It's a Decade love Never Decayed & Adopted Completed - Page 7

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sumsukor thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
Sonali
thank you so much so much deary.

I missed your comments but I knew you were in your new life and was praying for the same.

But I am really emotional, that inspite of your hectic family schedule you took time to write those beautiful words.

A big big 🤗 to you dear

your words mean a lot.

Happy you liked their reunion and the ending rather beginning of their life..

About the bonus yes cutie pies na they are.😆😆
thanks again dear. loads of love

enjoy your life😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
The vacuum is killing...
So thought to do a small short one...

Adopted???...a sneak peak

He raged at the phone call... Mind yourself... his veins were protruding...Screamed Raaghav at the top of his voice...


Dare touch my sons?????? He Raged... Chakor was perplexed looking at him...


Ha ha ha ...Arey Raaghav, but they are not your sons? wickedly laughed at the other end and cut the call.


Shocked...chocked... how is it possible???? who knows it?????

Chakor cried her heart out... I need ... I need my boys...my sons...

He vowed!!! not a scratch on our sons!!! I promise...

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who is that who is bringing in hell????

What is the motive?????

Any guesses ???


Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Superrr sumi👏
Whistle whistle...I was waiting endlessly for this one


Sounds amazing intriguing thrilling...

Do it fast dear😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
intriguing! suspense!
update soon😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
Intriguing sneak peak.
Is the kidnapper an old enemy of Ragkor or is he related to the boys family?

Eagerly waiting for the story to start.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66

Adopted ???

Part I

Every life spins around to live

Every life spins around to love

But

Is happiness always there? There always comes something to hamper it, but, will the bonding gets weakened??? Get slackened???

Need everything to be biological????

Does love always bonds with blood?

A point to ponder???

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The A4 and the Ace players were happy going through their life after the 10th birthday celebration and the first birthday celebration of the Lions and the Roses respectively!!

The celebration was always only within the family and Girija Mausi and Shyam lal kaka.The boys are way too attached to Shyam Lal and Raaghav never fails to visit an old homage to mark the anniversary of Rishabs. The boys were told that they had to pay homage to their elders.

In the evening after the celebration, the family goes to the factory where they celebrate with the workers and their families. The plantation had the residence of the workers within along with a school and hospital and a recreation centre.

Inspite of constant telling of the workers, Raaghav will diligently get into his uniform and work along with the fellow workers as that helped him understand their troubles if any and also get to know their family concerns too. Chakor was always amazed and felt that Raaghav never changed... Her love towards him grew more...

Arjun and Aayansh never left an opportunity to be with their sis but only after their studies and their extra curriculum which was done under the strict vigilance of the Coach and the roses would wait for their bros to hold them together and went to bed with them. The boys would leave for their room after singing the lohri with Chakor for the little ones.

It was late that day after the birthday celebration and there was a little mishap in the factory and Raaghav had to take the workman who had slipped and fell to the hospital, so he asked the boys to go with Chakor and the girls home.

The family went home and as the norm on all birthdays, Shyam Laal would give a small cover to the boys as a gift, but on their tenth birthday they were given two small wooden boxes and the boys were thrilled and wished mom and their roses good night and called their dad to wish him and set off for their room.

The BOX... the boys opened... it had two slips.

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Raaghav came back home... kissed the sleeping boys and set off to kiss his princesses and saw his Queen who was sleeping on the dining table with the dinner besides her. It was a practice that they ensured that they ate together...

She was looking beautiful and he lost in her and was wondering whether the roses were cute or she was cuter... His gaze did tingle her sleep and she smiling woke up to see her man admiring her...

You should have woken me up she asked...You must be feeling tired and hungry, how is his legs??? He said things were fine.

She asked him, Raaghav what's that you are staring at me, she felt blushing at his gaze. I don't know if you are cute or my girls are as I get lost in you that I don't feel tired or hungry... They fed each other... Raaghav you take care of everything, everyone ... And Chakor you take care of me...he said. In all ways... his eyes were turning dark...cupping her face...drowning in her eyes...

Hmmm, ok budda now enough, lets sleep as I have my special coaching session early morning and the boys also have their sessions tomorrow... Hmmm ok Maidam, he said but lifted her to their room and stole a goodnight kiss from her!!!

The day dawned... the boys searched for Raaghav but he had left before as there was an emergency in the plantation...

Chakor went along with the boys to the practice session and surprisingly the boys were quiet... And Chakor was indeed worried about it!!!

The sessions were going on while there was a new person coming to the Principal room...

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The day did dawn bright but soon there was an oncoming storm for the Ragahv Rishabs...

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Tan tanatan tan tan tara👏
Loving it... suspense is on... can't wait...

Good points to ponder at the start...

Raghav awww full on in love with chakor... imaging VJ😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Hi Sumi dear🤗
since weekend, had an outing and returned back to find this interesting piece of work from you.😃

the sneak peak was intriguing and the first part still keeps it intact.

eager to read more, for a nice intro and gripping title, one should ask you.

And you knew which part I loved more, ofcourse the king of love and the Queen of his, caught my liking.
I can visualise them.

their boys, his princess, his Queen, I loved it.

so some dreadful future moments awaits them..who couod it be ,to reveal truth to boys?
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Interesting story👏
Loved the teaser & first part
Let's see who is the new villian in their life
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70

PART II


Chakor went along with the boys to the practice session and surprisingly the boys were quiet... And Chakor was indeed worried about it!!!

The sessions were going on while there was a new person coming to the Principal room...

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He walked to the Principal room, dressed in a business attire with a cap and dark sun glasses alongwith a pipe...throwing away his attitude of richness...the peon fell for his Rs.2000/- pink Gandhi and told him the details which were not supposed to be told. The peon said Saab its too early, the office opens only when the school starts, but I will give you the details, please don't tell anyone. He took the pupils register.

Its ten years now, old man but for you I would have ruled the whole empire, I planned the accident, unfortunately you escaped only to die later. I thought the babies too were travelling, but...Fumed the man who was in late 40s. The driver was so beaten that he turned into an approver and told the police that I was behind the killing and I had to go behind bars for 14 years, but now I am back within ten years, I have searched ran enough, searched enough, now I have found. Wait now, for I will play the game.

I will find out everything, about the boys and take them into my custody for I am the ruler... The heir of the Rishabs and will win over everything. No one can stop me and if anyone I will kill them... Who ever it is... Death will be the price.

The peon told the details he asked about...Arjun Raghav Rishab and Aayansh Raghav Rishab... Father Raghav Kumar .. He smiled wickedly looking at the name of the father... Raghav Kumar...

He went back to his car...

Chakor walked with the boys after their early morning sessions... the boys were quiet.. She asked them what's bothering them for which Arjun kept quiet and Aayansh said , mumma everyday morning we wake up to daddy's call, but for the first time today daddy did not come to wake us up, we are scared, if anything happens to daddy...

Chakor quickly hugged them, daddy had to run to the factory as the lawyer had called him for that workman who had injured his legs. And nothing will happen to daddy, she kissed them.

As the Coach, Chakor does not do full time at the school as the girls were too young but would go on part time hours. She goes for the early morning sessions and during post lunch during which the PT hours were and returned with the boys back along with Raghav who would pick them from the school.

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The boys returned home to get ready soon to go back to the classes. There were many cars and jeeps in the Mansion, but the small car was missing.

Arjun: So daddy has not yet come???

AAyash : yes the car is not there? I don't know why daddy always uses the small car when he goes alone but uses the Rover when he comes with us.

Chakor: My Lion cubs are growing and looking at everything, she smiled. When he is alone he does not need a bigger one so he goes with the small one.

Arjun : but mumma, daddy always says that going uphill is always difficult so why he uses the small car always...

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(Chakor FB:

When the babies were just three months, she was at home with the babies when Raaghav returned home after dropping the boys at school. Quickly changed, kissed his princesses who were happily smiling at him trying to touch his cheeks... He gave a hug to Chakor, looked her passionately, gave a quick peek at his Queen on her forehead which he never fails before he sets for the factory. She for the first time, pulled him and met his lips, passionately...serving him all her love... Wow that's a sweet bonus from my Queen... Anything special??? His eyes twinkled... She smiled... everyday you make my moment special but I find you always hold yourself, though you want it which I read from your eyes, so thought to give you a gift...Arey wah!! That was indeed a sweet one winked he. touching his lips.. Thank you Maidam... she blushed (he thought yes I crave for your love but I do not want to make you feel forced as I feel so honoured that you love me and made my life complete with these two roses) there was a little blob but quickly wiped it before she saw.

Raaghav, she asked while there are so many jeeps and bigger cars why do you take this small one when you go alone. He tried to say but got a call and rushed to the factory as there were clients waiting to meet him.

Shyaam Lal was in the main entrance. He walked upto Chakor and said, beti, this small car is bought out of Raaghav's salary. Chakor was surprised... Salary??? What do you mean??? Her eyes teared and Raaghav grew in her heart to greater heights hearing what the old man said). Bitiya he said, he is that gem which is rarely available and the boys are lucky to have him and you. Thank you he folded his arms... Chakor quickly held his hands, kaaka please aap bade, please bless us donot thank us. But for you Raaghav could not have done anything. He said yes but he has taken care of everything, everyone. Rishab parivaar is indebted to him and you forever and so am I too...

FB ends

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She smiled at the boys and they went to their room looking back waiting for their daddy. She went to check upon the roses who had just woke up and was being taken care by the care takers...

She went to prepare the breakfast for the boys. Raaghav rushed home straight to the boys room, my boys, my lions how was your session, he asked... Arjun rushed and hugged him and was crying... While AAyansh was hugging him too. Raaghav was too shocked, what happened Ar... are you ok? Did anyone say anything? Are you hurt? Why are you crying? He asked so many questions. Cha... He tried to call her, when Arjun spoke, daddy, I was so scared not seeing you this morning, this is the first day you did not wake us up. I felt someone was taking us away from you. Raaghav hugged the boys tightly... No No none can take you away from me! Dare anyone touch my lions, my sons, he cried...I had to go as there was an emergency dears. Sorry! For hereafter I promise I will not go in the morning without waking you both up. And if anyone does what should you Lions do? He asked will you cry and fall prey? NOOO we will rise like the Lions and hurt the person who do harm to us!! Sabaash, mera Lions...The boys smiled, he prepared them for the school and brought them down while the girls were also ready to have breakfast with their bros in their special chairs.

Mummy, AAyansh came running to the dining, hugging and kissing Chakor in her eyes... I love your eyes mummy... Hhmmm sounded Raaghav... Okok daddy I am not flirting with your wife , Ok the family laughed. Chakor and Raaghav were feeding the boys while they were feeding their little roses with their baby food...Girija and Shyaam lal got the bags and the lunch boxes for the boys.

Bye bye mumma, kaaka , mausi... And muaahhh the boys waved to their little ones with their flying kisses.

Raaghav drove the boys in the Rover, which raged with the Lion and its cubs...while the hyena was in the corner of the road seeing them.

A wicked smile... Raaghav Kumar... father... Ha ha ha ... He saw them going to the school...

He saw Shyaam Lal... So you are still there... Shyaam Lal went in the jeep to the factory when he suddenly realized that someone was looking at the Mansion...

He tried to look back but found none...

But suddenly these words were ringing in his mind

I don't know what I will do with my grandsons. Being very rich, there are people out there who will be eyeing to create problems and also I worry about the safety of these boys.

You came as a blessing as but for you I would have died leaving these kids as orphans. Can you stay with me for some time please to help me. Shyaam Lal was accepting the same and requested Raaghav and Girija to stay behind.

He felt uneasy!! Why suddenly I am remembering Bade Maalkin's words. Maalkin please take care of this happy family. He prayed...

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Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago

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