The families, their children saw them coming and the kids there ran to them as Ar and Aa always played with them.

Kishore was still there to clarify some doubts about the area before he could prepare the contract.

Chakor and the boys walked in to Raaghav's office...

Kishore looked up..Are they your boys??? He asked... Yes my sons... Raaghav said proudly.

Hello boys!!! He extended his hands... They said Namaste Uncle...

He looked at Chakor, she is ??.. Our mummy said the boys...

Hmmm mummy, Arjun and AAyansh held her hands...

He smiled at her and left from there.

Arjun looked at Chakor, they both looked at each other... Mummy... hmm Ar are you thinking what I am...yes mummy its so weird, he is wearing cap and googles even inside the office.

AA said Ar you always think of something, may be he is having some eye problem. Hmm maybe...

Shyaam Laal walked in and told that the wholesalers are extremely happy and the export stocks are being sent.

He asked Raaghav what about the consultant and when is he going to send the contract. Raaghav briefed him and told him that the contract will be coming in the evening.

Raagahv and Chakor went to meet the workmen when Shyaam Laal was talking with the boys!!! Kaaka AA called ... Yes,, mera laddoo... he loved AA for his innocence while he was awed about Arjun's smartness and shrewdness... Shyam laal said wait for two more days for your gift. He smiled patting on their cheeks... and asked the boys about how their life was going, about studies and asked whether they are happy... He had that special privilege to talk to the boys and take them alone too whenever he feels so and he used to do it occasionally.. Raaghav always was very particular that kaaka was given that highest respect by the boys and he always asked him to keep him informed if the boys had any issues as out of love Arjun never used to tell anything even if he hurts physically too as he knows daddy will get very worried. But the boys were too attached to Kaaka.. though he can be called daddha but as Raaghav calls him Kaaka he preferred to be called the same.

The boys were affirmative and Ar asked Kaaka happy?, why are you asking it... he said generally asked as you boys are growing and you are no more a kid and now you have your sisters so your parents may not have time to spend with you both...(he knew that RagKor's life spins around the boys but he wanted to hear from the horse's mouth). Both immediately told, kaaka, we wanted to tell you daddy and mummy are always worried about us, they first do everything for us, even feeding us but afterward take care of the babies. Should the babies be taken care of first?? Asked the boys... Kaaka hugged them both in his sides and smiled and said, they know you will take care of the babies, you play with them and even feed them and daddy and mummy loves you very much as you both are their first children so they take care of you first. Ar and Aa smiled with loads of pride. Yess kaaka, daddy and mummy loves us... we are so lucky...

Shyaam Laal called the security and asked him to bring the visitors register and asked him to show the TV footage. He went through the names while AR was watching and AA was watching the TV in the office room.

They saw the video footage... saw Kishore walking in and he was taken a pic as per the security norm... Ar quickly said, Kaaka are yeh kya, how can the pic be taken with the googles and cap... In my school we are asked to remove our glasses and caps. Kaaka was appreciating Ar, deko thum kitna samajdaar... You are right. He called the office and told them that the visitors need to be taken a pic without glasses and caps hereafter.

Mummyyy called AA... Lets go home I am feeling hungry... Chakor came running scolding Raaghav... I told you my boys will be hungry and told you that we should go home. You never listen and when you are in your office you forget about everything. Very bad you are... AA hugged mummy, please shaanth shaanth and Ar said mummy he had a packet of biscuits from Kaaka...dramabaazi chasing him while AA hid behind Chakor.

Raaghav ran outside to get the Rover to take them as his Maidam has started her lecture and will be lecturing through the drive till they reach the Mansion. The boys were laughing at the way daddy was afraid of mummy's gyaan...

As usual Ar came forward and was holding on to Raaghav's neck from behind...

She called on the way and told Girija to set the dining and found that the girls were also ready waiting for the bros to have lunch together.

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It was in the evening when Kishore called the office and found that Shyaam Laal was waiting to meet him with the contract. Kishore sent his person with the contract to meet Laal. Laal went through the contract along with his legal team. The team scrutinized it and said they need two copies to be signed and retained by each and not to send only one copy and returned the same and to come back in the morning with sample of the pesticides.

Kishore fumed in his room to the person...The process is so well set so this is not so easy as I think he said. He said he will go the next day when the visitors card from the person slipped and fell down. He asked the person, where are your glasses in the pic? He said he was asked to remove the glasses and his sun cap and stand in the lighted cubicle to take a pic through the computer!! He stood up feeling irritated...banging the tables.

He sent two copies of the contract next day morning through his person. The team scrutinized the same and passed the documents through the laser rays for any hidden prints and sheets and the contract was sent for signature to Kishore first and then signed by Raaghav in the capacity of CEO, and one copy was retained by the Rishab Plantations. The sample was sent to the lab. He was irritated as he had to wait to get through his way as every barrel of pesticide was tested for clearance from the pest control official who had come on Laal's request and was sent for sparying.

It took two days for the initial spray to show the results. Raaghav was happy and Kishore was slowly winning his confidence and was also becoming friendly with the boys. He asked the boys do you believe in such sacred threads around their arms for which the boys said yes whatever our parents give we adhere to it.

Kishore was very careful in avoiding meeting Shyaam Laal and also visiting the Plantations as he did not wanted to be photographed.

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It was evening and Friday, Laal told Ragkor that he was taking the boys outside to their usual orphanage where they normally go, to which they happily agreed to.

Kaaka they both gave their wooden boxes... to receive another cover from him.

My dear grandsons Arjun and Aayansh.

Blessings from your daadha Rishab... I am happy that you have grown to celebrate the tenth year with your daddy and hope your mummy has joined you all!!

If you are happy about your life... Go through the recording which Shyam Laal has .

If your are not happy with your life go through the documents which Shyaam has along with the lawyer uncle...

I hope you both choose the recording ...

I am not with you but am watching you all from above.

Blessings...

He asked the boys... what do you want to choose...

Aa was so disappointed thinking he would get a big bar of chocolate or a game console as it was earlier but recording ugghhh...

Ar looked at Laal, kaaka can we hear the recording??

Laal took him to his house which was close to the plantation...

He called Raaghav and told he will bring the boys next day, which he sometimes does..

The parents and babies spoke on a video call and kissed bye for now.

The recording started...

The boys started to hear it and after some time ... They were stunned... shocked...

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Is it you???? How dare you????? He was hit on his head, he fainted...

He walked ... The boys ran to him... Uncle please help us... somebody hit Kaaka... please call daddy...

He hugged them, calmed them told he will take kaaka to hospital.

Putting up a concerned look, made the boys sit in his car...

He walked far away so that they cannot hear him

I have the boys with me... he told calmly. I have already waited long. Cannot wait more...

Who are You? Where is Laal ??? where are my sons...

Your sons???.. but they aren't your sons na... he laughed

Shocked...chocked... how is it possible???? who knows it?????

Chakor cried her heart out... I need ... I need my boys...my sons...

He vowed!!! not a scratch on our sons!!! I promise...

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PART V

Raaghav was taking care of the girls as they were missing their brothers and they were cranky too... He was checking with the factory about the packing and also about the after effects of the spraying.

But ... He was feeling somewhat restless. The boys' words were always coming through.

Chakor took the babies, fed them along with Girija and put them to sleep.

She saw Raaghav and sat beside him, held his hands in hers... Why are you worrying too much. He said I don't know, but I am feeling very restless. Arjun was not ok too so I am worried. Should I bring the boys back? He asked. She said Raaghav you are worrying about so many things. The boys are indeed growing and I think at the base of your heart you are worrying for something you don't want them to know. His eyes was shocked. Very true, he held her hands tight. He said I love them, they are my soul, I know they love me too, but, I always have the fear of how will they react if they get to know that we are not their biological parents?

She said, but how will they know?? He said its not a secret as the plantation workmen are like a family and the old workers knows about this, but none had spoken about it as they love Rishabji and me. But still... She said there is nothing to fear and need to face such a situation if it arises and the boys knows how much he loves them so there will not be any change in their love towards him.

He smiled, she hugged him and said I am with you always and if such a situation arises we will handle as the boys are important than our girls. They both went to bed with he hugging her waist and she lying beside with her head on his chest and holding his other hand...

He kissed her on her forehead and asked naughtily tightening his grip on her waist, when is the dessert time?...with his eyes closed... Chup... budda soja she said blushing herself. She placed a simple kiss on his lips and closed her eyes resting on his chest... Thank you Maidam he smiled...

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The boys were in Shyaam Lals house. It was near the plantation. It was an individual house, a bit far away from the workmens' residence. Calm and also had its own little garden. Shyaam Lal stay with his caretaker as his wife had passed away and his daughter is married and stays in Kolkatta. He mostly stays in the Mansion as Raaghav has given him a separate room and sometimes in his house.

He brought the boys home and they like his house too but very sparingly stays behind as they never stayed away from Raaghav.

Ramu kaaka, ran Ar and Aa and hugged him. Ramu, the caretaker loves the kids and always makes their favourite food and plays with them and share good moral stories with them. He loved Aa's sketching and always used to ask him to draw something.

Laal said he was going to the factory for an urgent call and will be back and they will hear the recording once their lawyer uncle come.

The boys were playing and Ramu kaka was showing his grandchild's pics which was half covered with a wrap around on his phone and was asking Aa if he could sketch it full. Aa looked at the pic very very focused and started to sketch it out and Kaaka was so happy that he could see the full face. Wah beta, thumhara haath mey jaaddhoo hai he clapped him.

Arjun was playing games in Laal's laptop and there was pop up of an automated mail saying list of visitors . Out of inquisitiveness he opened the mail and saw many attachments and few images. He saw the image of Kishore with goggles and cap. He was feeling very weird and that image was coming to his eyes always. He called Aa and asked him if he could sketch him without the goggles and cap. He went to the living room to watch the TV. The news was flashing mentioning that a prisoner had escaped from lucknow a week before and he is a murderer and asking the public to be cautious and also to call the police if his whereabouts was found or seen anywhere. Aayansh looked at the image on the computer and started sketching and was half way through the second eye when Shyaam Lal came in calling the boys. He left the sketch on the table and ran and so did Arjun when the murderer's pic was shown on the TV.

Shyaam Laal and the Lawyer along with the boys finished their dinner and went into Laal's bedroom to hear the recording.

AA was reluctant but Arjun was curious. Laal got a call and passed through the living room and caught a glimpse of the photo that was shown on the TV while passing through. Govind Seth the security called Laal and said the CCTV was showing movements in the isolated area of the plantation and he will be going with few others to check. Laal was called again and was informed that there was nothing and few stray dogs had come in and had been chased away. He felt some noise at the gate but no one was there.

He went to the room and started the recording.

The recording which made the boys chock with tears, shock.

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Raaghav woke up suddenly shouting from his sleep, shouting Arjun, Aayansh. His heart was palpitating fast and Chakor ran to get water and calmed him down...

He said no Chakor, I am feeling choked... something is wrong, my sons may be in trouble... He took the phone to call ... when he saw his phone trigger with that alarm that alarm which never set off was alarming now... Ringing the alarm bells. he know something wrong was happening. Shyaam Laal...he tried calling him.

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At the same time at Laal's house

The boys heard the record... And Arjun asked for the other one which Laal and Lawyer was surprised about...

After sometime the lawyer left and Laal saw him off at the gate and came back to his living room... He saw the sketch of the little baby and the sketch of the other with the second eye half done.

He was shocked, perplexed, he saw the computer with the pic of Kishore... And the sketch lying on the table. No No No it can't be. He saw the news flashing with the pic... Ki...

No No its Karan Rishab... how did he come??? He was in the prison... So he was the one who came as Kishore to the factory... Oh God! Whats happening...

The whole incident flashed in front of him... while his front door was being broken..

Karan Rishab, the brother's son of Rishab the owner of Rishab Foundations. Karan lost his parents and was brought up by Rishabji. He shared the same love and affection that he shared with his son (the twins father) but Karan was always selfish, had bad vices and was always greedy and eyeing the wealth. He had bad companionship and was creating problems for his son and to the business. Many a times he had asked Rishabji to give a share in the property and business but Rishab refused as he was not listening to him and changing ways. He infact threw Karan out of the Mansion but gave him the fields in Chandigarh and Karan was never happy about it. He lost the fields by gambling. He was having his ears and eyes about Rishab Plantations and was waiting to strike at the right time.

When Rishab went with his son and daughter in law to his native deity, he planned the accident and thought that the whole family with the twin babies met their end. He realized that the old man survived and was admitted in the hospital by the villagers and Raaghav. He met the old man at the hospital and that was when the police arrested him as the lorry driver confessed and told about Karan. He was given life imprisonment for accident and murdering of the couple.

Rishab came and told this to Shyaam Laal who was always worried and kept a vigil over the twins.

Being very rich, there are people out there who will be eyeing to create problems and also I worry about the safety of these boys. These were the words told to Raaghav which changed the life of the trio.

He told Laal not to tell Raaghav about the murder and tell it was an accident for the fear that Raaghav may go away getting scared.

When he was happy with Raaghav, Rishab took him as his heir and wanted to transfer his property business but listened to Raaghav and instructed Shyam Laal. Laal kept Raaghav informed about Karan that he was a threat but said he was away as he was given the property in Chandigarh but to stay vigilant always.. Knowing his death arriving Rishabji did various letters and preparations and gave them to Laal as he was the most trusted person.

Everything flashed... God I must inform Raaghav, I must save the boys

He tried to call Raghav and the boys when the door was broken open and he came in from behind. He turned back to see him standing there

You... Karan... how did you come here... Ramu... thud he was hit on his head... You old man... you are still alive?? I thought you would have been dead and gone... Saw the boys here... Raamu came running only to be hit by Karan.

He went inside to see the boys coming out but instead of going in he ran outside and took his car a few meters away from the house...he snapped the landline connection while going.

Shyam Laal fell down trying to reach for his mobile but the wicked had taken it. Laal fell down but pressed his knob at the side of his watch and prayed almighty.

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That alarm triggered on Raaghav's phone. That was the special alarm which was set on Laal's watch to be used in case of any emergency as for one Laal used to travel alone and at times he took the boys alone. So long it was never used but today... The alarm triggered...

Raaghav panicked, he tried calling the Shyaam but it was not reaching. It was switched off. Something is wrong. The boys... Bajrangbali, Ramji please save my sons...

He called Govind Seth and asked him to check Laal's house and grabbed his ipad. He called his IT guy and asked him to check on the cameras if some movements was suspicious.

Chakor saw him panic. What is it Raaghav?. Whats happening?

Laal is in trouble, he panicked, his phone is not reachable, and the boys boys are in trouble... he called Laal's land line... Dead... Ramu's mobile was not reachable. Hell with the signal...he shouted.

Chakor started to palpitate. He grabbed the Ipad... Opened the remote software. Chakor tell me the boys have their band intact na... He shouted... She has not seen him so angry... she said yes but how will...

That band is important, its not ordinary thread, it has the OHM and it has the tracker that I had fixed on to the boys. Nothing will happen to them. The tracker was showing moving beyond the plantation.

I curse myself Chakor cried, I stopped the boys from being given a mobile phone as I thought it was not necessary for school children. Oh god Daak baba please bring back my boys.

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The boys found it strange that Laal kaaka did not come back, and the whole house was silent. AA was bit scared while Ar put up a brave face and caught Aa and walked down to the living room.. it was dark as Karan had switched the power off. They called out for Laal and Ramu but no response.

While walking down the sketch caught stuck in AA hand and he quickly just folded it and kept inside his pocket as it was dark and did not know what it was.

They both walked down and found Laal lying unconscious in pool of blood. They did not notice Ramu too lying unconscious as it was dark and he fell into the kitchen side. They tried to wake up and ran to call but the phone was dead.

They quickly realized something wrong. AA started to cry while Ar was crying but quickly gathered himself and calmed him and said be bold, mumma has told to be bold and dad has told we are lions not to go weak.

They came running outside to the other side of the plantation. He was waiting there as though he was looking around when the boys came running to him

The boys ran to him... Uncle please help us... somebody hit our Kaaka... We need to call our daddy

He hugged them, calmed them told he will take kaaka to hospital. He asked for Raaghav's number and told him that he will get kaaka and call their daddy

Putting up a concerned look, he made the boys sit in his car...

He walked far away so that they cannot hear him

He called Raaghav...

Call from an unknown number... Raaghav was alarmed... Who is this? And why the tracker stopped. Too many questions.

He picked the call... Raaghav Kumar Rishab here?????

Ha Ha ha Raaghav Kumar Rishab, Wow Rishab !!! Congratulations... but I have bad news for you...

I have the boys with me... he told calmly. I have already waited long. Cannot wait more...

Who are You? Where is Laal ??? where are my sons... Raged Raaghav

Your sons... but they aren't your sons na... he laughed, he cut the call.

Shocked...chocked... how is it possible???? who knows it????? Raaghav froze.

What is it Raaghav, tell me, she shook him.

Chakor cried her heart out... I need ... I need my boys...my sons...

He vowed!!! not a scratch on our sons!!! I promise...

Stay here with the girls! No !! I will come with you. She told Girija to lock the mansion and asked the security guards to be on alert and to set the alarm.

We will find them together.

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A small car came and car took Laal. Karan said he was being taken to hospital while both the cars proceeded to the lone part of the plantation...

Karan was very calm and told the boys that he spoke to their daddy and told him that they are with him and to come and pick them up and he said he was coming.

But, why didn't he talk to us Arjun asked.

Ar said thank you uncle but where are we going?? What about Kaaka? We want to be with him. He said please don't agonise, the other car is too small so kaaka is laid behind and all the three cannot fit in.

He smiled and was talking sweet to the boys while engrossing them in his sweet talk and driving them. He said his house is nearby as the small car was running low on fuel to go change the car and in the meantime he said he has called the doctors too.

It was becoming dark and Ar and Aa was getting bit worried and said we want to see Kaaka and want to go to daddy.

Karan was getting impatient at the boys continuous nagging.

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Raaghav called the commissioner and told him and said to plan in confidence and that he is going towards the plantation.

He was driving mad looking at his ipad which was showing the tracking till the plantation but after that it stopped.

He got perplexed, called his IT guy and Govind Seth to find the status.

Where can they go!! He was thinking. Chakor was going through the tracking map. She said it stopped near the lone area of the plantation after which it is downhill and dense. Raaghav both looked in shock. No... hope they have not gone downhill that's dangerous and signals donot work.

She cried for the boys. Hope nothing has happened to him. They drove to the downhill. He was constantly calling Laal's no. they stopped at a place and then walked towards the forest, but Chakor said what if they have gone to the old godown!!

He got a call, it was from Ramu kaka, he spoke to Raaghav very feebly, saying somebody hit him and Laal was also hit. His call got cut. By that time Govind had reached Laal's house and took Ramu to the hospital. He said that saw he two cars going towards the plantation.

Raaghav got a call from an unknown number. He shouted...tell me who are you? What do you want? Where are my boys?? If I get you I will kill you..

Karan was too cool, he said don't search you will not get the boys if you donot do what I say and I will not do harm to your boys. He spoke what he wanted to Raaghav and Raaghav was shocked. He fisted himself, saying No No I cant do it.

You better do it if you want your boys... and I will call you where you should come. Don't try to act smart he said.

He spoke to Chakor, Chakor thought and asked him to go ahead and do what is asked to be done...

Trust me she said!!


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Karan laughed you see this, everything is transfered to his name and thats why he took so long to come and he did not want to talk to you too.

Raaghav cried No Arjun... Arjun was shocked...


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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART VI

Raaghav called the commissioner and told him and said to plan in confidence and that he is going towards the plantation.

He was driving mad looking at his ipad which was showing the tracking till the plantation but after that it stopped.

He got perplexed, called his IT guy and Govind Seth to find the status.

Where can they go!! He was thinking. Chakor was going through the tracking map. She said it stopped near the lone area of the plantation after which it is downhill and dense. Raaghav both looked in shock. No hope they have not gone downhill that's dangerous and signals donot work.

She cried for the boys. Hope nothing has happened to him. They drove to the downhill. He was constantly calling Laal's no. they stopped at a place and then walked towards the forest, but Chakor said what if they have gone to the old godown!!

He got a call, it was from Ramu kaka, he spoke to Raaghav very weakly, saying somebody hit him and Laal was also hit. His call got cut. By that time Govind had reached Laal's house and took Ramu to the hospital. He said that saw he two cars going towards the plantation.

Raaghav got a call from an unknown number. He shouted...tell me who are you? What do you want? Where are my boys?? If I get you I will kill you..

Karan was too cool, he said don't search you will not get the boys if you donot do what I say. Be assured I will not do harm to your boys. He spoke what he wanted to Raaghav and Raaghav was shocked. He fisted himself, saying No No I cant do it.

You better if you want your boys... and I will call you where you should come. Don't try to act smart he said.

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Ar and Aa were getting restless, they were continuously asking Karan about Kaaka, he stopped the car and got down, while getting down, something dropped from his pocket along with a pen. Aa saw but before he could call, Karan got off the car and walked away.

He went to call his person... He said.. Keep the old man alive but bring a nurse and a doctor he said.

He called Raaghav...Don't try to act smart and go to police. No harm will be done on the boys...

choo kar dek , hum thuje aisa maaruunga aisaa maaruuga kuthey ko haddi bi nahi milenga bey , he raged...

Who the hell are you??? What do you want??? He shouted. He switched the phone on speaker mode. Do what I say, he told what he wanted, which was making Raaghv go pale and white. Wait for my next call I shall tell you where you should meet me before that my person will come to you to meet you near the Post near your Rishab lodge..

Chakor heard out. She said Raaghav do what he says.

No ... I can't do he said.

Trust me nothing will befall. Call lawyer uncle. He called...

Ar and Aa thumdhono ko kuch nahi honedengey!!!

Daak baba please please show us a way. The tracker has stopped and we cant go further as we have to meet the person too.

Ar and Aa please be bold, be brave, your are my Lion cubs... Don't fall prey... prayed Chakor while Raaghav called the lawyer and told him what has to be done and meet him at the lodge.

Chakor said ... Raaghav you meet the person while I will go into the downhill as I feel the guy would have taken our sons there. As the tracker is also not working and Laal's phone is also not reachable.

No Maidam... no you are not going alone. She said if we both wait here we will waste the time and every sec matters and every sec delayed is a risk to the boys. I will meet you near the down hill near the godown. He held her hands if anything happens to any of you... Kuch nahi hoga, hamne kaha na kuch nahi hoga. Take care of yourself.

She called the commissioner and said, Saab, Shyam Laal has been hit, please check the hospitals if anyone has been recently admitted and she started to run downhill. Shimla being small town it was easy to find and Commissioner had put the police force into action without spreading the information.

He said Chakor about the escape of a criminal and is at large and so to be careful. She said if he could send her the pic of the criminal over WA it will be helpful. He said yes will do.

She ran towards the downhill when she saw an ambulance coming . It stopped and asked her the way to the down hill. She saw a doctor beside the driver seat in the drivers cabin and a nurse was in the back crying... she said if she could come and be dropped on the way as her house was near the downhill. They reluctantly said ok and she went in the ambulance. She asked why the nurse was crying and the nurse said that her husband is in the deathbed and she was called on duty and they were threatening if she doesn't go. Chakor asked whom they were going to attend and was told some old man has fallen down and hurt himself so we have been called. Chakor thought it might be Shyaam Lal and slowly spoke to the nurse. She told the driver that she wants to get down as her place has come. She got down. The ambulance drove down hill when Chakor got the image of the criminal in the WA. It was dark, she downloaded the image to see later.

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Karan in order to avoid the boys got into the car in Laal was taken. His man drove the car with the boys.

Aa slowly opened his hands to see what was fallen down as he took it to give it to Karan. It was a mobile phone and a pen. He said unc... when he stoppednas Karan had walked away..

He quickly whispered to Ar... bhai see here... Arjun saw the phone and was shocked. He switched it on and quickly put it on silent mode. This is Kaaka's phone... something is wrong.. why is his phone with this uncle? Why is it switched off. He openend the phone as Shyam Laal always took Arjun's help with regards the mobile technology and he had infact taught him about passwords and when asked what number do you want kaaka, shall I put your birthdate and month when Laal laughed and said I have become old... Put in your date and month. Aa was talking to the guy as to why Karan did not come and while he was talking Ar opened the phone. There was no signal but there were lots of missed calls from Raaghav . He sensed something wrong. He signed AA, to keep the phone inside his pocket. AA kept the phone inside his packet when he came across the paper kept in his pocket. He opened it to saw the nearly complete done sketch. Ar saw that his eyebrows shrunk... what AA asked. He kept his fingers on his lips. He signed him to complete the sketch. AA completed and both the boys froze... AA held tight Ar hands... This is Kishore but why he took kaaka's phone... If it's he one who met daddy in the factory as the consultant why he did not reveal himself to them... Too many questions... Aa was literally shivering. Ar hugged him and calmed him... Dar na math... he said I am sensing danger. Lets be careful. Don't leave my hands. We need to reach to daddy... It was fraction of second the signal came and he quickly sent a sms to Raaghav saying daddy we are in trouble but by the time the message could deliver the signal went off. He kept the paper in his pocket and the phone too.

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The cars reached the old godown of the plantation. Karan got down. He went to the boys and said I am sorry I brought you here but the car is having problem so we will stay here while I have asked help to come here to treat your kaaka. AA was frozen, but Ar said thank you uncle but can we go see Kaaka please. He said yes fine. He smiled while telling to himself, good that the boys are not asking too many questions.

There were few goons inside already who were in plainclothes so that the boys donot get scared.

They brought the boys and made them sit in a room. Karan gave them some food but the boys refused saying they already finished dinner and requested him to check about their dad. He said he will call him as there is no signal here. They saw kaaka being taken to another room and the doctor and nurse. The doctor was asked to remove his face mask. The nurse was asked to remove when she was about to do, AA was feeling nauseous when Karan asked her to attend to the boy. She gave him water, he felt better, he saw her and said tha... When she closed his mouth with more water and said take rest donot strain. Ar said he wanted to go to the washroom when he was escorted by one of the person. He went inside the loo and took the phone quickly to see the message had been delivered and sent one more message which got delivered but the next minute the signal went off. He quickly flushed and came out and sat beside AA... two guys were near them so AA did not say anything but just held his hands and pointed his index and middle fingers towards his eyes. Ar could not understand.

Karan came and asked AA if he was fine and AA said yes uncle he suddenly shouted thank you uncle I feel safe now... Looking at the nurse who was attending to Laal.

Laal was treated by the doctor who said there has been a bad injury and that he should be taken to the hospital soon. Karan said he will take when his car is ready for which the doctor said they can take him in the ambulance when he was pointed a knife from behind. Keep quiet and do what I say. Keep the old man alive Karan said.

Karan got the information that Raaghav has shown the documents and he was being brought to Karan.

The doctor and the nurse werevmade to stay in another room.

Karan walked to Lal and smiled. I will end this drama once that fake father comes here.

Laal slowly opened his eyes. He saw Karan. Karan went near Kaaka and after few minutes called the boys. The boys came running...kaaka... kaaka could not talk much.

Ar said kaaka who hit you? What happened?

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The doctor was restless, whats happening here, he said nurse we need to do something. The goons came in and said keep quiet. They saw the nurse turning around when they quickly caught her asked her to show what she was having. She showed her bare hands, hiding her phone inside her dress. Her eyes was standstill looking at Karan.

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Raaghav was blindfolded, escorted by two men in the car. He said where are you taking me. Who are you... they said keep quiet we are taking you to the boys. If you try to act smart we will kill the boys. Not a word after that, he kept quiet wanting to go to the boys.

Oh god where is Chakor, I cant reach her too. My phone oh god its in my car. Bajrangbali please, help me, save my boys and protect Maidam too. If I had done anything wrong please punish me. I need to save the boys, don't fail me as a father.

In the Mansion, Ananya suddenly woke up for her dessert and her cries made Aditi also get up and Girija and the others in the Mansion could not pacify the babies.

They came out in the open to get some breeze and divert the girls when a jeep came by speeding breaking the gates.

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Laal woke up... Karan was beside him... enquiring him about his health.

He said its been long since we met. How are you, You see the boys are here and I have brought the doctor and nurse to treat you.

The boys were brought to Laal's room. The room had a makeshift bed and few syringes and medicines for Laal alongwith some old waste packing materials.

Laal said Karan...

Boys asked Kaaka you know him, he is...

Your Uncle said kaka...

Uncle???? Questioned the boys...

Yes your uncle who had been away for so many years because of Your Father said Karan

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Raaghav walked in, he saw Laal and the boys when he was about to run to them.

Karan said, Yes your this selfish father chased me away because I wanted custody of you... Because I wanted to take care of you...

Ar and AA was shocked... Kaaka tell us ... Is he our Uncle... Was he sent away??

Raaghav was fuming he said no no Arjun don't listen to him.

Who are you? Why are you troubling my sons? Laal kaaka who is he?

Laal lowered his eyes and said yes this is Karan, uncle of Ar and Aa.

Karan said , troubling them, ask them I have not touched them... I wanted to protect them and see I have saved Shyaam Laal too.

The boys were shaken...

Raaghav raged, I will kill you, don't try to play dirty with my sons!

Your SONS who ???? Ha Ha Ha ...they are not your SONS...

Ar and Aa was crying... No No...Arjun please don't listen to him...Raaghav shouted.

He went to the boys, my dear you tell me I have not troubled you at all. Infact I had been searching for you both as I know this Raaghav was trying to act good with you but was behind your wealth, money.

No ... Eyes were confused... Nooo this is false said the boys.

False...???.. look here... he showed the documents to Ar and Aa... who were shocked.

See all the property and business is in his name. You see this... He showed the documents.

Laal was crying, Raaghav was shocked ... my name ??? No No how is it... I did not tell the lawyers to write in my name. you wanted it in your name???

You bas***d shouted Raaghav.

He said... if I am lying you can see it... He said... Raaghav was shocked and ...

Aa and Ar were shocked... Crying looking helpless.

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Kill me but don't do this ...If blood is required for relationship take mine... cried Raaghav...

I am sorry Karan... spoke the ...

Dare touch our roses... rose the lions, the thorns...

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PART VII

In the godown

He went to the boys, my dear you tell me have I troubled you at all. Infact I had been searching for you both as I know this Raaghav was trying to act good with you but was behind your wealth, money.

Nooo this is false said AA.. Ar was quiet... He was looking at Karan...

False...???.. look here... he showed the documents to Ar and Aa...

See all the property and business is in his name. You see this... He showed the documents.

Laal was crying, Raaghav was shocked ... my name ??? No No how is it... I did not tell the lawyers to write in my name. you wanted it in your name???

You bas***d shouted Raaghav.

He said... if I am lying you can see it... He said... Raaghav was shocked and ...He fell down on his knees crying... Whats happening??? Whats all this??? I am not able to understand. Maidam, kahan hai thu??? Are you in trouble???

Karan was saying, you cheated the boys and Laal too. When I tried to contact you to take care of the boys, you did not allow me to come.

Noo I will kill you, you are lying Raged Raaghav...

Now the boys know, know who is their true blood relation, who will take care of them.

He asked the boys, did I trouble you.. No.. said the boys.

Did I hurt you... No said the boys...

Raaghav cried... He said don't believe him... He asked Laal to speak... He said I love you both...

Karan acted very concerned. Yes you loved them because you wanted their wealth.

You are not their father as they are my brother's son. I am their uncle.

You did not give your blood to bring them into this world... They are not your SONS. He said.

If you want to see my blood take how much ever you want but don't dare say they are not my sons. He said am sorry boys, I feared this day, but please trust me I am not for your wealth or money. Please I can die but cannot live without you both, or without your trust.

Raaghav looked at the boys who was standing still.

Raaghav called out Ar ... please speak up... Aa please...

Karan said, the truth is YOU ARE NOT THEIR FATHER. You are a cheat, selfish.

Ar said, yes Uncle you are right. He is not our father and we know that...

Raaghav was shocked... And so was Karan too but he quickly covered up saying

Oh good! My smart boys... Good you know he is not your father... He is that greedy one who wanted the wealth for his wife who is a selfish woman and for his daughters.

Arjun said Yes he did not give his blood to father us but he gave his heart and soul and gathered us. Tears fell down Arjun's eyes. Raaghav lifted his head to see the boys.

Aayansh slowly was moving backside as Arjun was talking to Karan and said don't talk about our mother...

Laal smiled at Arjun... and thought Raaghav you failed in your education but you have not failed as a father.. Indeed your boys are the cubs of the Lion.

Karan was confused... He said see the documents for yourself he was loosing his cool.

Arjun said, I saw the documents, but you don't know what we know...

He looked at Laal and said kaaka thank you...he teared.looking at Raaghav who was confused... looking down. Karan lost his cool. He showed his colours... what are you talking he asked Arjun..

Arjun said the documents that you are showing... Saying the property and business in his name.

It can never be...Uncle Karan !!! No no Uncle Kishore!!!

Karan realized this boy is not easy!!!

Raaghav's eyes grew wide in surprise... Kishore??? Before he could react he was quickly held by the goons and Karan held Arjun.

Leave him shouted Raaghav I will kill you...

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The doctor was away in the another room and the nurse was getting impatient as their room was closed.

She quickly heard someone open their door and it was Aayansh... mummy he said very very slowly and hugged the nurse... the doctor was surprised... her eyes were wide in shock but quickly she understood. She removed her mask, and said Aayansh my boy you found me, smiling and kissing him you are alright?. She covered herself again... She looked at her phone and thought a second. Yes mumma but I am scared... that man he is that Kishore... I am worried about Arjun and daddy??

What daddy is here?? She asked...

She came stealthily from behind and saw the scene where Raaghav held and Ar was beside Karan and Laal was there. She tried to draw Laal's attention...Laal saw her and was surprised, but quickly he understood and caught hold of his head and said ohhh its paining and he slid only to create a bit of confusion and Karan lost his patience and called out the doctor and nurse. Chakor in the dress of nurse ran inside and took laal. Her heart cringed to see Raaghav in such a vulnerable state.

She took laal and made him sit with the doctor. Aayansh gave Laal's mobile to him and was hiding.

Karan was angry... He was holding Arjun, pointing a knife and was calling out for Aayansh. Come out else I will kill your brother and your so called father.

Dare you touch my son and my husband, roared the tigress coming out with a big log and hit Karan's hand. The knife flew away only to be caught by another goon and he held Chakor...and Arjun. Aayansh was watching from the other room not knowing what to do.

Here comes the wife...ha ha no no the mother, what a mother who mothered two sons directly at the age of 9??? I am going to kill your son and your husband and grab the property too.

Don't worry, the documents that you brought is safe with me and I changed the documents in your name to confuse the boys but, I have to accept they are smart...

Chakor smiled, Karan was getting more wild. He held her cheeks, Why are you laughing?? Are you not bothered I will kill you all...Raghav raged don't touch her...

She smiled disgustingly at Karan... You think you will get the boys property and wealth. Fool, the documents that you have is null and void as Raaghav has signed it and he is the caretaker of the boys and none of the property or business is in his name and he has no authority to sell or transfer the property. Karan was shell shocked. Whaaat????? No No you are trying to fool me , he signed the pesticide contract as the owner of Rishab Plantations... She said, no you did not see, he signed the papers in the capacity of a CEO and not as the Owner. And what do you think a criminal like you can go scot free?? And I will allow it. You don't know whom you rubbed. This is Chakor and I start the game and end the game and will win always.

Arjun signed AAyansh and he quickly grabbed a log and hit the goon from behind who was holding them.

Raaghav was surprised and realized as to why Chakor was asking him to accept the demands of Karan. Wah Maidam, kamaal kardiya bey!! Arey lalla, chodo mere bachey ko warna maar kayenga...

The other goon tried to catch Chakor and in the mean time Raaghav raged, quickly hit the goons holding him and doubled up on Karan and punched him. This is for touching my boys, he punched another this is for hurting Laal, he could not control his rage, he carried Arjun on his back and kicked him saying this is for touching my queen he kicked him continuously. Arjun got down and went to AAyansh.

More goons were coming to surround Raaghav who was raging. Dadddy shouted both ran to him, Raaghav understood they clinged onto his biceps and he swirled them so fast that the strong legs of the boys just hit the goons who were trying to near them...

There was so much of chaos... Suddenly there was a sound of the babies... the boys and Ragkor froze... no no...it cant be.

Karan laughed at his assistant who brought girija along with the babies... He said now comes the real mazaa..

He said now all stop this drama, he caught Laal and said now tell me what needs to be done for transferring the property, else I will kill all as If I don't get the property none gets it. Laal said you can kill me but nothing will come to you. You are a sinner, you have no heart and you killed the... He stopped...

Karan was so angry he pushed Laal and was going to take the babies who were crying loud... Raaghav and Chakor shouted no no don't touch them... Raaghav was about to go when the boys both came together from both sides and pushed both the hands of Karan. Dare touch our roses, both were so angry, don't dare you... Karan's hands were bleeding, he was wincing in pain. they took the babies who just clung to them and were giggling with tears hugging their bros. They had cut his hands with the syringes which was in the godown, touch the roses, the thorns came out to hurt.

Raghav held Karan by his own knife and threatened the goons to stay away. Chakor and girija took the babies...

There were police sirens surrounding the godown and the commissioner himself was there with the team.

They arrested Karan and the goons...

Karan was confused, how is it the police came...

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To clarify...a small fb

Arjun when he went into the loo sent the message daddy we are in trouble to Raaghav's mobile and the sketch of Kishore to Raaghav's mobile from Laal's phone. At the few seconds of signal the message was delivered and his tracker tickled which activated the system at the factory which was monitored by the IT guy and Govind Seth. They alerted the police.

The lawyer suspected foul as Raaghav wanted the document of the property in the name of Karan so he gave the document and waited hiding when Raaghav was taken by the goons. The police came to the lodge and saw the car parked but open so they quickly searched and found the mobile which had Kishore's pic and the message from Laal's phone. They quickly alerted the team to go towards the plantation's downhill godown.

Chakor had received the pic of the criminal, which she had downloaded and knew that Karan was the criminal. She quickly messaged back commissioner affirming the same.

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Karan was baffled and said still they are not your sons and this truth is going to hurt you forever...

Raaghav kneeled down... The boys ran to him hugging him... Yes we may not be your sons But YOU and Only You are our DADDY..

As you have adopted us. He hugged them tight... No No please...

He cried his heart out smiling hugging them, while Chakor was smiling, tearing holding the babies... they wanted to go to their bros... she left them

They crawled to the bros who were kneeling and hugging their Lion... Both the boys felt a pull... the girls where holding on to the boys and trying to get up, stand... the boys were excited, they are holding trying to stand... they slowly turned as the roses were extending their tiny fingers to reach to their bros... they held them.

Mumma they shouted in excitement... They are standing... the girls were excited as they took their first step holding on to their bros fingers giggling and said those words, the first words...bha...aaaiii...bhaa...iii

The boys were tearing , hugging the girls...kissing them while they were held by the their parents...

The police congratulated Chakor and the boys!!! Raaghav hugged his family close to his heart...

Laal was happy!!! Seeing the family...

But something was bothering Raaghav...He was crying...Arjun looked at him

He asked how do you know I am not your F... He could not complete...as his heart was cringing to say it...

Daddy Arjun said... We knew...We wanted to tell you... But ... lets go home. He hugged him and was not leaving him. Daady please carry me...

AAyansh was hugging mumma...

I feel so proud of you my boys Raaghav said tearing and hugging chakor in one hand and hugging the boys... They all were heading to the Police Vans.

But ...Arey oh Raaghav babu called out AAyansh, kya pyaar kar rahehe bey , thum tho nahi jaanthi hai naa ... Kya asked Raaghav. That mumma was in the godown... Hum janthey hainaa hamara yeh kaali kaali aur khuubsoorat aankhen ko ... arey lalla shuru kardiya hamara biwi ko line maarney ka... He tried to catch Aayansh who was hiding behind mumma. Ha mera lalla thum ne sahi kaha said mumma darling...hugging him and kissing him.

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The family was in the mansion... it was a very very bad day but they did see the dawn. That dawn which has brought sunshine and removed the darkness of the past forever...

Eversince they came back, Arjun was with Raaghav ...

Raaghav asked Arjun...

Please tell me how did you know...

Daddy... Listen to my story...

The story unfolded which brought out so many things...

Which unfolded the truth that

everything need not be biological????

Love does not need blood always

All it needs is heart and soul

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PART 8 A (concluding part)

This is indeed going to be long...so decided to do it two parts..I thought this was important...

After the late night hecticness the girls slept off with the utmost tiredness.

Govind Seth was there with few of the security guards at the Mansion who got the gates done as they were gatecrashed. Govind just ran and hugged Raaghav and the boys, crying, bagwaan ka laak laak shukriya, aap log ko huch nahi hua... The loyal man was in tears but was religiously tracking and helping the police in the operation.

Raamu kaaka was there and the Mansion staff were taking care of him.

The police dropped the family and took away Karan and the goons. He was being sent back to his prison from where he fled. The commissioner told Raghkor and Laal that they will take care of the formalities and will meet them the following day.

The commissioner once again appreciated the boys for their smartness and bravery. He was amazed at the shrewdness of Arjun and the excellent sketching skill of Aayansh. Young man our department doors are open for you. he patted his back.

The family was together in their family living room which was on the top floor in between the Master bedroom of Ragkor and the bedroom of the boys. Though there are many rooms and also individual rooms are set for the boys and the girls, the boys shared their room.

The family room had the pic of Raghav and Chakor and the boys and the little ones and a full family pic of the foursome with the twosome which made it awesome.

The prime pic was of Rishab the owner in all glory.

Laal was with them and Raaghav sternly told that from now on he will stay with them in the Mansion and will not go to the plantation house. Laal was hesitant so to give him his respect and space he said he will stay in the suite that Raaghav used to occupy in the lodge. But would spend few days in the Mansion before going to the Lodge.

Raaghav told his supervisor to get the suite with the terrace fully remodeled according to Laal's wishes and a personal lift to be installed to go to the terrace and a jeep to be stationed at the Lodge permanently.

The night was long for them and Arjun and AAyansh was with their parents without going to bed...

Arjun went to Laal and told something and he called the Plantation.

Ar was looking at daddy who was instructing everyone but his eyes was constantly ebbing with tears and was just placing kisses on Ar and Aa's foreheads nonstop in between the doings. Chakor was also witnessing it. Both the boys were lying both sides keeping their heads on Chakor's lap while she was sitting in the big sofa and caressing their head and soothing their back looking at Raaghav. She was too tearing but the boys wiped her tears and told her not to do so. She smiled knowing his grown up bacha is withered within but doing things while his small bachas are on her lap.

Things were settled... Raaghav came to his cubs, they both hugged him...

Arjun... can you...

Daddy... Please come with me... he saw Laal coming from one of the rooms. He had called the lawyer uncle and the security guy brought a tape recorder.

Arjun, Aayansh, RagKor, Laal and Roy the lawyer went inside the room.

They sat down together... Arjun and AAyansh were holding Raaghav's hands... Chakor sat beside them.

Daddy, he showed a tape recorder a old one...

Arjun spoke

Daddy like everyyear this year too we got gift from Rishab dhadha for our birthday, but instead of covers it was wooden boxes.

There were two slips. He showed it.

My dear Arjun and Aayansh, this is from your dhaadha Rishab. I am happy that you were able to grow happy to get this box on your tenth birthday which is very important. Please meet Shyam Laal if you are extremely happy after a week to get your gifts.

He showed the next one

My dear grandsons Arjun and Aayansh.

Blessings from your daadha Rishab... I am happy that you have grown to celebrate the tenth year with your daddy and hope your mummy has joined you all!!

If you are happy about your life... Go through the recording which Shyam Laal has .

If your are not happy with your life go through the documents which Shyaam has along with the lawyer uncle...

I hope you both choose the recording ...

I am not with you but am watching you all from above.

Blessings...

Laal started the recording...

The recording started..

My dear boys, I am extremely happy that you choose the recording.

Choosing this after waiting for a week after getting the box shows that your parenting has been good, for which I thank Raaghav and Chakor if she had joined you.

Every birthday I used to give you gifts along with a small moral story. This time too I am going to tell a story. I could not write it as I am also becoming old... I don't know how long I will live but this will be your final birthday gift from me as after this I know how your lives will turn out to be.

This time its a story about love, affection, the ability to love someone without any expectation. That love which took that bold step to love and protect someone who was not one's own's blood. This love came from nowhere but turned to be everywhere in everyone's heart.

Far away in the forest lived an old rich man with his son and his wife. As he was the was very rich and that richness also brought troubles to them. The old man was very worried as there was no heir to his wealth as the son did not get any children. But as it goes, every good deed done is always blessed by the almighty. So the rich family was indeed blessed with pearls.. In order to thank the gods for blessing, the family leaving the little pearls in the hands of the abled people set off to travel to complete its thanks. The thanks was done but as ill luck was favouring and maybe gods had other plans, the family met with an accident which was planned by an evil which the family came to know later. (the boys teared and so did Raaghav but he had a shock in his face.)

The family was terribly wounded but was saved by a good soul who had lost his soul and was wandering about but still took the family to the hospital. (Chakor teared terribly) When the old man got his senses he realized that he got the heir but god had taken away his blood. He was in shatters when he sought the help of the good soul to help him out through the catastrophe. They returned back only to realise that the kind hearted soul gathered the pearls and became its oyster to protect them though he was still waiting and hoping for its own soul to come back to him.

The old man was happy and the oyster did its best to protect the two little pearls (Ar and Aa kissed Raaghav on his cheeks) while protecting the business of the old man too. The little pearls grew into little cubs but the old man was falling weak. He did what he thought to be the best, made the oyster to learn to become the Lion and to take care of the little cubs and to take care of his wealth as his own. But the soul baffled the old man in taking the cubs into him and gave his name and to be his soul's name to them for the society but said it will remain the Spartan, the Protector and as the Dark Knight but never to rule the wealth.

Arjun and Aayansh... I know by now you would have realized who the little cubs are and who is the Spartan, the Protector and the Dark Knight...

Yes I know you would have reached that matured mind to understand and I know my end is nearing so all through the last 10 months since you were two months old, I was preparing a lot, preparing the birthday covers for you both for everyyear with a story and a game. Laal would be there but I don't know how long will god decide too as he is also aging. I pray god and when I go up there I will ensure that Laal stays through to give you this last cover... Why last cover??? Yes if you are able to take this cover then I know the soul though had not given his blood to father you both would have made you realise that he has given his heart and soul and has gathered you enough to bring you to this day.

My dear young boys... Yes you understood right as the soul is indeed Raaghav, your daddy, the string of melody who brought only melancholy in your lives. I am proud that he had given you good values that you are happy to choose this recording...

Life is to live and to live and to be loved, one needs to have relationship, but it is not necessary that the relationship is through its own blood.

It need not be biological but can be through love which beats all logic, for its pure, unadulterated.

You may choose to share this with Raaghav or bury this within yourself as just the thought that you are not his blood may make him bleed blood.

You may be wondering as to why I am sharing this with you both. As you grow from now on you will be coming through lots of experiences, lots of people, who will teach you many things, to believe, to trust, not to believe, may tell lies, may create misunderstanding but if you know who you are and with whom you are nothing ill will befall on you.

If you are sharing and if Raaghav and Chakor are listening. First my thanks to god for making Laal live long and next Raaghav mere beta (Rishab's voice was emotional) I cannot thank you enough for being there for your cubs! Yes your Lions! For they are just yours...

Yes Ar and Aa you are not HIS SONS BUT HE AND ONLY HE IS YOUR DADDY AND CHAKOR IS YOUR MOTHER AS I KNOW FOR SURE THERE WILL BE NO OTHER THAN HER IN HIS LIFE WITH HIM. (Chakor squeezed Raghav hands with tears and smile)

Raaghav you must be thinking why this was told now. I had to tell this as I am sure you will be fearing for that day when they know the reality...and that will rip you apart. (Raaghav folded his hands kneeling down nodding his head with tears.. yes yes you are right)

Again why Laal chose this day?... every year I told Laal to make you both play a puzzle, a game until you play and solve the Rubik's Cube with ease. If any of you had solved that then I know your intellectual and patience has grown enough. So one of you must have solved it, so Laal would have chosen this day.

I will not be there but will be watching you all from above.

Blessings

Rishab dhaadha

Laal and Lawyer left the family together as it was way too emotional and tears were flowing and the boys and the parents were just hugging each other and Raaghav was kissing his boys and Chakor continuously.

My sons, he said proudly, yes daddy we are your sons as you just not Adopted us!! But adored us, as we admire you.

But... he was wiping his tears... He felt so so ease and happy... the boys went for a nature's break.. He looked for Chakor...

Chakor checked upon the girls with Girija... (Raaghav looked at her, his eyes teary still with some naughtiness and smirk.. questioning her... Chakor made faces and said the girls are so tired that they are blissfully sleeping. He said going very close to her ears... Maidam...I seriously need a peg or a dess... Chup she said turning around which made her brush her lips on his.) she blushed... daddy... Called the boys... coming back.

Walked in Laal and the Lawyer. Girija and Raamu kaaka thought to themselves about the long hours the family is awake so made tea and brought some biscuits. The boys came back.

Laal said its too late if you want to catch some sleep, but Arjun said kaaka please lets finish everything today as let the morning be bright and sunny...

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Laal explained to Raaghav...He said I was so surprised and shocked when Arjun asked us about the next ...

He indeed made a decision. the decision which no one would have thought about...

the boys did the unexpected...while Ragkor were in tears...

He just wanted her, wanted to hold her and wanted her to hold him..

He could not see that blob of tear in her eyes...

He kissed those tears very soothingly...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 8 B

The concluding part...

Laal explained ...He said I was so surprised and shocked when Ar asked us about the next ...

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FB Laal's house..

Kaaka If we had not chosen the recording and not happy what was the next... He asked. AA was telling but why you are asking it... we are happy na... Ar said AA please for which Aa kept quiet as he knows Ar always thinks before asking or answering anything.

The Lawyer explained to Ar and Aa

Your dhadha registerd two documents : This one was kept exclusively under lock and key with Laal and would have been put in use any time if there was a threat to the boys or to the business. (Raaghav was not aware of this at all)

The business and the property and all investments was in the name of Arjun and Aayansh and made Laal as the guardian of the boys till they become legally major and are able to take decisions on their own. The power of Attorney was given to Laal to exercise what sounded wise for the benefits of the boys. Laal was given the right to appoint anyone who he deems fit as a guardian for the boys.

The second one was registered as per Raaghav's wish and this was what told to Chakor by laal when she asked about the small car.

Rishab had initially written all the property and the businesses in Raaghav's name. But Raaghav was against it so Rishab did prepare the documents making Arjun and Aayansh as the legal heir but till they become Legally major, Raaghav will be their care taker and will work in the capacity of the CEO of the Rishab Plantations and will consult the legal team before taking any decisions. He was given full rights to use the facilities. But, he will not be allowed to sell any property or belongings to any individual person but can invest in properties and investments in the names of the boys and he can sign only as the CEO.

But, said the Lawyer, Raaghav never took any advantage and after consulting the legal team and the company norms, fixed a salary for himself and would pay for his living expenses to the company. Out of his earnings he bought a small car when he travelled alone and he would use the other vehicles only when the boys were taken out. He ensured that the workers were well taken care of and always worked alongwith them in the same uniforms.

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And, he had signed a declaration on a stamped document that had been registered in the Court at the time the birth certificates were registered.

"I Raaghav Kumar, hereby declare that if at any point in time even before they become legally major, if Arjun and Aayansh feels that I am not discharging my responsibilities in protecting them or taking care of them and that I have gone against their trust and had brought losses to the business, then I will leave Rishab Plantations and Shimla without any arguments and will not take anything with me.

I also promise that I will not come back in their lives or create any trouble to them.

A failed Father

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Arjun and AAyansh were shocked that's where Ar realized how pure his love was and that nothing was in his name and any sale agreement made on property was null and void.

Kaaka, thank you said Ar and was in tears. What he told next made Laal and the Lawyer proud of him.

Kaaka, I am too young to understand and you are very experienced and you know what is good. But, I want to tell you how blessed we both are to have Daddy as our Daddy and Mummy too. We are so proud to have them... and I don't even can think of staying away from them and our little sisters. Can you please destroy all these documents and just make one document that document of LOVE and that They are our Daddy and Mummy and everything of theirs is ours and we donot want to have anything separately as ours. Please do everything as being done in a normal family which has a daddy, mummy, brother, sister and Mausi (for Girija mausi was the one who swung us by her heart). If this can be done, Kaaka, dhadha will be proud that he did the right thing of making me and Aayansh as the pure soul's sons. And I will be happy to say,

" Yes, He did not shed his blood to father us but he bled through his heart and soul and indeed always kept us gathered close to him always.

Please kaaka, Aayansh hugged and kissed Arjun and said bhai...You are talking big words, I cannot understand ... but I want to hug daddy...hug mummy, kiss her eyes...and hold our sisters. I want to go to daddy and mummy soon please he cried.

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Raaghav just hugged both of them, they called mummy and she was hugged by both of them. I am awed at your smartness Arjun and Aayansh.. Itne samajdaar hamara bachaaa... Raaghav said. You found the criminal out but stayed calm and handled him perfect.. Wah. Ar said arey Oh!!Raaghav babu, ham balwaan papa ki thara par budhimaan mumma ki thara... ha ha !! ran he while Raaghav tried to chase him.. ... Arey... ruko...!!!!! Aa clapped bhai baago baago mumma ki thara... Chakor doubled up and caught Ar with all smiles ...All the four hugged each other...

Laal and Roy teared, blessed them to be happy always. It was a long night but the night buried all the darkness and was waiting for the dawn to dawn bright. They were hugging their daddy and they fell asleep as their hearts were calm, minds were at peace as they are their Daddy's sons... They had a peaceful sleep on his strong shoulders.

He carried them to their rooms and placed them on their beds. Chakor and Raaghav covered them with their blankets, kissed them on their foreheads and came out.

Raaghav was emotional, Laal and Roy patted him and Chakor and said thank you and we are proud of you both and we are relieved now of everything.

But kaaka... why didn't you tell me that Karan planned the accident. I would have throttled him, said Raaghv, his eyes was indeed red. Laal said yes, the fear of this and the fear that you may go away thinking of the danger made Rishabji not to tell you. If you had taken law in your hands what would have happened to the boys... so that was the reason we didn't want to tell you.

He said, you are right... I understand...

Girija and Raamu kaaka readied the beds for Roy and Laal who wished the couple good night.

Girija mausi and kaaka please you go sleep. Please rest yourself and wake up late Chakor said for it had been a quite hectic night.

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(Tan tan tannn) read at your risk, Bit bold but I bet all will be risking 😉

Raaghav stood by Rishabji's pic, with hands joined together and eyes full of tears.

Chakor came to him held him and said please no more tears Raaghav as you have proved to be the best daddy one can have. She held his hands. He hugged her and said thank you for everything, but for your wise decision and ideas things would have gone worse... He kissed her forehead while she closed her eyes. Its indeed a long night...

She said true Raaghav, she rested her head on his chest, you proved that for a relationship to bond, blood is not important, but, love, heart and soul should be important. Though I was away from them long, still they had me in their hearts, thanks to you... She closed her eyes and a blob of tear came... For the boys proved their pure love...we did not give birth to them.. but... the one I gave birth to... she whimpered...she shook...in his hug.. He realized where she was getting into.

No No please, I cannot see my Queen with tears...I feel that I have failed in my love if you think about your past...if your past cannot be replaced by my love for you. No Raaghav your pure love is what has made me overcome everything made me realise I can be loved and I can love again... but the boys love made me remember...I am sorry but I promise I will not bring it again she said.., I cannot see a tear in your eyes please, he lifted her chin...cupped her face.. he kissed both her eyes and licked her tears soothingly, lovingly, pleaseee...

She smiled...putting her arms around his neck.. its going to be salty she said...He smiled and licked her cheeks very seductively again which made her moan... He scooped her lifted her close to his heart carrying her in his arms, looking into her eyes, their faces close to each other, to their room where the roses were sleeping...

He said erotically...not only salty, you are tingly and also spicy... My personal spice garden...everything about you tastes good...winking... make me go crazy to crave for more. His fingers tapped light on her sides which was near her bosom. ..hmmm she said... You are becoming naughty... ha haaan...only with you... he said...placing a soft kiss on her nose...but.. Raaghav... we both are dirty... dirty??...he smirked No . Not yet he said...winking... Her eyes wide opened, biting her lower lips..blushing...she said buddhu look at us we are completely dirty with those dust from that old godown and you are hurt too...looking at his wounds... he squeezed his hold tight his hand at her side...with you in my arms and with your soothing lips, my wounds will be healed... he said..placing a kiss on her lips..hmmm she wined.. oh god, she said...Raaghav thum na...first Lets bathe and come she said... Wow !!! not a bad idea, his eyes sparkled... Lets go to the bathroom he said... AAAhhh nonono I did not mean that way she blushed completely going red... put me down, she said though she was hugging him looking into his eyes dreamily... Maidammm... Oh! Achha!!! You didn't mean that way but I am going to have it my way... today...and you be ready to be a responsible citizen ...winking... for the night is going to be long too long... He was lusting her... And so was she...not moving her eyes from his...caressing his cheeks and lowering his face closer...lips brushing against his...she said I don't mind it either being long... he placed few light kisses on her neck in the front...and when she bent her head back in ecstacy he placed a kiss little lower in the valley. she jerked.. held his neck behind tight and he was proud of his simple effect on her..

Budda...she blushed, closing her eyes in that reverie... she felt surprised hearing her own voice which was turning so husky... and also discovering this new bold side of Raaghav ... who was always hesitant and was withholding himself even while making love to her as he was more concerned about her comfort always..... put me down ... Nope maidam... na na na...abibi hamesometa... placed a kiss on her cheeks, jawan hai one on her neck , aur thera dewaana hai..slowly biting her lips... she was feeling light... holding him tight... her eyes half closed now and her lips trembled saying... paagal hai thu... she went close hugging his neck more...

He carried her to their huge aesthetically designed bath tub...kissing her lips sooo softly without breaking it...placing her inside... their eyes on each other...the tub was chill and she jumped a bit when he disrobed her and himself... this experience is new...not the same as she blossomed with the twins ..

He opened the tap splashing the water... whaat??? he asked... its cold...her lips shivered, not only cold she was feeling shy too..., he smiled...few secs you will be warm, his eyes was completely dark, with full of lust, kissing her with passion, brushing his lips all over her... his hands was warming all over her assets and crushing her completely into him and the water turned hot as lust and passion was taking over them... she moaned.. Raaghav ... he grew more crazy..as he never felt his name so seductive...she kissed his wounds healing him and said I am so blessed to have a soul like you who had waited for me this long...and made me blossom again... Thank you she said ... showing her bold side too ...taking him in her stride... he was surprised, felt proud that he could bring this side of hers... he just closed her lips, teased her a bit and said yes long too long but the wait was worth as I long for this more and more... he looked at her eyes which was dreamy ...holding her chin .. I love you maidam loads ..loads...loads.. for I have no life other than you and our kids..and I want to ensure you live your life too more and more. Thank you she said ...for coming into my life..everything about you is so special. she said looking into his eyes.. he said,, yess everything I want you to have is special... everything of mine is first to you... my first kiss was with you... he kissed her again, my first hug was when I hugged you...and...and ...she asked... whaat Raaghav... even my first blossom was with you.. she teared, went into his chest.. hugging him and kissing him...

But Raaghav .. she looked up to his eyes...you have never answered one question of mine... why do you call me still Maidam when we are alone , why not Chakor...He smiled, kissed her...(she had asked this many times but he never answered her nor did he ever called her Chakor except when required in front of others.. and never when they were making love)...I loved you as my maidam and feel you more as mine just mine when I call you maidam... he lifted her face and said .. everything of mine is yours, and only for you.. kissed her contours...and said thanks to you , he smiled very very mischievously. thanks .. for the exo...tic ...spiiicy dinner and wine which I long for more and more... devouring her with kisses all over her... Winking... she was drenching in his love...I love you Raaghav, and I am just yours...I am so satisfied she said and thaaa... hmmm he kissed her very very aggressively... no more thanks... he said naughtily squeezing her tight, crashing her hardened twinies into his well toned torso...and she was subliming in that passion, lust, love of his...he was kissing her more and more, but between his kisses ..lifted his head and looked at her fully aroused... still... i am not satisfied till the dessert is served... awwwhhh she pinched him blushing... He winced in false pain... tried to raise his voice and no sooner she pulled him down and served him her best dessert!😉😉

(he closed his eyes hugging her close to him immersing inside the tub of passion...he never called her as Chakor especially while they were together alone... as he did not want her to get reminded of Suraj and become uncomfortable even for a minuscule second for he knows how much she loved him and how much Suraj loved her...he vowed himself to sublime her in his love, her Raaghav's love. He loved her as Maidam and she will be Raaghav's maidam only forever... )

Love is in the air...

Love can happen anywhere, anytime... for they are too different...still discovering each other... as love is infinite...

The night was long...breezy... Cold...but their emotions were warm..turning hot...being bold...

Arey😉!!!! Close your jaws!!! 😳Oops what are you all looking into, arey yaar they have closed the doors... Its going to be long but they have longed for this... let them soothe themselves...I am off going to be sitting ready by the cradle to sing lullaby to the roses if one of them shriek and wake up for her dessert as the chef is now busy having & serving a royal dinner.. (tantan taaannannn)

Just tweeked a little bit.on request from few on twitter and insta... 😉😉😉

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The whole family had an excellent sleep, the day dawned bright and beautiful. Ragkor were sleeping hugging to each other... Raaghav got up, kissing her forehead without disturbing her sleep as she was too tired..kissed his princesses and went off to be with his cubs... He saw them sleeping at both the ends of the bed. He went in silently between them... Patting them... they knew his touch and soon turn towards him and hugged him placing their heads on him both sides... He felt calm, smiled, thanked the gods... closed his eyes hugging them with his hands on each sides... This is bliss...

The day was special indeed...Girija had organized for a grand Pooja as the boys wanted it. Ragkor were surprised.

The pandits were there. Raaghav and the boys were in their traditional sherwani all in blue and the girls were in lehenga... The cutie pies were really like little angels in their pink mini lehengas, holding on to their bros fingers and carefully keeping their steps.

They did the Pooja invoking all the gods for a good start of a new beginning... Laal and Roy brought the documents with the Mansion and other properties in Ragkor's name, Plantation business in ARAA names (as minors) and the investments and other business in their princesses ADAN names...(as minors). The nominees and the legal heir for all the wealth being the kids in all the documents. It was also specifically mentioned that the Lodges will be with the Rishab Trust and the boys will be the custodian to maintain it after Raaghav and can never be sold or gifted to anyone. This was a sort of a CSR initiative... giving back to the society...

The registrar was there on a special invitation.

They did the Pooja and the boys made Ragkor sit on the altar and made the Paadha Pooja (cleansing of the elders feet) the highest reverence given to the parents. It was an emotional moment for them..

There was feast at the plantation and the workers were extremely happy, blessing the young boys as they distributed goodies and gifts to them. Like father like Sons they said. The boys looked up to him with pride...

The wholesalers were very happy as the new yield was free of pests and Raaghav signed the first international export agreement with a company in UK one of the world's largest tea consuming countries. The workmen were excited and pledged to meet the delivery on time and in meeting with the international quality standards. They requested Raaghav to atleast now sit in his office but he outrightly refused and said he was, is and always will be among them.

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It was evening ...breezy... the boys were playing in the Mansion gardens along with their little sisters...Above in the terrace, Chakor was leaning against Raghav on his chest, hearing his heart beat beating rhythmically looking at those beautiful yellow bougainvillea trees which has been planted in a row bloomed to its fullest...

It was tranquility...he was just closing his eyes, holding her on him... his hands on hers snaking through her waist in the front from behind ... the day did dawn bright for them as told by Arjun...

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Every life spins around to live

Every life spins around to love

Every relationship needs no blood but heart and soul to live...

Yes they Adopted, adopted to being for each other...

Bhai ... iii... pointed those little roses...scrunching their eyes towards the terrace...pointing their fingers calling out mum...maaa... pappa...aaa...

Dadddyyy called the boys they are calling you and mummy... they are speaking more...

They were excited...

RagKor rushed down in excitement to hear them call out .

He lifted both the girls on each sides of his shoulders..while the boys were holding them so that they don't fall. Kissed them and placed them on to Chakor who went crazy kissing them.

Dadddyyy came the lions...running to him holding on to his biceps... Swirling around... saying those precious words

Our Daddy strongest...

I prayed to bajrangbali and Raamji...Let them stay happy...for they have to be..

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Thanks all girls for encouraging me to write and in supporting me always!!!

Love you all loads!!

Love SuKor ( don't know tears ebb when I write this)

Love RagKor for the sheer pure unadulterated love

Loads of love to MeeJay for making me unearth a new side of mine which I never knew till I started writing in IF.

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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The Hug, The Hammock

I am just unable to come over the vacuum... Had a tough day at work all the more making me crave for that solace I always get with Meejay!!

Nikki your insta post made me tear again!!!

To be honest I have fallen for the fictional family created, fallen for the boys...so when I saw the Bougainvillea trees on my way in the shuttle something clicked in me!!! Here I pen it!!! Just to calm myself. Thought to share with you all..

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Are you sure, Mother Hen asked its chicks and the Cock...

Proudly said yes you go ahead we will take care of the younger chicks!!!

Raaghav are you sure, Arey Maidam, humne bola na... chintha math karo

Ar and Aa is it ok... mummy don't worry we will take care of the roses said the cubs.

The driver was waiting... smiling at the family... He prayed... Kisiko bura nazar na lagey.

She said Raaghav take care, give them proper food, I have told Girija Mausi make them sleep on time... Don't make them play or lie down immediately after giving them food... she kept kissing the roses... You will take care na.

The Trio sat with both their palms in their cheek...

Shyam Laal was smiling at Chakor... Kaaka why are you smiling. Bitiyaa, He took care for ten years don't worry... That one line made her keep quiet... Haan Kaaka aap teek bolrahey hai... He knows to take care well. She teared a bit, he came running, Maidam please don't worry its just few hours you will be back in the evening and if there is anything I will call you... Please go this is an golden opportunity so please go ahead. She said thank you and got into the car.

Chakor was identified as the best Coach and was invited to attend a valedictory function to give a speech and also a farewell message to those outgoing students who had been trained in marathoning and other field events. It was in Delhi and it was only for few hours so Raaghav told her that he will take care of the girls and she can go attend and come since she will be returning the same day evening and it was a personal invitation by Mr. Rathod so she did not want to refuse and the Sports Minister was presiding the same.

She got into the car and went attended the function, her speech was well appreciated and she returned back home late evening to find that the family was not there. She was perplexed asked Raamu kaaka. Kaaka sab log kahan hai...Kaakaa said bitiya dhono bitiyaa rorahathey... Isiliye factory lekar chalegayi, woh maai ke paas

She got stunned!!! Maai ke paas...?? Who?? what, Raaghav who is this... She was confused... she tried calling Raaghav who was inside the plantation so his phone was not reaching...

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She drove to the factory, ran inside Laal was there... she was agigated, crying, kaaka what happened Raamu kaaka told the girls were crying, and they were taken to Maai??? Who is that???? She cried...

Laal smiled... calm down bitiye... Wahan dek ...he pointed to the valley and the rows of the Bougainvillea..

She walked down the plantation... its was beautiful... she walked down to the row of yellow Bougainvillea trees... Fully bloomed, breezing calm, its paper flowers falling down flying around and under it were two Hammacks placed below the trees... Near it was a big rocking chair and with two small coir cots...

It was so serene... The more she was nearing she was tearing more...What she saw

The girls were giggling making gibberish noises and uttering words which only the angels understand other than bhaaai... mummaaa, papa... so soothingly with a smile in the hammocks which was below the row of full bloomed Bougainvillea trees. The big tree was never trimmed. Near the tree, both the hammocks were laid and the coir cots placed beside.. the boys were lying down in each, with a chord attached to the hammock, making it swing...and singing nursery rhymes to the roses...and telling them stories..

Raaghav was rocking in the big rocking chair... Smiling at the boys and at his roses... the girls...

Chakor just stood few yards away to see the scene... Laal patted her... bitiya...this was the practice of Raaghav for the past ten years when the boys were crying thinking of their mother that's you... they used to be unconsolable sometimes that the poor soul would bring them here put them on the hammocks seated in the rocking chair talking about you, and singing nursery rhymes as he did not know lohris...

That big tree which was never trimmed was their mother and those yellow flowers where her kisses which flew down on them... he would make them hug the tree when they were sad or happy and share all their emotions with it. The tree grew but the boys or Raaghav never allowed it to be trimmed as they saw you in her... She grew tall but as angels guarded she never withered even during the bad winter, may be she stood there for the boys, took that responsibility to take care of them till you came. Only now the trees or withering light...

Kaaka please ensure that the trees are guarded fine.. He nodded and said he is in talks with the horticulturist... thanks kaaka... he left the family to be together and went away.

She came near Raaghav who had his eyes closed and was very slowly rocking... she knelt beside him keeping her head on his lap... he woke up with her touch and saw her... When did you come... He asked...he was shocked to see her tear... Wiping her tears cupping her face and pushing her strands asked what happened why are you crying...are you ok? Did anyone harm you? .all ok? How was the program?? Please he started to agitate... she quickly held his hands no no Raaghav everything is fine, program was good...

I became emotional coming here... looking at this tree... Raaghav ...he nodded, yes this tree was you... I made them feel you in here, in her...they hugged her and kissed her embracing you...

She called the boys... hugging them so tight... mummaa when did you come... The girls started to cry... Especially Ananya... Arjun said yes mumma she is exactly like Aayansh... You know he always used to cry thinking about you ha ha. Wanting to sleep in your lap hugging you and papa used to say this hammock is mumma's lap. We used to hug the tree... and mumma you know we got the kiss through those yellow flowers... so excitedly... Haaan bhai you too cried na... he said no no I am few minutes elder than you so I did not ... She hugged them and took the girls... all the four were kissing her nonstop. Mumma we love you... Aa kissed on her eyes... mumm ...aaa reaching their tiny fingers touching her.. looking at the boys saying their way ILUBU... haaa haaannn giggling...

I love you all too... Way too much... and I am blessed to have you all... tearing. Mumma no nono came the boys running. No no no told the girls too...

Raaghave came hugged them all... boys shall we? he asked... they said yes daddy one minute... they gave the girls to them and ran to their maai hugged her and kissed her... Came back to them took the girls. Dadddy now you go... he smiled ... he went hugged the tree and kissed her... AAAhhh daddy you kissed, you never used to kiss Maai na... Arjun the smarto asked ... Chakor was surprised looking at Raagahv...

Yes mumma ..daddy used to hug but never kissed as when we asked he said "I will never kiss until your Maai is comfortable with my kiss..". she was just looking at Raaghav...

The girls were placed in their buggies and the boys pushed them to their Rover... They were walking hugging each other...behind them. Raaghav why didn't you kiss that Maai she asked with mischief in her eyes... He stopped went behind a tree to the side pulling her close to him hugging her tight... The hug, hammock and kiss was for the boys... as my first kiss was only for my maidam!!! Looking at her with pure love.

She hugged him placed a gentle kiss on his forehead and said I love you too much Raaghav... the naughty one said oh if you do so why kiss over here touching his forehead, it should be here pouting himself... maidam... thumbinaaa ummm...budda chalo...she said, smiling... Daadddyyy boys were honking the horns

They drove back ...she was thanking the Bougainvillea tree... Thank you for retaining the love, thank you for hugging them and thank you for blooming always...and thank you for kissing them...

Thank you for being me!!!

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Making...Love...Rag Kor to RagKor.

(one reader on twitter in confidence asked me as how did Chakor give in so easy to Raaghav and started a life though she liked the story and started to accept Ragkor... Didn't she go through tough to forget Suraj? This question made me think and also try to put down Chakor's dilemma)

After Rag Kor married in the plantation...

Months rolled by... She was called by the Principal to join as their coach but to go for an initial training at Delhi.

The boys outrightly refused her to go anywhere out of Shimla and especially without them for they feared she may leave them again... After many promises and with a special permission the whole family went for her training which was for a month in Delhi.

Chakor was overwhelmed in their love and also Raagahv's love made her forget everything that she lost...

But,...Yes they were married... their life started but did they start to live???

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A week after the wedding...

Girija was cleaning the Pooja in the Rishab Mansion...True to the word the Mansion was very aesthetic and luxury at its best as Rishab was a lover of artifacts and Raaghav carried it further.

The Pooja was huge and had a big Bolenath idol along with Ganesha. Special poojas were done but Girija was the one who was custodian of it along with Shyam Laal.

Raaghav had installed Bajrangbali and also Ram, Sita idols. His day used to start with waking up the boys and bathe and garland Bajrangbali everyday and then leave the boys in school and head to the plantation.

Girija used to ask him as why he garlands only Bajrangbali and not the Ram idol whom he worship ardently. Raaghav used to smile and say Mausi, Bajrangbali reminds me that I am his devotee and will be a bachelor always. He looked at Ramji and said with a smile and hope "when my Sita comes to me and when I start living with her, I shall garland Ramji... Girija used to look astonished at his faith and at the same time used to tear about his pure love for his Maidam. He did not know where she was? how she was? If Anjor would ever accept him? if he would ever meet his Maidam... but he had that faith and was loving her being far away. Girija prayed hard every day that Ramji is garlanded soon..

It was the usual morning after Chakor came... Raaghav came to the Pooja after waking the boys and garlanded Bajrangbali... Girija was surprised... She looked at Raaghav but he just smiled and prayed and went about his routine.

Girija knew that the boys were so so glued to Chakor that Raaghav and Chakor did not have their time... but... indeed a few days back, Laal did take the boys out that night and Girija did a very very simple decoration of Ragkor's room for them being together.

That day...

Chakor was in the garden of the Mansion looking above the sky...

Her eyes were tearing... Girija brought her tea, she saw Chakor and sat beside her. Bitiya, I am so happy that you are found and you are back. Raaghav is such a pure soul and he lived in the hope that he will be able to find you and you will come to him. I want you both to be happy toge... Chakor hugged Girija and started to cry. Girija mausi, I know how blessed I am to have this unadulterated soul to love me. Yes I love him, my heart has accepted him but...she could not complete. Girija said I know you bitiya how much you had struggled but just ensure that the soul who waited for you without any expectations is given his due happiness. You are intelligent and you know better. The boys have gone away with Laal, I have made a simple decoration in your room... Pleaseee... Go she said.

Chakor was perplexed... The reality is coming in front of her... Yes she is married, her heart has accepted indeed longing for Raaghv but her mind...Daak baba why is my heart and mind not going together... I donot want to betray Raaghv or do injustice to Suraj... Raaghav loves me and as his wife I need to make him happy... But...she teared standing in their beautiful room balcony. She was indeed in her simple saree...looking at the moon... She knew Raaghav would come anytime to the room but without the boys... her heart was racing... I told him to call me Chakor but when he calls me Chakor I get reminded of...

Raaghav walked in, simply closed the door, he saw the room mildly decorated... He smiled... changed himself to his simple T. He saw Chakor in the balcony... He coughed a bit and said Chakor... she jerked herself... That Chakor...tears was running incessantly... Raaghav came near her, Maidam... He turned her towards him... she quickly wiped her tears but that did not escape his eyes... He looked at her with so much affection, held her face, is anything troubling you? He asked. She nodded no but eyes down. He slanted himself went close near her lips, she closed her eyes but did not slant or raise her face... he saw the tear stains. He went very close... lowered her face and kissed on her forehead...She was surprised... He held her hands and asked...

What do you see there... pointing towards the sky... She said Chanduji... it was evident her lips was trembling...

He said... acha ... But I don't see Chanduji as I see you in there... She started to whimper... Bending her head down... going into his chest, she cried, she cried her heart out, terribly, he allowed her to cry... He knew it was difficult for her... She has gone through pain, agony, and the last ten years she was in dark, not knowing if she would have her life, if she would live again as for her she has parted away from him and she lived with the memories of Suraj, Anjor and little of Raghav... but... that "Chakor brought back those buried memories. He realized her heart has accepted him but her mind was battling it... She is caught... He just hugged her consoling... She said, Raaghav I am sorry... I ... he just put her fingers on her lips. Maidam... please take your time, as I just need your love and nothing else. They both just sat in the balcony holding their hands, looking at the sky, she just rested herself on his shoulders and did not know when she fell asleep.

He carried her to the bed, placed her very carefully, sat beside her and spoke... Caressing her head...holding her hands, with tears in his eyes...

Maidam... I know its not easy... I know you brought me for your daughter as I was like Suraj... the one whom you loved the most and the one who gave his life for you. I cannot be Suraj... I donot want to be either as I love you as my Maidam... I know you were Suraj's Chakor but I will wait till you feel that you are Raaghav's Maidam and accept me. I will wait for that day when you will make me yours by mind and heart and bodily. I love you loads Maidam... I lived in your memories for the past ten years and now I can live more as you are with me, near me. I am very happy and I need nothing more... I love everything of you and I want to give everything of mine including my life, but I don't want to leave you for I want to give all that happiness you lost in those past years. He kissed her forehead and her hands.. I pray that this day will be the last day you cried... (He said in his mind, you will always be my maidam and never will I call you as Chakor when we are together and alone...I cannot erase Suraj's memories but I vow that I will fill all your memories with happiness that you overwrite those memories with my love and happiness.)

He laid down, held her hands and slept looking at her... She opened her eyes after few minutes...looked at the pure soul which was holding her hands and sleeping. She teared, Raaghav she said with so much love... kissed his hands, went close by him, placed her head on his chest and said I will be only your maidam, just give me some time Raaghav and slept. She felt somewhat peaceful... Yes they did not mingle or entwain that night but their minds had and felt at peace... The day dawned beautifully with both hugging onto each other... they both woke up with the sun rays on them... Looking at each other... smiling... She said good morning Raaghav... He was happy at her smiling face looking up... I love you Maidam... let me first freshenup he said... No she said... why??? His eyebrows lifted... She quickly placed her lips on his very briefly and said... I want to give you a dirty kiss!!!! He was startled... touching his lips... though dirty I don't mind as its from my beauty, he winked... Awwwh she ran feeling shy...

That was the next day Girija saw Raaghav at the Pooja...

Girija was surprised that he still garlanded Bajrangbali... but she did not realise that the bachelor god was indeed blessing his bakta to garland his Deva soon...

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Days passed as she was busy with the coach training and as mentioned the whole family was there in Delhi. They had their moments, getting used to with each others touches, simple hugs, cute kisses and few passionate moments but still they did not take it to the next level... He allowed her to break her barriers and open up...They had the stealthy moments of hugs when the boys were away... He did kiss her many a times with love but never kissed her on her lips as he wanted that to be very special and waited for that day when she was ready to give herself to him. She was getting drowned in the boys love and Raaghav's love... She was so overwhelmed that she had no time to reminisce memories..

Relationships build on love but not necessarily always on passion and lust... But lust and passion overtakes and happens and when it happens no body can stop or know how it happens... ...

It was such a day...

She had asked him to come home early... Raaghav had gone to meet the Plantations council members when one of the member was so agitated that Rishab plantations was paying the workman above the wages fixed by the Board which was creating union issues with the other Plantations. Raaghav was adamant and said that the Board had fixed minimum wages and it's the Managements decision to fix the wages and he always wanted the workmen to share the profits after taxes. They were trying to speak against him. The whole plantation fraternity supported Raghav and it was indeed a very tiring and bad day.

It was raining and Raaghav finished the meeting. He was driving back home after dropping Laal. Laal asked Raaghav to drive safe and be careful with those agitators. . Raaghav left only to have his car to be punctured... Which was very unusual as it was recently serviced. It was still drizzling when he got down and called Chakor and said that his car had broken and would call for help from plantation. But before he could complete the call got cut, which agonized Chakor. He saw few guys who were trying to hurt him, it was dark but he knew it was those bad guys. He kicked them and punched and when a guy was about to hit, there were two cars which stopped and Govind the head of security and Laal with few others were there. The goons were caught. Raaghav was surprised but he knew Laal always thought ahead as he was worried about the guys, but actually Chakor had called Laal and Govind as she sensed some trouble. Maidam is always a step ahead!!

Chakor was going up and down the hallway controlling herself from crying as it was midnight and the boys were refusing to sleep without seeing daddy and was not ready to leave mummy as she was tensed but was not showing it out. Aa was hugging her while Ar was calling daddy and Laal kaaka. She was frantically praying when they heard the car... Laal walked with Raaghav and he had mild bruises. The moment he came the boys just ran to him Daddy...just hugged him and kissed him crying terribly. Daddy are you ok, Laal said he was fine and nothing to worry and asked the boys to calm and go to bed... Raaghav kissed them looked at Chakor who was completely shaken, cheeks swollen and eyes with tears... but she was holding herself. He went to her and said, I am fine...lets leave the boys in their room. She went behind him silent... Made the boys sleep. Girija said she will heat the dinner while Raaghav can freshenup and come. Chakor was silent... her whole body was shaking. He asked did you eat... she looked up to him saying she was not hungry... He asked Girija to send some milk and fruits to their room... It was sent immediately and she looked at Chakor and said... Bitiya, please be strong... Raaghav babu is back. Nothing will happen to him and wished them goodnight.

They went to their room.. First time she latched the room... She dressed the wounds, incessant tears. Her hands were shaking. She was shaking... He looked at her plight and said maidam.. this is a small wound... The next moment she just clung to him, hugging him, crying inconsolable, Raaghav for a minute I thought my heart will stop, I thought my life has stopped... what will I do without you... Please donot leave me... I got very scared. She was trembling.. I love you Raaghav, you are my life.. He was calming her but she went on and on, he could hear her heart pounding..chest heaving heavily. who is that who tried to harm you, why did they do this to you, Kaaka told me that this is the first time this has happened, she was hugging him, kissing his forehead, is it paining too much...he said Maidam this is nothing to worry... she was on and on see...this did not happen all these years but why suddenly, in few months I think I brought you bad luck, he tried to pacify her..., see my luck is so bad that it...he could not take it more, he just cupped her face and placed his lips on hers holding her head..Pressed her lips...then slowly.. Kissing hers with love... her lips stopped trembling... She jerked, held him tight as though the whole world was going to fall apart. She felt calm... It was few minutes they remained like that, he kissed her with love, very slowly with full of love, placed sweet kisses on her cheeks, on her forehead, please maidam calm down... nothing will happen to me, he kissed her again, you are my lucky charm, placing kisses on her eyes, I will never leave you never ever... I love you too much I can't see you tremble... You are a strong one...please... I love you loads... he kissed her again on her lips... she calmed she smiled...without opening her eyes... Thank you Raaghav. He realized what he was doing... he tried to move his head away when she held him pressing her lips against his... Very very passionately... She looked into his eyes which was full of love, pure love... Raaghav kiss me more, hard... I am sorry as nothing is specially done today she said, he kissed her back, this time with passion, but, he said, indeed this is the most special day in my life, I waited for this moment, to have that special first kiss with you. I should thank those guys he said. She kicked him smiling... He said... nothing will befall on me and thank you, my maidam is smart knew I was in trouble and sent help... he tried to kiss on her forehead, she lifted her head only for him to land on her lips again..

He hugged her very very lovingly... She looked at him very dreamily... Raaghav... Hmmm... he lifted her and placed her on the bed... You must be tired... he said... lets...before he could finish. She pulled him towards her, crashed her lips on him... she said Raaghav... please ...I have made you wait enough... Please make me yours... will you??? I am sorry... For..I... he was startled... looked into her eyes... she was so beautifully calm...

Maidam...he held her... making her lie on him...lifting her chin and looking at her eyes... I love you...loads.. I waited for this moment...he hugged her beautifully, with loads of love she gave in herself for him to write a beautiful poetry and he wrote his first poetry which was melancholy, it was new experience for him, it was his first too... he was not aggressive or too lusty...but was full of love, full of passion. He moulded her with utmost respect... He ensured that she was comfortable even while making love as she was the most precious one in the world... HIS MAIDAM IS ONLY FOR HIM AND HE ENSURED THAT EVERYTHING OF HIS WAS ONLY FOR HER....she sublimed in that bliss, which was not planned, no decorations, nothing special but the poet indeed wrote his poetry, it was so beautiful...so special... She sank in that love.. In that bliss...He made it so different...they entwined themselves in each other...

Naughty is She asked... do I look old??? pouting cutely... He drew the quilt above and hugged her more kissing her pout... enjoying the child in her...said no you are that exotic wine which I crave for more... intoxicating.. encircling her waist down... his voice was indeed too hoarse...

Chup budda... she said smiling... he was pulling her close crushing her... Budda ???Am I? he winked, devouring her...in his love...

Hmmm ...hmmm.. the angels were guarding blushing high above...

There were few poetries written but with utmost care... But the boys were now non stop ... Daddy, mummy we want a sister... pleaseee.

Maidam.. hmmm... the boys want a sister!!!

Ssshhh chup besharam, budda hai thu !!! dad of two!!!

Budda??? Hum??? Arey Maidam...ham abibi handsometa and young hai ek dum!!! He pulled her close to him literally crushing her bones...crushing her into him... she wanted that too...

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Girija was extremely happy as the bakta of bachelor has started to garland his deva everyday.

She smiled happy tears while he hugged her side and said be ready mausi for another little one!! Winking!!!

Chakor asked Raaghav and Girija. Whats it.???.. he said some secrets are between mausi and her special beta...cannot be shared!!!

Yes finally they did make Love ... made Rag-Kor into RagKor... with the outcome of a twin poetry!!!


Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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A2 to A4...twosome foursome - indeed awesome

Relationships build on love but not necessarily always on lust... But lust happens and when it happens no body can stop or know how it happens... ...

She gave in herself for him to write the poetry and he wrote in beautifully, carefully...

Maidam.. hmmm... the boys want a sister!!!

Ssshhh chup besharam, budda hai thu !!! dad of two!!!

Budda??? Hum??? Arey Maidam...ham abibi handsometa and young hai ek dum!!! He pulled her close to him literally crushing her bones...crushing her into him... she wanted that too...

And I am forty already.. she said... he cupped her face and said age is a number that define the number of years we live in this world while love is infinite and never fades even if it is a decade... But, he held her face, .. we will handle the boys he said...kissed her... Maidam hume sirf thumhara pyaar chaahiye...thumko hum bahut bahut bahut zyaada pyaar karthey hai aur kuch nahi chahiyeee... Koyi thakleef nahi dhena chahthey hai... They slept holding each other.

But she started to think... Looking at his sleeping face... The pure unadulterated love... she smiled...You and the boys have given me everything...loads of love... Raaghav I have given you back nothing... I brought you for my reason... But you started to live making me as your reason to live... I love you loads Raaghav and I am ready to go through the process of carrying our symbol of love for the happiness of our sons... and for you!!! I saw that spark in your eyes when you spoke about having our child, your life within me...

But one thought was making her worry... She brushed it aside...

She kissed him on his forehead... placed her head on his chest and slept in peace.

There were few poetries written but with utmost care...and in one or two poetries the verses were left to flow free ...

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It was two months now...

The boys were nonstop with their ranting while coming back from the school ...

Sis sis sis we need sis... asking daddy who was just dodging their questions... while they were saying daddy their friend Rohan has a sister and he keeps boasting how she laughs, plays and AA was saying sometimes Ar is so into his adventure and surfing I am feeing bored... while Ar was saying no no I am bored because of you, if a sis is there it will be so nice... Raaghav was trying to calm the boys when a phone call came from Girija... His face changed... he panicked...daddy what happened... Your mummy has fallen down... he just raced the rover to reach the Mansion within minutes... He called Shyaam Laal who said the dr is already attending to her... As Chakor had fainted in her room while talking to Girija.

The trio just doubled up to their room... Ar and Aa were already in tears, asking kaaka who was outside the room... what happened to mummy kaaka, is she hurt, how did she fall? Can we go see her?? While Raaghav was shattered in tears, his heart was in his mouth... bajrangbali, Ramji kya hua maidam ko... Laal was calming the boys and patting the shoulders of Raaghav. Where is mausi, he asked... when the lady Dr walked out in all smiles... Dr. aunty why are you smiling when our mummy has fallen down asked both in unison crying... she said my boys... she has been seeing them since their birth... she looked at Raaghav who was just looking at her... She said Congrats... You are going to have an addition to your family... Go see her inside but come meet me at the clinic. He just froze...Kaaka hugged him, god has blessed you my boy he said. The boys asked aunty / kaaka please tell us properly. She said, boys you are going to get playmate soon, chota sa bhai ya behan.. Kya !!! Sach!!! both kissed her and ran inside the room followed by Raaghav... who controlled all his emotions and walked behind them.

Girija was beside Chakor who was sitting up on the bed... Eyes teared as the boys ran to her hugging on each side... She knew her man was controlling himself... mummy thank you so it's a sis for us... They kissed her ... Girija was telling beta aap dhono mumma ka kayal rakhna hai... She is going to have a small baby... She is going to me mine said both... but we don't know if it's a boy or a girl... nan a na only sis.. Chakor hugged them and looking at Raaghav...who was looking at her with tears and eyes full of love. Whats if it's a bro.. both said hmmm we want a sis but ok if it's a bro too as mumma you have said all children are god's gift. So whatever gift is given we will be happy... We love you mummy and daddy. Girija took the boys saying mumma needs to rest thus leaving them alone. She closed the doors behind and went with the boys.

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He just jittered, came near her, kneeled on the bed beside her... kissed her forehead... So much of emotions... is... it... really!!! He sat beside her... Maidam... He could not speak... hugged her... Are you fine... Will this be pain..ful for you??

She hugged him ... Made him feel her flat tummy... shaking her head... yes .. sach... Raaghav your life, your blood is growing within me... our symbol of love... they both cried happy tears... he held her kissed her tummy and said I have no words to say how happy I am... How blessed I am...I thought I will die an orphan... I never thought I will get a family in my life, you came in my life... the boys turned my life... But you made me to start living start breathing and now how can I thank you for completing my life... he cried like a small baby...but how is this as you...were...

Raaghav she gathered him...you gave me everything... your pure love... and I want to nurture that love within me to give it as a gift to you and the boys... but maidam...you are my gift, my poetry... you... hmmm she kissed him on his lips... I left few of the poetries verses to flow free ... she blushed... He lifted her in his arms, placed her in the balcony diwan resting her on his chest... Looking at the sky... She asked what do you see there... he said our new life...tha..she pursed her lips with his. But Raaghav first our sons... our boys... then our little one... tiredness was taking over her and she slept peacefully on his chest... he carried her very carefully as she was carrying his pearl within... Laying her down on the bed... he kissed her tummy... thank you for coming... Making my life more meaningful...

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He asked her to not to go to the school anymore. The boys were going ballistic AA was asking Girija how to take care of mummy and their little one while Ar was surfing caring a pregnant mummy. Raaghav met the gynae who prescribed him to buy vitamins and also told him that she should be taken care of well as it may be a little difficult for her due to her age... the whole mansion was spinning around Chakor!!

It was completion of the first trimester and they were in the clinic for the Ultrasound scan ... the boys were waiting outside and Raaghav was inside with her holding her hands... Looking at the monitor where he could see little jelly beans (not clear) but could hear the heart beat... the boys were allowed for a brief few minutes and they were so thrilled to hear the heart beat. The gynae shared the most important news to them!! Raaghav was too scared but Chakor held him and said they will go through it. After much cohesion by Chakor, their family gynae shared the happy news that it was not a girl but girls yesss a twin... they were eclectic but she did share that Chakor has to be on constant check up and observation and one of the foetus was a bit weak too... Chakor said that she would go through it but made Raaghav to promise not to tell the boys it was twins but to tell them it was a girl. The boys were so crazy and start naming too. Both were saying it was his and Ar named it Aditi while Aa said its going to be Ananya . Raaghav was all the more loving his maidam madly and ensured there was a nurse during the day time much against Chakor's wish

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Mummy yummy with mood swings

Raaghav was in a meeting with the plantation Board. Girija went to one of the plantation workers wedding and the boys called Raaghav frantically...

Daddy, please come... mummy is crying terribly... she is angry too... We did all our homework but still and she is ... and asking for...even the nurse is unable to handle.

Raaghav dropped everything oh god what now... Off late madam is behaving so different each and every moment is so unpredictable that day she made me run for cocodokla and I had to literally beg the shopwala to make it special ... Arey bajrangbali now I know why you stayed bachelor bey!!! At the same time he was enjoying each and every bit of her tantrums.. Girja and Dr has told about moodswings and he was tackling it but still it made him sweat a lot.. he was telling Raghav Babu... Bapu ka safar...hai bey. Suffer thoda bey!

He reached home and she was crying,,,, she was growing huge too.. she said Raaghav look this nurse is useless I wanted to have panipoori with dates and nuts as filling along chatpata paani with chocolate fundao and mango ras with little of achar but mausi is not there and she is not giving me... I know none bothers about me... no body worries about me... crying... I am unable to walk properly too. Earlier I used to do everything myself. The boys were in the corner not understanding her weird taste and was seeing an altogether new mummy.. bhai. Aa was saying poor mummy I think ananya is troubling while Ar was telling no no aditi might be... they were trying to pacify mumma but no... Raaghav went hugged her and said no dear... please calm down, I shall make what you want. The nurse went home as her hours of duty was over but was fully exhausted. The boys were beside mumma... She calmed with him... he made her lie down and in a jiffy brought what she wanted...but lo her mood turned again..

Hey Raaghav babu will anyone eat paanipoori with nuts...I want poori baaji but she was devouring the weird combo in a jiffy... well she is threesome now... poor girl and poor babu!!! Poori was on the way... even Shyam kaaka was not spared in this but he was happy too!!!

She calmed and slept on the diwan in the balcony when he noticed lifting her gown that her feet were swollen terribly... he teared himself... you are going through so much for us...the boys brought hot water in a bag and he massaged her swollen feet and they ensured that the bag was in the right temperature to give fermentation. She slept with Raaghav pressing her one feet and the boys the other which was on his lap...

Why is mummy's feet so swollen asked AA to Ar... may be the baby is weeing too much!!! Poor mummy...

They were together with her and jumped with happiness when they felt the kick of the baby. The further scans revealed that the babies were growing fine. Both were good. But Ar and Aa were not aware of the twins and was fighting over it. Mine no Mine...

The Dr was advising Chakor to get mentally prepared for C Sec to avoid complications but Chakor was adamant to have it normal... Raaghav could not say anything as he knows what ever Maidam says holds final...Though difficult she was doing the few stretches as advised by the gynae.

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Months were running...

It was a late evening and she was standing in front of the mirror looking at her belly... she could not stand properly... she was wearing a very very loose wrap around robe...

Raaghav had just had his shower after a tiring day at the plantation and walked out with his pyjamas. He was about to wear his T.. when he saw Chakor looking at herself, he smiled, threw the T away and walked with his bare torso towards her standing behind.. hugging her... kissing her in her neck.. he tried hugging her tummy... I am growing fat she said...looking at the mirror... he said no, you are growing beautiful... and glowing more and more... making me go cra... he held his words... She rested on his bare chest...I am shapeless and don't know if I will loose these flabs too...He said with all love and lust... maidam every shape of yours I love, you are way too beautiful now. He passed his hands over the belly and said my deary princesses your daddy is bhuddhu but will give all his love to you and your brothers are there to care for you. Just don't trouble my Queen much please for I love her too much... She knew he was lusting.. but as always he holds himself... she turned towards him..hugging him. walked along with him to the bed. She sat on his lap, she said I am too heavy now... he hugged her and said I am strong and can carry more... she kissed him on his forehead and asked do you love me Raaghav?... I don't look good na?...he kept his fingers on her lips ssshh.. No mai...she removed his finger and placed on her lap... then why are you not loving me..placing her right hand around his neck and soothing his bare torso with her left.. loosening her robe.. .his eyes were surprised!! she placed his face on her chest... closing in ... she provoked him to make love to her for it has been long since her pregnancy was confirmed.. ever since, he was way too careful and was distancing himself from her, but admiring each and every change in her.. he thought to himself... how do you know I am going crazy of you..I wanted to feel every part of you..but was too scared... she understood him... Love me... Raaghav, she soothed his bare back fully .

(Bit bold but I thought it was necessary.. sort of a tribute to womanhood/ motherhood..)

The discovering of the New Her... ( I don't know why but I teared a lot writing this.. I feel every husband should know what his wife goes through during the pregnancy... )

She was on his lap sideways, he was holding her... ... Love me Raghav...she turned slightly towards him pulling his face towards her chest... she loosened her robe ... he was surprised... the robe fell down to her waist...

What he saw in front of him, surprised him... she turned completely pink... this was completely different and new... He saw fully bloomed two pink big lotuses inverted with their thick stems... He knew she was changing but... never seen the change... she sat like a sculpture in front of him... this was the first time in her pregnancy, she was so close to him...she was always in a loose robe.

He was in awe... You are so so beautiful he said...she smiled at him... he could not control himself that he kissed her lips very passionately...

Breaking the kiss looking at them... These are too big too... he slowly cupped one and slightly pressed when she winced in pain, bit of tears, he stopped... jittered, does it hurt you? No no! he cupped her face... I am so sorry!!! I will stop... I...will no... she said ... Its okay... it does pain... caressing his cheek..

But? why it pains?... And what are these blue coloured lines running?!!! What is happening to you?... He teared... She loved him all the more... she said they are big as they are preparing themselves to take care of those your little lives when they come out... the blue lines are the veins which carry the blood which turns into milk to feed those little mouths...we women are prepared by god to take care of the little ones she said...

You go through so much pain, he said...hmm she kissed him...yes to gain something we have to go through pain... but these are happy pain and tears... He kissed each of them very very slowly every inch...he never touched them with his hands again... he was very careful... Thanking her... asking her again and again is it hurting? Is it paining?... Is it due to this pain you don't sleep? He asked!! This and many more she said... but its okay Raaghav, she said as he was becoming more concerned...He was careful not to touch her hard anywhere as he realised she was in pain due to the changes in her body but still want to satiate his love.. he ensured his hands soothed her parts...

His kisses were soothing her... he placed her slowly against the bed headrest after decking the pillows... sitting against her, making her comfortable... As he kissed he saw her tears were reducing... she stopped biting her lips in pain and slowly was closing her eyes as it was soothing... Her pain was replacing with pleasure... he was growing hard and it was extremely difficult but vowed himself to go through the pain if that delay will soothe her pain.. will ease her... he respected her, respected women, and loved her more and more.. He took time to kiss both the lotuses completely and finally soothed the stems too...She was in bliss...

She smiled...opening her eyes looking at him... he was kissing her belly now which was fully grown.. caressing his head... she said I am like a barrel !! huge!!! He came up to her and wanted to change her mind... yeah a barrel full of wine... old and intoxicating me... Kissing her lips which was swollen now... Her fingers too were swollen... He kissed every part..her hands, every finger very slowly. Slowly made her come forward, went behind her and soothed her back removing her robe completely... giving light pressures on her spine and back..down her waist...kissing her and soothing her with his hands but not pressing anywhere... he was soothing her...resting her back on his torso... she was subliming in his pressure... this is bliss she said... bending her head back and resting on his shoulders. . while he kissed her nape..going closer to her. she could feel him fully grown and hardening a lot... she smiled... giggled... what? he asked her biting her earlobe... she said hmmm your junior is too naughty... thats because of this beauty..hmm.. she asked him Am I? not only beauty dam you are too sexy and and... he realised and bit his tongue... and ...what she asked?? nothing... he said kissing her harder in her nape... tell me Raaghav...he turned her face towards him ...his voice was too hoarse.. his eyes was turning red with desire... naughty as he is searching for his sweety.. .she was blushing...I am sor... please don't feel sorry ...he said...kissing her hard... sorry but I am going to bite your lips please he said am too scared to hold you anywhere hard... biting her lips... to hold himself... it must be painful for you she teared... kissing her more...my pain is nothing in front of yours... I never knew you were going through so much pain...she held his hands which were holding her in the front resting on her baby bump. She caressed his hands...he calmed himself a bit and said I love you soo much... he continued his soft kisses on her... she was loosing in those kisses...

Be relaxed my Queen he said... he slowly made her half lay on the decked up pillows... coming infront of her... When he saw her legs... He shook in cries... Maidam.. What's this.. . She calmed him... the thighs were huge and her legs were swollen terribly... he had seen her feet swollen but not the legs... she said... they are swollen because of fluids which gets accumulated and that pain is the worst and unbearable she said...he teard a lot ... she smiled in between tears... kissed him to calm him.. He felt so proud of her. How do you bear it and still smile... He hugged her very preciously, without hurting her lotuses.. Saying you are making me fall for you more and more... Kissing her all over..There was lust, passion, desire, love and care in his eyes, he very very carefully again soothed her lotuses fully taking them slowly and that sensation made her close her eyes... it relaxed her a lot... he then went down and slowly massaged her legs, her feet, kissing her toes slowly and went up to her thighs, soothing her, kissing her there. She completely forgot everything about her pain the world around her...He stopped there looking up to her...She opened her eyes looking down at him in his eyes... his eyes were too dark... and it was now hell difficult for him... she pulled him slightly...caressed his cheeks... parting her lips below, rubbing sweety very very softy...shall I.. he asked.. as her comfort was his priority...he would have stopped everything if she had said No... smiling...nodding her head yes... I love you she said... He made her lay down, placed a soft pillow under her waist and soothed her beautifully, rhythmically, balancing himself without falling on her...she was in absolute bliss, pleasure taking over her pains... She went into that reverie, subliming in the poetry that was being written...soothed herself... He cradled her so softly that the little ones too cradled in this new way of his love making ... Her eyes closed in that bliss... smiling ...soothing... she moaned and went into a slumber...

He kissed her forehead... My sweetheart... Thank you for making me discover the new you!! Helping me to love you more!!! Making me understand what a woman goes through while carrying the life of her man within her... Please sleep for sometime... He felt proud of himself too...Felt happy that he could soothe her and himself too..

He just placed the robe not to disturb her as she was sleeping like a painting... hair completely messed, lips swollen... eyes closed in reverie... to one side with a beautiful smile...

He got up refreshed himself, lay beside her.. slowly placed his hands across her belly... she moved closer to him while he slept kissing her neck from behind...

After many days... she slept... A peaceful sleep...but

In the middle of the night, the babies were active. she could not sleep... she was finding it hard to stretch too... She was crying with pain in her leg and he woke up... massaging her legs.. Shall I call the dr? No Raaghav going into his chest!! ... Raagahv I find it painful and tired she cried...she had said it after she could not bear it any long...he kissed her with butterfly kisses saying she is brave, bold and will handle it... She hit him hard on his chest... Shut up you idiot... its paining... Wish there was a rocking chair or a big swing. She cried holding on to his shoulders, biting him and burying her nails in him due to the pain... He teared... it cringed his heart...Wish I could take that pain of yours...why should only you go through this... he hugged her...he rocked her holding her on to him and eventually she fell asleep due to tiredness and pain...he just could not see her tears...

When she woke up she was swinging, with breeze on her... she looked around to find she was in a big size wooden jhoola placed in the corner near the balcony and Raaghav was seated in the rocking chair holding a chord pulling the swing... She was surprised... When did he do it? how did he ???? he was fast asleep... she was looking at him with so much of love... He jerked as the swing stopped... Smiling he came to her... did my queen and my princesses sleep well, bending down kissing her forehead and her belly...She nodded yes with a smile garlanding his neck pulling him... I love you Budda!!! Me too Maidam... They both smiled... He made her get down removing one side railing of the cot...placing the footstool. So soon you got this? How? When did you go? ... She was surprised... When my queen orders...everything will be done...automatically... he smirked... That's Raaghav Babu... He called the plantation, brought the rocking chair and also the jhoola which was there fixed in their recreation hall. He ordered a new one to be replaced there.

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The D day came,

She was in terrible pain... An ambulance was always stationed at the mansion and she was rushed to the hospital...

Raaghav was with her in the OP but he just could not see her screeching in pain... The doctor decided to go ahead with C Sec and asked Raaghav to sign the papers. He could not do anything but do according as he could not stake his Queen and his princesses lives. He kissed her and went outside to wait with agony...

She will be mine... No she will be mine... both fought while he was going up and down the OP sweating, fretting !!

The lights went off... The Gynae came out smiling!!!! It was bit tough but she fought it... she is tired but fine... And Raaghav your wife is not easy na!!! Fighter!!! She did her way and she won it... It's a normal delivery... Chamatkaar... But she is very very tired.. so please donot trouble her too much...

You all can go in...

Mummyyy shouted A and A in excitement!!!! We love you... One for each!!!

Yes it was Aditi and Ananya...two beautiful roses...In One Shot!!! They were bundled and given to Raaghav and Girija... who was there. Bitiya she was kissing Chakor on her forehead... The boys were jumping excitedly..

He held them preciously!!! Kissing Chakor on her forehead... With tears, and trembling voice... He said..Thank you, thank you for loving me and coming into my life...and completing my life...

She smiled...hugging the boys who were on her both sides...yes one for each...

My hands are full, twosome na na foursome and awesome...she smiled that million dollar smile...

He held her close to his heart...saying...yesss foursome... Thank you bajrangbali, Raamji for taking care of my lives...

She was too weak... called him close... Told in his ears...I love you Budda... I love you Maidam... She closed her eyes as tiredness was taking over her...

So its Aditi and Ananya no wonder mummy was big and her legs were too swollen because two of them weeing... Shhh

Yes its A2 to A4... Twosome... Foursome... indeed Awesome...

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Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago

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