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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Nice update!
Their first meeting is different.😉

What will Suraj say to Chakor?
How will Chakor react?
Are the question I get now.😕

But I think Suraj might hide his identity after some incident or something like that!
Not sure!

Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: maithu_

Nice update!
Their first meeting is different.😉

What will Suraj say to Chakor?
How will Chakor react?
Are the question I get now.😕

But I think Suraj might hide his identity after some incident or something like that!
Not sure!

Thanks for the PM!


Thank you so much. And you'll get to know in the next update wthr Suraj will tell her or not. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
😊Nice Update Saniya!!! waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
nice dear
awww they will meet again and will suraj introduce himself to chakor?
i am eager to know how chakor will react after seeing someone for azadgandj
update soon
if is possible pm me

love Sandjana
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Sorry for the mistakes as I have written it in a hurry and do comment and like and let me know about this Chapter.

Chapter-3

Rohan: vo tera pass aayi phir bhi tune uss se na kuch kaha na kuch bataya...kyun

Suraj: uss ne to meri taraf dekha tak nahi yaar...sirf thank you bola aur chali gayi...kaise kuch batata yaar

Rohan: bola tha na k vo tujhe dekhegi bhi nahi...chod baad mein bol dena vaise bhi Tu yahin hai na to vo tujhe kahin na kahin to milegi hi

Suraj: hmmm...chal bhaut raat ho gayi hai ghar chalte hai Kal milenge

They said bye and left.


At Khanna's Mansion

Chakor came home and saw that the lights were still on. So she went inside.
She came to the living room and saw Bhagya sitting there. Seeing her still awake she asked. She didn't saw that someone was sitting on the sofa facing his back.

Chakor: mom aap abhi tak soyi nahi

Suddenly a man stood up and turned towards Chakor.

Man: how are you my princess

Chakor: dad aap...aap kab aaye

Arjun: bas abhi

Chakor: and do you remember the list which I told you to buy for me from Dubai

Bhagya: what list...O My God Chakor kahin tumne Dubai se aapni shopping list to nahi mangwai na

Chakor: absolutely mom...aur kya

Arjun took out a lot of bags and gave them to Chakor.

Chakor asked one of the servants to bring these bags and she went running to her room to call Riya.

Bhagya: Arjun tumne na isse bigad k rakha hai...ittni saari shopping already uska wardrobe pure bhara hua hai

Arjun: it's ok darling...par meri princess kuch mange aur main vo usse na Doon aaisa to ho hi nahi sakta

Bhagya and Arjun started smiling and went to their room.


In Chakor's room

Chakor was trying all the dresses and was showing them to Riya on a video call. After trying all of them she came out of the bathroom wearing her night t shirt and shorts and sat on bed. When she saw Riya lost somewhere.

Chakor: Riya where you lost

Riya: Chakor babes did you saw that guy in the pub

Chakor: which guy there were so many boys

Riya: Aree the one who was continuously staring you

Chakor: common Riya there were many guys staring me and you know that I'm not interested in these boys

Riya: aree vohi jiss ne tujhe girne se bachaya...I think so he wanted to tell you something

Chakor: I don't know him and what did he wanna tell me...maybe he just wanted to flirt

Riya: don't know but...anyways Tu bata are you coming to college tomorrow

Chakor: Yaa of cource

Riya: ok bye see you tomorrow babes

Chakor: bye

And she off the lights and went to sleep.

On the other side Suraj also came home and was sleeping on his bed thinking about Chakor.

Suraj: Ye bandhua billi sach mein khubsoorat to hai...aree nahi hum bhi papa se saath reh reh k kya bolne lage hai

And he closed his eyes and went to sleep.


Next day

Suraj woke up got ready and went out to have some fun with his friends.

Chakor went to college as there were important lectures today.


In evening

Chakor was busy in doing her assignment at home when Riya calls her.

Chakor: hello

Riya: hey girl where the hell are you

Chakor: at home why

Riya: tujhe yaad nahi...we had decided to go to cafe Klutch in evening...I'm waiting for you here

Chakor: O God I'm so sorry Riya I had literally forgotten about it...wait I'll be there in just 20 minutes

And they cut the call.

Riya was waiting for Chakor when she saw Suraj coming in the same cafe.

Riya: (to herself) isn't he the same guy...he's really handsome yaar...mujhe to aaisa ladka mil jaye na to life settle ho jaye...par Ye pagal Chakor kisi ladke ki taraf dekhti tak nahi hai hmm

She was talking to herself when Chakor came.

Chakor: chale andar

Riya: haan

And they went inside and took a table just beside Suraj's. When suddenly Rohan saw Chakor and told to Suraj.

Chakor saw Riya lost in looking someone.
Chakor: Riya...Riya

She came to her senses.
Riya: haan you said something

Chakor: where were you lost

Riya: see him Chakor...he is the same boy and look he's still staring you even now I think he wanna tell you something...you should atleast go and talk to him

On Riya's saying she went to talk to Suraj even though she is not interested in talking to boys but on seeing him she also thought that he wanna tell her something. So she went and stood beside Suraj

Chakor: Hii

Suraj: Hii...please sit

And she sat on the chair beside him.

Chakor: tumhe dekh kar aaisa lagta hai jaise tum mujhe kuch kehna chate ho

Suraj: haan vo...vo hum tumhe jaante hai

Chakor: what's new in it...everyone knows me here

Suraj: nahi Chakor tum samaj nahi rahi ho...hum tumhe bhaut pehle se jaante hai

Rohan: Suraj paheliyan (puzzle) mat buja aur usse sidhe sidhe bata

Chakor: (confusingly) kya paheli kya batana mujhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa rahi tum dono kya bol rahe ho

Suraj: hum bate hai...Chakor hum Suraj hai

Chakor: haan to Suraj...what can I do

Suraj: Chakor hum Suraj hain...Suraj Rajvanshi

Chakor: (shocked) Suraj what...

Suraj: haan Chakor

Chakor: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho aur ab kya chate ho humse...kahin Kamal Narayan ne to tumhe yahan nahi bheja humein pakad kar lane k liye

Suraj: nahi Chakor tum galat samaj rahi ho...haan hum yahan papa k kaam se aayegi the humein to pata bhi nahi tha k tum humein yahan milogi...humein to tumhe sorry kehna tha

Chakor: sorry...Suraj Rajvanshi ko mujhe sorry bolna tha...lekin kyun...o haan ab main samjhi...Paise k liye na...tumne socha hoga k Chakor k pass bhaut daulat (money) hai shaurat (fame) naam (name) hai to kyun na hum usse fasai taki uski saari jaidad humari ho jaye hai na...but no Mr. Rajvanshi main aaisa nahi hone doongi...so keep your sorry with you mujhe nahi chaiye

And she stood up and took her clutch from her table

Chakor: chal yahan se Riya

And she went out from the cafe without looking back wether Riya is coming or not.

Riya looked at Suraj and tears were coming out from his eyes. So she went near him and said

Riya: main nahi janti k tum dono k beech (between) kya hai aur tum kyun usse sorry bol rahe ho Lekin Ye sorry k bare mein kahun to I think you really mean this sorry...and by the way I'm Riya...Chakor ki best friend...do a thing you give me your number I'll give it to her and tell her to talk to you once she is in good mood

And Suraj gave his number and Riya left from there.

Outside the cafe

Chakor: Riya kahan reh gayi thi tu

Riya: vo actually I went to washroom... come let's go now...aan Chakor chal na aaj night out karte hai tere ghar...tera mood bhi thik ho jayega

And they went to her house.

Precap: Chakor feeling guilty for talking badly to Suraj.
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Hey guys so I think that's enough for today and sorry for updating it late and Yaa guys stay tuned cause Sukor sceans will start from next chapters.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awesome👏
Sukor meeting was a diaster😕
Let's see how they will patch up
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb👍🏼
Waiting for more sukor scenes !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why suraj tell her sorry...???
Chakor to rude to suraj...
I like ria she will become cupid for sukor...
Fabulous update dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Finaly read the 3rd part!
Going interestingly.
Chakor is a bit rude but no problem Suraj is there to tame. I mean make her a lovely girl even for her villains.
Riya the cupid. Will she cross Sukor's path?
Waiting for the next part to know if Chakor calls him or Riya calls him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Chapter-4

So sorry guys I couldn't reply to all your comments but thank you all for supporting me. So before I start my bak-bak you all enjoy this chapter.

At Suraj's House

Suraj came home changed to his night clothes and sat on the bed and was watching
T.v. .

In Khanna's Mansion

Riya and Chakor came home and saw Bhagya sitting on the sofa. They greeted her and went to Chakor's room. Riya sat on the bed while Chakor went to change her clothes. She came out after changing and sat on bed.

Riya: Chakor I think you shouldn't have talked to Suraj like that...atleast you would have listened what he wanted to say and why he wanted to tell you sorry...how bad he must be feeling right now...

Chakor: Yaa I think you are right...I shouldn't have talked with him like that but nothing came in my mind except how rude he was in his childhood

Riya: I think he is changed that's why he wanted to tell you sorry...atleast talk with him

Chakor: but how...I don't even know where he lives or even his number

Riya: but I have...take this and talk with him and please don't ask now how I got his number

Chakor: ok fine

And she took the number and dialled it. Suraj picked up the call.

Suraj: hello who's this

Chakor: Suraj it's me...Chakor

Suraj was on cloud nine.

Suraj: why you called me??

Chakor: to say sorry...I shouldn't have talked like that...I'm sorry

Suraj: it's ok...aan can we meet

Chakor: Yaa sure but where

Suraj: come to my place tomorrow

And he gave her the address.

Chakor: ok I'll be there after my college...so see you tomorrow

Suraj: byee

Chakor: byee

And they cut the call. Suraj called Rohan and told him everything. Chakor and Riya started talking and then they went to sleep.

Next morning

Chakor woke up with a beautiful smile on her face and then got ready and went to college with Riya. Suraj was also smiling thinking about Chakor.

After the college Chakor came to Suraj's house. She ring the door Bell. Suraj ran towards the door and opened it quickly inviting her in. She came inside and sat on sofa.

Suraj: so what will you take tea or coffee

Chakor: no thanks nothing...so what you wanted to tell me

Suraj: Chakor I wanted to tell you sorry for whatever papa did...but I really didn't wanted to help him in any of his works but even I was scared that he would even make me a bandhua(bonded) for not doing what he says...I'm really sorry for that...even my mummy is scared that he would throw her out of haveli

Chakor: Ok I understand about you but why he would throw her out

Suraj: Chakor after you came to Mumbai papa married Ranjana chachi and she too did that just for money and power so my mummy is scared that if he throws us out where will we go

Chakor: so this is why you wanted to tell me sorry

Suraj: Yaa

Chakor: I'm sorry again for behaving that rude without knowing

Suraj: it's ok if I were on your place I would have behaved the same way so need for sorry

Chakor: by the way nice house... is it yours

Suraj: actually papa bought it last year cause he wanted to start a business here

Chakor: ok so is this the reason why you came here??

Suraj: Yaa...it's been so long we are talking you sit here I'll bring coffee

He went to the kitchen and started making coffee. Chakor also went behind him to the kitchen and saw him making coffee.

Chakor: so you know making coffee

Suraj: not just coffee but even cooking

Chakor: what you know cooking...I wasn't knowing that Suraj Rajvanshi can cook

Suraj: so if you know now you can have your dinner with me today

Chakor thought for a minute and said agreed.
Chakor: ok done but...

Suraj: but what

Chakor: but actually I had to go for shopping

Suraj: if you don't mind we can go together even I wanna do some shopping and you can help me as you know everything about here

Chakor: so done after this coffee we'll go shopping

Suraj: (smiling) done

They finished their coffee talking about some or the other. They came out and locked the house to go for shopping.

Chakor: let's go in my car

Suraj: as your wish

Chakor: you are seriously changed alot

Suraj: no I was always the same just didn't showed to anyone

Chakor: ok now get into the car we'll talk on the way

And they sat in the car and went to the shopping mall.

Precap: Shopping mall fun

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So sorry guys if I bored you all with this chapter but Yaa stay tuned as SUKOR SCENES will start from next chapter.

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