FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Hello everyone!

I have a small question to you all!

Answer if possible!

The thing is my younger sister reads all my stories and tell her opinion to me!

And yesterday after the new part, she said that she feels that Suraj's emotions was not consistent, She mean to say before I start to continue the story, he was not like now with his heart which makes us all to feel like a love sick puppy.

So wanted to know if anybody of you felt the same? Or is there anything which is missing in the story line?

Let me know buddies, that will help me bring the story back to track!

See you!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Outwardly, he's still the same; there are no signs that he's in love. I like his inner battle, but may be his mind could've had the upper hand at least in the earlier stages. I don't see it as an inconsistency in his character, Suraj has kept his feelings hidden and has suffered alone for a long time. So it's no surprise that once he opened up to someone that all his suppressed emotions will take control of him.

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#233

@maithu

I don't think that Suraj has been inconsistent with his feelings,I mean at the starting,he was introduced as a 'sadu' a introvert,but since he has been acquainted with Chakor,we are getting to see his hidden sides,

He must have felt an unexplainable connect with Chakor,which made him to share his past...and now as he has said it,his inner self must have been feeling very light,this happens,and this feeling can really not be expressed in words,a sudden encounter with an altogether different girl,a friendship that wasn't planned,a heart pouring which was clearly not meant...all these must have made Suraj,to see literally everything in a different light,the reason being Chakor...attraction is a different thing,but what Suraj must have felt with Chakor is THE FEELING OF BEING SAFE WITH HIS EMOTIONS...that is why,he is getting inclined to her in such a hateful manner,maybe a 'love sick puppy' as you said...but the truth is...who doesn't seeks love???...

One can pile up on their hidden feelings,on and on,with doors closed,but as soon as someone comes knocking,the heart is bound to desperately open it...

About missing some in the story line-I am only missing Sukor accidental encounters,with them not being so good to each other,I mean they are friends,its okay,but attitude is missing

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#234

For me..he is not inconsistent sis..

Becoz,before he builds his own wall around him..act as being rude becoz of his personal secret..

After becoming frnd with chakor and revels the matter to her which he hides in his heart for a long time..now he felt relived..

Now his heart is longing for love which he lost after his mothers death..

So this normal for a person to change..

This s just my opinion sis..

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Outwardly, he's still the same; there are no signs that he's in love. I like his inner battle, but may be his mind could've had the upper hand at least in the earlier stages. I don't see it as an inconsistency in his character, Suraj has kept his feelings hidden and has suffered alone for a long time. So it's no surprise that once he opened up to someone that all his suppressed emotions will take control of him.

Thanks for showing me the image of Suraj and I can see that what I wanted to show has really happened.

Thanks dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: KUTUR
@maithu
I don't think that Suraj has been inconsistent with his feelings,I mean at the starting,he was introduced as a 'sadu' a introvert,but since he has been acquainted with Chakor,we are getting to see his hidden sides,
He must have felt an unexplainable connect with Chakor,which made him to share his past...and now as he has said it,his inner self must have been feeling very light,this happens,and this feeling can really not be expressed in words,a sudden encounter with an altogether different girl,a friendship that wasn't planned,a heart pouring which was clearly not meant...all these must have made Suraj,to see literally everything in a different light,the reason being Chakor...attraction is a different thing,but what Suraj must have felt with Chakor is THE FEELING OF BEING SAFE WITH HIS EMOTIONS...that is why,he is getting inclined to her in such a hateful manner,maybe a 'love sick puppy' as you said...but the truth is...who doesn't seeks love???...
One can pile up on their hidden feelings,on and on,with doors closed,but as soon as someone comes knocking,the heart is bound to desperately open it...

About missing some in the story line-I am only missing Sukor accidental encounters,with them not being so good to each other,I mean they are friends,its okay,but attitude is missing

I think I need to show all these messages to my sis, so she know what this Suraj is really made of.

Thanks a lot buddy for this clear explanation!

Agree with you!

Everyone needs love!

The form of love and the way is different.

I will try to bring it back once their sibling matters finished!

Have to wait!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
For me..he is not inconsistent sis..
Becoz,before he builds his own wall around him..act as being rude becoz of his personal secret..
After becoming frnd with chakor and revels the matter to her which he hides in his heart for a long time..now he felt relived..
Now his heart is longing for love which he lost after his mothers death..
So this normal for a person to change..
This s just my opinion sis..

Thanks little sis for sharing your view!

Glad that you see Suraj in the same POV as me!

See you!

Take care!

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Suraj is not inconsistent

He had confiined his feelings from everyone for a long period

I think he feels some connection with chakor & so opened up to her, his heart is free of burden

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arena99

@arena99

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Wonderful

Just love it

Waiting for next part😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: katheriene
Suraj is not inconsistent
He had confiined his feelings from everyone for a long period
I think he feels some connection with chakor & so opened up to her, his heart is free of burden

Thanks dear!

I agree with you dear!

His heart is free of burden since the night he opened to her as he is no more getting nightmares!

I told my sis to read all of your messages!

I will get back to you soon!