*SUKOR TS- A SLIGHT MISUNDERSTANDING' (FINAL PART FINALLY UP)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys😊I'm back after a long time😃so I thought why not annoy you'll with my imagination😉
Also I came across a few awesomesauce content which I sadly missed and need to catch up. Here presenting to you a slice of boredom.
*3rd person p.o.v*
"We've tried every possible way and yet time and time again we turn into a laughing stock infront of Suraj, Chakor and the villagers. Darn their good luck. And you... You come up with some stupid idea of yours and I play along like some clown puppet" KN vented out his anger screaming at a terrified looking Ranjana.
"Kamaal ji.." She tried to reason just to be shushed be KN's angry glare that shot a million daggers.
"Papa calm down I have a great idea" Ragini offered.
"And what could that be" KN retorted sarcastically.
"To create a drift between Suraj and Chakor" Ragini offered her plan vaguely.
"I'm so proud of you" KN clapped I'm fake joy.
"Papa.."
"Stop trying to papa me.. You two do whatever the hell you'll want to do. I'm just going to leave the two of you alone to plan your flop ideas while I'll go think of some solid plan and also if you two don't mind please leave me alone for a while" He walked out of the study room.
"I guess its only you and me huh" Ragini looked at Ranjana.
"Pretty much so. Now what was the plan" Ranjana looked curious.
A smirk drew upo*n her lips as she whispered her plan down Ranjana's ears. The dead night of Azadgan bore two livley individuals plotting and laughing keeping the dead night alive hoping to create a drama filled tomorrow.

*MORNING*
*Chakor p.o.v*
"Suraj stop acting childish.I woke up first so naturally its me chance to go to bathroom first" I tried hard to act polite.
"Not happenening my room, my rules" he looked the least bit interested.
Suraj pushed me and ran towards the door.
"I said my chance" I ran towards the door and held it.
"My chance"
"Mine"
"No Mine"
"Stay away you pick its my chance if you don't let me in I'd snap your bones apart"
"Oh how scary"
"Suraj don't make me angry" I took !y slipper into my hand.
"You want to fight let's fight." He reached for a big pillow.

*10 minutes later* (IN SPONGEBOB VOICE)
"My chance, My chance" were the only words we changed like a mantra.
"Didi, Suraj what the hell are you two doing" Imli pulled our ears.
"Look at this mess" she ordered.
My eyes scanned the disarranged room. Pillow cases, pillows, slippers, even the bed sheet was ripped and on the ground. Our towels were thrown near the bathroom door. Imli started scolding us but before any one could retaliate I ran into the bathroom and locked it leaving a frustrated Suraj and a motherly Imli behind.

That's it for the first part guys. I need to do some packing now. Until next time❤️

I'm really sorry if this was cringe worthy...
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..chotu.. thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one was hillarious. Please do complete this. Jaldi jaldi. Pleasseee!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha
I can imagine their room state nd Imli's expression.
Continue soon. Wanna know wht r those 2 planning
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆 That was hilarious. Fighting over washroom!!!
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Welcome back maryamm 🤗 missed u here and please do continue superb part 1 eagerly waiting for part 2 😊
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Nice one..liked it.. cute fights of Sukor.. please do continue
Tfs
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice one
sukor will never change
cont soon
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Definitely sounds like something SuKor would do haha. I am already excited for the next part. <3 Do continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys!! I'm sorry for the delayed update 😭 . Here is the final part😳
*SURAJ P.O.V*
Girls like Chakor are the reason the world will be running through a water crisis very soon. 15 minutes that's how long she has been inside the bathroom.
"CHAKOR!!WHEN ARE YOU PLANNING ON COMING OUT?!" I screamt annoyed.
"I'm coming can't you ever be patient" I sighed this girl was going to drive me mad one day. The door finally clicked open revealing an adorably pleasing looking Chakor. I mentally scolded myself for daydreaming about my uninterested wife. She didn't love me and in all obviousness it wasn't her fault it was totally mine I made her life hell why would she even like me. It amazed me how she became a shield of her predator. She never realized that she was the kind of girl guys like me craved for , she made me feel loved something foreign to my childhood.
"Suraj" Chakor pinched me.
"Ouch... You naughty girl. Aren't you finding reasons to touch me" I smirked winking.
"Oh God you're so self obsessed" she shook her head.
I smiled at her cute expressions. I loved how she pouted when she was in deep thought or was about to say something. Before I could annoy her a feminine filled our room.
"Suraj.." The strange woman hugged me. I heard Chakor clear her throat annoyed.
"I'm Chakor. You must be?" She smiled which I very well knew was the least bit genuine.
"I'm Tara, Suraj's best friend"
"No. What?!" I looked at her in confusion.
"I'm sorry, I meant his girlfriend. I think he must've told you about me" The barley dressed woman spoke.
"Oh, in that case I guess I'll leave you two alone" She walked out of the room. I watched her run as she left the room.
"Who the hell are you?! And what do you want from me?" I barked annoyed pushing her away not wasting time for her stupid answer. I had to find Chakor I had to tell her that this was faade scripted by my very own sister and step mother.

*RAGINI P.O.V*
The plan did shape up as great as I thought. I followed my running prey into the abandoned place of Azadgan.
"Chakor" I spoke masking fake concern.
She looked at me and looked down. There was no reply I knew this was the best place and time to take advantage of.
"Chakor,Suraj sent me" I lied.
"Oh" she replied robotically.
"Chakor if you don't mind will you sign these divorce papers, Suraj felt guilty to get you to do it after all that you did to him he feels bad you got to know about his relationship this way" I hugged her.
"OK" She looked at the papers with her red puffy eyes and started signing them.
"Chakor" Suraj came running stopping her from signing the final page.
"Ragini leave" Suraj growled pulling me up.
I left huffing annoyed.

*CHAKOR P.O.V*
It hurt me. I was not worth of any love people whoever I fell for just keep throwing me out of their life. I'm such a horrible woman that my own husband preferred paying attention to any other woman that wasn't me.
"I'm sorry" I spoke up before Suraj could.
"For what?" He scrunched up his forehead confused.
"For forcing myself into your life. I'm sorry I'm your wife. I'm sorry I am me" I broke down the Chakor that was so proud of herself was today disgusted by her own self.
"No no no you've mistaken"
"Its OK Suraj I understand"
"What do you understand?"
"That you want me to leave but you feel bad to tell it to me"
"Are you mad woman. I'm not in any relationship"
Wait. What?! Who the hell was that woman then claiming my Suraj to be her's. I kept staring at Suraj that was now sitting next to me.
"It was another one of Kamal Narayans cheap plans"
"Oh" I looked down embarrassed.
What the hell have I done I'm pretty sure I looked like a dying walrus now with my red eyes and constant hiccuping. I didn't want Suraj to know that I was falling for him. He had to live his life he needed a girl of his dreams not a girl that forced herself to fit within his dream.
"Chakor" I felt Suraj carass my tear stained face.
"I'm sorry, I'll never do such a thing in my life. You do trust me right?" His features softened.
"Yes, I do" I smiled tearfully.

*3rd PERSON P.O.V*
The tension between the two was clearly visible to even a blind man. Suraj pulled Chakor close engulfing her in a huge bear hug.
"Don't you ever go running like that again woman. You scared me to death" he mummbled.
Chakor didn't feel butterflies in her stomach instead we felt a hundred hungry Godzillas stamp their feet inside her as his hot breath fanned over. I broke a part I didn't want to get lost in dreams which I couldn't make a reality.
Suraj didn't like the hug breaking apart. He sensed something was wrong but wasn't sure what.
"Chakor let's go home" he held her wrist and pulled her towards his jeep.

*Night*
Suraj knew something was indeed serious looking at Chakor who was ignoring him like a deadly disease. He lost his sanity watching her silently walk past him pretending he was not there. He finally decided to confront his wife.
"Chakor" He called her standing merely an inch or two behind her. He stood there hoping she would reply but all he heard was the bedsheet being smoothened.
"Chakor" he called this time hugging her closer from the back snaking his arms around her waist.
"Hmm.." She replied trying to act it cool but failed as she lost herself within him.
"Why are you ignoring me" Suraj questioned innocently. Chakor who had been under hallucinations of Suraj the whole day made herself believe that he too was her imagination and decided to speak her heart out.
"Because I can't pretend anymore"
"Pretend to do what?!"
"Pretend like I don't care while I truley do. Pretend I want a divorce while all I want to do is be with you forever. Pretend to hate you while I truley do love you"
"You love me" Suraj turned her making their eyes meet. Chakor was baffled at her stupid confession.
"I'm sorry Suraj, I didn't mean to.."
"Why are you always apologizing, you're not doing anything wrong lovie. To be honest I do love you too more than you can imagine" he confessed kissing her tearing up eyes.
"And I don't like it when you cry" he said kissing her pink nose
"And you look adorable when you keep pouting" he kissed off her cute pout.
A tiny kiss turned into a passionate one they poured all they had into that one gesture that spoke a thousand words.
"I love you" they said together giggling.

I may or may not have an epilogue. It depends on the feedback 😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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1st part :
Loved it! Cute SUKOR fight!
They are just as lovely as ever!

2nd part :
Chakor imagining Suraj and her love confession makes me dreamy!
Great!👏

If u have time pls write the epilogue!😊
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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