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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: taahir004
Wow again chapter was so Lovely and
so Interesting
Loved how Suraj has many gifts for his wife that is so beautiful

Thank you buddy!

Happy that you find it interesting!

Yup!

Every wife likes to have gifts.

Some lots of love in the form of gifts and some lots of love in the form of husband.

And I think even husbands likes to give gifts according to their level, to surprise their wives!

Just love the surprises and care and love in it!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

awww...finally completed it😳,did'nt got to enjoy Sukor wedding rituals in the show,as they as they are never going to happen,but never mind,I am happy,and your writing compensated it😃

Mitthu...😃

THE APPLYING...omg,

only SR can dare to do this with his wild cat😎,I dont know if its the magic of your writing or Sukor or simply the crazy me,the part where Suraj joins her left cheek with his right one,nuzzling it in circular motion,god ,I had goosebumps as I imagined him this way,☺️and the way he was asking,"dont you like it???...you tell me SR,"who will NOT like this???".😉..and as usual,no matter how hard Chakor tries,she just cant remain unaffected by his touches,by his approaches,and he feels like the king of the world,by making her weak by his approach,as if he lives by that ambition in his life😳

THE SEARCHING...

once again typical Sukor,or I must day,it was more of typical SR,,,,,I just loved the way he called her pataaka.😎

I remember when they both had first met,Suraj had called her "pataaka" at the forst instance,and while she was leaving,he had said that,"Is pataake ko toh hum hi phodenge"[maybe that dialogue had double meaning,or I am thinking too much]...and today,the cracker is indeed belonging to only him,and he even knows how to burn her at the right moment...😉

It was an amazing experience Mitthu,reading this🤗

very well done👍🏼

Edited by Eatifi - 8 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Eatifi
awww...finally completed it😳,did'nt got to enjoy Sukor wedding rituals in the show,as they as they are never going to happen,but never mind,I am happy,and your writing compensated it😃

Mitthu...😃
THE APPLYING...omg,
only SR can dare to do this with his wild cat😎,I dont know if its the magic of your writing or Sukor or simply the crazy me,the part where Suraj joins her left cheek with his right one,nuzzling it in circular motion,god ,I had goosebumps as I imagined him this way,☺️and the way he was asking,"dont you like it???...you tell me SR,"who will NOT like this???".😉..and as usual,no matter how hard Chakor tries,she just cant remain unaffected by his touches,by his approaches,and he feels like the king of the world,by making her weak by his approach,as if he lives by that ambition in his life😳

THE SEARCHING...
once again typical Sukor,or I must day,it was more of typical SR,,,,,I just loved the way he called her pataaka.😎
I remember when they both had first met,Suraj had called her "pataaka" at the forst instance,and while she was leaving,he had said that,"Is pataake ko toh hum hi phodenge"[maybe that dialogue had double meaning,or I am thinking too much]...and today,the cracker is indeed belonging to only him,and he even knows how to burn her at the right moment...😉

It was an amazing experience Mitthu,reading this🤗
very well done👍🏼

Bold red

Rabi... bang on😉😉

only thing we are deprived of those real pataaka's burning moments!!!! hehehe

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Eatifi
awww...finally completed it😳,did'nt got to enjoy Sukor wedding rituals in the show,as they as they are never going to happen,but never mind,I am happy,and your writing compensated it😃

Mitthu...😃
THE APPLYING...omg,
only SR can dare to do this with his wild cat😎,I dont know if its the magic of your writing or Sukor or simply the crazy me,the part where Suraj joins her left cheek with his right one,nuzzling it in circular motion,god ,I had goosebumps as I imagined him this way,☺️and the way he was asking,"dont you like it???...you tell me SR,"who will NOT like this???".😉..and as usual,no matter how hard Chakor tries,she just cant remain unaffected by his touches,by his approaches,and he feels like the king of the world,by making her weak by his approach,as if he lives by that ambition in his life😳

THE SEARCHING...
once again typical Sukor,or I must day,it was more of typical SR,,,,,I just loved the way he called her pataaka.😎
I remember when they both had first met,Suraj had called her "pataaka" at the forst instance,and while she was leaving,he had said that,"Is pataake ko toh hum hi phodenge"[maybe that dialogue had double meaning,or I am thinking too much]...and today,the cracker is indeed belonging to only him,and he even knows how to burn her at the right moment...😉

It was an amazing experience Mitthu,reading this🤗
very well done👍🏼

Oh my dear Rabi!

You just made my starting of the week more happy as a smile was lacing there when I was reading Ur Comment!

Well!

This Suraj and Chakor are from entirely the show, so wanted to keep their style and habits and words.

And thankfully, all worked well!

And the cracker part for sure had a double meaning in my dico when it was used in the beginning but both the meanings are same when it comes out Suraj babu!

Writing this story was a good experience too dear!

So thanks to those buddies who got this idea in me to write this TS!

Glad you finally finished this one and came back to me with Ur lovely words!