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Posted: 20 years ago
#51

diksha can u fill us in with next part can't wait?

sorry for pushing to so hard..

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Posted: 20 years ago
#52

hi Diksha .

my id schandra6@yahoo.com

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Posted: 20 years ago
#53

hey diksha

its kp

my email is

kesh153@hotmil.com

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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

Hi Diksha,

Love your story so far & I'm sure u'll do a good job in the future."Kitab likho" u'll do very good.

mink😃

Edited by mink - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
Hey Diksha
wow what can i say since everbody has mostly said everything that needs to be said regarding your predictions. you are right... i knew it that reading too many romance novels can come in handy one day. i am craving more and more.. can't wait for the next chapter. (like a romance novel i can't seem to put it down).
love love love it...
Edited by Bhavi - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
Part:5

Disha and Sumitra come back from the ashram and find DK already sitting there in the living room...

Disha finds DK even more lovable now...She just keeps staring at him....DK finds it a little amusing and feels a little uncomfortable...

Sumitra is totally florred by our D....She has so many good things to say about her to DK while D is continuing with staring her man...

Sumitra goes in to get some rest as she has already had a long day...Before going she tells DK to make sure that he personally goes to drop off D as her car had some trouble...

DK doesnt know what to do....He asks D if his mom knows who she was...Disha says 'yes...why she should not be knowing these things is it?'

DK:enough Disha why are you talking like this?I did not tell mom anything because I dont want her to ask me what I cannot do for her...

D: What is it that you are talking about?

DK:what else?Our marriage...

D:oh...Our CONTRACT marriage?

DK looks at her hurt....

D:I did not tell her about all that....dont worry...

D:btw DK, mummyji is feeling so lonely and also she is sad that you are still not married...why dont you get married?

DK:He screams DISHA...."I'm talking to you in a nice way doesnt mean that you can talk to me whatever you want....Please dont interfere in my life...just leave me alone"

D is hurt but again thinks to herself..."how can I not interfere in your life...your life is my life dushyant...Now I will see how you will not accept me..."

DK:Disha its getting late I think you should leave now....people will be getting worried for you...

D:why DK you are not worried for me?

DK:no Disha I dont have any right to think about you...I'm out of your life now...Arent you glad about that?

D:DK, why did you go away from me without even telling me?You did not even think for once what would happen to me...You did not even think what people would think of me...why DK, why?

DK: Disha there is no point in talking about the past now....

D:no...you have to tell me this...I cannot even die peacefully if I did not get clarified on this...

DK is worried listening to her saying this and atonce runs to her keeps his hand on her mouth gesturing she should not be saying these inauspicious things...

D immediately holds his hand and starts crying....

DK doesnt know what to say....He lifts his arm trying to comfort her by putting it around her shoulder, but just then D's cell starts ringing....(GRRRRRRRR😡)

DK takes of his hand and D takes the call...

D: ha Vedant...tell me...No I will be a little late today...I think you should carry on....What?oh...ok then I will come immediately...Just wait for me...

DK first feels so sad and then annoyed and then Jealous...a mixture of all kinds of emotions...He just keeps quite...

D:DK I will have to go now...But we will talk about this tomorw...I just have to talk to you DK...

DK is angry by now, in a very curt tone he says...:Disha...I have nothing to talk to you and you please dont waste your time on me....I will call the driver and he will drop you off at your place....

D is disappointed that DK is sending his driver to drop her off...But she does not know what to do...so she helplesly leaves...
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This is for you all who are waiting to read the next part...

enjoy guys...

Cheers....
Diksha.....


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Posted: 20 years ago
#57

Diksha!!!!!!!!!!!!! your gonna drive me crazy!!!!!

What happens next?

Oh please do tell!!!

*khushi*

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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
WAITING FOR FURTHER UPDATES IN FAST FORWARD...THEY WERE REALLY NICE DIKSHA...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59

hey diksha

its kp

again loved ur part 5

eagrly waiting for part 6😃

hanks for entertaining us

love kp

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi..love ur story writing diksha..ur toooooooo good.

Here is my version of the story...but i dont plan for the 3 year leap..my story starts off where DK is calling out for Disha since his mom Sumitra is calling out for her..but disha is not at home...he thinks she is with vedant ..

DK keeps trying to call disha and vedant on cell phones but doesnt get any response..DK like a enraged lion keeps pacing his house thinking "what has happened to Disha...why is she going with Vedant everytime inspite of knowing i don't like it ......

Disha enters the house looking lost and kind of troubled...there is a hint or tears in her eyes but she is not crying...just then DK sees her.

DK with his ace full of anger and disbelief " DISHA.. Mummy is asking for you from such a long time...and you were not there..how can you do this Disha.." . He doesnt see that she herself is looking worried about something..and goes on " Its my mistake i place so much trust in you..mummyi is also getting attached to you and asking for you..and you are dont bother at all? It took along time for me to put her to sleep . from today you dont come near her again. I dont want her to get used to you. "

Disha " what are you saying DK..I checked on her before i went and i has to go in a hurry...actually I .."

before she finished she is interrupted by DK.hurt and saddened.." dont tell me anything Disha..enough with your excuses...you still went with Vedant and you forget all about Mummy..." saying so he leaves her and goes to his room..

Disha hearing all this feels very pained..." why does DK assume everything...I haven't even met Vedant since morning...why is this happening to me ..i have to explain to DK.." so saying determinedly walks to his room..While she knocks on his door apprehensively there is hesitation in her .warily she knocks:

DK opens the door..with a hateful and angry expression" now what..what have you come for..."

Disha follows him inside.." dushyant..please listen to me..its not the way as you think it is.."

DK in his anger.." Disha please..." he has his back to her..and with his hand motions her to go away..he doensnt see the lamp next to him..and his hand hits the lamp..the lamp falls with a big crash...

he turns around to see..there is this big mess of glass and fibre on the floor between him and disha..Disha looks upto him and sees that there is a big stream of blood running fomr his elbow..

disha : " DK...blood..oh my god why did you do this.." so saying comes near him and holds his arm ..DK still in his anger goes farther from her " Disha no need for your concerns...this small wound is nothing..i have faced much bigger painsin life...i dont need your help " . Disha looking very concerned and worried about his pain " what is this Dushyant so much blood is flowing wait let me clean it"..

DK in his anger pushes her away.." No Disha " ...Disha meanwhile is very angry and determinedly shouts " shut up dushyant...who the hell do you think you are? u think you can order me around? "..Dk looks at her dumbfounded..he wasnt expecting her anger...Disha with a firm hold on his hand ..and fierce expression on her face " i will not go anywhere..untill i clean this wound...just shut up and sit here " so saying she pushes him to sit on the bed..."

Dk just sits looking at her with " what has gotten into her " expression..Disha fiddels around in the drawers to get some cotton and bandages ( now dont ask me who kept it there..the producers of course )and comes and sits near him with a very sad but purposeful look on her face..Silently she starts cleaning the wound..removing the blood from the 3/4/5 inch long cut...Her expression changes from anger to tenderness..she is cleaning ever so slightly hoping she is not hurting him..in her stance and pose..she looks angelic to DK..who is just staring at her and awed by her loving gesture...

Suddenly he winces as the wound hurts him..and she looks up at him..afraid that she hurt him she asks gently..as if she were asking a child" is it paining? " he looks at her...his face showing no traces of the anger which was there minutes before..full of tenderness and confusion..he just shakes his head to say no. Disha realizing that he is in pain lowers her head..and starts applying the cleaning lotion gently..before she realizes her face is wet with silent tears..she doent realize it untill a drop falls on DK's hand that she is cleaning..there is agony in her eyes as she thinks " why dushyant ..whya re u doing this to yourself..your anger overpowers you..and u dont allow me to heal you.."

DK meanwhile is stunned even more to see the beautiful tears running done her cheeks as her face reflects the misery he is feeling..in that mone t he feels that she is the most beautiful woman on earth..and it honors him to realize that she is crying for him..for his pain...

She looks up at him...and there passes a most tender moment between them so many questions in her eyes..and so much pain in his...he realizes that noone except for his mom ever did something like this for him,..and she wants to continue holding his wounded hand and comforting him...and in silence he raises one finger from his hand and wipes off a tear from her face...

The contact breaks thier reverie..thier dreamworld and Disha bluhses to see she is still holding his hand tightly..suddenly her face gets clouded ..and the mask she wears on her face to hide her pain from the world is back in place...curtly she lets go of his hand and gets up..

" DK...I had something to talk to you about when I came home today...but you started assuming things and shouting before anything else...you talk about loving me..but you dont even know the meaning of friendship" ..DK keeps looking at her..still shocked by the experience of her comforting him...Disha continues in sad and dissppointed tone " I have some problems for which I needed someone to talk too..I was coming for your help..I thought at least you will support me..but ..anyway "

with an expression of indifference..she says " now i dont want to talk to you about anything..nor do i want to give you any explanation..as you say i will stay out of your way"

So saying she goes out of his room without looking at him...on the way to her room she is thinking " I had gone home because Aai had called me ..the things happening in bhonsle house are going out of control ..I wish Baba was there to look after the house...I cant bear Azuba's condition...I thought I will talk to dushyant ...and request him to come and see Azuba someday since Azuba is very worried about me since my marriage to DK...if he sees us together he will feel better...but anyway reality will surface once contract is over..."

In her room she thinks with tears " but DK..our relation comes to square one always...now i will not ask for ur help..Disha has solved problems on her own and will do so"

Meanwhile DK in his room is staring after she leaves..his hand on his wound where she was cleaning and comforting him..remembering her face..and feeling " so was Disha not with Vedant? what was she wanting to talk to me about? hope she is not in any problem....I have to find out"

So thinking..he looks at the wound on his hand and thinks "Disha you have comforted and put medicine on the wound on my hand..but what about the wound on my heart? "His expression profound and lonely..there is flashing of love and pain in his eyes..and then ..

..man se man ka kya rishta hain...

tumne yeh samjhaya.............."

okay guys..thattttttttttttttttttttt was bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbiggggggg...hope i didnt bore you guys..let me know if i did...and tell me how u liked it.frankly guys this is my first attempt at writing after college..so i would appreciate ur frank responses....

bluefish

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