FF: In Delhi! Part 3 update complete

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In Delhi, arrived half an hour ago, in search of her, just for her. Whatever I have done, I should be punished but she is punishing herself too. I have lost her and she too has lost herself, just for me. I, Anshuman Rathore, big business man but small by heart and Pakhi, my wife, my life. This is just for her,NOW EVERYTHING IS JUST FOR HER.

I came to know where she is staying, through the photographer I hired. And now am here to supervise everything myself because the model who is working for her is my WIFE.

I will meet her soon. VERY SOON!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely yes anshuman is on the look out for his sweetheart. hope he succeed
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First day in Delhi, in search of her.

I have not seen her for so long now, She has become my weakness for everything. I need to see her quick. I think, I should call Ms. Deepika and arrange meeting with her, thinks Anshuman roaming around in his room in hotel, getting impatient.

"I should call her" dialing her number, his mind drags him towards the thought of Pakhi rejecting to be model for him, once she gets to know that it's his project.
"What am I suppose to do? She doesn't want to see my face, she doesn't want to talk." all scenerio appeared in front of him of not accepting his appologies.
"Why is she not confronting with me? she has to talk, she has to shout at me, she has to hit me..Aahh!" each and every thought just erks him to core. His impatience taking a tole now, he needs to hear ANSHUMAN from her.
"Ok..ok, calm down Anshuman, this time, you need to handle it nice. She will be very delicate to situations now." calming himself down, he manage to call Deepika and asked her to meet her in CP.
In CP, at United Coffee House, "I am in now, where is the Photographer?" thinks Anshuman. He was about to order when deepika shouts in front of her " HI sir!" seeing her over excited greetings he asked her to sit.
While sitting down in front of him "Sir, I always wanted to meet you, have heard so much about you and sir you are so handsome, I wish you could have met me before my fianc..." Interupts Anshuman.
" I am married." Anshuman shatters her sudden built dream.
" Sir, but you don't look like." out by her.
"Uhh..! Ok, Lets get to work Ms.Deepika" said Anshuman.
" you are very clear of my project and it's demands and I must say, you seem to chose the right model for it. The opportunity that I have given is not easy to gain Ms. Deepika. I expect the best from you." Anshuman realizes that she is in confidence now and for anything she won't leave the model.
The model, his PAKHI, he feels so relaxed.
"Tomorrow morning, sharp 6 at Chandani chowk, I want you to capture the old and our demand for new skin for today's clothing." Anshuman ordered.
"yes, sure sir!" she agreed. "and yes, you will get all clothes ready in the morning". before leaving Anshuman informed her.
"but sir her size..?" she questioned
" I know already." he says and leaves before she ask him anything else.

"HOW..?" surprised Deepika.
Deepika went back to her new rented house where she now has to deal Pakhi di. " Oh lord" little nervous and scared about how she will convince Pakhi for modelling.
In house, around 7 Pm.
"What?" surprised Pakhi shouted out loud on Deepika, as she told her everything. and nervous Deepika requested " Di, please, this is going to be my last project and if I fail , you know what my fiance will think and if you refuse, I will not get another model by tomorrow."
" BUT..?"
" No, but di, even Mr. Rathore liked you as his project's model." she slips out his name and noticed by Pakhi.
" Who..?" Surprised Pakhi asked, deviating from the modelling thought, who is this Mr. Rathore who suddenly generated her interest in her face. She felt this could be Anshuman and asked Deepika " who is this Mr. Rathore..?"

"ohho, Pakhi, leave who so ever this Rathore be, the important thing is that apart from being a guide, now you can spend time being a model too and then.. you know you can have less of your family, your past in your mind."
Anuja aunty who appeared when Deepika was convincing her for modelling. Pakhi who was eager to know this rathore was no more in such thought, now the concern was, how will she model.
"I can't" Pakhi says.
"Pakhi you can" confident aunty says , Deepika too nods in agreement. She requested Pakhi again and at last she agreed. All goes to sleep.

Pakhi still in thoughts of Mr.Rathore, who could this man be..? finally goes to sleep, realizing that this mystry man will be revealed tomorrow but for last, she prays of this man not being ANSHUMAN.
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Hey, thanks to both of you, sorry am not good with all thanks givings..😆
Please feel free to comment and critic.

HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. I love it, keep continuing. :)
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Originally posted by: HopeAndBelieve

Aww.. I love it, keep continuing. :)


Thank you so much. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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we are enjoying every bit of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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absolutely fantastic and superb.. thanks for writing a ff on the current track, do continue soon..
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Second day: Moment to Break or Make

If not more, there is always one thing that everyone regret in their life. The reason why we learn history is to learn from their mistakes but the worst thing in life is that you will only learn with your own mistakes. I did the same mistake as my father did, probably much worse than what he did. This morning I have to face her, no matter how hard it will be, I just can't let her go, thinks Anshuman while getting ready for the shoot at 5 in morning.

Chandani Chowk reminds him of Chand and then everything related to chand and Rohini...What am I suppose to do while I reach there, Anshuman driving towards his destinations clears his throat and speaks " This is for the first time in my life, I feel pure love, I should not loose it." confused with innerself of how he will meet her, he was getting strength too as he was reaching closer to the destination.." Huh..! O lord, help me now! I have already appologised..." with bated breath he looks out of window and sees small gallies around, they were so small that if a man has to pass, he would walk sideways instead of walking straight. Anshuman got the idea while passing through. he stopped his car and went out to look what is there after these small gallies, once he crossed he saw very beautiful surrounding of old built houses, there doors, hanging wires, but in mornings, he was amazed by the beauty of light that was covering the whole area and they way, old colors are reflecting soft, pretty, lights that could make anyone fall in love. He understood why no major changes never happen in this area, " I guess this is the reason everyone from anywhere in India wants to come to Chandani Chowk even though there are already old great monuments."
"lets have a shoot here, NOW!" he smiles.

He called everyone there and in next half hour everything was at that place, "I need to be out of this place before she comes" after supervising all arrangements, he was taking a leave when Deepika stopped him " sir, I need you to be here, It's a request, I need you to approve things quickly as light will not be same after some time and then we won't be able to set up rigs here, it will be crowded."
Anshuman agrees, but he excused himself saying he will be back in half an hour, he can't tell her the reason, but he will come only after Pakhi arrives here and starts the shoot.
While he was moving out from small galli(pathways), he listen her shout Deepika and he moved ahead faster, in thoughts, praying that she should not see him, not now. As he came out, Pakhi bend down around to check her shoes and he was successfully sneaked out from there, keeping his glance and feeling relaxed that finally SHE IS THERE, RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM. He escaped behind the vanity that he arranged just for her.

Seeing her, I was in the air, I felt light inside, as if there is nothing left to achieve but there was everything! "I should beside her all the time, this is how I will be relaxed" an excited Anshuman surge through air. He sees her getting through the Galli, He smiles, she is so small that she doesn't need to walk sideways, but still she has to. He followed her maniac enough to be not known in less crowd.
Pakhi moving through the wall thinks, how can this Rathore guy choose to walk in here through this path. She wishes that her clothes doesn't tangle in between anywhere because they are expensive and Feels relaxed once she is out to another side. She was curious and nervous too if that Mr.Rathore is Anshuman.
She manage to walk upto ledge as the orders from Deeepika came out for her, She was at height now, can see everyone's face clearly. Before Deepika shouted for Smile, she checked around few crew member, she didn't find anyone to be similar to the Boss and she didn't find Anshuman too. She felt fine to let the shoot go.
Clicks were going on with different positions, attitude and look as per Deepika's decision. But there was still something missing. Pakhi could feel it, she can sense something strange happening to her, she was not sad but not happy either, she was nervous for rest of the thing apart from being model. When clicks were done in about 45 minutes, Deepika looked around to find her boss, She was aware he is not there but he promised to be back in half an hour. She asked Pakhi to come down. Deepika asked few crew members if they seen their boss. One of the crew member replied of him being seen the other side of gali.
There Anshuman standing, waiting if from any movements he could see a small glimpse of Pakhi.
While Pakhi heard about him standing the other side, She requested to call for him quickly and approve the clicks, so that she can go to her work. She was waiting. Anshuman was called upon twice, thrice. he would make excuses to not come there. Finally Pakhi got upset and requested to let her go.
Deepika agreed and Pakhi again went out through the passage to change in her vanity, she felt starnage, she felt as if somebody is sneaking out, She can't really make out who could that be but this was making her uncomfortable. She quickly moved on to her vanity, closes the door and turned around to see someone standing right there. His eyes were only visible, as this man has covered himself all.
She could feel his eyes, she can see the wait, the pain, the LOVE.
On the other side, Anshuman has covered himself fully, he wanted her to feel him.
There was silence held inside, he was happy, she was perplexed. They could see each other for eternity, The longing for life was there. They remained discreet. Anshuman Suddenly jolted and with out any interaction, Anshuman moved towards the door, he crosses her, she didn't move at all. She was melting, she went weak on her knees, as he crossed her, a moment later She shouted ANSHUMAN!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkjali

absolutely fantastic and superb.. thanks for writing a ff on the current track, do continue soon..


Thank you, Will do it for sure, I know even I have been waiting for some good FF's but no one in particular was coming out.
I see so low activity in this forum. I want to read more and more, I want to see them more and more.
but apart from promos, we don't get much in Sbb or Sbs too.

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