New SuKor SS : The Replacement Lover Ch 3

i am new to the Udaan forum . I started watching Udaan recently and liked SuKor pairing a lot.

I am staring a small story on SuKor. It is based in alternate universe and not exactly based on Udaan premise. I am keeping it short. I dont even know if u guys will like it or not. Please do share ur thoughts abt it

Chapter 1 - below

Chapter 2 - 2

Chapter3- 4

Such a bold Chakor, can't believe myself! And she already loves him, so sweet! Why is he deceiving her? Bcoz he slept with her to make others jealous? Is it? This was really interesting! Update soon!

thnx for ur comments.

I will elaborate more in rest of the chapters.He is guilty because he did not plan to sleep with her to acheive his target of making his ex jealous

aww!! chakor loves suraj

u write well!! enjoyed chapter 1

pl update soon

thnx for the compliments

u can check my other FFs to see how well i Write

If Suraj would not have been riding his bike for past 5 years he would not have been able to withstand the various assault on his senses. Chakor was sitting behind him , both her legs on either side of his bike and her hands holding his waist tightly , infact one of her hands was inside his t-shirt. While Suraj was driving she was busy showering his back with small kisses. There were many instances where he wanted to stop his bike , drag Chakor to the nearest available room and take care of their needs. Suraj thanked God when he reached the nearest drugstore. However his relief was short lived when he saw his room mate with his di there.

Aditiya : Arey Suraj .. Tu yahan kya hua..

K.. k.. Kuch nahi.. Tu yahan

Aditya : Haan yaar .. My brand of cigarette is nt available at corner store .. So I took my risk here.. But my bad luck.. I saw ur didi.. Or rather she saw me.. So I lied that I have stomach upset and I am here for medicines... and ur bhanja has tagged along with me since then.. And I have actually ended up buying belly medicines..

After all he is ur namesake..

Aditya : yeah as if ur didi named her 4 yr old son after me..

Bhagya : Hey bacha... my baby bro.. What are u doing..

Before she could finish her sentence she saw a girl standing behind her brother. Co incidentally she was wearing the same suit, which Bhagya was supposed to get as gift on her birthday. Of course she knew what her gift was. In fact she had given her discreet approval for it. All she had to do was force Adi to accompany Suraj on his gift shopping. Then Adi had send her pic of their final choices and she had approved 2 of them . Adi had then convinced Suraj that those 2 suits would look very good on his sister.

Woh.. Didi... she is Chakor.. My ..

Aditya: She is Vivaan's friend.. She now hangs with us di.. Hi chakor.. What happened ... quick change of dress.. I remember u were wearing something else in the evening..

Yeah.. Wo.. My dress got torn.. It is is so embarrassing..

Actually her dress got torn because of me.. So I gave her Di's dress

Bhangya : Good job bacha.. I am so proud of u.. Hi Chakor.. I am Bhagya.. Suraj's sister..

Hi Di..i am Chakor.. I am a new member in their gang I guess

Aditya : Waise what are both of u doing in pharmacy store...

Suraj saw this a case of Murphy's law. Everything was going wrong. He just culd not tell anyone what the hell was he doing here. He looked at Chakor pleading her to save him in this situation.

Actually I wanted to buy some stuff..

Both Bhagya and Chakor were at the counter at the same time. And both were uncomfortable. Chakor could not understand why was Suraj's Di uncomfortable . After much deliberation Chakor blurted out the first thing that came to her mind.

Sanitary napkins...

Shopkeeper: just a sec mam..

Bhagya: Pregnancy test kit..

Chakor almost dropped her bag from her hands. Shouldn't she be buying that too. She looked at Bhangya.

Congrates Di.. I did not know..

Bhagya: No one knows.. I am nt yet sure.. Can u keep my secrets..

Sure Di..

Bhagya: waise what were u doing Suraj and Adi's house... forget it I am sorry.. I should not have asked.. Ofcourse u guys are friends .. So nothing wrong in visiting each other's house..

Suraj could see that both Chakor and Di were very comfortable with each other. He was close to his sister and she knew about his previous heartbreak too. Incidentally she was still close to his ex and knew about her current boyfriend Vivaan. But after seeing how close she was with Chakor now, he was sure that she will kill him if she came to know about his sin.

All the sane thought flew away from his mind when he saw Imli getting down from Vivaan's car. The green monster started raising his head again when he saw Chakor running to hug Vivaan.

Hey Vivaan.. Yahan kaise..

Vivaan : Hey my girl.. What a pleasant surprise.. Tum yahan kaise..

I am with Suraj... and Aditya and Bhagya Di..

Vivaan : Arey yaar a new resturant has come up .. So we were thinking of trying it.. But I guess ek wrong turn ho gaya.. N then I saw u guys standing here..

Hi Imli..

Imli: Hi Chakor..

Vivaan sighed again. No matter how much ever he tried he was not able to break the ice between Imli and Chakor , his present serious girlfriend and the other his childhood friend whom he briefly dated for few DAYS.. Yes days.. Before both of them realised that it was super awkward. Imli was from a small town who had different outlook on the life. He was pretty sure that Imli and her grp of friends treated Chakor like a spoilt brat thrust on their life because of him.

Vivaan : Hi Suraj , Hi Aditya.. Hi Di.. I am Vivaan.. I don't think we have met before but I have heard a lot about you from Imli.

After a small chit chat.. Vivaan suggested that all of them have dinner together. Suraj quickly searched if that resturant had a pharmacy store near it so that he can buy the ipills. But was interrupted by everyone discussing the logistical travel plan.

Bhagya : I have my scooty..

No Di .. Don't take scooty in this cond..

Imli : Why cant Di take her own scooty.. She has been driving it all her life..

Chakor looked at Bhagya and prayed that she gets her point . Suraj looked at both of them . It had not even been 10 min that they have met and both of them had already shared a secret excluding him completely.

Ok.. I can take Di and jr aditya with me on Bike..

Vivaan : yes Chakor can take the scooty..

NO.. I mean she has hurt her legs.. Cant u see she is slightly limping

Imli: How do u know..

Vivaan : Ok Ok.. I will take di and kiddo in my car .. Adi and Chakor can come in bike..

I will drop her .. She came here with me and I will keep her with me..

Suraj could feel everyone's eye on him especially Imli's, but he did not care. He felt so cheap after using Chakor like that he could do anything now to soothe his guilt.

Aditya: u guys are all dressed up.. Look at me.. I am looking like an idiot.. Suraj atleast give me ur jacket.. My t-shirt is 100 yrs old..

No..

Imli: Come on Adi .. U look good

Haan Aditya ji u r looking good..

Suraj snickered. Adi tujhe pehli baar kisi ne ji bulaya hai... ja tera janam safal ho gaya... u can die in peace.

Chakor slightly slapped Suraj, Arey.. Suraj don't be mean.. Give ur jacket to him..

Yaar tum bhi na..Suraj took off his jacket. His action did not go un-noticed by everyone.

Take care of it.. Ek daag bhi dikha na..

Forget daag Aditya ji .. Humlog ispe poora bowl gira denge.. Itna colourful ho jayega ki .

Aditya : Daag ... no no.. safaai dhoondte rah jaoge..

Bhagya looked at Suraj now. She expected some fireworks from him since both Imli and Vivaan were here and he had hopes of getting imli back. But Suraj was trying his best to ignore Imli and was concentrating on the new girl. Even Imli was a bit stressed around Suraj. Was Suraj doing this to make Imli jealous and Chakor looked like a genuine girl to her. But Suraj was behaving differently now.This was his fav jacket.. Brought by his first salary. He was quiet possessive about it. Then she saw Suraj joining Chakor and Aditya in their laugh.

Bhagya: Waise Adi tumhara pet toh theek hai na?

Both Chakor and Suraj giggled..yes Suraj giggled.. Bhagya was sure now that pigs can fly..