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Wow bluefish!!!!!!!

I'm just lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we have so many creative and imaginative writers on this Forum!!

I wish all those producers and directors would give a look at these stories!!

I swear they're even better then the actual serials.

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can't wait to read some more from you and Diksha!!!

*khushi*

PART:6

Disha feels very bad and disappointed with DK's behaviour...

She for a second loses hope and wonders if anything good can ever happen to her....She remembers various incidents from the beginning and has tears in her eyes...But she regains and reboots herself and says to herself that she cant lose hope at this point of time...She has to get her life back on tracks no matter what....She remembers DK and how he became such a hero for so many people in the ashram and also how he changed his life for better...she thinks no matter what she cant lose such a jewel again ever....

Here Vedant keeps asking Inder what's the problem why are you tensed...inder says rano wants to say that only to D...

D comes there and asks them why they called her what's the problem...then they tell her abt Rano and they all rush to rano and Inder's suite...They get surprised seeing all the decorations done there...Rano comes and hugs D very happily...Then Rano tells that she wanted to give the good news to her first and then only to everybody else..that's why she has asked Inder also not to tell anybody...Vedant comes and wishes Inder and Rano and D is also happy for them and wishes them and pulls rano's leg a little bit as she is going to be a mom...They all wanted to celebrate...of course D is not that interested.....But she just had to oblige...
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Dk is sitting on his rocking chair and going over what happened that day between him and D and feels very bad for his behaviour with her....He thinks to himself: Disha you have always been patient with me...If only you had a little bit trust also on me...Knowing very well that I love you, you have never ever reciprocated my feelings...and you just believed in whatever Vedant had told you....Why Disha why?

He has tears in his eyes"I really miss you Disha"

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Disha,Rano,Inder and Vedant are sitting in a nice Restaurant...Vedant realizes that Disha is not all that happy....

He knows the reason also....In fact he also saw DK that day in the restaurant and knew that D came back to again meet him...All three of them purposefully did not go to the party so that D can be with DK and they can sort out their misunderstandings....Even the next day they did not pick up her call so that she will ask DK to pick her up...

Now he is thinking hard as to how to get these two to come out of their shells...He very well knows that DK is the hard nut to crack and very egoistic...

Disha had to go to the rest room and in the meanwhile she has a call on her cell phone...that's from DK...Looking at that Vedant suddenly gets an idea...and he discusses that with Inder and Rano...So they are all set to fool Disha and send her to DK's house somehow...

Disha comes out and Inder in a complaining voice says, D you did not tell us that DK is here only and you met him today morning?

D:surprised...how did you know Inder?Actually I wanted to tell you all...

I:Just now there was a call from DK and he left a message with us saying that he wanted to speak to you urgently,.....he really sounded disturbed...

D:what?I think I must go and meet him right now...wonder how mummyji must be...

V:uff Dish...Lets finish the party no? you can go first thing tomorw morning....

D: gets annoyed...Vedant..please I need to go...

And she rushes to DK's house....

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End of part 6

cheers...
Diksha....

Hey Bluefish,

That was brilliant!!! I just loved every letter of it....I would just love it if it really happens and there is every chance for it to actually happen in TD....Cant wait to read more from you...You seem to be gifted with natural flair for writing....Good Job !!!

Cheers....
Diksha....

Wow diksha waiting for more...rano pregnant coooooool

Thanks a lot for ur appreciation!!!

bluefish

Hi diksha & Blue fish (veda),

Looks like there is a story writing compition going on.We the people r having a ball. OMG you both r wonderful writers.Lets wait & see whose story is actually close to the actual happenings of TD.

Both the stories r excellentoooooooooooo😊

Girls keep writing

Mink😆

thanks guys for ur support..

Mink..im surprised u got my name right..i think out of 50 posts i wrote my actual name on only one..and u caught that? ur too good

Yep my name is Vedaswarupa...thats " form of the vedas " and in short everyone calls me Veda.

More coming up from Veda...

Hi sweety,

actually I just loved that name Veda,when I read it & hence kept it in my memory. Vedaswarupa is a beautiful name.

Keep writing those wonderful updates & you'll have a huge fan follwing here in IF.

Mink😃

OMG!!!! I was out of the house for awhile, and when I come back- such a sweet surprise waiting for me........ These lovely TD stories!!! Oh, DK looks so lovable as I imagine him in your stories!!! Do keep going, you guys! I'm lovin' it! 😃 😃 😃

-DKaddict

Here goes scene 2....please read the first scene for continuety..

Disha is praying to Bappa in the morning ..asking him to take care of her and to help her. She also is praying for mummyji to get better..she keeps some prasad ..and thinks..i have offer mummyji the dhoop/aarti and give her some prasad...so she takes the prasad plate to maaji and makes her eat some.

She comes back to her room thinking" i have always wanted good to happen for everyone..as Baba tought me..only for DK I had wanted bad things to happen..I wanted to destroy him...now i dont feel that way since I know about him..but for some months i have wanted bad for him..and i have to do penance for it...bappa forgive me..."...

On her way back she looks in the hall..DK is lying on the couch with eyes closed..she looks at him with shine is her eyes..then her sight falls on the bandage ...she goes near him..she thinks of offering him the prasad..but again is scared.." DK does not like these things..i dont know if i should offer it to him or no..." Mildly she calls out..DK..

He doesnt open his eyes...she calls again..DK? When he doesnt reply she says dushyant? no reply again.." She thinks he must be tired.." she is about to go away and let him rest when her eyes fall on the bandaged wound again...

in a moment of spontaineous affection..she bends down and touches the bandaged spot...carefully..very slowly she turns to make sure he is not awake.. and then plants a sweet little kiss in the wound..gently..with utmost care and affection..but with a lot of sincereity and prays it to heal..with sweet music playing in the background..

she thinks " why does he get so angry with me that he does all this? "and then making sure that he has not got up..gets up..takes her prasad plate to leave..but the plate slips and falls down on the floor and DK gets up...like a lion gets up from his sleep to find the deer next to him.

Dk ..with no emotion showing on has face..says Disha?

Now disha is in a biiiig mix..she thinks " og God..I hope he didnt see me carresing his hand.i thought he was asleep...was he awake? oh god what should i do now? "..meanwhile DK is still looking at her ..Disha? And Disha in her confused, embarrased state starts rambling.".I..I bought some prasad.."..her expressions are nervous..and she is fiddling with her saree and being coy...Dk asks " prasad..........? Disha is scared now if DK will get angry for bringing him prasad...She starts rambling again" I had bought some prasad for maaji after pooja..." and then shuts up..not knowing what to say...they both look at each other and there is a moment of silence..Disha 's face is more and more confused and hassled while DK realizes the prasad is for him.

.unpredictable man that he is..he silently opens his hand for it
Disha is surprised..she places some prasad in his hand ...she wants to go away fast..her confusion is clear on her face
Dk is amused by her behavior ..he asks her " what happened why are you looking so lost..? what are u thinking ?" ..and disha says " nothing DK..i have some work I have to go and complete it " Dk says " disha i want to thank you..for taking care of the wound..thanks" ..

Disha is more embarrased.." its okay..take care of yourself" and rushes off....wondering still" oh god hope he was sleeping..what did I do...why did i have to go and kiss his hand..whats wrong with me?what kind of feelings are these? "

Later in the day lying on her bed..disha thinks again of the time she bent down and kissed his hand...and wonders what made her do that...

thats all for now....how do u guys like it?

cheers

Bluefish(Veda)

WOW that waz gr8! thanx bluefish