'Tum azaad panchi ho aur hamesha azaad yi rahogi '-SUKOR SS - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavyabenerjee

Lora its awesome loved it
Aur suspense banake rakna

Thank u Kaavya. .😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Wow Lora!!! What an amazing story. Full of suspense and drama. Loved it.

Thank u so much Nami...I'm glad that u liked it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing Lora! Read both the parts together, freaking awesome! 👏
Can't take the suspense! Please do update soon! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved both the parts😳
Your writing style is amazing.. ek dam ''Serial style'' 👏
update soon!! 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lora! This is amazing. Read both the parts and loved the story. And the language is not at all a problem for me. Please do continue soon. I am scared at what will happen to Chakor. Please do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous🤗plz update the next part sooncant wait anymore😒
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sukor SS:Part 3
Usne kisi ko bulaya. Ek gunda...dikhne mein bilkul dharinde ki taraha yi tha..usse dekh ke yi chakor shock huyi.
Ragini:" Tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai? Bahuth achche se sabak sikhana iss ladki ko "
Wo Gunda:"Jee madam"
Ragini :"Tho hum chalthe hai chakor Bha..bhi...Phir milenge tumhare barbaadi ka jashn manane " sadistic smile deke ragini wahan se nikli. Uske aadmi factory ke baahar pehredaari kar rahe the aur andar wo gunda chakor ke pass badne laga.
Chakor:"Nahiii...pass math aana dhoor hato "
Gunda :"aaj tumhe mujse koi nahi bacha sakta "rakshas ki taraha has raha tha.
Idhar shiku ne haveli aakar dekha tho wahan chakor nahi thi.saare jagaha doonda kahin bhi nahi mili. Usse bahuth chinta hone lagi. Bastiwaalon se poocha tab ek bachche ne kaha ki 'Chakor didi ko puraani factory ki taraf baaghthe huye dekha maine. Bahuth pareshaan lag rahi thi.'wo sunthe yi shiku shock hogaya. Usne thuranth suraj ko phone kiya.
Udhar Suraj Chakor ke liye bahuth pareshaan tha. Usse bahuth bechaini ho rahi thi tho shiku ke peeche peeche wo bhi wapas aagaya tha. Shiku ka phone aate yi thuranth phone utaaya.
Suraj:"Bol shiku chakor teek hai na. Kahan hai wo mujse baath karwah do "
Shiku:"wo...suraj babu...chakor bhabhi. .." Suraj pareshaan ho gaya.
Suraj:"Bol kya huva chakor ko ?"
Shiku ne sab bataya. ..
Suraj :"Kya...?"
Suraj hairaan pareshaan hogaya.
Suraj:"shiku tum jaldi se puraani factory jao aur chakor ko bachalo. Wo log kuch bhi bura kar sakthe hai uske saath. Hum abhi wapas pahunchnewaale yi hai. "
Shiku:"Teek hai suraj babu...aap chinta math karo ...Bhabhi ko kuch nahi hone denge hum. " Suraj chakor ke liye itna darr gaya tha ki paagalon ki taraha gaadi chala raha tha. Kisi bhi haal mein jaldh se jaldh usse puraani factory pahunchna tha chakor ke pass."Hum aa rahe hai chakor.hum tumhe kuch bhi nahi hone denge."
Yahaan factory mein chakor uss dharinde se bachne ke liye koshish karthi rahi. Bhagthi rahi. Pehle tho wo bilkul nahi dari ...Bahuth prathirodh dhikaya. ..lekin kab tak...? Dheere dheere wo haarne lagi. .uss gunde ne usse maara ..peeta...uske kapde paade. ..chakor puri taraha se darr gayi. ..jor se rone lag gayi. "Plz muje chod do "wo uss gunde se binathi karthi rahi. ..lekin uss dharinde ne kuch nahi suna. Jo Chakor aaj tak kisi se nahi dari kisi se nahi haari aaj haar gayi. ...uss rakshas ke aage kamzor ho gayi. .usse sab kuch dundla dundla dhikayi dene laga...wo shock mein chali gayi. .bas suraj ko yaad kiya. .uske aankho se aansoo beh rahe the. .wo dharinda uske saath jabardasthi karne ki koshish kar raha tha. ..Tabi kisi ne aakar uss rakshas ko dhakka de diya. .SHIKU. ...Haa. ..SHIKU. .Ragini ke gundo ko kisi bhi taraha chakma deke wo apni bhabhi ko bachane aa pahuncha. ..
Shiku:"chakor bhabhi aap daro math hum aagaye na"
Chakor tho kuch react karne ki stithi mein nahi thi. ..Shiku aur uss gunde ke beech ladayi ho rahi thi tabi baaki ke gunde bhi aagaye aur shiku par attack kiya. Bechara akela sabse ladta raha. ..aur jab kisi gunde ne uss par hamla kiya tab ahem waqt par suraj ne aakar usse bachaya. .Phir dono ne milke sab gundo ki dhulayi ki...Suraj ne tho uss dharinde ko maar maar ke bura haal kardiya. ..
Suraj:"hamari biwi ko choone ki himmat kaise huyi teri? ..hum jaan se maar denge tuje...Bol kisne karwaya ye sab?"
Wo gunda:"Ragini madam ne "
Jab Ragini ka naam suna tho suraj gusse se paagal ho gaya. ...wo kuch bhi kar sakta tha. ..Shiku ne situation sambhal li aur "Suraj babu hum inn logo ko dekh lenge. ..aap bhabhi ko sambhalo. .unhe aapki zaroorath hai "
Suraj ek yi kshan mein chakor ke pass pahuncha aur wahan ki paristithi dekha ke dang reh gaya. ...


Edited by vinlora - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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[QUOTE=vinlora]Sukor SS:Part 3
Usne kisi ko bulaya. Ek gunda...dikhne mein bilkul dharinde ki taraha yi tha..usse dekh ke yi chakor shock huyi.
Ragini:" Tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai? Bahuth achche se sabak sikhana iss ladki ko "
Wo Gunda:"Jee madam"
Ragini :"Tho hum chalthe hai chakor Bha..bhi...Phir milenge tumhare barbaadi ka jashn manane "
[/QUOTE ] nice start. . But again suspense. . . Please don't do thus. . . . . . .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Lora why is this part so small?will u continue??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Kavyabenerjee

Lora why is this part so small?will u continue??

Sorry guyz I'm not getting time to type continues. ..so whenever I'm getting time I'll type then save then again edit and type. ..Sorry. .
Now Part 3 is updated on page 4...Read and enjoy guyz and plz don't forget to give reviews.

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