OS: The Escapades of the Rajvanshi Siblings PART 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tabsi

Hey :) The whole story was more than AMAZING, it was PERFECT. At one scene in your story, i was crying cause i laughed so hard. It was when vivaan said ''dieting karleti tou gari balance karna mushkil nahi hota'' hahahha. The ending part was my favourite. When Chakor said ' think youre kissing me.. God that was super hot!!

Hope you plan to continue it. I want to read more!😳


OhMyGod! Thank you so much! 🤗
LOL I could seriously imagine any brother telling that to his sister, cause no matter how fit you are, he's gonna be like "Moti, Kam khaya kar," 🤣
The first and the last one are my favourites too! 😆

I do plan to continue it (since it's my favourite as well!) Maybe when some more ideas hit me. 😆
Do read Part 1 as well! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Too freaking cute. Can't handle the feels *Talks in robotic voice😳*


Aww! Thank you so much! 😳
Do read the first part as well! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mere comment la reply comong soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..chotu..

WwEeehhheee... I was so excited to read this today morning. Abhi padh liya toh I am sad that it ended. 😭Just loved the whole thing!❤️

Ragini and Imvaan on scooty was so hillarious. More because I have experienced the same. Me and two of my friends forced themselves on my bechari scooty and being a bechari driver I took them all in a zig zag manner from the school's parking before falling off with the scooty on my leg at the main gate. Thank god I had been wearing a helmet so no one noticed me. 🤣 Yeh incident yaad aagaya! 🤣

Haha. I surely agree that being the eldest is a sin. Bechara Suraj. Kitna jhelna pada usse. Even I used to be that shaitan for my bro when I was 2 years old. Dad used to bring chocolates and icecreams for both of us and when bhai would be sleeping I used to break the chocolate into teeny weeny pieces and spread it all over the icecream as toppiing. I would bhai would love it and he absolutely hated it.😆

Okay more than your story I am sharing my experiences. Shoolllyy! But reading this made me nostalgic.

That horror movie walla scene, I thought some cartoon movie is going on infront of my eyes. It was hillarious. Most funny.🤣

And I just remembered, I have this unusual talent of break dancing during sleep. Infact yesterday night I came down and slept with maasi since I didnt want to sleep alone and subah I asked if I had shown her my kicking abilities. Thankfully it was a NO...or maybe she's lying. So same pinch Vivaan!😆

Azaadgunj toh kya, Lucknow tak sabhi ko pata hai. Ab kyu sharma rahi ho, Begum Rani?"

My fav line! 😳

Ekdum badhiya OS hai le! Love the story and its writer as well!❤️❤️

Thank you for this one. And aur ek baat, we are never gonna get tired of yoir stories. Pakka promise!🤗

PS: You used the word HINGLISH???🤣


Inna bada comment! 🤗 Thank you so much! ❤️
Awww... Don't be sad! I'll try to write more of this! 😊
Your scooty adventure is 🤣! I've gone triples on two wheelers, but yet to experience something like this.
Being in any place of sibling ranking is a sin. But I agree, poor Suraj! 😆 (I never did stuff like you though! 🤣)

I loved reading your incidents! And I'm double glad you could connect to my story so well because of your own incidents, or should I say adventures in life. 😆

Suraj came in like a wrecking ball when he found out about his chocolate cake.😆

I breakdance as well! 🤣 That's why I avoid sleeping next to anyone. I don't want to pay anyone's hospital bills so soon in life! 🤣

SAME PINCH! That's my favourite line as well! 😆
Thank you so much meri Jaan! Love you too! ❤️
Sacchi? Okay I'll write more stories then! 😆

PS: LOL yeah! I couldn't stop myself from using that word! 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue


Inna bada comment! 🤗 Thank you so much! ❤️
Awww... Don't be sad! I'll try to write more of this! 😊
Your scooty adventure is 🤣! I've gone triples on two wheelers, but yet to experience something like this.
Being in any place of sibling ranking is a sin. But I agree, poor Suraj! 😆 (I never did stuff like you though! 🤣)

I loved reading your incidents! And I'm double glad you could connect to my story so well because of your own incidents, or should I say adventures in life. 😆

Suraj came in like a wrecking ball when he found out about his chocolate cake.😆

I breakdance as well! 🤣 That's why I avoid sleeping next to anyone. I don't want to pay anyone's hospital bills so soon in life! 🤣

SAME PINCH! That's my favourite line as well! 😆
Thank you so much meri Jaan! Love you too! ❤️
Sacchi? Okay I'll write more stories then! 😆

PS: LOL yeah! I couldn't stop myself from using that word! 🤣


I have suffered shocks from my scooty adventures🤣 Dont try these kind of stunts Akhi

I dont know how to cure this breakdancing illness...gonna suffer 🤢

Yeah jinna likhna hai likho...I will always be here to comment first😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow
so nice
all were so cute
loved it so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Officially a fan of this.
Now you just cant stop at this. you HAVE to write more.
This should be a series.

I'll come back to add more when I'm freer .

In the meantime, I LOVE IT.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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*I am so so so SORRY Akhi for commenting THIS late... But that's my stupid phone's fault, not mine 😭 *

First of all YOU should apologize to ME. YES. You read that right 😆 and the reason is because of you I earned a glare and a "Have you gone mad?oh I forgot you already are" from my sister 😡 😡

And Yes..you guessed it right... unlike yesterday(pls refer to my comment on yor FF ) I couldn't control my laughter 🤣 but thankfully my sis didn't throw me out of the room.
It was so hilarious Akhi..I laughed hard reading this... 😆 🤣 Especially that "sequel to Ferrari" part and "Vivaan trying to sit in that shopping cart" 🤣
And the little SuKor scene was cherry on top 😉 😳
I simply just LOVED LOVED LOVED it ❤️

THANKYOU so much for writing this ❤️

P.S- Did I just forget to mention ILU? ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely!!!
The (VERY SHORT) Sukor piece was the best part😉!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
so nice
all were so cute
loved it so much


Aww! Thank you so much! 😳

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