FF: A Modern Fairytale THE END PART B@ Pg: 24 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Another awesome update, Thank you so much Tiana for bringing out the characters so well. I really loved Shreya fighting for her self respect. Though the custom hurts both of them still Bhushan supporting her in whatever means he can, loving his attitue, .. felt bad for both!..
Thank God we arent living such a period (slave/king),
Independence is every human right & pride too!

Loved Ajay when he asked the staff call by his name. Sanjana also having same confusions what Ajay had, its lovely u discuss both of their confusions! They both understand something attracts them towards each other, looking forward how they understand their unbreakable bond & love for them.

Lastly i loved the quote in the picture, u r such a wonderful writer Many Many Thanks for this different unique story! I am really enjoying a lot reading it.. Thanks for making me happy!!!

Lines i loved:

"But you meant that. Now open your ears and listen. I may be a slave but I do not belong to anyone. Not to you nor to him and nor to any fellow who tries to keep his hand on me." --- Brave Shreya. the anger i am just this Shreya so much


"Did I do the right thing by bringing her here as my slave? Oh if only she understands that I am doing all this for her"

She must be looking for the painter who painted her beautifully and also painted the place in her dreams and not get attracted to this guy.

Ajay smiled as he heard her reply. He was going in the right direction. And he had taken the first step.


Edited by smileeee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx sweety for Finally updating and Thankew for the PM ok the update was too short but nevermind Hope u would Give a longgg Update Next Time...I loved the AjNa part awww...Cute they r...Waiting to see How Ayush's Story unfolds...
Continue Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak9

I loved it... Specially Ajay sanjana part😳

When sanjanas heart start beating fast... Mine also started thak thak😉
And ajays smile made me blush☺️



Thank u dear for ur beautiful ff...



And thank you dear for reading😊 Your comments mean a lot😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smileee

Another awesome update, Thank you so much Tiana for bringing out the characters so well. I really loved Shreya fighting for her self respect. Though the custom hurts both of them still Bhushan supporting her in whatever means he can, loving his attitue, .. felt bad for both!..

Thank God we arent living such a period (slave/king),
Independence is every human right & pride too!

Loved Ajay when he asked the staff call by his name. Sanjana also having same confusions what Ajay had, its lovely u discuss both of their confusions! They both understand something attracts them towards each other, looking forward how they understand their unbreakable bond & love for them.

Lastly i loved the quote in the picture, u r such a wonderful writer Many Many Thanks for this different unique story! I am really enjoying a lot reading it.. Thanks for making me happy!!!

Lines i loved:

"But you meant that. Now open your ears and listen. I may be a slave but I do not belong to anyone. Not to you nor to him and nor to any fellow who tries to keep his hand on me." --- Brave Shreya. the anger i am just this Shreya so much


"Did I do the right thing by bringing her here as my slave? Oh if only she understands that I am doing all this for her"

She must be looking for the painter who painted her beautifully and also painted the place in her dreams and not get attracted to this guy.

Ajay smiled as he heard her reply. He was going in the right direction. And he had taken the first step.



Shanthi🤗Your comments always cheer me up😳

@Bold: So true😊

This is for being the sweet person you are and giving me a looong comment😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you😊 glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha

Thanx sweety for Finally updating and Thankew for the PM ok the update was too short but nevermind Hope u would Give a longgg Update Next Time...I loved the AjNa part awww...Cute they r...Waiting to see How Ayush's Story unfolds...

Continue Soon...


Nisha😊

I will try to update tomorrow😊pakka😊 This time it will be long😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow they seated next together
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

wow they seated next together


😃Yes😊 Love is about to start😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello all. Thank you for your lovely comments. I'll update the full chapter on Monday. Here is a sneak peek into the next chapter. Hope you like it.

Previous Chapter

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Sneak-Peek into Chapter 6

"Chachi, do you know who is in my class?"

"Of course not. How can I?"

"The Prince Ajay"

"The P...P...rince?"

"Yes, and he is so kind and very well mannered."

"You l..l..ike him?"

"Yes, of course. Who can hate a person like Prince Ajay? All the girls in our class are crazy about him. And you know what... He chose Kalpi and me as his lunch partners. Isn't that sweet of him?"

"Sanjana, you are NOT to talk to him again."

"Huh?"

"I don't want you to talk to him or hear anything about him from your mouth."

"But why, Chachi? He seems to be a good boy."

"I don't care. Please do as I say. Now run along, child, I have some work to do."

...

Any idea why Merryweather is behaving like this?


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Edited by ...Tiana... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok nice Sneak Peak.No Idea why she is behaving like this.Is'nt She Ajay's God mother too...Plsss end d Suspense soon am now more Curious and U know I dnt lyk Waiting...lolzzz Love u sweets...And Happy Weekend

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