First of all, thanks a ton for letting me read this beauty first!! š Alpha luuurrvvveeeddd being the alpha pair of eyes (if this even makes sense š) for this one. And it was an honour being your beta (for the uninitiated, a beta reader is an editor of sorts-though all I did was pick up some typos 'cos Nimmi's brain works as fast as Chakor runs š).And it's an even bigger honour to get the dedication on what is my favourite SuKor fic of yours (thus far). Thank you š¤
Right from the steamy kiss (I was so mad at you when it turned out to be a dream. I thought this fic was a canon-divergence thenš) to Suraj's internal monologue (you just nailed this again, woman! IDK how you do it. It's everything one wants from the character!) and the description of a rather unhinged Vivaan (you sooo do justice to these kinds of characters. Extra love just for this š¤) to finally, Chakor erecting her walls and barriers (you've always expressed the desire to see this happen in the show and you picked such a great way for it to happen in the fic).
The flow of the fic is so good. Some lines I really liked in the fic (one of which being the "fingers...spine" line for Vivaan). Perfect blend of angst, intensity,passion,sweetness...just spot on!! And I'm awaiting the sequel like crazy...because I'm sure it will send me into dreamland...Suraj breaking down those barriers
How I wish this is how Suraj had his eureka! moment instead of the boring scene on the show...
The fandom is just so lucky to have a maestro like you on board. Apart from wanting the story to be good just because, I'm hoping the writers pull up their socks so that you don't lose interest (Although if that does happen, I'm pretty sure I too would've given up).
Dher saara pyaar and pooh hugs (as usual) š¤
PS: The kiss needs to happen for real in this series at some point. Nahin toh katti.
Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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