KalMa 3S: Tum Bin Completed

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KalMa 3S: Tum Bin
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"I'm sorry hum patient ko bacha nahi sake." The doctor said and left feeling sorry for the life lost.

"Kalyani! Kalyani!!, KALYANI!!! hosh mein aao beta." Anupriya was shaking an unconscious Kalyani to bring her back to her senses.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

KalMa OS: Tum Bin

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"I'm sorry hum patient ko bacha nahi sake." The doctor said and left feeling sorry for the life lost.

"Kalyani! Kalyani!!, KALYANI!!! hosh mein aao beta." Anupriya was shaking an unconscious Kalyani to bring her back to her senses.




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This is not fare chahat...tum eaise mat maro hume. ..today 12th time I'm coming to this forum...just in the hope to see a OS on kalma...finally I was happy to see an OS but...tumne dil tod diya mera 😭😭
Plzzz when will u update the OS tell me...villan math bano plzzz
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinlora


This is not fare chahat...tum eaise mat maro hume. ..today 12th time I'm coming to this forum...just in the hope to see a OS on kalma...finally I was happy to see an OS but...tumne dil tod diya mera 😭😭
Plzzz when will u update the OS tell me...villan math bano plzzz

Same is the case with me! 🥱😕
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res... Promo is interesting😉 but why kill kull😭
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Originally posted by: vinlora


This is not fare chahat...tum eaise mat maro hume. ..today 12th time I'm coming to this forum...just in the hope to see a OS on kalma...finally I was happy to see an OS but...tumne dil tod diya mera 😭😭
Plzzz when will u update the OS tell me...villan math bano plzzz


I will update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Same is the case with me! 🥱😕


Hum sab panchi ek daal ke
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Originally posted by: elsanna

Res... Promo is interesting😉 but why kill kull😭


Updating soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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KalMa TS: Tum Bin


Part 1


Kalyani removed a novel from her shoulder bag and settled on Malhar's rocking chair. She who was a fan of action movies and comics had been feeling the urge to try reading romantic novels. A couple of days back she visited a neighborhood book store. "Kaunsi kitaab chahiye Kalyani beta? asked the book store owner. Everyone in around four neighboring areas knew Kalyani as she was Aao saheb's grand daughter and Malhar's wife. "Kaka, main khud dhoondh loongi. Every book she picked had the gist of he story on the back cover. After going through many books she finally found one. Unlike other books it did not have the summary of the story and this is what appealed to her. It was going to be a sad love story, the most painful story she would ever read. The story of love found and lost.

Kalyani had no access to Malhar's rocking chair. He was the only one who could sit on it. The law breaker that she was often sat on the chair behind his back. At first she just wanted to go against Atom Bomb's rule but then she liked sitting on it. It had his warmth, his fragrance. Whenever she would feel lonely she would sit on it, it made her feel as if he was hugging her. She opened he book and began reading it. "Kalyani, tujhe bhi kya soojhi ye book choose karne ki. Life mein kabhi newspaper mein aane wali 2 pages ki romantic story nahi padhi tune aur ab ye 450 pages ki bhari bharkham book utha li. She opened the book and began reading it. How romantic it was, the first meeting of the main characters of the story.

The 18 year old college student was backing her car and suddenly a jeep blocked her way. The car and the jeep banged slightly. Angrily she got off the car and knocked on the driver's side window. "What? What are you doing? If you don't know how to drive then why don't you stay at home. He rolled down the window and she continued to yell at him. "Do you know how much damage have you done? Who will pay for the damages? She went on but he didn't hear a word she said. Violins played in his head just like in the movie Main Hoon Na'. He was captivated by her beauty. It was love at first fight for him. No one had ever dared to speak to him in this way. "Madam, do you have any idea who he is? She heard a voice from the passenger side. "What has it got to do with me? Why would I care? "Madam he is the town's ACP. "What should I do if he is the town's ACP or DCP? Who will pay for the damages done to my car? "Madam it is your fault. You took a reverse before checking in the rear view mirror. "WHAT!!! she shouted. "Di, it is your fault. Shut up and let's leave before this news reaches home. She looked at her sister and realized it was her fault. She quietly went back to the car. The hero drove away and she went on hers.'

Kalyani placed a book mark after reading a few pages. "Hai, pehli mulaqaat itni haseen hai toh poori kahani kitni romantic hogi. Little did she know about the twist and turns coming ahead in the novel and in her own life. Moksh had been with Aparna for some time. Kalyani wanted to go and get him. "Kalyani, Kalyani, chalo mere saath. Vivek, her uncle crossed over to her and Malhar's side of the house. "Vivek chacha, aap yahaan kya kar rahen hain? Malhar ji ko pata chala toh bahut naraaz honge. Aap please yahan se jaaiye. Vivek caught hold of her wrist and began dragging her out of the house. "Kalyani, behes mat karo. Chalo jaldi humein hospital jaana hai. "Hosptial? Chacha hospital kyun? she asked as Vivek pushed her inside the car. "Chacha, bataiye na kya hua hai? Hum hospital kyun ja rahe hain? Kya hua hai? Aaai? Aai ko toh kuch nahi hua na? Kalyani panicked. "Kalyani, please mujhe drive karne do. Tum panic karogi toh main bhi panic karoonga. Hosptial chalo sab pata chal jaayega. Vivek broke all traffic rules and completed the 30 minuet journey from Ahilya Nivas to the hospital in half the time.

Vivek and Kalyani arrived at the emergency ward of the local hospital. He did not see any familiar faces and made a call. "Haan, main use lekar aaya hoon. Kahan hain aap log? OT 1? Theek hain hum abhi aate hain. "Aai? Aai! Kalyani was relieved when she saw Anupriya all well. "Aai tu theek hai na? Tu yahan hospital mein kyun hai? Dekhna Vivek chacha mujhe yahan lekar aaye hain aur kuch bata bhi nahi rahe. Aai kya hua hai? Tu theek hai toh... She could not rather did not want to complete her sentence. Anupriya pulled her in a tight hug. "Malhar... Tu fikar mat kar Kalyani sab thek ho jaayega. Malhar ko... Kalyani tried to get out of her embrace. "Aai, nahi kuch nahi ho sakta Malharji ko. Wo Malhar ji nahi honge. Wrong news mili hogi. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Wo mujhe chodkar nahi jaa sakte. Wo Pillu ko chhodkar nahi ja sakte. Aai chhod mujhe. Kalyani pushed Anupriya away. "Kalyani madam wo Malhar sir..' "Kya? Kya Malhar sir kya? Pawar bhau aapki duty hai na unki raksha karne ki toh aapke the hue aisa kaise ho sakta hai.? Aapne apni duty kyun nahi ki! grabbed Constable Pawar by the collar and confronted him. "Madam, wo sir, madam. Pawar wanted to say something but Kalyani did not let him speak. He went and stood in a corner. "Kalyani, beta calm down abhi humein sirf itna pata hai ki Malhar ko goli lagi hai, usko emergency se OT mein laaye hain. Please panic mat karo. Pray for his life. Sarthak had to keep his cool to support Kalyani and Anupriya. "Goli lagi hai? Kalyani backed towards the nearest wall for support. If he would have been here and it was her mother in there he would have been a strong wall standing behind her. She slowly slipped to the floor and buried her head between her folded legs. She quietly prayed for him to get better.

The light bulb of the OT switched off. The doctor came out. Sarthak, Vivek, and Anupriya were praying to hear good news. "Doctor! Doctor kya hua? Doctor wo kaise hain? Kalyani rushed to the doctor. "I'm sorry hum use bacha nahi sake... "Kalyani! Kalyani!!, KALYANI!!! hosh mein aao beta." Anupriya was shaking Kalyani to bring her back to her senses.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I have not read it yet...but yrr mujhe bta hai ki read kiya toh bachi kuchi neend bhi chali jaegi...please complete kardo... heartbeat waise hi taz hai promo dekhne ke baad ab update aadha aadhura padhugi toh...mein gai.
PS mujhe pta hai aapne aacha likha hai love u yr
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yaar...
Suspense pe chod diya.
Thoda toh reham karo!
Warna heart attack aajayega. Already promo ne dukhi kar rakha hai

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