In a Heartbeat Os

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IN a heartbeat

The moment she was pronounced Dead Suraj Singh Rajvanshi felt his heartbeat drop to the ratio of each passing seconds... in his mind he could see her removing her mangalsutra and throwing it back at him saying it was a burden she couldn't carry anymore

They all said she was Bad... the innocent kid Anjor who was too way young to be a cunning mind and then her own sister who loved her.. inspite of soo many voices his mind and heart could still not believe she was wrong but then why??? Why did he push her away? He had lost his daughter Saanvi but was their relationship based on Saanvi? Was their relationship's root only Saanvi? He had irrationally drifted apart from her and now this man in a lap coat announced her dead

He pushed away the man rushing in the hospital room... she was laying there lifeless and pale now that he realizes nothing had change except for the few bruises here and there on her... eversince he came back he should have seen she was as lifeless as she was right now laying on that bed.. that wardboy said it was a case of Suicide

Suicide something his chakor could have never done... she was brave eversince she knew the meaning of life then how could she give her life? Might be the last straw when he denied her showed his distrust in her, let someone else blame and curse her... he reluctantly placed his hand on hers she was still warm , a drop of tear escaped his eyes with that stinging pain in his heart... was he the reason she was broke down to suicide??? He had let her believe he was out there with Naina... he refused to believe the woman who stood by his side no matter what the odds were... he wasn't the only one who lost for she had lost the child she carried for nine months

"Chakor??? Wake up??" He whispered against her ears his lips wettened by the tears flowing down his eyes he stroked her hairs back half laying against her but her lips were sealed and she stayed motionless

"Come on Chakor fight with me... Scream at me... you can even hit but please Wake up" He whisper-yelled at her but she did not wake up , Adamant Chakor "Come on Dp I promise to tell you all i promise to stay by your side and hear all" He begged kneeling next to her bed with his hands still in hers wishing her to curl her fingers around his but she did not she still did not acknowledge his heartbeat she was punishing him for not being there... punishing him for not listening to her...punishing him for having loved her but not showed her HE loved her just as much as she did

Hey Guys it's a rough draft about todays episode which was soo heartwrenching ... i couldn't refrain myself from wrtting this 😭 still keeping my fingers crossed for a continuity of Udaan

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Anjali
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Anjali
That was simply heart wrenching.. Tears just rolling down.

Yes we hope he does the same...

For none can love sukor as they love each other

Simply superb
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's beautiful Anjali, heart touching.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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God blushy this is so heart touching. 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful & hear touchingšŸ‘šŸ˜­
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Struck the right chords of my Sukor heartā¤ļø
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Blushy...I'm reading your story for the first time. And this is so good. I wish the writers took some inspiration from such well-written fan fic.
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Originally posted by: BeeSandy

Blushy...I'm reading your story for the first time. And this is so good. I wish the writers took some inspiration from such well-written fan fic.


Sandy read her short stories. You will go crazy about them. She has that magic.
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Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor


Sandy read her short stories. You will go crazy about them. She has that magic.


Oh, now I definitely will. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi, Blushy @ Anjali.
This OS os heart wrenching.
You are the best!

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