ANKHI SS : HEARTBREAK........pt2(pg3)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi guys , I have been watching TP for the past two weeks and want to write a story on them
I hope I don't bore you people
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Where is it? Write it want to read.
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Originally posted by: binimoti

Where is it? Write it want to read.

I am a little busy now
will post part one within an hour
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PART 1

" anshu , ab tum kya karoge ? Rana sahib bohut gusse mein hai " lavanya asked
" I don't know di , mein bhi yahi soch raha hoon , uss pakhi ko harana mere liye itna mushkil hoga yeh maine mai socha , I had no idea yeh itna smart niklegi , kitna plan banaya maine , sara plan chaupat kar diya , dinner party manage kiya , mere saath tennis competition bhi jeet liya , ayaan par bhi jaadu kar diya , ab mein iss ladki ko yahaan se kaise bhagaaun " anshumaan said
" seriously , humne usse yahaan se bhagaane mein kitne koshish kiye , fir bhi har baar usne hume haraya , tumhaare kehne par maine usse apne birthday mein bulakar insult bhi kiya , tumne uss competition ke third page gayab kiya jis par rules and regulations the fir bhi she managed to win , ab mein tak gayi hoon aur mujhe samaj mein nai aa raha ki aise kya karoon jisse woh apne aap yahaan se chale jaaye " lavanya said
she was shocked hearing the brother-sister conversation
she never expected him to cheat her
he very well knew that lavanya insulted her countless times and still he continued to lie to her
he cheated her and she felt betrayed
she immediately left from there
" pakhi tum kahaan jaa rahi ho ? kya hua ?" girish asked
" kuch nai jijusa , mein ghar jaa rahi hoon , meri tabyat kuch teek nai hai " pakhi said and turned to leave
" tho akeli kyun jaa rahi ho ? anshuman ko bula lo , ruko mein bulata hoon " girish said
" nai jijusa , mein akeli chali jaaungi , aap chinta mat kijiye " she said and smiled
" tum jaaogi kaise ? pakhi ...sab teek tho hai ?" girish asked
" aap please chinta mat kijiye jijusa , mein chali jaaungi , thank you " she said and left from there all alone
girish went inside his house
" ab koi solid plan karna padega anshu , woh ladki jitna socha tha usse bhi kai guna zyada chalaak nikli " lavanya said
" I don't think uski koi zaroorat padegi " girish interrupted
" kya matlab ?" lavanya asked
" pakhi yahaan se nikal gayi " girish said
" kya matlab nikal gayi ?" anshuman asked
" I don't know , woh andhar aayi thi tumse milne aur fir dus minute mein bahar aa gayi aur fir akeli yahaan se chali gayi " girish said
" what do you mean by chali gayi ?" anshuman asked
" anshu..." girish said
" aapne usse jaane kyun diya ? woh bhi akele ? itne raat ko , di mein aapse baad mein baat karta hoon " anshuman said
" anshu kahin aise tho nai ki pakhi ne humaari baatein sunn li ?" lavanya asked
" I hope not di " anshuman said
" kyun nai ? " girish asked
" woh ladki tumpar wiswaas karti hai , par tumne kya kiya , tumne hamesha usse cheat kiya " girish said
" girish , lagta hai uss pakhi ka jadoo tumpar bhi chal gaya , girish uske wajeh se humaara , anshuman ka kitna nuksaan hua hai " lavanya said
" zindagi kabhi nuksaan ya faide se nai chalta lavanya , pakhi yahaan aayi thi iss barose se ki anshu uska khayal rakhega , lekin anshu ne kya kiya , dekho lavanya kya tumhe nai lagta jo humne pakhi ke saath kiya woh galat hai " girish asked
" iss sab batein hum baadme bhi kar sakte hain , pakhi itne raat ko yahaan se akeli chali gayi hai , sabse zyaada important baat yeh hai ki mujhe abhi uske paas jaana hai , agar usne humaari baat sunli tho I don't know woh kaise react karegi , jo bhi ho I have to go to her " anshuman said
" lekin agar anshu aise baat hai , agar pakhi ne humaari baat sunli , tho its good , woh apne aap yahaan se chali jaayegi , humaara saara problem solved " lavanya said
" di jab tak woh yahaan hai , woh meri responsibility hai , so whatever it maybe right now I need to go to pakhi " anshuman said and ran and got into his car
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anshuman was thinking about girish's words while driving the car
" jiju sahi hain , maine paakhi ke saath bohut kuch galat kiya , usse dokha diya aur usne meri har baat par yakeen kiya , mere har joot ko sach maana , ayaan uske saath kitna kush hai , mein yeh kyun nai samj paaya , I just hope mein paakhi se sorry keh sakun " anshuman said while driving
he reached home and went running inside
" sir ,congragulations " mahaji said
" congragulations ? kis liye ?" anshuman asked
" sir finally aapne paakhi ko yahaan se bhaga diya " mahaji said
" what ?" anshuman asked getting shocked
" haan sir , woh yahaan aayi thi , ayaan se milkar apne bags pack kiya aur mujhe ghar ke chaviyan dekar chali gayi " mahaji said
" what do you mean chali gayi ? aapne usse jaane kyun diya ? woh bhi itne raat ko , aap mere aane tak usse yahaan rok kar nai rakh sakti? " anshuman asked getting worried
" kya hua ?" lavanya asked coming in
" di paakhi yahaan se chali gayi " anshuman said
" that's good , so finally tumne uss ladki ko yahaan se bhaga diya " Mr Rana said coming inside
" good ... I am happy " Mr Rana continued
" I am sorry sir , par mein aapki beti se ab shaadi nai karoonga " anshuman said
" what ? tum kya kehna chahte ho anshuman ?" Mr Rana asked
" wahi jo aap sunn rahe hain , mein aapki beti se shaadi nai karoonga , mein paakhi ko wapas le aunga " anshuman decided
" sochlo anshuman " Mr Rana threatened
" soch liya hai sir , mein paakhi se maafi maangunga , usse ehsaas dilaaunga ki mein badal gaya hoon aur uski kadar karta hoon , usse kahoonga ki woh mujhe ek last chance de , ki dobara uska dil kabhi nai dukhaunga " anshuman said
" sir ... I am sorry " anshuman said and Rana sahib left from there immediately
" di mujhe paakhi ko dhoondna hoga , aap ayaan ka khayaal rakhiyega , mein usse lekar aata hoon " anshuman said and began walking to the door
" anshu ..." lavanya called
" haan di " anshuman said
" usse lekar aana " lavanya said and anshuman nodded his head
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" aapne mera dil kyun thoda ? woh bhi aise ? aap mujhe bevkoof banate rahe aur mein banti gayi , maine kabhi socha bhi nai tha ki aap mera dil yun thodoge , kitna wishwaas tha mera aap par , kyun kiya aapne aisa ?" she asked while walking all alone
the cold breeze made her shiver
she had no idea where she was or on which way she was walking
she just kept walking
to be continued
so friends so tell me if you all like it on not
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1 - PAGE 1 PART 2 - PAGE 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful story maagati!!!!U have written it beautifully!!!!Thanks for sharing and plzz do continue it soon!!! I want this situation to happen in the story!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful plz update next part fast
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Good job! 👏
Continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was nice... plzz continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was awesome Magati. Loved your style of writing. Update soon and PM me.👏

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