KalMa FF - ‘ Zindagi,Ab Tum Hi Ho ‘ Part 5A page 36 (5/26) - Page 20

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hey Nishu.

Yup I was gaayab because of my health issues. Doing better.

Mere Saarthak ji ko main bhi miss kar rahi hoon. But the problem is my work keeps me busy which was pending since long.

Thank you for loving my update. Mallu ko meri patni jaap karte karte patni mil gayi.. abhi wohi patni usko prasaad degi bhar bhar ke..😂

my pleasure maayi

take care n

get well soon🤗

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Beautiful Chapter

Sarthak kaka ne acchi class lagayi Malhar ji ki

but it was needed

Anupriya as usual so good

Moksh the cupid❤️

liked the fact that Malhar ji Moksh ko isliye Pune lekar gaye kyun ki unhe samajh mein aa gaya ki Moksh Kalyani ek dusre ke bina nahi reh sakte

loved Malhar's imagination

Pillu-Malhar conversation 😘

Malhar's idea😆

Pillu ka sahara liya

Kalyani aur uske filmon ka gyaan🤣

Pillu-Kalyani reunion😘😘😘😍😍😍😍💞

Malhar was also emotional 😭

Malhar's apology 💕💞💞💞💞😍😍😍😍😍😍

lekin accha hua Kalyani ne unhe maaf nahi kiya

shabd bahut ghayal karte hai

aur Malhar ji ne wahi kiya

Kalyani ne already clear kar diya ki wo Moksh ke liye hi wapas ja rahi hai, accha hai

accha hai usne ye soch liya ki ghar jaake wo unko acchi sabakh sikhayegi

acchi sabakh milne ke baad hi Malhar ji ko kimmat pata chalegi aur wo gussa nahi karenge

loved Malhar's changed behaviour

soft tone mein baat ki😘😘😘

Kalyani ne bhi daantke accha kiya

ab unhe pata chal gaya hai ki Kalyani aur Moksh unke life ka aham hissa hai💕

Dhaba scene❤️

Kalyani Malhar ji se impress to ho gayi lekin accha hua ki unko sabakh sikhane ke baare mein bhi socha

ab maza aayega

Moksh is very happy for his parents😍😘😘😘😘

Malhar ji's determination to manaofy unki roothi hui wifey 💕😍😍😍

precap is interesting

thanks for writing

please keep writing 👍🏼

Hey bhagu,

Thank you for loving it.🥰🤗

@ bold Malhar ko sar pe ek dande ki sakht zaroorat hai dimaag thikaane par laane ke liye.

You are absolutely right Shabd hi hai jo sab se zyaada ghaayal karte hai. Its not the bullet or sword or dagger that hurts, but its your words that hurts the most.

Abhi kallu badla legi..

mallu ke gusse ka , daant ka sab ka badla legi yeh kallu..😂🤣

N that dhaba scene was a last minute addition..😂😅

I felt like something was missing in the update so dhaba scene popped out of my brain.😅

Again thank you for loving and patiently waiting for the update .

All of yours appreciation makes my day and motivates me to work even more harder on writing the next par.🥰🤗😊

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

my pleasure maayi

take care n

get well soon🤗

Dhanyawad malhar..😂

Main thik hoon. Abhi kuch dino mein behtar ho kar wapas se forum pe halla machaungi..😂

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hey bhagu,

Thank you for loving it.🥰🤗

@ bold Malhar ko sar pe ek dande ki sakht zaroorat hai dimaag thikaane par laane ke liye.

You are absolutely right Shabd hi hai jo sab se zyaada ghaayal karte hai. Its not the bullet or sword or dagger that hurts, but its your words that hurts the most.

Abhi kallu badla legi..

mallu ke gusse ka , daant ka sab ka badla legi yeh kallu..😂🤣

N that dhaba scene was a last minute addition..😂😅

I felt like something was missing in the update so dhaba scene popped out of my brain.😅

Again thank you for loving and patiently waiting for the update .

All of yours appreciation makes my day and motivates me to work even more harder on writing the next par.🥰🤗😊

wow maza aayega

I have patience

I will wait

don't worry

you take care

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

How r u now Darshi ?

Missing u....

loved how u make malhar pay back for his deed...He need to control his anger n more his mouth...

1) He betrayed cheated from Sampada but that doesn't mean he can shower his all anger frustration on Kalyani

2) finally malhar went to meet Kalyani n make her agree to come back well obviously loved that kalyani giving him the tough time

he deserves it

waiting for more

Hi Rakhi.

I am doing well.

Miss you all so much yaar.🤗

Thank you for loving it 🥰

@ bold

1) I totally agree with this point.

Kalyani is not his punching bag to vent out all his anger.

He has to understand that She is a human too.

If sampu’s betrayal can hurt malhar then so as malhar ‘s words can hurt Kalyani too.

Kalyani is the one who healed malhar’s broken heart and broke all the chains around himself by her immense care. She has utmost respect and understanding for him,even though he was harsh with her.

2) Malhar has to do it. Because he knows that Kalyani is the anchor of his life to keep his life on the shore.

Malhar needs to have some hard time from Kalyani.

At least Kalyani deserves to take sweet revenge from him to make him understand her worth.😊

More will be there in the next part. Hope I can pull it off.😊

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hey dear thank you for your concern and well wishes. I am doing better and getting back on track.

Thank you so much for waiting patiently n I am glad that I didn’t disappoint you.

@ bold I am working on these things . Though I am not a prankster or a Shaitaan baccha my whole life , 🤦‍♀️ It’s little difficult for me to write about Kallu ke khurfati ideas .😈 but I am working on that.😂

N coming to kaka n Kalyani bond. I will definitely try to incorporate it in the next parts.😊

Isi baat pe arz kiya hai,

“Agar Kalyani ko manaane mein Malhar pada thanda..

Toh usko padega sar pe Kalyani se danda..😂🤣

Agar Malhar ne dhang se naa ki Kalyani se baat,

Toh usko pakka padegi kaka se daant Aur Kalyani ki laat..😂🤣 “

@bold : wah wah!

I will be the happiest person if you incorporate Sarthak Kalyani bond there, i just adore these two. 😊

Originally posted by: thr_830

U plz take ur time well... health is more important and time is precious too... writing isn't easy..but u do so well...and ya... that idea popped up after reading the update itself!

Thank you dear.😊

Thats true health is more important than anything. I was neglecting that part so had to suffer.🤦‍♀️

This is my first time to write anything. N writing a story was not my cup of tea. It still isn’t. 😬 (That is the reason updates are taking more time.)

But the writers on this forum and our beloved KalMa inspired me to write this one. N all the members here motivated me to write. That’s how this story begun.😊

I was thinking for the same Kalyani ignoring malhar😁. Your idea will definitely help me taking my story forward on my next update. Thank you for it.😊🤗

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

wow maza aayega

I have patience

I will wait

don't worry

you take care

Thank you dear. 🤗

Mujhe likhne n padhne mein maza aayega tabhi toh aap logo ko padhne mein aayega naah. 😊

Last part jo post kiya uske kayi scenes maine likh kar delete kiye cz maza hi nahi aa raha tha mujhe padhne mein.

Yup I am taking care of myself. See you all soon..❤️🤗

Originally posted by: asmitasb

@bold : wah wah!

I will be the happiest person if you incorporate Sarthak Kalyani bond there, i just adore these two. 😊

😊 Shukriya shukriya..😊

I love their bond too.

Saarthak is adorable. You know while writing this story I haven’t thought to include Saarthak’s character. But I would have made a huge mistake if I had done that.

Saarthak’s character is a catalyst to make KalMa understand what they feel about each other. And he is the only one whom Malhar listens to. And who can knock sense in malhar’s brain.😂

Will definitely include Saarthak n Kalyani bond in upcoming parts.😊🤗

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Thank you dear. 🤗

Mujhe likhne n padhne mein maza aayega tabhi toh aap logo ko padhne mein aayega naah. 😊

Last part jo post kiya uske kayi scenes maine likh kar delete kiye cz maza hi nahi aa raha tha mujhe padhne mein.

Yup I am taking care of myself. See you all soon..❤️🤗

ha di

you take your own time