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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey praggu babe!!!! Once again sorry ims hi nhi mil rha tha....bit read all 3 parts and it is too awesome...... Again with a different shade😘😘😘😘😘


Kallu seems to ber messy here😅😅😅

Her conversation with madhuri😂😂😂

She delete the email😅😅

So Malhar is the new CEO...... 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Kallu has a thought😁😁😁 ye whi nikla jisla use dar tha👏👏

Kallu ka crush Malhar ji💓💓💓

Kallu ne acha sunaya deepak ko... Bada aya humare Malhar ji ki insult krne👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Awww kalma doing lunch together 💓💓💓


This was fantastic praggu..... Had and always loved your stories darling😍😍😍😘😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Hey praggu babe!!!! Once again sorry ims hi nhi mil rha tha....bit read all 3 parts and it is too awesome...... Again with a different shade😘😘😘😘😘


Kallu seems to ber messy here😅😅😅

Her conversation with madhuri😂😂😂

She delete the email😅😅

So Malhar is the new CEO...... 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Kallu has a thought😁😁😁 ye whi nikla jisla use dar tha👏👏

Kallu ka crush Malhar ji💓💓💓

Kallu ne acha sunaya deepak ko... Bada aya humare Malhar ji ki insult krne👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Awww kalma doing lunch together 💓💓💓


This was fantastic praggu..... Had and always loved your stories darling😍😍😍😘😘😘


Thank you so much Praku 💖💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter 4


Malhar's POV 2021

He couldn't believe he saw her again. And she ignored him. Well, Kallu has always been a pro at ignoring someone. One could be friends with her for years and if she's hurt, she could ignore him like he doesn't even exist. But ten years ago, it was Malhar who was hurt and it was Kallu who had hurt him. Had she forgotten it already? Kallu...no... Kalyani... Malhar knew he was not in a position to call her Kallu now and he was not Malharji anymore. They had lost that right over each other long ago. Malhar never searched her up on social media...He was not so immature to engage in petty revenge over something she did years ago...but still he couldn't help wondering if she regretted what she did ten years ago. Malhar looked at his reflection in the mirror... You'll get spooked by your own reflection in the mirror. You're so ugly, Malharji...Kalyani's words echoed in Malhar's mind. It was not the first time anyone had said these words to him, but the person who said them made it the most hurtful memory in his life.

"I hope you don't get spooked by my looks now, Kalyani," Malhar muttered. He got a comment on his social media that he should try being an actor and not waste his good looks. Nautanki saala! Kalyani would say the same if she got to read that article. Hypocrites kahin ke!(Bloody Hypocrites!) Money buys everything! Attractiveness, friends, adoration...seeing the same people who bullied you, kicked you to the ground pleading for an entry level job reminding you of the good old days in your DMs is gratifying, but if success is the Midas' touch which makes even piles of coal gold, it's also fleeting. Malhar knew that there are ten thousands of others who were much more talented than him and as hardworking who will replace him the moment he blinked. Malhar replaced someone at the top and will be replaced by another, one day or the other. So what's the use of flaunting and rubbing his success in everyone's face? And to be honest, Kallu...sorry Kalyani (Malhar knew he must forget this habit of calling her Kallu if they had to work at the same place)...so Kalyani was always much more talented and deserving than him. Malhar wondered how she ended up in a dead-end project like that...



Kalyani's POV 2021

"Kalyani Deshmukh is a loser," every Facebook post, get together, family wedding reminded Kalyani this. She swallowed anti-depressants and gulped water. All of her friends have either gotten on-site opportunities, high-level posts in PSUs, pursuing PHD whereas even after working so hard in a challenging project for four long years, all she got was a dead-end project so far from her hometown as the reward. Instead of hunting for a better job or preparing for an exam, she gave it all to this company and this was how...

"Kalyani," Nishigandha ma'am calls me.

Kalyani went towards her. Nishigandha threw the pages on Kalyani's face.

"What the hell were you thinking when you submitted this project report?" She shouted. Everyone was looking at them.

"W... what's wrong, ma'am?" Kalyani was sweating even in the air-conditioned block.

"You haven't even changed the date, and the data you submitted is one week old," Nishigandha had lost it.

First thing, Kalyani was not the designated person to prepare the project report. It was the responsibility of the team lead. But he had to leave early due to some family issue. And as usual, Kalyani's other three colleagues were vacationing at Goa, resulting in all the work piled on her. Kalyani had been hasty in submitting the report and should've cross-checked the dates but the overload of work was messing up with her mind.

"You should be ashamed of yourself, Kalyanii," Nishigandha ended on this perfectly encouraging note. Actually, this was perfectly true. She should be, and Kalyani was ashamed of herself.

Ok. So the time to fulfil ger daily crying quota had come and when Kalyani looked upwards, she saw Malhar looking at her tear-stained cheeks. He wanted to say something but at least had the decency to look away and continue his discussion with their floor head. Kalyani dragged herself to her cubicle and broke down.


Malhar POV

The rebuke, pressure tactics, all are part of corporate culture but still Malhar didn't like Kalyani being treated like that. She wandered like a headless chicken whenever he saw her due to the workload. He knew she could be careless, but she was loyal to a fault whoever she committed to, be it a job or a person. Malhar wanted to help her, actually, not help her, he just wanted to be with her. But he knew it was better to stay away from someone, rather than first helping them, making them so emotionally connected and then hurting them cruelly. He promised himself he would never do with Kalyani what she did with him.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kya yaar poor kalyani bechari she is suffering so much ...and I am liking Malhar character much he is a grown up adult she hurted him badly 🥺🥺 he said right sometime the same bitter words from others didn't hurt them so much ...but they hurted badly by the one whom you loved so much or care for them so much ..

Kalyani is going through depression period ..she is a talented girl but her talent got waste in this company ..pata nahi kon kisski maaddat karega but i hope Malhar kalyani ki maaddat kar paayein ...😭

Thanks for updating quickly pragyu ..loved all the update ☺️☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank u praggu for updating it so quick..... I think i a getting tis story now....

Startting m halki si confusion thi but ab vo bhi door ho gyi


So it was kalyani who insulted him..... This behaviour is not justified😒😒😒

After getting insulted so much from her side he don't want to avenger her😘😘😘😘

But the way kalyani was insulted by nishigandha was also kind of not justified .... But how perfectly u wrote it makes it feel it should be it was☺️☺️☺️☺️

Their pov s are written so maturely and efficiently......👏👏👏👏

Malhar didn't like the way she was insulted😍😍😍😍

He wants to be with her💓💓💓


Loved it praggu....... Keep writing 😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pragyaa I'm Totally in love with this ff. As I mentioned malhar is not a petty one to hold grudges on others for their past mistakes. He is really a mature and understanding one.

Kalyani is feeling so depressed.

I just want them to get back to their old self as friendly as before.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Kya yaar poor kalyani bechari she is suffering so much ...and I am liking Malhar character much he is a grown up adult she hurted him badly 🥺🥺 he said right sometime the same bitter words from others didn't hurt them so much ...but they hurted badly by the one whom you loved so much or care for them so much ..

Kalyani is going through depression period ..she is a talented girl but her talent got waste in this company ..pata nahi kon kisski maaddat karega but i hope Malhar kalyani ki maaddat kar paayein ...😭

Thanks for updating quickly pragyu ..loved all the update ☺️☺️


Thanks a lot Vanshu. Abhi is kahaani me aur secrets khulne baaki hain.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Thank u praggu for updating it so quick..... I think i a getting tis story now....

Startting m halki si confusion thi but ab vo bhi door ho gyi


So it was kalyani who insulted him..... This behaviour is not justified😒😒😒

After getting insulted so much from her side he don't want to avenger her😘😘😘😘

But the way kalyani was insulted by nishigandha was also kind of not justified .... But how perfectly u wrote it makes it feel it should be it was☺️☺️☺️☺️

Their pov s are written so maturely and efficiently......👏👏👏👏

Malhar didn't like the way she was insulted😍😍😍😍

He wants to be with her💓💓💓


Loved it praggu....... Keep writing 😘


Thank you so much Praku. Abhi aur bhi Raaz khulenge ki how they both have hurt each other in the past, one knowingly, one unknowingly.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Pragyaa I'm Totally in love with this ff. As I mentioned malhar is not a petty one to hold grudges on others for their past mistakes. He is really a mature and understanding one.

Kalyani is feeling so depressed.

I just want them to get back to their old self as friendly as before.


Thank you Swathi. Is baar I wanted to show mature characters with slice of life approach.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Malhar's POV


It was stupid of Malhar to think that his Kaka's transfer to a new city and his joining a new college would change anything. Everything was same and why should it change when he was the same weak, ugly loser. There was only one schoolgirl who treated him like a human. Her name was Kallu and she was so sweet that sometimes Malhar felt he was imagining her. Sometimes he wondered why would a perfect girl who's the class topper and so talented and beautiful, would be so kind towards him. But he guessed, sometimes even bad luck takes pity on losers like him.


Malhar was walking, humming a song when Atharv, Deepak and his lackeys blocked his way.


"E...exc...cuse m...me? C...can you pl...ease let me g...go? Elec... Electronics ma'am is c...c...alling m...me?" Malhar said, without raising his eyes.


"Yes, sure," Atharv said, imitating Malhar's stammer, "Bb...but o...only if y...you a...ask this n...nicely without s... stammering in t...the whole sentence."


"Excuse me? Can y...you p...please...?"


"Aww...try again, Beta."


"E...excuse..."


"You stammered in the first letter, itself, poor Malhar," Atharv chuckled.


"Excuse m...me..."


"Ex...c..cuse me."


"Excuse me? C...can..."


Malhar didn't want to cry. He didn't want to cry. But why were these tears not stopping? Atharv was not even his senior to do ragging. He was also a first-year student and yet...


"P...pl...please."


"Dear Malharji. We're preparing you for life. How would you s...s..survive if you can't even speak properly? Should I call Kallu? She helps you in everything."


"Excuse me? Can you please let me g...g...g....go?"


"Oh you just made it, bad luck. Try again."


"Ex...ex....."


....


Malhar's POV


"S...sir. I'm so sorry," Mr. Borthakur was saying.


"Mr. Borthakur," Malhar said, taking a deep breath, "If you knew there was a bug in the program code since last week, why didn't you tell your seniors?"


"It was late at night when I found out. And next day, I had taken leave for five days."


"And what was that leave for?"


"Yes, sir?"


"Mr. Borthakur, I don't have a hobby of repeating myself again and again."


"I went to a vacation with my family," he said, hanging his head low.


"So, Mr. Borthakur," Malhar said, standing with his palms on the table, "Our company lost the chance to compete for this important contract just because you were vacationing in Mars where there were no call or messaging services to inform us of the bug."


"I'm sorry, Sir."


"I don't want your sorry, Mr. Borthakur. I just want this contract. Is there any way you can give me that?"


"No Sir."


"You are f..." Just then Nishigandha Kulkarni entered my cabin. Malhar realized that he was doing the same thing with Mr. Borthakur what she did with Mansi. So what was the difference between him and Nishigandha then? Maybe he should...


Malhar closed my eyes, and signalled Nishigandha to come later. Then softly he said, "You're fired, Mr. Borthakur."


Mr. Borthakur didn't protest and simply left the room. Malhar took out his mobile and dialled a number.


"Hi, Vishal. Malhar here. Actually, I need a favor. There's an employee in my company named Mr. Biplab Borthakur. He has the experience of 20 years and he's a good employee. Um... actually I fired him due to a mistake, but he's hardworking...can you please offer him a senior position in your startup? I mean, you need knowledgeable and experienced persons. Ok, thanks a lot. Please let me know when he joins."


Finally, when Malhar ended the call, he knew he did something which both the CEO and his older self would approve.

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago

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