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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: princess2791
so lovely do beautiful. excellent os. love their unconditional love for each other. their heart to heart talk and their sweet sincere confession. love whole os so much. waiting for next.

Thank you so much!😊

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Radhika_r

@Radhika_r

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

loved this OS aaru!!

especially the line where she said he is not seeing those blossoms alone😳. and also

the scene where he asks for her apology was beautifully written .

waiting for something like this to happen in the show

but looks like it is going to be a long wait. 😭

Edited by Radhika_r - 9 years ago

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Radhika_r
loved this OS aaru!!
especially the line where she said he is not seeing those blossoms alone😳. and also

the scene where he asks for her apology was beautifully written .

waiting for something like this to happen in the show

but looks like it is going to be a long wait. 😭

Thank you, Radhika!

I've had that scene in mind (him kissing the tattoo) ever since I started the SS.

At least they made some progress on the show, so maybe it won't be that long now...well, one can hope!

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Radhika_r

@Radhika_r

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Thank you, Radhika!

I've had that scene in mind (him kissing the tattoo) ever since I started the SS.

At least they made some progress on the show, so maybe it won't be that long now...well, one can hope!

yess! loved that scene where he kisses her tattoo. it was so beautiful!!

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ipkrr

@ipkrr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Aradhana - wow! Loved it...Really enjoyed reading this especially with the current horrible track. I've never read fan fictions before Udaan ... and this is exactly what I wanted to eventually see happen. It took me for a brief spell to Sukor paradise and for that Thanks!

I especially loved Suraj kissing the tatoo and also your not too subtle digs at Vivaan. I detest Vivaan's character. Keep writing! With the CVs butchering their own story...it's great to read your writing for a good dose of Sukor!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ipkrr
Aradhana - wow! Loved it...Really enjoyed reading this especially with the current horrible track. I've never read fan fictions before Udaan ... and this is exactly what I wanted to eventually see happen. It took me for a brief spell to Sukor paradise and for that Thanks!
I especially loved Suraj kissing the tatoo and also your not too subtle digs at Vivaan. I detest Vivaan's character. Keep writing! With the CVs butchering their own story...it's great to read your writing for a good dose of Sukor!

Thank you, Priya 🤗

I love writing a dumber Vivaan and a bitchier Imli 😆 I hated him too when he kept blaming Chakor, but now Imli is at the top of my "To Kill" list 😆😆

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ipkrr

@ipkrr

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Aradhana - I forgot to mention this - but the Tejaswini part intrigued me. Is it your take that TJ loves KN over Suraj? I've always wondered if it eventually came to choosing between them who would she choose!

The best part of your writing for me is the inclusion and characterisation of Udaan cast. I love the way you incorporate and highlight the quirks and personalities of the cast, seamlessly into your story.

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ipkrr
Aradhana - I forgot to mention this - but the Tejaswini part intrigued me. Is it your take that TJ loves KN over Suraj? I've always wondered if it eventually came to choosing between them who would she choose!
The best part of your writing for me is the inclusion and characterisation of Udaan cast. I love the way you incorporate and highlight the quirks and personalities of the cast, seamlessly into your story.

Well, I actually drew from the AU in my SS in which I intended to dig deeper into Suraj's childhood and his relationship with his parents.

They've never given Tej much to do, so I really have zero idea where her loyalties lie. Same goes for Ranjana, actually. They keep tampering with the protags so much, the supporting characters are obviously even more inconsistent .😆

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! The fics end up becoming pretty generic if you don't include more characters, I feel. I'd like to try my hand at writing a more genuine Imli and Vivaan someday, because I liked them both as kids and I know I've butchered them mercilessly in this series just for kicks 😆.