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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guys its kp

sorry for posting it late

hope u guys enjoy

and thanks a lot for the comments

accept them with open heart

love kp

ENJOY..............

Disha and DK are still looking at each other and disha is surprised and DK is curiously looking at her……..

Disha- DK yeh tum…….

DK- [cuts her] disha its ok, agar tum mujhe nahi bataanaa chahtii to mai tumhe force nahi karoonga. Yeh tumhari zindagii hai aur tumhe apni privacy kaa poora haaq hai[ awwww ssoooo sweet]

Disha just looks at him

DK gets up and says that he has to make a call and he will be back soon…..

Disha tells him that its ok as she is going to their room and will wait there for him………

Disha sits on a bench in the room balcony. There is a beautiful moon in a clear sky and she just stares at it …….. she gets tears in her eyes…..still she keeps on looking at it..

Disha wonders that why is it always that she has to prove herself to the people she loves the most……why is it always that whenever she gets someone close to her, her past comes and haunts her..why r there always clouds of guilt and abandonment around her……..just then some clouds come in front of the moon and its image becomes blurry and unclear…now …when she is in love with DK, why did he ask her about her past ….for once she wanted to hide and forget about her past…leave everything and to not care……….is it that DK doesn't trust her ,… or is it that he is tired of her and is looking for a way out….questions cloud her thoughts of reasoning and she gets very disturbed……..tears roll down her eyes quietly as she sits there wondering……….she sits there for a long time and ……she feels so empty inside of her…..she fells as if her life doesn't have any disha ………she is LOST………….she goes to sleep there on the bench ……..crying and tired……..tired of all the time being misunderstood……DK comes in their room after making some calls ….he sees that she is sleeping there ……he caresses her face gently and looks at her lovingly….DK- sorry disha,,I m very sorry, i love u a lot to lose u ……..he carries the sleeping disha and and puts her on the bed….he takes off her sandels and puts blanket on her…he turns off the light and is about to go when disha says something to make him stop in his tracks………disha- [who is still sleeping and saying this in her sleep] DK , mai tumhse bohot pyaar karti honn, MAI TUMHE KABHI KHONAA NAHI CHAHTII,….dk turns around and is looking at her..he goes near her and sits next to herand……..dk- disha I love u too, iwill never let anything happen to you

He kisses her and goes to sleep next to her on the bed..

Next morning----

Disha gets up and looks around….she sees DK sitting on the bench and is about to get up when her head starts hurting really bad[ due to all the crying ]. She sits there and after some time tries to get up again ……..she and dk are trying to avoid each other all this time…….she gets off the bed and stands when she suddenly cannot hold her weight on her feet and falls on the ground…..dk tursns around and runs to her…DK- kya hua disha…..Disha- pata nahi DK, I cannot stand…DK- its of disha, I will help you..her carries her and makes her sleep on her bed and when she is lying, dk is almost on top of her and they both looks at each other..[double connection, looks like the farther they go the closer they come]………dk is still holding her in her arms when…

😉

sakina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12
👏👍🏼👍🏼 superb waiting for next part...
samy74 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13

Hye

cool keep it going😃

samy

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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
😉yeah that's true ur story is really really excellent its too good KP!!!
keshp15 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15

hey its kp

thanks guys

i was thinking why not every1 add a little bit to the story

u know

make it mor interesting

love kp

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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
kp

this is your story from the beging, so only you can make it intresting.
soooooooo ppppppppppllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz,write the next part soon

😛
I AM NOT SAYING THAT THE OTHERS IS NOT GOOD,BUT IF YOU SAID THAT IN THE BEGING IT WAS BETTER.YOU HAVE DID VERY WELL SO KEEP IT UPPPPP.

AND WRITE SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNN PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSS 😛 😊

WHAT SAY GUYZ, I AM RIGHT OR WRONG??????? 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17

woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kp what can i say this is just getting better and better 😃 seriously its soo godd

aww hottie carrying disha to the bed allll .........hehehe.........😉

please please please do continue your story's real good

thanks.....i really can't wait for the next bit hehehhehe.........😆😉 loll

take care

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
#18
KP

PPPPLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZ 😊
WRITE THE NEXT PART SSSOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN
👏

'WAITINGGG 4 YOUR NEXT PART 😭 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
#19

hey guys

its kp

how have u all been

hope fine

its been a long time since i wrote😳

i was so busy😭

man i m tired of all the projects form school

anyways heres the next scene😳

hope u guys like it

enjoy.....

will post the next one soon

love KP

When….

DK remembers the talk they had last night…he looks into disha's eyes and then takes her into his arms and hugs her REAL tight and closes his eyes as to forget everything that happened between them……..both of them are still hugging and disha just hugs him tight too……….

Both of them r in their own world…….after sometime, they leave each other and dk helps disha sit on the bed properly…

Dk- disha, tum yaha thodi der baitho, tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai aur mai abhi doctor ko le kar aataa hoo.

Disha tells him ok and dk calls up a doctor…..

Doctor – [to dk] aap ko aap ki patni ka khayal rakhna chahoye….unhki tabiyat thodi weak hai, [ dk looks really worried] lekin koigabhraane ki baat nahi hai. Bas unhki diet ka khayal rakhiye, [ then dk remembers that disha hasn't had any food since yesterday morning ]

The doctor leaves and dk to disha

Dk- tum apna khayal kyun nahi rakhti , gets a worried look on his face, agar tumhe kuch serious ho jaataa to. I want u to forget everything and just take care of yourself

Disha- dk I m fine, nothing can happen to me, its just because I didn't eat anything since yesterday

Dk- I know that, now u will have to eat whatever I give you, and u have to eat it no matter what,

Disha- lekin dk- \

Dk- cuts her off , mai kuch nahi sunna chahtaa, u have to eat

He taks some food and feeds it to her, they both have a moment together and they keep on lookin at each other

smile........

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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
hey can you please translatate

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