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Posted: 7 years ago
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Maithu 🤗
Misssesddd you a lot. No loads..

Nice to see you back.

Loved it right time is all we need.

Short and sweet and neat


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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Lovely Maithu
Missed your writing.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Beautiful story, no words for it👏
It was flawless, simple ,sweet & perfect
Waiting for more stories on Sukor
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Maithu 🤗

Misssesddd you a lot. No loads..

Nice to see you back.

Loved it right time is all we need.

Short and sweet and neat


Thanks a lot Sumi!
Missed you loads too 🤗
Happy you liked this short story
Another one is coming
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Lovely Maithu

Missed your writing.

Thanks Mai
Happy you liked it
😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful story, no words for it👏

It was flawless, simple ,sweet & perfect
Waiting for more stories on Sukor

Thank you so so much dear!
Always a sweet comment from you
Next story in few minutes to make a weekend to see your comment LOL
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Series of School love!

Boomeranging


"He is not at all kind with me Tina!" the school girl in her uniform wined as she walked along with her friend Tina.
"What happened Chakor?"
"Suraj is so mean! We broke up!" she said with anger.
"But you are together since 2 days only!"
"Yeah! And I'm happy that I got to know his real face soon!"
"Hope you are not hurt!" Tina said side hugging her friend.
"I'm all good! He could have ordered my favorite pizza at the cafe yesterday but he just wanted me to taste his favorite burger that I hate! And then he says, you are going to just taste, what's the problem in it. Can't he understand I hate burgers! Showing his man power."
"Was this the reaso"
"Chakor! Tina! There is an assembly for the 9th classes of all sections!" a peon informed them as he passed by them.
"Thanks Peter uncle!" Tina replied.
He simply smiled and walked away.
"Come let's go!"
"You will tell the rest of your story in lunch break!"
"There is nothing to tell more Tina! That's all for now!" with a straight face as they walked past corridors.

*****

"Suraj is just too too much!" she stomped as she joined her friend who was waiting in her room.
"What happened this time?" Tina questioned.
"He is a male chauvinist!"
"Huh?"
"A man who believes women are less than them!"
"Are you sure it was him?"
"Are you my friend or his?"
"Of course yours but you see, last time when you blamed him, it was for him to not buy you what you wanted and that too only 2 weeks back and the next day itself you both were back together and now again something happened."
"Last time I was a fool to accept his apologies!"
"Oh!"
"He said he likes when his mother is at home and do whatever he wishes for!"
"Don't you wish the same?"
"That is not the thing here!"
"Then?"
"In future, when we get married, he will expect me to stay at home as house wife! That is what he was implying by telling that!"
"Oh god! Chakor! I think you need to calm down and sleep well! Everything will be okay!"
"Whatever can get okay but it's final! We broke up!"
"Chakorrr!" a voice came from outside.
"Coming Maaa!" the girl replied as she got up. "We will not talk about this anymore, understood?"
Tina nodded as Chakor disappeared in the hallway "I should have listened my mother who said she looks like a crazy girl when we were 7!" putting her hands on her head.

*****

"Mood out?"
Shaking her head which is resting on her left hand.
"What happened Chakor?" pulling the chair close to the table as they sat in a cafe shop, in the mall.
"I'm fed up Tina!"
"I want to say me too!" Tina murmured.
"What?" still in her sad mood.
"I was thinking if it is linked to your boyfriend!" trying to be confident over what she said.
"Don't take his name yaar!" getting angry.
"Did you both break up?"
"We are in college since only one months and he is already talking about marriage and settling down, making his parents happy. In all these, where am I?"
"I think it was all along with you."
"You are really taking his side!"
"No I'm not!"
"Good for you!"
"So when are you patching up again?"
"Never! He is an egoist male chauvinist!"
"Day by day he is getting a new position along with the increase of the break up!" Tina smiled.
"Chup!"
"Yup!" putting fingers over her own lips "It's just that it's your 21st break up with Suraj and end of 22nd patch up with him since I don't know."
"So?"
"Treat?" showing all her teeth.
Shaking her head "I will get all my treats back when you fall in love!"
"Don't worry dear! I'm not made for love! Straight marriage!"
"Oh ohhh!"

*****

"Chakor! Why are you crying dear?" Tina asked as she hugged her friend.
Hugging back "Sur...Suraj! Suraj"
"What did he do?" panicked.
"He broke up with me!" muffled voice echoed in the class room.
Tina was confused what is new in it.
"I think it is your 50th break up scenario. Half century." as laugh filled her words.
"I'm crying here and you are laughing at your friend."
"I'm sorry baby! Tell me what happened!"
"We were just talking after class hours and he was telling tomorrow is the last day of college and he is planning to get a work. And I told him I think of going aboard for 1 or 2 years for work. He just got angry and broke up with me, saying 'Never come back!'"
"I see!"
"I'm scared he meant what he said!"
"Why scared baby?"
"Each time it was because of me but for the first time" and tears filled her eyes.
"I have a solution for that."
"Huh?" pushing her tears.
"Marry him!"
"What?"
"Propose him!"
"But?"
"If you both get married there won't be any more break ups and I think he got angry as you were going away from him so he will for sure accept it."
"Wasn't it supposed to be man proposing woman!"
"No rules are like that."
"I need to think!"
"Think well dear!"

*****

"Never seen you getting shy like this!" man voice echoed in the decorated room.
"Chup Suraj!" Chakor chided.
Smiling he pulled out a wrapped object and passed it to her.
"What is it?" she questioned as she took it from him as they were both close to each other, on the bed.
"See yourself!" he said smiling.
Opening the wrapper, she noticed a small notebook with title 'Boomerang'
"Boomerang?" looking at him for which he simply smiled.
'Our journey of love has just began and we were already in our world of Husband and Wife since the time we got engaged in our relation as a student.' as she read, her forhead formed lines.
'You have become my world without my knowledge and ruled my heart like a queen and my mind like a partner. Our each fights were a step closer to getting us know more.' no more lines but a small smile formed.
'Our first fight thought me to be a man and be equal. And it was really easy to get back to you with just a simple smile and few words of understanding!' she shook her head.
'Our next fights just got more and more interesting as each time I learned how to be a good husband and a man who can treat his love as a Princess first then Queen.' Her mouth formed 'O'.
'You make my days greater and night dreamy! And one of my dreams came true when I got angry on you for the first time! And I think I should have got angry earlier and may be you would have proposed me!' "It was Tina's idea!" she commented.
"Then I should take her for lunch!"
"No need! I have already paid her a lot for each of our patch up and break up!"
"Ohhh"
And she continued to read 'Life is short until we lose something and the moment you said you are going aboard, it broke me inside out.'
Looking at him "I'm sorry!" with hands on her ears.
"Hey! It's okay!" side hugging her "One more line and then a lot of work to do!"
"Chi!" she pushed him away.
'You were mine! You are mine. And always mine forever. You look so cute when you get angry, and 7 of our break up was planned by me! I'm sorry my cute Angry bird!'
"Youuu!"
"I have my reasons!" he hugged and she simply calmed immediately.
"As if!"
'You are my love in Boomerang baby!' she smiled widely.
'You are mine!'
"So sir was always enjoying my angry mood!"
"You look cute with red nose!" touching her nose as he was back hugging her.
"Hate you!"
"Love you too baby!"
"Hate you! Hate you! Hate you!"
"Hate me like you do! Hate me like you do" he sang bringing a smile as she started to punch him lightly on his chest, turning side way, distancing herself.
"Keep quiet!"
"Oh yeah! I forgot!" she looked what he forgot as he took a break before continuing "We need to do our long pending work which will be in boomerang for forever."
"Huh?"
"Making babies!"
"In boomerang?"
Having a serious face "Yup baby! Making love with different session of Boomeranging!"


THE END!


- Maithili



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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Both the stories are soo good Maithu👍🏼


Edited by amrutha131 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Another beautiful story👏
Chakor was so childish in the beginning 😆
50 break up & patch ups😆
Tina was always in trouble handling Chakor
Finally Sukor got married😳
The gift of Suraj was perfect

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