Udaan DEDT #4 - Page 94

Originally posted by: ndivyateja

Sumi, commenting once again on your sizzling piece of write-up coz Im not done with once..😉

This is definitely one of your bests..👍🏼

I just loved how you compared to the Old knife attack to the current one..This defines their journey..Long one but most meaningful..😃

"She caressed his cheek" ?? When did this happen?? Well its sumi's Radar that can capture those little details..Watched it again..Yes, she did..😳

Craving for more n more of your writings..All love..🤗

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Summary Credit _ Meshmesh... episode May 3, 2018

An irritated Imli is shown in her rooms, she orders Archana to massage her legs and then orders her to go do her chores, she threatens Archana not to make mistakes.

At night Sukor can't get Saanvi to stop crying, Imli comes to help. She takes her out to the garden away from Sukor and removes the safety pin she put to make her cry. Sukor are amazed at how she quickly stopped Saanvi from crying. Chakor questions Imli on how she stopped Saanvi from crying, Suraj tells her to drop the topic, Imli cooks up a reason.

Next day Sukor are having breakfast, Chakor says the food tastes like Kasturi's food, Imli says she doesn't know how Kasturi prepares food, she secretly adds chili to food. Suraj tastes the food to check Chakor's claim and finds it too spicy, Chakor tastes it again and finds it too spicy, she's surprised.

Imli and Karan talk at his house. Imli tells Karan to frame Chakor when he steals the idol, she takes a bag from him and thanks him for making her task easier.

Suraj thinks Chakor went too far in questioning Archana about how she stopped Saanvi from crying and says she'll make them lose a good nanny. While playing with Saanvi, Chakor finds a hair and feels it belongs to imli, Suraj tells her to stop her negative thoughts and that Imli is dead and out of their lives. Chakor goes to work.

Kasturi calls Chakor at work, she asks her why she sounds different and tells her it's natural to worry about Saanvi alone, she says Archana is a good person and there is no need to worry, Chakor remembers her childhood with Imli. Chakor remembers that she hasn't saved the fields yet and ends the phone.

In haveli, Chagan tells Suraj that although Bhuka have tried convince villagers of his innocence in the bridge collapse, many don't want to do business with him, Suraj holds himself responsible for the accident. Chagan asks Imli for water and she she says "Chagan ji", Suraj and he look at her in surprise.

Precap:

Imli is talking to Karan, she wants to separate Chakor from Suraj and Saanvi. She says Chakor will go away with her husband but will return alone.

At office, Chakor is holding tickest, she tells Karan that Sukorvi will go to Kashmir and spend time together.

A kidnapped Suraj is shown.

Originally posted by: ndivyateja

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Mai,

That's a Surprise !! Yay..a WU..😃

Thank you for the efforts..Forum needs it..Err..I need them too..Giving the episodes a try based on your updates..😊

Originally posted by: meshmesh

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I'm just filling in until Ruby is inspired to resume writing.

SR... you're no less to SRK or AK... for my cutie pie Chakor

SR my dude you are no Less to SRK or AK for us and especially for your masoom , shararth, bachi (now two of them) chakor!!!😳

While all are ranting about the precap... About trp...whether it was fillers ... About the evils... . Here comes the insane Sumi who leave all those serious issues to the track analysts and intellects and always be happy only with her adories... 🤪 I am super duper late and just saw the episode...

Awwhh shweetoes, Cuties cuties, my adories... were so so innocent... Like kids enjoying themselves. Dude lusted her and so was she but a thin smile was on my lips as I felt more than lusting, he was completely loving the time and treating and allowing her child in her enjoy completely... he was taking care of both the kids to me... The more my respects grow for you dude..😊

Whenever he uttered the word Suraj Rajvanshi, who never fears anybody's baap... the swag and the attitudewala modulation was superb 👍🏼and the way he carried his precious pearl and allowing chakor to swirl and twirl and living every moment with her and enforcing, reinforcing his love for her as he never chided a moment to say I love you... And to the whole of Kashmir... I just loved the trio and the way the little one was clinging on to him when she was called by Chakor... He he dada ka laaddooo knows that she is in her dada's safe hands, and ...who would not want to be in the most handsome dada's hands and she too was enjoying his warmth and his warmth towards her mumma...

That was sooo sweet all through Chakor was looking so so innocent, so beautiful just enjoying nature and in a way dude's wish to take her to far away place at the foot of the hills in a small cottage with his little one is fulfilled...and he enjoys the kid in her... And he wants her to be playful, cheerful, naughty ... but my hottie doesnot spare his moments when he wanted her warmth too...ha ha SR does not want shawl but wants her as his shawl... dude haaa so sweet was suddenly worrying about his little one looking at them... dude she knows now abut her dada and mumma and she is also enjoying it.

SR is SR ha ha old or young don't dare with his girl, knows how to coolly take control and says to the oldie who was trying to flirt that she is the most beautiful one, who is his wife and does not stop there but goes on to say yes she is my love and we also have our symbol of our love in our hands so budda, be aware... I love the streak of jealous Suraj and the way he said enough of these photo lets go... and she feels so proud when he is jealous...

The cottage scene was so serene and beautiful the way he pulled her to him asking her to return soon and the way she caressed him... (though there was no baby in real but VJ was excellent with his gestures as though he was holding Saanvi) and the way he introduced himself and his love and his little goddess was so soothing..

The boat scene was nonetheless of the cottage and my dude wherever he goes, he has his own way of planning for surprises for her as every moment with her is a surprise for him as she herself is a surprise in his life which he thanks all gods for it. So anything to make her special is his motto and he never fails to do so. She was so cute, tired but in his arms she gains all her energy.. that tea was so lovely and he making her drink and asking her if he can have a sip was too too lovely... The way she nods... My birdie takes the higher hand when it comes to cuteness and innocence... while he never leaves an opportunity to express his love, she never never leaves an opportunity to say that he is the best pathi and this time I loved when he said very emotionally that he is best as the reason is she is the best patni... the forehead kiss on her was so so soothing and the kiss on his life too.

Ha ha I like the way he said like any typical dad you two girls make my life miserable and always your playfulness leads me into trouble... Hahhh true dude...

SR indeed I don't even wish to see any SRK or AK as indeed you are nonetheless of any Superstar...

Too many things happening but I am stopping with this as I was cringing when his little goddess lakshmi held him back not to go (reminded of the godbharai scene and tears fell from my eyes, as SR always has a special bonding with his pearls) but dear little lakshmi you know you are in the hands of that massom, bachi, sharath mom who will turn into the most powerful Durga and thwart all the evils like a storm... I loved Chakor as her shades comes out... the way she questioned why such a costly cottage, costly food everthing so exhorbitant by Karan for what!!! waiting waiting for my jassoossi to start her investigation...

Kismat se tum humko mile ho... Yes Sukor are destined not to leave their hands

Episode May 8, 2018

Incessant tears in my eyes when I saw my adories...

Yes it was destiny which brought them together and their hands were bound together not be left...

The Himalayan abode the abode of divinity... the abode where everything is just pure... The climate... the snow... The air... the feel as it is that heights where everything is so serene and pure as nature rules there nothing can impure that space... but that space only my adories could reach!!!

Can the scene be more apt... was it fire no... rage. No... lust... No ... But was full of pure love, unadulterated love, passion... the emotions to be together to bind and infuse... There was absolutely nothing arousing (my view) it was pure melody with those vibes of them infusing into each other... was a divine bliss... It was soo soothing, blissful and can it be more apt with the lyrics... the more I heard I could relate it more with my adories (hats off to makers to raking their brains).

As per the lyrics destiny brought them to be for each other as no one can love each other as SuKor does... and they are destined to be twined and hence cannot leave their hands... there are no four hands only two... leave alone hands... There is no two souls... its blended into just one...no suraj or chakor but only SuKor...

( to be very very honest the movements were the same of SuKor movements, except for those balancing and holding her bending, ...pushing her strands , simple movement but made is so beautiful due to the lyrics... it played wonder). All through I could notice that she ..his world was revolving around him the axis and was just leaning on to him and lo in the bliss she forgot to spin... As he had made her spin enough only to infuse her in his arms, striding her down her shoulders and just keeping her imbibed to him, the hands through sliding downwards through her upper part but loved the way he did not cross bars as it was just above her bosoms... it was classy... he was indeed lost in her ..too close to her beautiful neckline when he was bringing her up slowly close to him... but did not make me squirm with any kisses though it was due to be as it was soo close...but its sukor nothing explicit but... made the scene into a poetry... she played to his chime and he was indeed a charmer but charming her so preciously for it is his world spinning around him ...the axis and he needs to be careful in making her feel that supreme...and they infused so beautifully that I could not see two but only one she gave in lifting her head and he came down caressing her cheek... wow that was solace... Just imbibing ... one has to feel any sukor moments...as it cannot be penned down!!! (Sumi's antennas were not up anywhere but her periscope was up as it was submerged in the pool of emotions entwined... so has to shoot up to again submerge in this divinity)

I always say love has three categories, human, divine and sukor... Yes sukor is by themselves is a separate category where no one can fall under...

The scene of their remembering each other... MeeJay just just killed it when it comes to emotional scene oh my god they kill with their voice modulation... Meera just stole yesterday emoting so beautifully, lost in her thoughts and in her child with her, she was tearing.. her hands were not there, and also the one who does not allow a drop even to fall was missing... The eyes and hands which was only seeing her and protecting her was missing... she was broken... And so was I

Thank you Chanduji for being there for my adories at the right time... Loved the way she spoke to chanduji... Her suraj is again eclipsed... her lion caged... Her breadth taken away...how can she live...loved the way she said I cannot like without my Suraj... the promise she made to her child, her love's symbol to bring her dada back and to her Suraj that she will not go without him... I saw the bravo who will turn the whole world to reach him out... And once she decides the storm in her cannot be stopped!!! Is it role reversal, the lion broke the barriers when she was caged in Benaras... now it's the Eagles turn to uncage the Lion with its sharp claws..

Suraj my dude I loved the way you never sublimed to Nisar... You fear none... but the moment you thought of your world that smile with those tears, made me cringe and you knew that your soul would be taking to Chanduji and you conveyed through him asking her to go back along with saanvi but tell me honestly dude did you even for a millisecond thought that she would go without you! You tried to appease yourself but no you cannot fool yourself as the eagle will soar high to reach you...

That moment when he was tearing and his hands tied and was trying to brush his tears ... He tried to brush it with his shoulders... She would not have allowed those tears, but his hands are tied... The shoulders helped him as I felt Ironically it was Chakor there, as his shoulders were her resting abode his life's safe abode and always holding her.. so it had her flavour and essence...so his shoulders did what she would have done...

I loved the way he rose and sternly told her not bow down and do what they say... In a way he was happy when he smiled as he is in danger and not his family... In a way he is at peace not not me nor my chirpy bird.

Yes it is indeed destiny playing a cruel role of this separation but divinity will get you back together

And I shall wait to witness the same in the Himalayan abode as your love is pure as snow which never melts here lo!

Nisar... SR is not Saab but Sher! And my girl not birdie but brave

Nisar ... after a looong time I feared for this villain... Thanks for his stern face and voice modulation he was good... The way he spoke to Chakor, terrorising her about Suraj kidnap and that he will not spare Saanvi too.

But lest he would have realised that he is talking to Chakor and not some ordinary girl who would have just cry cry hearing that her husband is abducted!

Excellent was she in the way she asked questions, with various emotions and he did say my I will get softened but will not leave your husband.

He was quick in realising she is no ordinary asking for proof and the way she cut the call so boldly saying let me hear my husband's voice before you ask me to do anything... Nisar you did taste my jungle billi for she worries for him but will not sulk and bury herself in tears for she will rise above to get back her love, her Lion back at any cost.

Just beware of my birdie for she is not that sparrow but that Eagle the brave one who will fly high to sense where her lion is caged with her sharp eyes and claws to bring him out..

While my birdie is so brave, no less is my Sher

Nisar... called him Suraj Rajvanshi Saab... Hellooo ... no Saab he is Sher, the dude was indeed like a caged lion... no where he sublimed himself or cried asking to be released... wow the caged lion attitude was in full swing... He knows he is abducted but was so fearless in shouting at the top... Why did you abduct... leave me... You want money take it... I shall give... he softened when he said my wife and my little child will be searching for me, let me go to my family... yes all he needs was to be with his small world, his wife and his little bundle... but that second he was shocked to hear when Nisar said your wife will not search for you and your kid is fine (confused) but his face veins released... When he heard his say as we have informed her to stay away if you need to be fine.

Caged was he but he knows in his heart that his birdie will leave no stones unturned to uncage him...

Nisar you have invited trouble yourself... for now you are going to deal with my Brave girl and when she gets into action she Storms...