New Horizon.. the Rainbow..My Sukor. My Suraj!

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New Horizon... the Rainbow...My Sukor... My Suraj!

I was coming to work by bus, the sky was so blue, a little girl beside me was so excited to see the sun, it was not glaring, full round, it was like calm composed and amusing the girl, it was coming along and all the more she was jumping with joy... she asked her mother, mom, will the Sun come to meet us when we get off the bus? It was turning dark suddenly...

The mother smiled and said, the sun will go as it is so cloudy so the rains will start!!! The girl, I was so amazed she said so can we wait to see the rainbow???

She adapted so quickly to the change... But Why I couldnot???

when I saw the Sun, something lumped my throat!! A tear dropped my eyes!!!

Has the Sun truly set????

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Chakoriyaaa!!!!

Aaayi mai...

Jaldi chal, Haveli me jaana hai

The little girl was amused at the sky... she cringed her eyes to see the horizon, did the sky and the sea meet, did the sky and the land meet, if they?? where??? Can I see? How far it is?? Too many questions in her mind...

She was taken to the Haveli to be caged!!

Will I see the horizon???

She left the caged hen to fly... can she fly?...

She flew indeed to gain status to return back as she is not a coward to run away, she came to wage the battle to fight the war against slavery!!!

She waged the battle openly with the Takur but during the battle she indeed was conquered by a warrior...

She thought...

That she was a chirpy bird wanting to reach the Moon, seldom she realized that the Sun has started to reach for her.

That she was in love with the brother, seldom she realized that the brother of the brother was falling for her

That she fooled the brother to get him marry her sister, seldom she realized destiny through him did good for her as he was the best in her life

That he was hurting her, seldom she realized he was indeed flirting with her

That she was being burnt by him, seldom she realized she has turned down the blaze of him to just incubate her

That she was being harassed by him, seldom she realized he had harnessed himself to her for he did not want himself to be free.

She never turned back, never in her life as she followed her Mausaji's words, "Never look back as you are a winner, runner, born to win and reach the finishing line"

All her thoughts changed when she began to think as she was free but he was chained

Chained but in that process changed to be chained by her love

Chained himself to breathe only for her..

She thought she was the sea, with deep emotions and will not meet the sky, seldom she realized he was indeed that sky which raised her waves of emotions... will they meet and form a new Horizon?

Chained and changed due to destiny, separated many times only to reunite as they are still to meet at the Horizon

She again thought, he is the sky as he was again away from her...

She again thought has the Sun which was incubating her has set?

She was sitting at the beach looking at the horizon!!!

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Mummaaa the little eight year old called.

Haan Saanvi, She spoke looking at the little girl playing with the sand, building sand houses...

Mumma its cloudy, going to rain...She smiled... they went to a shade!

The rain stopped, Mumma the Rainbow ! the little girl was excited! Mumma! see here turn around!!!

She smiled with tear drop! She will not turn back to see the rainbow, for she knows that her sun has risen but will take time to reach the middle of the sky.

(a rainbow is formed when the sun is in the opposite side)

She will not turn around to see the Rainbow as her Sun is in the front of her. He will not make her to turn around as she is a winner, runner born to run and meet the finishing line.

Yes! I will soon see a new horizon where the Sun will meet its bird....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely lovely post...u have made me teary eyed... nostalgia!!!!
Your positivity well keep us going through this PHASE... hope she and we get our horizon soon!!

Thank you for writing this dear😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

when its about your adories from you, needless to say it was high on emotions, beautifully written and heart touching. it will have all.

All were there here too👏👏👏
And title, as always👏


A much needed post, when we are deprived of sukor in current phase.

Reminiscing all those of sukor in eyes of chakor through your post, as always without tears its tough to read.


Lovely post.

not only chakor, in case of sukor, we too wont look back, will wait to see the new horizon .

Hope we will soon see the horizon.


the way you have written it, blending with a real life situation..superb.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Lovely lovely post...u have made me teary eyed... nostalgia!!!!

Your positivity well keep us going through this PHASE... hope she and we get our horizon soon!!

Thank you for writing this dear😳


Nikkii thanks and sorry to have made you emotional...

but what to do yaar, even a day to day sun makes me feel😭😭

Yes waiting waiting...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

when its about your adories from you, needless to say it was high on emotions, beautifully written and heart touching. it will have all.

All were there here too👏👏👏
And title, as always👏


A much needed post, when we are deprived of sukor in current phase.

Reminiscing all those of sukor in eyes of chakor through your post, as always without tears its tough to read.


Lovely post.

not only chakor, in case of sukor, we too wont look back, will wait to see the new horizon .

Hope we will soon see the horizon.


the way you have written it, blending with a real life situation..superb.


Uma thanks a lot for those lovely words.

Yes sometimes real life and reel life has so much of similarities that makes us feel and bring out the emotions...

This character Suraj, what do I say yaar has just grown in me, that I find it too hard to alienate it as a fiction.

I am not able to move on since November 19th honestly.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just so emotional n beautiful. How i loved each of those lines you have written. Each one more than the previous one. 😭
This is just so emotional. Teary eyed!😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
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beautiful post sumi. loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful post👏
It was very emotional😭
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Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor

Just so emotional n beautiful. How i loved each of those lines you have written. Each one more than the previous one. 😭

This is just so emotional. Teary eyed!😭


thanks So much Shreeti

Yes i was to be honest was emotional at the sight of the sun today morning...


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruby7

beautiful post sumi. loved it



Thanks so much Ruby

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