FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79)

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#381

Awesome update sis..

Sukor convo was nice..

Loved their awkwardness..asusual suraj mind and heart battle was superb..

Eagerly waiting for next update sis..

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 7 years ago

#382

Amazing update!

The tussle between Suraj's heart and mind is fun to read, especially the kiss suggestion 😆.

Sukor make a great couple, the way they understand and care for each other.

Felt the tension and awkwardness between Sukor.

Loved the moment when their hands accidentally touched.

So Chakor has started to question herself. I think her heart isn't ready to answer.

Can't wait for the next update.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#383

Maithu

ha ha i was just smiling smiling at the war of the heart and mind of our dear Suraj

loved ... oh my how i will get him married... gifts for gifts punches for punches.

infact liked Chakor in a way... but want to see her inner thought of war as she is also having it but not speaking it aloud.

hmmm just felt they could have been waiting till the carpenter came though !!!!

waiting for the nextupdate

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#384

Pleasant update...liked it really.👍🏼

I am really loving,Suraj's argument between mind and heart,wished that Suraj would have listened to his heart,😉as his mind will surely render him a virgin for life.😆

You know what,I could really feel the moment when Suraj stopped Chakor from tripping and they both had an eyelock.

And kudos,that you incorporated the signature act of Suraj that he is used to do,whenever Chakor's face is covered by her locks...👏⭐️

But the time they spent in the storeroom was too short...😒why the hell,they had to come out so soon.😒

The baseball bat played the villian.😡

I am really curious to read the insight of Chakor.😳

Edited by Eatifi - 7 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: Eatifi
Pleasant update...liked it really.
I am really loving,Suraj's argument between mind and heart,wished that Suraj would have listened to his heart,as gis mind will surely render him a virgin for life.

You know what,I could really feel the moment when Suraj stopped Chakor from tripping and they both had an eyelock.
And kudos,that you incorporated the signature act of Suraj that he is used to do,whenever Chakor's face is covered by her locks...

But the time they spent in the storeroom was too short...why the hell,they had to confirm out so soon.
Yhe baseball bat played the villian.

I am really curious to read the insight of Chakor.

HIFI Rabia

Me too felt the same. they could have waited for the carpenter to come na.

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: sumsukor

HIFI Rabia

Me too felt the same. they could have waited for the carpenter to come na.

Wahi toh,and from where did the baseball bat popped in.😡

This Maithili is being too sanskaari,taking inspiration from.Udaan cvs

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#387

What's going on here?

Talking behind me! Too bad buddies! Too too too bad!😡

Baseball bat?

I think Vivaan plays Baseball!😕

But what is the need to compare me and those CVs who can't even do a proper consummation scene?

I just didn't want to repeat telecast the carpenter scene.😉

And moreover, Suraj wouldn't have lifted Chakor if Carpenter came!😛

So Thank me that Suraj and Chakor were that close without their knowledge during those moments!😳

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#388

Maithu dear

Nono back talking

Haha you are our darling who fulfil our sukor wanting just that a bit of little ranting me and rabia had.

Sorry sorry.

You Carry on with your way dear 😊

Loads of love

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu dear
Nono back talking

Haha you are our darling who fulfil our sukor wanting just that a bit of little ranting me and rabia had.

Sorry sorry.

You Carry on with your way dear 😊
Loads of love

Oups I feel like I offended you!

Sorry!

I was just plying along wit you all too!

No pbm yaar!

You can rant all you want, and Rabi will support you, no worries ;-)

Sorry to say this, it's not me who is carrying this story but the story who is carrying me LOL

Hehehe

Well!

Had fun reading your comments!

Thank you!

Love you!

See you!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: maithu_

Oups I feel like I offended you!
Sorry!

I was just plying along wit you all too!
No pbm yaar!
You can rant all you want, and Rabi will support you, no worries ;-)

Sorry to say this, it's not me who is carrying this story but the story who is carrying me LOL
Hehehe

Well!
Had fun reading your comments!
Thank you!

Love you!
See you!

🤗

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