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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi all
Maithu is busy in training,she will most probably update by wednesday😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Chakor is so much affected by Suraj😉
You left on cliffhanger😲
Was is it real or Chakor was daydreaming 😲
Eagerly waiting for Moday

Thanks dear for this interesting comment!
Heee she has never been treated like that, so of course affected!
As I said, my evil mind won the game ;-)
Soon you will know the following scenes !
Sorry for making you wait
Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Arey Maithu

what yaar !!! did you hire any assistant writer from the show...

loved Doc is getting affected by Row...

but am sure she must be day dreaming

but still your precap is ekdam super cliffhanger , what only on Monday!!! 😭😭

very interesting dear

Supeerrr!

Hahahaha
When I was reading this comment in train on Monday morning, I wanted to laugh loud but controlled!
Assistant! Then I think this story will be full of expectations and different trials LOL

You are sure about her being in her dream land! Let's see ;-)
Sorry for taking too long to continue,
I know what is next but still didn't start to write!
Will try to do it this afternoon and post it in evening!
Thank you Sumi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Hope so that chakor is day dreaming...😭😭

cant see him physco...😭
BTW very interesting update...and loved that lie is not a part of chakor...😳
Plzzz update soon...

Before the end of the day, you will get to what is the next
Happy you liked Chakor's characterisation!
Lie is not a part of my life too except when it is need to safeguard my family ;-)

Thank you for reading and liking dear!
See you soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

Suraj is already making Chakor sleepless 😉.
Tina is a chatterbox.
What a cliffhanger. Hope Chakor is daydreaming.
It isn't fair that we have to wait for two days.

Thanks Mai
Happy you liked this part too
Heee Sleepless or scared? LOL
This is nothing compared what the CVs make us go through! :-|
Not two days but 5 days!
See you soon with the next part!
Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Hi all
Maithu is busy in training,she will most probably update by wednesday😊

Thank you so so much reporter for helping me with this!
I was fully preoccupied by the training that I couldn't even come here or in Insta to thank you!
A big hug for always being there!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!

Sorry for the delay buddies!
I didn't think that my training sessions will be putting a barrier in updating parts!
Here is the next part!

Link to the previous part : Part 5

Happy reading!

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Part 6


With my hands over my stomach, my mouth going dry, I opened my eyes in the darkness.
Slowly adjusting my view, the darkness got used as I see my study table and dress stand.
I'm in my room. At home!
That was a dream!
A nightmare! A very bad one.
Never it had happened before but then why now?
Blinking my eyes, cleaning the sweat over my face with a bedsheet, I gulped water down my throat from the bottle which was on my side stand.
I thought of never seeing him, then why did he come in my dream! No, it wasn't a dream! A nightmare!
I shouldn't have thought about him then I would have went to sleep directly instead of seeing his face in sleep too!
I shouldn't have helped him! No that is not my way of thinking.
Yeah he behave strangely to me but world is like that only, everyone will not be of same type.
It's not because of one person's behavior I should change my way of living.

I went back to bed but the memories of that stabbing and he looking at me was playing again and again in my head.
I didn't know when sleep over took me but then the next went superbly.
I didn't meet him.
Whenever I was out of my college or house, I kept on looking around me.
Well when you know you helped a criminal, you might risk of having police behind and even the criminals themselves to be behind you.
so no need to blame myself for thinking about it.
If all goes well, the memories will fade away.

"Oh god!" I exclaimed as I got down of my bike, being here, in front of the temple, waiting for my mom, the next day.
And that rowdy is standing there in the tea shop with his head turning towards me and passing my side and then coming back to me, catching me staring at him which made me to immediately diverted my view and turned around.
Why am I scared of him?
Is it because he is a rowdy or is it because he is intimidating?
Whatever it is, I just wish he doesn't come in front of me.
"Oii" I hear the voice behind me. I know the voice. It's his. Whoever he is calling must be in problem.
Since he started to treat me like I'm nothing, all I think is only negative!
If his thoughts go away, negativity also will go away for sure.
"Oiii" he presses and I hear his voice a bit closer than before.
Would he be calling me?
No way! What is there for him to need me again?
Well then what if my dream ... OUF ... nightmare comes true? No I shouldn't turn!
Maaa make it fast! Your daughter's life is at stake. Come fast Maaa!
"Oii! Don't you hear I'm calling you?" he says from I think few steps closer to me.
And at the entrance of the temple, I see my Maa come out of it with some other lady. Thank god she is here. I should have entered the temple and thanked the god for making me escape. But then, this unwanted rules and regulations forbidding women from entering temple during their hard times when criminals and bad omens enter it pridely. I never understood that.
But let it be, it's not because I'm changing and going inside the temple that people will change.
And moreover I have better things to do for now! That is to avoid him!
And only solution is to notify him that my mother is with me, so I called loud "Maaa" motioning my hand at my mother as I moved my bike forward.
"You arrived?" she asked but my eyes was on the bike rear view mirror to him pass his hand through his hair. "Latha! This is my daughter! Chakor! My colleague!" my Maa got my attention as I saw him turning and go back.
"Hello aunty!" plastering a fake smile.
"Hello dear!" that aunty said as I set comfortably on my bike.
"Okay Latha! See you on Monday!" my mother said as she climbed on the bike. "Let's go!" she said.
But then I turned to see what that rowdy is doing, hoping he is far from there but then he turned also at that time, reaching the tea shop and faced me as our eyes crossed for a mere second.
I couldn't put my fingers on why he wanted to meet me but then what will be that important.
"Gooo!" my mother again said as I started the bike and moved forward.
As I checked my rear view mirror, I saw his stare on us, I mean bike, me and mom as we moved with him taking sips of his drink.

"Where is your bike Maa?"
"It broke down dear and Latha proposed to drop me at home but then I told her about my habit of going to temple on Friday and she joined me."
"Oh!"
"Sorry if you were doing something important but your Papa will be late today as he went to a client place."
"No no Maa! I was just going to go to library." But if you didn't call me I wouldn't have the need to face him! Should I say it aloud? Nope! She don't need to know as he is not going to be seeing her or they are not going to know each other.

Once back home, the evening went as always except the fact that a thought was always running my mind.
Why was he calling me?
Is he aiming to hurt me?
Should I have turned when he first called me?
But then how will I know he was calling me or not when he uses that 'Oiii' and that 'Oiii' sounds strange and make me feel things! I mean, there is no respect in that word!
All I feel is he has no manners at all!
After all, he is a ROWDY! What else can I expect from him? Nothing! Nothing can be expected from him! From that Rowdy!

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Thanks buddies for reading it.
Hope you like this part.
Let me know your views in the COMMENT section.
Thank you!

Next part: Part 7

- Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago
This reminded me of a Telugu film named 'Oye!'
Poor Chakor,treating a supposed criminal is taking toll on her understandably coz she is new
Why Suraj called her😉
Waiting for next!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update👏
Glad that it was Chakor's nightmare😃
Chakor's negative thinking about rowdy Suraj is making Chakor insane😆
Why was Suraj calling her
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update
Chakor has a very bad opinion of Suraj, i'm sure he isn't as bad as she thinks.
I wonder why did he want to talk to her.
Eagerly waiting for next.

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