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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratika89



Thank you, Will do it for sure, I know even I have been waiting for some good FF's but no one in particular was coming out.
I see so low activity in this forum. I want to read more and more, I want to see them more and more.
but apart from promos, we don't get much in Sbb or Sbs too.

first of all the update was very beautiful. i could see anshuman hide and seek clearly.. yah the forum.has very low activity hope ur stories and our comments will make a difference..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very less people comment here...22 views and almost 10 comments
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Second day : I won't let you!

"Anshuman" she breathed upset. Anshuman stood life less. The silence galore. He turned around to see her back. " I know, why are you here..but am not coming to you, not NOW!" she was cold cut.
" but you will, you have taught me not to stop trying." he calmed her fighting mind and heart where her mind was not ready to go but her heart felt happy to see him again.

He turned back to door. " Pakhi, I know I have done wrong, but I will never go wrong in letting you hurt because of me and I am adamant, I will see to it." confidence in his views, he made her week.
She now knows, he is not going back without her, if not NOW, then WILL.

All set up got over for the shoot, she manage to reach back to her house and then to her job. She was dropping her eyes here and there with her work to make sure, he is not around.
For 2 hours, she was working fine, showing people what they were in Qutub Minar for.
Suddenly, a new group of people appeared in front of her to learn the history around. Instead only listening to her, they were making excuses to click pictures with her, she was confused why they want to be clicked with her? One of them asked, " Mam, can I have a pic with you?" she replied " certainly!" after clicking , She asked the person " Why do you want it sir?" Man said " because you won't click with him.", confusing her they all rushed away,

A few minutes later a group of children arrived, all things went same, she was still confused, this time kids were kissing her too. She questioned them and got the reply " Because you won't let him."
Later on, when it was around 5, youngsters arrived and after learning history from their beautiful guide, they were greeting her with flowers. Same questioned was asked and the answer was "Because you won't let him to."
She was sure, it is him who will not be allowed for anything.
While she was returning back, on a street, lost in thoughts, she found herself being accompanied by him, walking reverse, a step further. We were near, that was it felt like but " you won't accept anything from me, but how will you stop me looking at you?" he said.

" how will you stop me loving you? how will you stop me walking with you? how will you stop me...?

Being frustrated for not answering him back..she hurt him saying " how will you stop me not forgiving you.?"
Anshuman standstill for a moment, she passed by.
It was not expected from her. She can not be so harsh to anyone that totally means she is hurt deep, Anshuman understood. He continued buzzing around her. He was walking beside her, he doesn't want her to be alone, even if she was angry with him.
After a while he speaks " Pakhi, I..." didn't knw what to say and then she speeds herself. " Walking faster won't make you futher away from me" He rushes with her.
"Pakhi, please, be slow, don't hurt yourself" he request, but to no vail, she walks fast, as much as she can. Anshuman rushes and holds hers arm and turns her around, with sudden stop, Pakhi falls and and drags Anshuman too. He holds her tight and falls before her.
"Pakhi, you alright..?" concerned Anshuman asks her,
"Leave me Anshuman, please leave.." she cries and frees herself from him. She walked away as quick as possible crying, not to be hold by him again.
Anshuman in deep pain for her doesn't realize that he was hurt badly. To manage to save her, he fells on his back and hurt himself with a pointy stone in the middle of back. When blood flowing down, he could feel the itchiness around and come to know, how badly he was hurt that now he couldn't move himself much.
This small stone has went inside much enough to paralyze his portion around, he couldn't move himself forward nor backwards, he tilted owards side and tried to get up. he started batted breathing, he needed more oxygen, his breathing went low, somehow.
He stopped a taxi and asked to be taken to hospital nearby.
He was injected tetnus, he lay on his stomach and was operated, he didn't realize what a small stone could do. Doctors asked him to take admission for tonight in hospital. He was asked to call someone he knows but he said he's tourist here and was here for some work. Doctor advised him, not to pressurize himself, though the wound is small but it's deep, deep enough that if not taken care properly, it could lead to much bigger damage.

He went to his Hotel with proper care requested to Hotel staff, they brought him to his room from hospital, but he needed rest. It was 9 PM, his phone rang. It was Aayan, he had to talk to him, if he won't, Aayan would feel something strange. He was in pain, although he took two pain killers but since the wound is new, the pain would be much.
Hearing his father's heavy voice, Aayan could make out, something is very wrong, his mother also called and didn't talk much, now Dad. he cut the call so quick.
"But Dad was there to bare all this then why he sounds upset or..or..or much in pain" thinks Aayan. He got the idea that something is definitely wrong with him.
Aayan called back Pakhi and explained everything, at first she was reluctant to know about him but she listened and asked him about his father's stay. She wanted to go right at that moment but her mind stopped her and she waited for the night to pass.
There Anshuman, with pain killers, went to sleep.

Next morning, at 9, he woke up, excited to see his Pakhi again, didn't remember he was hurt, unless his moves in excitement gave him extreme pain that he couldn't tolerate. he roll down from his bed and hurt himself again, he laid on ground on his back, hitting himself on ground to control his pain. It started bleeding again.
He heard a Knock, there was someone on his door, he needs to get up.
In much pain, he gets up and reaches the door to open. He slides it open, without looking who it could be he turned back to hold something to support him stand and then make way to the bed.
As the door opened, she saw his T-shirt filled with blood, she panics and rush to hold him from falling.


Edited by ratika89 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ah ha..!! that is something surprising.. superb and totally unexpected. twist and turn make the ff more fun... hope pakhi take care of anshu and make him alright soon.. thanks for updating..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkjali

ah ha..!! that is something surprising.. superb and totally unexpected. twist and turn make the ff more fun... hope pakhi take care of anshu and make him alright soon.. thanks for updating..

Hi, Thanks for your comment

Can you please help me in sending messages for my FF, since am new and I don't know many people around.

I mean look at the rank this week it went down straight to 21 from 14.

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