Suffering from poor Story line ?

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VikramDhaka

@VikramDhaka

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Tumhari Paakhi suppose to end 28^thMarch, however due to high TRP ratings and popular demands of viewers it got extension , which as a fan of this serial I highly appreciates.

Besides Iqbal Khanand Shraddha Aryas charming personality and On screens amazing chemistry another USP of this show is refreshing story line based on partly Bengali classic novel and Rajasthani folk story presenting them in today's modern context . Which distinguish Tumhari Paaki from other show.

However In my opinion , newly extended story plot demonstrate lack of creativity instead of producing fresh story tracts , for example In Singapore episode I didn't get it even suppose Paakhi win the cross cultural competition and have to sign 18 years contact and work for them why in the same time it is not possible for her to spend quality time with her loving husband Anshuman and son Ayan.

18 years work contact doesn't mean Paakhi will become some kind of slave girl and have to work 24/7 365 days of year without any break ! In real life Cultural performer perform certain time of the year and then they can have their free time , I just mention one loophole they have plenty of such kind of error .

Now from AAj tak news we get to know that in the upcoming episode they are bringing Anshuman double they look exactly same same no mustache or beard even attire and hari styles looks same !
seems like in Singapore we have triangle love affairs dilemma Rohan - Paakhi- Anshuman now next we will get Anshuman- Paakhi- Anshuman triangle ! 😕

My request to writer , please don't sell us old wine with new bottle , bringing new story tracts don't kill this good show with bad story

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ALISHA SHIRODKAR

@PRINCESS_ALISHA

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Posted: 11 years ago

I think creatives can come up with good storylines to keep audience hook to the show.

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HopeAndBelieve

@HopeAndBelieve

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Personally, I completely agree. We were pulled in by the amazing story and characters which the CVs had given us. But, lately that force that made us addicts to the show is slowly fading for me. I always saw the story as something fresh, new, something original. Everything made sense.

With recent tracks, I think we have begun to see a whole lot of bloopers and the sense of reality/realism fade away. While the story is suffering, it's far better than most shows, but it's not something we really expected from the CVs after the story they had placed in front of us for the first 6 months.

I actually don't feel that the extension was a bad thing, because I had faith in CVs that they'll continue to bring us amazing story telling. I still haven't lost that faith in them. They still have a lot of time to bring us good tracks and a solid storyline, but it's really in their hands on how they want to go about doing it.

And yah.. now the latest track with Anshuman's lookalike brother.. come on.. I thought we were expecting completely different looks and character, but they just showed it as the same. Kya kar rahe ho yar... 😕

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berrysweet

@berrysweet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

In agreement here.

I did not like the idea of an extension. I thot it would be nice to follow an Indian serial with a 100 episodes, If that really had happened... it would have been SUCH a change. I cant understand story lines that stretch to a 1000 episodes. These shows that stretch and stretch just loose their flavour.

Now with the entry of a look alike brother who is not a twin,,,,, something is wrong!

I watch it for the leads. i love them . Girish is also adorable!

ps Do you think that they will pair the look alike brother with Tanya? If they do, it would be a tasteless disaster. Hope not.

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Lady Zaib

@LadyZaib

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VikramDhaka

Tumhari Paakhi suppose to end 28^thMarch, however due to high TRP ratings and popular demands of viewers it got extension , which as a fan of this serial I highly appreciates.

Besides Iqbal Khanand Shraddha Aryas charming personality and On screens amazing chemistry another USP of this show is refreshing story line based on partly Bengali classic novel and Rajasthani folk story presenting them in today's modern context . Which distinguish Tumhari Paaki from other show.

However In my opinion , newly extended story plot demonstrate lack of creativity instead of producing fresh story tracts , for example In Singapore episode I didn't get it even suppose Paakhi win the cross cultural competition and have to sign 18 years contact and work for them why in the same time it is not possible for her to spend quality time with her loving husband Anshuman and son Ayan.

18 years work contact doesn't mean Paakhi will become some kind of slave girl and have to work 24/7 365 days of year without any break ! In real life Cultural performer perform certain time of the year and then they can have their free time , I just mention one loophole they have plenty of such kind of error .

Now from AAj tak news we get to know that in the upcoming episode they are bringing Anshuman double they look exactly same same no mustache or beard even attire and hari styles looks same !
seems like in Singapore we have triangle love affairs dilemma Rohan - Paakhi- Anshuman now next we will get Anshuman- Paakhi- Anshuman triangle ! 😕

My request to writer , please don't sell us old wine with new bottle , bringing new story tracts don't kill this good show with bad story

u are assuming on the new character so lets wait and watch and see how it folds😆😉

Edited by LadyZaib - 11 years ago

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nikita

@nikitaloveu

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

even i m not liking the concept of double role

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HopeAndBelieve

@HopeAndBelieve

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: berrysweet
In agreement here.
I did not like the idea of an extension. I thot it would be nice to follow an Indian serial with a 100 episodes, If that really had happened... it would have been SUCH a change. I cant understand story lines that stretch to a 1000 episodes. These shows that stretch and stretch just loose their flavour.

Now with the entry of a look alike brother who is not a twin,,,,, something is wrong!

I watch it for the leads. i love them . Girish is also adorable!

ps Do you think that they will pair the look alike brother with Tanya? If they do, it would be a tasteless disaster. Hope not.

I don't see the brother staying in the story for long, it would be just bad and destroy the story completely. The most logical option would be to end his character after the track.. for example killing off his character, or him going away. If they leave the double role in, we'll be left scratching our heads with bloopers.

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Lady Zaib

@LadyZaib

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

new character seems to a total contrast to anshuman https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=10154323050240106 as revealed by SBS and it answers your look question

so lets wait and see i always find as soon as a new track is introduced we all get on poor CVS case..i am waiting to see what this is going to bring cause so far TP CVs have gone all against my views 😆

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anky_1205

@anky_1205

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

I agree with you. The pace of the story has slowed down now. Somehow I am also not having a good feeling about anshumans look alike. They were not twins, so how can they show a look alike brother, that too younger than anshuman.

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neerjashingla

@Neerjaa

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

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Should come out something new concept to take the story forward . Its Rana who can create disaster for Anshuman , just was thinking that when Paakhi was leaving the house after media fiasco , anshuman runs after her to stop and Rana calls him and give papers to sign and Anshuman signs without looking at the contents as he was in hurry . Rana is shrewd person and can go to any lengths ,yes Tanya might be unaware of all this . As some one said ,should keep the essence of the story and to continue with show should not bring some crap .

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