Sukor...My adories finally... Made love?? No... Healed each other

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@poojaprabha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

what an amazing write up friend...i just completely become a fan for your writings truly says you have a brilliant writing style and skill ...keep going touch wood

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: poojaprabha
what an amazing write up friend...i just completely become a fan for your writings truly says you have a brilliant writing style and skill ...keep going touch wood

thanks sooo much Pooja...

Big words deary my dosth (i just love this word of yours)😊

jsut the love and feel for sukor make us all write...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Heart warming post Sumi

Nothing to addd

Not only in Sukor moment, even your words drench us with the magic, uniqueness of their love

They not only healed each other but us too ;-)

Keep going on dear

Loved it

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@Ruby7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Such a beautiful post sumi. You have such deep and precious thoughts. keep it up

loved reading everyones comments.

The writers of Udaan are really something. They really know how to write such impactful scenes for sukor, which leave such a long lasting affect on the viewers mind. Kudos to them. Meejay are 2 masterpieces. Udaan makers hit the bulls eye by casting these 2 as suraj chakor.

I agree with you sukor never made love, they healed each other. Only they carry the power to heal each other and i am glad they used that power yesterday and gave each other the much needed solace.

chakors dialogues were so beautiful. she had been waiting for this moment for so long.

Imo chakors dialogues of asking him to love her added to surajs emotional state. He was both happy, nervous and hesistant. His happiness was because he too was craving for the moment. He was nervous because first time they were going to come close after so many years of separation. He was hesistant because of his guilt. I am glad his guilt didnt overpower the moment and he made the night special for both of them. He unwinded himself and slowly released himself to Chakor. Love the song they used

it was blissful seeing them wake up like that in the morning. loved chakors happiness and forehead kiss was the cherry on the cake

Sumi dont worry suraj is back fully.we will see his naughty romantic passionate side now. Chakor gave him the green signal last night. They is no stooping for him now.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: maithu_
Heart warming post Sumi
Nothing to addd
Not only in Sukor moment, even your words drench us with the magic, uniqueness of their love
They not only healed each other but us too ;-)

Keep going on dear
Loved it

Maithu thanks deary for those lovely words... means a lot that too from my Author...

yes we were indeed healed in their magic...

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Ruby7
Such a beautiful post sumi. You have such deep and precious thoughts. keep it up
loved reading everyones comments.

The writers of Udaan are really something. They really know how to write such impactful scenes for sukor, which leave such a long lasting affect on the viewers mind. Kudos to them. Meejay are 2 masterpieces. Udaan makers hit the bulls eye by casting these 2 as suraj chakor. 👏👏👏

I agree with you sukor never made love, they healed each other. Only they carry the power to heal each other and i am glad they used that power yesterday and gave each other the much needed solace.

chakors dialogues were so beautiful. she had been waiting for this moment for so long.

Imo chakors dialogues of asking him to love her added to surajs emotional state. He was both happy, nervous and hesistant. His happiness was because he too was craving for the moment. He was nervous because first time they were going to come close after so many years of separation. He was hesistant because of his guilt. I am glad his guilt didnt overpower the moment and he made the night special for both of them. He unwinded himself and slowly released himself to Chakor. Love the song they used

it was blissful seeing them wake up like that in the morning. loved chakors happiness and forehead kiss was the cherry on the cake

Sumi dont worry suraj is back fully.we will see his naughty romantic passionate side now. Chakor gave him the green signal last night. They is no stooping for him now.

Ruby thanks deary and that was so beautifully summed...

@ Bold red perfecto you said ... he did unwind with her love which gave him the strength to release and realise her... thats beautifully worded Ruby...👏

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Shreeti

@Shreeti.sukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

I so wanted a morning scene. Yes sumi! We are echoing thoughts as well. Haha!

I have just returned from this hell tiring field trip to the mines, and your post healed my tiredness completely. THANK YOU VERY MUCH

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor
I so wanted a morning scene. Yes sumi! We are echoing thoughts as well. Haha!
I have just returned from this hell tiring field trip to the mines, and your post healed my tiredness completely. THANK YOU VERY MUCH

Thanks Shreeti

we do most of the times echo each others thoughts... thats the bliss of sukor... 😉

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

"Tasalli se ek pal ke liye,teri baahon mein qaid hokar,maaloom hua...ki sdiyon ki thakan ek lamhe mein kaise door ho jaati hain,,,"

[captured in the embrace of your arms,leisurely for a few seconds,only did i realized,as to how the tiredness of a century gets vanished in a moments]...

that is what happened with Sukor,on that night...for Sumi,you captured that blissful moment,in the mots purest rendition...SUKOR INDEED HEALED EACH OTHER,coz they both were pained way too much,for all these time...

you are a gem to the forum Sumi..for no one can do justice to each and every single Sukor moment as you do...

Keep writing dear,[even when i am unable to read and comment in all]

THAT ENTIRE SCENE IN CHAKOR'S HOUSE,AFTER SUKOR ARRIVED TILL SURAJ LEFT,,,WAS A FEELING,AND CANNOT BE EXPRESSED IN WORDS,NEVER...

And while everything was happening,my eyes were moist,there was a peace inside my heart,and mind had this song playing...thats why,,,,

for I felt for Chakor,when she pleaded to Suraj,not to leave her alone and go away,not for this moment least...and when she said him to make love to her.

for I felt for Suraj,when he was constantly staring at Chakor when she arrived in front of him,or when he made her his bride,or when he fulfilled his wish,and made love to her...

"Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
yoon hi pehloo mein baithe raho
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
haay mar jaayenge, hum to lut jaayenge
aisi baatein kiya na karo...
aaj jaane ki zid na karo..."

[tonight, don't insist on leaving.
keep on sitting close to me like you are.
tonight, don't insist on leaving.
oh I will die, I will be lost,
don't say such things.
tonight, don't insist on leaving.]

"Tum hi socho zara, kyun na rokein tumhein
jaan jaati hai jab uth ke jaate ho tum
tumko apni kasam jaan-e-jaan
baat itni meri maan lo
aaj jaane ki zid na karo..."

[just think for a moment, why should I not stop you.
my life seems to leave my body when you get up and go,
I swear to you, my beloved
just agree to this request of mine
tonight, don't insist on leaving.]

"Waqt ki qaid mein zindagi hai magar
chand ghadiyaan yehi hain jo aazaad hain
inko kho kar mere jaan-e-jaan
umr bhar na taraste raho
aaj jaane ki zid na karo"

[life is trapped in the prison of time
but these are the few moments that are free
by losing them, my beloved
let's not have a life of regret
tonight, don't insist on leaving]

Haaye mar jaayenge, hum to lut jaayenge
aisi baatein kiya na karo...
aaj jaane ki zid na karo...

Kitna maasoom rangeen hai ye samaa
husn aur ishq ki aaj meraaj hai
kal ki kisko khabar jaan-e-jaan
rok lo aaj ki raat ko
aaj jaane ki zid na karo.."

[what an innocent, colorful weather it is.
it is the peak of beauty and love today.
who knows what will happen tomorrow,
let's stop this night, tonight,
tonight, don't insist on leaving.]

Edited by Eatifi - 7 years ago