Suraj.... You stood by your words....

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Suraj... You stood by your words

If you forget me..

The last sentence she spoke to him before they were separated by law

I may forget to breathe but will not forget you, i love you too much chakor was his promise his words.

But did fate prove him wrong,, he failed his words??

The chirpy bird came with only one prime yearning to get into her safe abode... His arms and nothing else.

But when he came... He came not the way she expected... He came behind in the most unexpected way

But her soul found he was there but not the way she thought

He held her from behind the most unexpected way
She did not fear to hit as she sensed HE was there
But what happened next she would not even dreamt in her worst dreams..

Her suraj her love her life the one who was always by her in all her deeds was against her..

The shock turned to happiness turned to surprise turned to disbelief.

Chakor who chakor i don't know any chakor

That would have shattered her,

The one who said he will forget only if he forget to breathe is not recognising his life his world.

But he still stood behind her with not looking into her eyes the eyes into which he looses himself.
But now he has lost himself completely

But, Suraj I am proud of you

For your soul was not with you as you had left behind with her

For you forgot to breathe on your own as the cowards knowing the sun's rage and lions roar did the cowardly act of making you forget your SELF

You kept your words you forgot yourself so indeed you could not recognise her

You are eclipsed, caged, so you had to forget your bird

Suraj I am proud of you as you still stood by your words

I am waiting for your bird turn into the Eagle and get the diamond ring of that sun and uncage the lion to roar...

That moment when you look into your world's eyes you will start breathing on your own.

Sukor will rise again and stand by the words that the will never forget each other

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amen sumi!!!
Waiting for the day, the lion will roar again... And what a roar it will be ... All the Devis and ammajis and huzurs will have to run helter skelter...Mazaa aayega... Just the thought itself is such a good one.. So when the actual episode airs i think I will be in the seventh heaven
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very true...when he gets to know that he had been made to forget his chakor... Just waiting for that volcano to erupt and turn the two into ashes...
Kudos to meejay they just just nailed it.. What a perfection... Awesome

He was really hot and handsome and meera was so beautiful.

Waiting for others view and specially rabi's... My those lines...

But chagan was not there na??
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Now he is not a real Sooraj but only a shadow of him,a lifeless person so in a way what he said to her about her question of forgetting her turned true.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chagan wasn't there, he left before RV arrived, probably went searching for Kumud.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: binivenugopal

Now he is not a real Sooraj but only a shadow of him,a lifeless person so in a way what he said to her about her question of forgetting her turned true.


Very true a man of his words
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I was a bit surprised looking at the title..But those beautiful words of yours completely justified..Lovely Sumi..Who else can understand him better than you and Rabi..Yes, chirpy bird should find the key to uncage her Sun..😃 Ofcourse Do write more..Hugs and Love..❤️
Bini, totally agree with you..Loved how you compared with his shadow..Vj was exceptional in delivering the emotions without expressions..But I wish, his usual Suraj's traits come out sooner than soon..Hope he is not portrayed dumb
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful piece of writing sumi. Thanks so much for posting
Your way of looking at it is so unique and at the same time so true

Liked reading everyones comments


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruby7

Beautiful piece of writing sumi. Thanks so much for posting

Your way of looking at it is so unique and at the same time so true

Liked reading everyones comments



Thanks Ruby just the feel i got.. I just watched once only😭 away in work just back to drench again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ndivyateja

I was a bit surprised looking at the title..But those beautiful words of yours completely justified..Lovely Sumi..Who else can understand him better than you and Rabi..Yes, chirpy bird should find the key to uncage her Sun..😃 Ofcourse Do write more..Hugs and Love..❤️

Bini, totally agree with you..Loved how you compared with his shadow..Vj was exceptional in delivering the emotions without expressions..But I wish, his usual Suraj's traits come out sooner than soon..Hope he is not portrayed dumb


Thanks divya... Everyone of us saw it many ways.. Lovely reading all posts

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