poetry for the Ds - link added for music

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Posted: 20 years ago
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LATE NIGHT POETRY

part 1, the seduction

softly, swiftly, you come to me

a sweet whispering breeze

playing with the tendrils of my hair

which I have loosened just for you

I hear a beckoning call

deep within my soul

as your presence glides across my flesh

curling into my being

I savor every moment

cherish every breath

lingering in the night air

in the intoxication that is you

come to me, come to me!

that I might live in the light of your eyes

that I might die in the warmth of your arms

knowing, at last, that I was not alone!

part 2, the rude awakening

but all too quickly, you have gone

a fleeting shadow in the night

so I must tidy myself up

for the demands of the world

again you have wandered away from me

leaving your voice to echo inside

a sorrowful chill creeps in

to all the places you used to be

life drags on

as I try to dull my senses

and hurry through my days

in the aching pain of your absense

a thought, an idea, a yearning dream

the wind has carried aloft my heart

and left me standing alone

in the cold, relentless march of time

-DKaddict, who's really annoyed at not being able to find the right color to fit the mood!!! 😡

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey


Cool Djaddict your posts are always cool and really funny they alwasy put a smile on my face

cheers

samy😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Sweet melody, imaginations running wild ......................

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey, that's excellent.

'as I try to dull my senses' - are you trying to get him to hit the bottle again!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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LOL that really cool dk addict !!!! 😃 Cool poems really go with the story of td

Love Asian Princess/ Dk ki Dewanni 😃😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😃. Becky don't worry your name is already registered in the person's mind once, after the tete-a -teta you had on that day. 😉 and you bet since someone's visiting the forums this will not be missed out that's for sure.

But anyways greaaaat job. 👏

😆 Lata

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Now from a humorous and witty writer comes a most amazing poetry,

wow, excellent work,wonderful array of thoughts.You have penned your thoughts very beautifully.

Now some ideas for the makers of TD--They should put a scene in TD where dk should be seen with a paper and pen and actually penning a few lines and humming it. OR DK standing in front of mirror and DK to DK

come to me, come to me!

that I might live in the light of your eyes

that I might die in the warmth of your arms

knowing, at last, that I was not alone!

come to me, come to me!

((((OH! love just come back to me!)))))

cheers

Mink

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Posted: 20 years ago
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DKAddict,
Your poetry is really good.You are so talented.... I wish i could write something like that for my DK. 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Lata, dear!!!! Just what are you implying, here???? That I wrote this for some purpose other than the show?!?!?!?!? 😕 😉 😃

Anyhow, thanks, everyone, for the nice comments. I always did enjoy writing poetry. Its certainly encouraging when persons other than myself actually like it! 😆

-DKaddict

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi dkaddict,

Awesome poetry...I really enjoyed it...Hope more is coming....

Cheers...
Diksha...

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