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Hey guys I'm new here and this is my first FF here *not actually first* Sukor. So guys Plz plz comment sk that I can get whether I should continue or not.
Chapter-1
Lady: ab kahe aayi hai ehan (here)...toka to aapna naam banana hai na...bhaut Paisa kamana hai na oo Mumbai jaa k...to ab hum se milne kahe aayi hai...chali jaa ehan se...aaj se hamri sirf ek hi bitya hai aur oo hai Imli...Tu mar gayi hai hamre liye...aaj k baad ehan kabhu vapas nahi aana
Girl (7yrs): maai Ye Tu Kya bol rahi hai...aaisa mat kar maai (crying)
Lady: chali jaa ehan se (dragging her out) Tu humre liye mar gayi hai aur hum tohre liye
She dragged her out and closed the door.
Chakor was banging the door and was crying.
Chakor: maai darwaza(door) khol maai...maai aaisa mat(don't) kar. (loudly) Maaaii
Suddenly she jerks and wakes up.
A young girl is shown (but not her face) wearing white T-shirt and shorts.
She gets up from bed and went towards the huge window which opened like door and moved aside the curtains and the window and sits on the chair in the balcony.
Girl: maai hum jaante hai k humein aaisa nahi karna chaiye tha. Lekin aap ko bhi to samajna chaiye tha k humne aaisa kyun kiya.
Meanwhile Bhagya came in her room. She opened the door and shouted...Chakor... and saw the bed empty. Then her eyes went to the open curtains and there she sitting on a chair.
Bhagya: aaree kya baat hai. Aaj sleeping beauty ittni jaldi kaise utth gayi haan...come inside and drink your coffee
She came inside and sat on her bed took her coffee from Bhagya.
Bhagya: (to tease her) vaise kaunsa (which) Prince aaya tha humari sleeping beauty ko kiss larne k vo ittni jaldi utth gayi
Chakor: mom!!...vo humne...humein sapna aaya aur aankh khul gayi
Bhagya: I know which dream...so now get up and get ready fast or else you'll get late
Chakor: late for what Bhagya mom
Bhagya: don't you wanna go to college
Chakor: oh shit!! I've really forgotten about it
She kept the cup on the table and went running to the bathroom.
Bhagya: aaree but your coffee...Ye ladki bhi naa
In Aazadgunj
Rajvanshi Haveli
KN: (shouting angrily) kahan hai humare Nawab Zade bulayie (call) unhe
Tejaswini: ji Kamal ji hum bulate hai unhe
Tejaswini went to Suraj's room and knocked the door.
Tejaswini: Suraj beta utthiye (get up) aapke papa bhaut gusse mein hai aapko bula rahe hai
Suraj woke up with a jerk.
Suraj: Oh God!! Hum to bhool hi gaye the k papa ne humein subah jaldi kuch baat karne k liye bulaya tha...ab kya naya pak (cooking) raha hai papa k dimag (brain) mein...ji mummy bas aa hi rahe hai
And he got ready and went down.
KN: kahan rahe gaye the aap...khair chodiye (leave it) vaise aapko Mumbai jaana hoga. Humare textile business aage badhane k liye ek company kholni (open) hai to aap aaj hi Mumbai jaa rahe hai...samaj gaye naa (understood)
Suraj: ji papa hum aaj sham ko hi Mumbai k liye nikal jaaenge
Precap:
Suraj going to Mumbai...Sukor meet
Guys plz comment...
-Saniya
INDEX
Chapter-1 ~ pg. 1
Chapter-2 ~ pg. 1
Chapter-3 ~ pg. 2Chapter-4 ~ pg. 3
Chapter-5 ~ pg. 4
Chapter-6 ~ pg. 5
Chapter-7 ~ pg. 5
Chapter-8 ~ pg. 5
Chapter-8 ~ pg. 5
Chapter-9 ~ pg. 6
Chapter-10 ~ pg. 6
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