Sukor OS. ''Free Fall''

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BreakingBlue

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Posted: 9 years ago

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This is amazing! Sad, surely, but beautifully written! 👏 I might sound contradicting, but it was an absolute delight to read this, though I must say, the ending had me like "Why?" 😭

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Radhika_r

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Posted: 9 years ago

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😭😭😭

beautifully written !!!

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautifully written Tabsi❤️ I got emotional.😭

I am expecting another romantic one from you dear.

I love your stories. Thank you.🤗

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Namita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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That was awesome and full of anguish!! Brilliant.

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shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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😭 😭
I feel like crying ...
Awesome
I liked it very much...

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I'm actually speechless.

This was so painful, so intense. Yet a beautiful piece. Your words pierced my heart, their pain, their desperation was stunning. They knew they'll have to be apart, the naive world was not just capable of handling their fused fires. But they'll be one one day.

The heaviness of their responsibilities crushed their dreams of being together, but it did not kill their ability to dream.

Phir milenge.

A prayer, a promise. A silent wish sent to the Gods above, to make the world ready for their reunion, for they will reunite, sooner or later. The world, the society destroyed their passion, but their fires will never stop burning until they are one, and if the world isn't ready for them, it should be ready to burn in their love.

Sorry, couldn't help myself LOL.

AMAZING!

-Sanu

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Tabsi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thank you for your kind words 😳 Really grateful for your encouragement and support people ❤️🤗Your appreciation means a lot to me. Rest assured that I will continue to write more. 😛

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Tabsi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I'm actually speechless.

This was so painful, so intense. Yet a beautiful piece. Your words pierced my heart, their pain, their desperation was stunning. They knew they'll have to be apart, the naive world was not just capable of handling their fused fires. But they'll be one one day.

The heaviness of their responsibilities crushed their dreams of being together, but it did not kill their ability to dream.

Phir milenge.

A prayer, a promise. A silent wish sent to the Gods above, to make the world ready for their reunion, for they will reunite, sooner or later. The world, the society destroyed their passion, but their fires will never stop burning until they are one, and if the world isn't ready for them, it should be ready to burn in their love.

Sorry, couldn't help myself LOL.

AMAZING!

-Sanu

Thanks alot Sanu 😳.. love what you've written 😊

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nikki.171

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Damn, This was so very painful and yet so beautiful. I could almost feel SuKor's pain. I am torn between demanding you to give them a happy ending or keep them hoping. hoping.. Because hope is the shining light at the end of the tunnel.

Phir Milenge.

I love how you gave a not so new track, something all of us could see happening, a completely new take. A new perspective. But with the intensity that SuKor always has. I guess this is a quality of a wonderful writer, like yourself.
Please Keep writing

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