They have been together for one long year,fell in love some six months back,confessed it as per their desire,and sadly...all hell broke loose,and they both were brutally separated,their love for each other increasing,with each passing day,with each passing second,with no misunderstandings,no lies,no betrayals,no ego,no attitude,can demean their intensity of love,they both hold for each other...
That is why,despite all the wall of misunderstandings,ego erected in between them,they both just surrender to each other,JUST A TOUCH IS NEEDED,,,,,and mind says,to move away,the heart says to give in,the body says to not hold back,,,,,,whom to listen???...
For if Sukor had a business,then they both have easily listened to their minds...and moved away.
For if Sukor had lusted for each other,they would have definitely crossed all the limlits.
But Sukor are in love...totally,crazily,madly...THAT IS WHY THEY BOTH GAVE IN TO THE BEAUTIFUL WEAK MOMENT,OF A FEW SECONDS...
For what happened with both of them,was a serious,critical case WHEN YOUR HEART BETRAYS YOUR MIND...
"MERE SAANSON TERE PYAR KI KHUSHBOO AAYE...TERE AANE SE HI TOH DIL MEIN BAHAAR AAYE...MUJHDO TUNE JO CHHUAA...AISA MEHSOOS HUA...JAISE BHOOLE SE HI SEHRA MEIN BHI GHATAA CHAA JAAYE...!!!"
So it all started when she spotted him drinking,the addiction that he enjoys the most,the thing that irritates her the most,she is claiming for so many days that id does'nt effects him,whatever he does...so after controlling for a while,she is unable to hold herself back and goes to stop him,,making full use of the dominating power she holds over him...in order to avoid her,they both end up in a position almost like a back hug,,,,,,and she suddenly finds herself losing...LOSING AT THE GRIP WITH WHICH HE IS HOLDING HER,HIS DEEP BREATH FANNING HER EARS,ALMOST MELTING HER...THAT GRIP CREATED SO MUCH SENSATION ON HER THAT SHE LOWERS HER GLANCE,FOR IF SHE HAD CONTINUED LOOKING AT HIM,IN THAT POSITION,THEN HER BODY MUST HAVE SURELY BETRAYED HER...
I mean why did she lowered her glance,the Chakor who was fearlessly looking staring in his eyes,when she was kidnapped by him,that moment did'nt made her weak,then why this moment she lowered his glance...love has taken on this girl,and she is slowly giving in...
After that she...comes to her senses and try to make an excuse that she is only avoiding him from drinking coz it was a public bus...and then he pays no heed to her excuse,and turns to walk away...and then comes my fav moment...when to stop him...CHAKOR UNINTENTIONALLY TEARS THE FIRST TWO BUTTONS OF SURAJ'S SHIRT,,,,,AND HER HANDS TOUCH HIM,AT A SPOT THAT WAS NEVER TOUCHED BEFORE...ON THE UPPER PART OF HIS ALMOST BARE CHEST...
omg...the culprit expression on Chakor's face...showing him the broken buttons on her hands...she felt embarrassed,for she touched the part,that she must have felt a hundred times,whenever she would have hugged him,but their was always piece of cloth,and feeling something from the fingers meant an entirely different feeling...
And then Suraj...with a slaying aggresive expression on his face...takes hold of the situation,and makes her sit on the seat...with himself dominating over her,asking her the most ironical and intense,most easy and difficult question ever..."Tum chaahti kya ho Chakor..???"...
what does Chakor desires...what was the poor girl was supposed to answer,for her biggest desire was right in front of her very own eyes..still was she needed to answer whats her 'desire' is...and they both shared an eyelock,a very beautiful,with millions of conflicting emotions passing in both of their heads...heart and mind in a complete battle,with silence prevailing,something would have definitely happened at this moment,,,,had the horn did'nt disturbed them...and it gave Chakor a little courage to control herself from his touch on her...
"KE KITNI MOHABBAT HAI TUMSE...ZARAA PAAS AAKE TOH DEKHO...
KYA AAG HAI DHADKANO MEIN...GALE SE LAGAA KE TOH DEKHO..."
"NA KOI TAMANNA HAI...NA KOI HASRAT,,,MUJHE TO SANAM BAS TUMHAARI HAI CHAAHAT.."
"KITNI BEACHAIN HOKE...TUMSE MILI...TUMKO KYAA THI KHABAR...THI MAIN ITNI AKELI..."
and then the bag plays cupid and she trips on him,in a very intimate position...revealing some more of his cleavage that she teared some minutes back...
and this position forced Suraj to make full use of the situation to his full advantage...
the dialogue he said was what I felt at that moment..."Is waqt aisa lag rahaa jai,jaise dharti ki har cheez cheekh rahi hai,ki Suraj aurChakor,kabhi alag nahi ho sakte.."
Coz ,perhaps for the first time ever,she was so close to him,and instead of being restrained,he started his assault in her,making the poor girl more weak than before...
for whenever she was close to him,it was Suraj who listened to his mind and behaved very respectfully,but love has taken on him completely,,,,,and THE HEART REALLY DOES NOT UNDERSTANDS ANY KIND OF LOGIC...
THERE IS NO FEELING IN THIS WORLD AS SATISFYING TO THE SOUL IN LUSTING BEHIND SOMEONE WHOM THE HEART REALLY LOVES...
this is what was happening with Suraj at that moment,the moment he had seen her,he was strongly attracted to her,flirting with her,asking for a kiss in a bet,being mesmerized by her morning look after wedding...all these were really not just like that...for he has loved her,for he wanted to remarry her in a proper way just to hug him like a lover...for HE REALLY WANTED HER TO MAKE HIS,,,,,and that moment seemed to be a perfect oppurtunity...
He started on with doing what,he loves the most to do...put her hair adorning her face behind her ears,and then he holds her face in his hands,making her even more weak,she is stopping him,warning him,but nothing could held him back,,,,,for his actions clearly showed what was he upto...he was just about to kiss her...do what was pending in between them for more than a year...both breathing heavily...in the hot and humid weather...with temperature soaring in because of the proximity...yet feeling cold with each other's touch...shivering at the closeness,and slight trembling of the lips...
"JO HAI DARMIYAAN...EK PARDA...ISEY JAANEMANN,,,,,,AB HAATA DEIN...
YAHI FAASLEIN KEH RAHEIN HAI...CHALO DOORIYON KO MITAA DEIN..."
"BATAAYI NA JAAYE,ZUBAAN SE YEH HAALAT...MERE JISMON-JAAN KO TUMHAARI ZAROORAT"
"KITNA BEACHAIN HOKE TUMSE MILA...TUMKO KYA THI KHABAR,THA MAIN ITNA AKELA.."
But Chakor takes control of the situation,and moves back...but then a trick clicks on her to make him not drink,and the 'wild cat' in her is alarmed...
she does what she has never done,something that Suraj would have never imagined...
do a small seduction act,to take away his attention from the bottle,coz certainly she wanted to prove that she is more intoxicating than the wine...
She used her hair to make him weak...
WHAT HIS GRIP DOES TO HER,,,,,,,HER HAIR DID TO HIM...
WHAT HIS BREATH DOES TO HER,,,,,,,HER BLEW DID TO HIM...
few moments back,he was almost ready to kiss her,and a small advance from her side,made him close his eyes in an adorable manner,move his face from her side...
and Chakor's mission was accomplished...
disappointing Suraj to the core and he just shouted her to be a "dhokebaaz"...in his angry young man mode...
This were Sukor,claiming to be indifferent by any act of theirs,,,but only such simple things wrecks havoc on their senses...
they were never like this,even when together...but separation,and the burning desire inside made them did what they were not supposed to do...for they love each other,for somewhere they both lust for each other...they are Sukor...no logics,no rules,no barriers apply to them...for they are the two " Baaghi Ishaqzaade"...
LOVE HAS ITS OWN SET OF NORMS...STILL IT MANAGES TO BREAK ALL THE RULES
And now comes the Guttermind parts...what was my wildness screaming inside...
the moment they both tripped because of the bag...my eyes were only on Suraj's neck and upper part of the chest revealed to a quarter...thanks to Chakor...
This is what I wanted Suraj to do...after securing her hair at the back of her ear...and paying no heed to her warnings,,,I just wanted him to complete his pending task...the kiss
"KABSE ADHOORI HAI IK DAASTAAN...AAJA USEY AAJ ANJAAM DEIN"
I wanted him ti just not listen to her,first plant a tender kiss on her forehead,then an affectionate kiss on her cheeks,he was holding,then a really vigorous kiss on her lips...accomplishing what he always wanted to do...one hand holding her hair at the back with the tightest grip possible,another hand on caressing her entire back,,,moving his hands to and fro,making her completely surrender to him,...after satisfying himself,I wanted him to Kiss all over her upper neck,her nape...I mean completely devour her...
No this is what i wanted Chakor to do...for her small seduction act,,,,fickling her hair on his face,and blewing was not enough for me..I wanted her to be the wildest cat ever,with both hands just tear his entire shirt with full force,making him completely clueless,leaving nothing to the imagination..."DIL KAHAA REH RAHAA HAI GUNEHGAAR BAN JAA,BADAA CHAIN HAI IN GUNAAHO KO PAAKE..!!!"
After making full on shirtless,just move her hands on his entire torso...the blew of breath would have been more friuitfull,had it been not in the face,but on his body instead...just hold his hair,in a really aggressive manner,and answer him in his way,with a really wild kiss.believe me,he would have never ever tasted even a drop of alcohol ever in his life,for the tastiest thing on the universe,was already in his mouth,,...and...and...and..
Now all the naughty fantasies need a speed-breaker...
So guys,do tell me,how was this analysis...and which part was a pleasant read...
the emotional or the Guttermind part...
-Rabia
Edited by KUTUR - 8 years ago
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