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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res...it's hell long yaar 😃 first spot mine
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Chaht your update never fails to make me emotional😳 simple sober and cute update😳 waiting for next partšŸ˜›
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Awesome update šŸ‘ dil bhar aaya yaar😭emotional...loved it. .sabr ka fal bahut meeta tha šŸ˜‰ kitna wait kiya tha na update ke liye..thanks for the long update yaar...plzzz update the next part soon
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Loved it :) thank you for such a long update. Cant wait to read more.
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Omg i just loved this update I'm so speechless please update next part soon please
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extremely good.read twice because one wasn't enough.emotional and sweet.Kudos!
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Yaar...

Suspense pe chod diya.
Thoda toh reham karo!
Warna heart attack aajayega. Already promo ne dukhi kar rakha hai


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What a beautiful chapter!
Absolutely loved reading it!
You always make me crave for more with your writing!!
Update soonish plzz!
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Finally thoda sukhoon mila...awesome start...lekin yahan par bhi twist haanšŸ˜• preview dekh ke maine socha tha kalyani critical hai lekin yahan tho malhar critical hai...phir se pahaadi ke edge mein aake patak diya yaar tumne.😭 ye kaisi pariksha me raha hai bappa hamari šŸ˜‰

Anyway thank you so much...plzzz update the next part soon and longgg one


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Part 3

Kalyani opened her eyes, her heart felt light but her head heavy. She looked up and saw Malhar's head resting on her. Oh no, main aise hi unke kaandhe par sar rakhkar so gayi. Unhone mujhe uthaya nahi aur khud aise so gaye. Chot theek bhi nahi hui hai.' She carefully removed her head from under his and caught his before his sleep would be disturbed. "Malhar ji She whispered. "Hmm. "Theek se lait jaaiye. "Hmm. She helped him slide down on the bed without disturbing his sleep. She made sure he was comfortable. "Moksh ko atya ke paas se lekar aati hoon. Kalyani opened the door to go to Aparna but there she was standing at the door with Pillu in her arms. "Ye lo Kalyani Moksh jag gaya hai. Tumhaara koi parcel aaya hai. Pata nahi subah subah kya shopping karne mein mere damad ki mehnat ki kamai udaa di hai. Jao tum main Moksh ko paalne mein rakh deti hoon. She tried to enter the room but Kalyani stopped her. She went out and closed the door behind her. "Laaiye Moksh ko mujhe dijiye. She took Moksh in her arms and excitedly went to receive the delivery.

She came back with Moksh and an orange cargo box. "Arre Malhar ji aap jag gaye? She placed both Moksh and the parcel on the bed. "Haan wo itna shor hua ki. Aai itna halla kyun macha rahi thi? Kalyani cursed Aparna in her heart for disturbing Malhar's sleep. "Kuch nahi unki purani aadat hai halla machane ki. Meri saas nahi hai phir bhi saas wale saare nakhre dikhati hain mujhe. Kalyani removed her frustration. "Kya hua Kalyani? Abhi wo kyun halla macha rahi thi? "Wo maine unhe andar nahi aane diya isliye. "Aai ko andar kyun nahi aane diya? Malhar asked rubbing his eyes. "Kaise unhe andar aane deti? Aap aise international halat mein jo hain. Malhar was wearing only his sweat pants. Kalyani found it difficult to make him wear a shirt or anything to cover his torso so he was bare chest while being in the room. The little time he had gone out of the room she wrapped a shawl to cover him up. Kisi ki nazar lagi toh? Kisi ki nazar padi toh esp... uski.'

Malhar gave Pillu a good morning kiss. Kalyani opened the parcel excitedly. "Kalyani, ye kya hai? Tumne online shopping ki? Aur itni subah kaun delivery ke liye aaya? "Malhar ji ek saath kitne questions poochte hain aap. Ye aapke liye get well soon gift hai. Fikr mat kijiye maine ghar kharch se koi fizool kharchi nahi hai ye meri taraf se aapko gift hai. Aapko mere zamaane ke apps bekaar lagte hain na toh aj aapka POV change ho jaayega. Maine ye sab Grofers se mangaya hai aur wohi bhi regular market se discounted price par. Malhar looked at the various bottles of creams, gels and lotions spread on the bed. "Kalyani ye sab? Kyun? "Malhar ji aap na apne skin ki hair ki koi care nahi karte. Ab aap khud ki care nahi karenge toh mujhe hi karni padegi na. "Theek hai lekin itna sab? Mujhe aadat nahi hai? "Malhar ji aap bhi na dheere dheere aadat ho jaayegi aur honi bhi chahiye kyunki ye aadat acchi hai. Abhi se care nahi kiya na 2-3 saalon mein 40 - 45 ke lagne lagenge. "Excuse me! Kalyani did not pay attention to Malhar's reaction. She was showing them to Pillu.

"Kalyani, chalo. "Kahan? she asked putting Moksh in his crib. "Aaj mujhe fresh hone mein madad nahi karogi? Mujhe goli lagi hai na. He said with a sad face. "Haan, chaliye, lekin Pillu? Ek kaam karti hoon use apne naye stroller mein rakh leti hoon. She put Pillu in his new stroller. She kept the washroom door open so that she could keep an eye on Moksh. Before she put the toothpaste on his brush Malhar was ready in the eee' form for her to brush his teeth. She helped him freshen up. Malhar came back to the room with Pillu. Kalyani allowed him to do that much because it wouldn't give him any pain to push the stroller. Kalyani was busy in the kitchen making Pillu's milk, Malhar's breakfast and tea. Aparna wanted to trouble Kalyani so she had left saying she was going to the temple to pay for Malhar's quick recovery.

"Ae sun! Kalyani closed her eyes and remembered how peaceful had it been for the last two days when Sampada and her Atharva were not at home. Kalyani got irritated just by hearing her voice and to see her face early in the morning. "Oh my God, Kalyani ye tum ho?! Mujhe laga Malhar ne koi nayi kaam wali bai rakhi hai. Ye kya haal bana rakha hai tumne? Waise bhi Malhar ko tum mein koi interest nahi hai aur iss tarah rahogi toh wo tumhe ek nazar dekhega bhi nahi. Mujhe dekho main kitni beautiful lag rahi hoon itni saji savri ki Atharva ki nazar mujh par se hat ti hi nahi. Haan Malhar ki pagar par tum meri tarah tayyar nahi ho sakti par... "Mujhe tumhaare jaise tayyar hona bhi nahi hai. Tumhare paas hoga time itna tayyar hone ka. Lekin mere paas time nahi hai waste karne ko. Wo kya hai na mera beta abhi bahut chhota hai use meri zaroorat hai. Aur abhi mere pati ki tabiyat bhi theek nahi hai toh mujhe unka bhi khayal rakhna hai. Mere liye apne pati aur bte ka khayal rakhna important hai naki apne hair style or make up ka. Main chahoon toh tumhaare baat ka aur bhi acche se jawab de sakti hoon lekin wo kya hai na mere bte aur pati ko bhook lagi hogi, unhe naashta karwana hai. Excuse me. Kalyani gave a fitting answer to Sampada's rudeness. Sampada was left speechless and bitter.

Malhar heard everything that happened between Sampada and Kalyani. "Ye lo aa gaya Pillu aur Pillu ke baba ka mum mum. Malhar ji aaiye na warna aapka chai, naashta thanda ho jaayega. Kalyani placed the tray on the bed table. She understood from his facial expressions that he was angry but paid no attention. Malhar sat on the bed. "Wo meri zindagi se chali gayi hai toh kyun ab humaari zindagi mein interfere karti hai. Kyun wo tumhe taane deti hai humaare rishtey ke. Usko kya karna hai humaare beech kya hai aur kya nahi. Chod chuki hai na mujhe aur Moksh ko toh humein akela kyun nahi chod deti. Kalyani calmly smiled at him. "Malhar ji wo kya karti hai kya nahi aap uspar nahi apni recovery par dhyaan dijiye. Uske liye main kaafi hoon aap uspar dhyaan mat dijiye. What did he see on her face? Irritation? Jealousy?' She put the spoon in front of his mouth. "Kalyani, main khud kha loonga tum jaakar theek se tayyar ho jaao. "Kya matlab theek se tayyar ho jaaon? Malhar ji main theek se hi tayyar hoon. Aapko shayad pata nahi par humaare desh ki zyadatar house wives jinke do bacche ya zyaada hain wo aise hi theek se tayyar hoti hai. Iss liye aap mere tayyar hone ke baare mein fikar mat kijiye aur apna naashta kjiye. Main aapko khilaati hoon aap Pillu ko doodh pilaiye, use bhook lagi hai. Malhar did as she asked of him. "Ek minute! Kya kaha tumne? Do Bacche? Tumne mujhe baccha kaha? "Haan kaha. Aai kehti hai chahe mard kitna strong na ho umar mein kitna hi bada kyun na ho jab bemar padta hai toh baccha ban jaata hai. Ab chaliye jaldi se naashta kijiye uske bad mujhe Pillu ko nehla kar tayyar karna hai. "Aur mujhe? he murmured. "Kuch kaha aapne? "Nahi kuch nahi. Haan naashta karao.

After breakfast she undressed Moksh and got him ready for his bath. "Chalo ab Pillu nai nai karega. She took Pillu to the chowki in the angan {Tap where she was going to pour water on herself during Maghi Ganpati pooja.}. Malhar sat on the charpai and saw how much fun Moksh had having his bath. She covered Moksh up in his towel and they came back to their bedroom. Kalyani wiped him, applied baby cream and dressed him. Kalyani placed him next to Malhar on the sleeping mat she laid down on the bed. Kalyani lifted her eyes and saw Malhar looking at her then her eyes followed his as he looked at the fresh feeling happy baby Moksh was after the bath. He did not need to say it out loud it was all over his face. He needed some detailed freshening up too, what she did for him for the past 2 days was not enough. Moksh fell asleep in some time. "Chaliye ab aap ki baari. Kalyani said placing Malhar's bathing products in a basket and his bathrobe on her shoulder. "Kya meri baari? Malhar knew what she meant and he did need to have a good cleansing but hesitated. "Nai nai karne ki? Malhar ji aapko acche se fresh hone ki zaroorat hai nahi toh aap beemaar beemaar feel karenge. Maine sab tayyari kar di hai bathroom mein chaliye.

Kalyani and Malhar went inside the bathroom and she locked it from inside. "Malhar! Kalyani! Kyaa kar rahe ho tum dono andar? Aparna crowed. Kalyani had just poured water on Malhar's head to shampoo. "Aa gayi atya, inka antenna khada ho jata hai jab bhi hum dono saath hote hain. Abhi batati hoon inhe. Kalyani threw the mug in the bucket and water slashed on both of them. She opened the door just enough for Aparna to peek in. Her eyes popped as big as the headlights of Aao Sahib's ambassador. She saw Kalyani was wet here and there and Malhar's bare back. "Malhar ji ko nilha rahi hoon, koi problem hai aapko? She slammed the door on Aparna's face. Kalyani put a long rubber glove covering his right arm to protect it from getting wet. She shampooed his hair and also made devil horns. "Kalyani kya kar rahi ho? Malhar asked on hearing her giggle. "Kuch nahi. How she wished she could take his photo. She then conditioned his hair. "Dekhna Malharji ab aapke baal itne smooth ho jaayenge. Poured bath gel over a loofah and lathered his body minus his privates. "Kalyani kya kar rahi ho, gud gudee ho rahi hai. He felt ticklish because of the loofah especially when she did his underarms. Aparna's blood pressure increased when she heard their interaction.

Kalyani and Malhar came to the room. "Ek minute Malharji abhi nahi. She stopped him from putting on the sweat pants. She applied foot cream and lotion on his legs till the knees. "Baki ka aap kar lijiye. He did as she told him. She then applied lotion on his torso and arms. She then made polka dots on his face and spread the face cream and gently massaged his face. Kalyani also sprayed deo. Malhar felt like Pillu did. He felt so relaxed after receiving tender love and care from Kalyani. She helped him put on his sweat pants too. Then she looked at him actually his bare chest. "Kalyani, kya soch rahi ho? College nahi jaana kya? Saturday ko bhi nahi gayi thi. Main nahi chahta ki tum meri wajah se bunk karo. She did not hear a word he said. She knew she would have to leave him alone and go to college but she also did not want Aparna or especially Sampada to see him top less. IDEA!!! She took one of his inner vests and cut off the right side shoulder strap. "KALYANI! Ye kya kiya tumne? Meri banyaan kyun kaat di? "Malhar ji aap chahte hain na ki main college jaaoon toh bas iss liye. "Tumhaare college jaane se meri banyaan ka kya rishta hai. "Malhar ji ab main aaapko akele iss international halat mein toh chodkar nahi jaa sakti na. "Kalyani, aai meri ma jaisi hai aur... "Aur kuch nahi sunna mujhe. Aaiye main aapko banyaan pehenati hoon. She rolled up the banyaan slid in his left arm and head and pulled down the banyaan covering him fully. He looked at the cut strap and flicked it angrily. Kalyani tried not to laugh seeing him in a one shouldered banyaan but it was too hard not to. "KALYANI! She picked up her bag and ran away before he could catch her. He was injured but still he was Malhar Rane. {Sher zakhmi kyun na ho sher sher hi hota hai.}

"Anupriya ji ab Malhar kaisa hai? Sarthak asked about his nephew. "Sarthak ji Malhar aur bhi accha mehsoos karega agar aap ghar aayenge uski khabar poochne. Iss tarah aap Moksh se bhi mil lenge. "Aap theek keh rahi hain Anupriya ji kyun main auron ki wajah se Malhar se ya Moksh se na miloon. "Aai ghar chalen? Ghar par Malharji aur Pillu akele hain. Kalyani looked tired. "Kalyani, beta kya haal bana liya hai tumne? Malhar se zyaada tum beemar lag rahi ho. "Nahi aai, main theek hoon. Waise hats off to Aao Sahib. "Kya matlab? Anupriya asked. "Arre aayi main na Aao saib se bahut impressed hoon matlab unhone teen bacchon ko bada kiya aur saath mein business bhi kiya. Moksh ko sambhalna asaan hai par uske saath Malhar ji ko sambhalna, unhe khana khilaana, dawai khilana, unko brush karwana, unko ne... I mean unko tayyar karna! Kamal hai un sabhi aurton ki jo ek saath do bacche, ghar, pati aur kaam sab kuch manage karti hain. She looked at Anupriya and Sarthak. She thought they would be proud of her for being a devoted wife and mother but here they were both trying to muffle their laugh. "Kya hua? Malhar ji dard mein hain, main pareshan hoon unke liye aur aap dono hans rahe hain. Aai.

Malhar was at home playing with Moksh. "Kalyani aa gayi tum? Wo pechhe kya chupaa hai? Mere liye ko aur surprise hai? Kalyani, kya hua kuch bolo na. Malhar enoyed her company and missed her like hell when she was not near him. "Aaj aai aur kaka ne mujhe kuch batya apke baae mein. Waise mujhe pata tha par tension mein yaad hi nahi raha. "Kya? "Yehi ki aap left handed hain. Bahut maza aa raha tha mujhe bewakoof banakar. Pata hai aapko main kitna pareshan thi. Maza aa raha tha na aapko ab saza bhi deti hoon. She removed his trimmer from behind her back. "Kalyani, himmat bhi mat karna. I am sorry I am sorry par maine jo kiya tumhaare liye kiya. Malhar moved backwards and she forward. He was backed upto the wall. Before she could make a move her grabbed her hand, twirled her and put her in a strong hold at her waist. "Meri baat suno, maine ye sab tumhe pareshan karne ke liye nahi kiya. Maine tumhe batane ki koshish ki par tumne suna nahi. Phir maine dekha ki tumhe mera khayal rakhkar relief mil raha hai toh main chup raha. Ab bhi agar tumhe lagta hai ki maine galat kiya toh tum mujhe saza do mujhe sab manzoor hai. Main kuch bhi karoonga. "Kuch bhi? "Kuch bhi. I promise. No Kalyani, ye nahi. Main ye nahi kar sakta. "Aapne promise kiya tha. "Please no. "Theek hai toh phir main aur Moksh aapse katti. "Ye hi karna zaroori hai kuch aur nahi chalega? Kalyani was firm in the punishment she chose for him. "Ok tum jeeti main haara.

"Kalyani, maine abhi click ki awaaz suni. Agar tumne meri photo li hai toh main tumhe chhodoonga nahi. "Malhar ji, historical moment ko capture bhi toh karna chahiye. Kalyani took a selfie with Malhar. "Wow Malhar ji aapki skin kitni glow kar rahi hai aur tight bhi lag rahi hai. Dekha maine kaha tha na facial mask sheet lagane mein aapka faayda hai. Ye saza nahi ulta maza tha aapke liye. "Kalyani wo selfie delete karo, abhi ke abhi. "Nahi Malhar ji aap bahut cute lag rahe the. Kalyani ran out of the room and he wanted to follow her but could not because of the one shouldered vest. "Jaaogi kahan room mein wapas toh aaogi na. She stayed out of the room but not for long. It was time for his medicines. She showed the selfie to him and then deleted it at his request. "Ye kya hai? He took the book from her hand. It was the romance novel she was reading. "Kalyani, ye book akele mat padho. "Malharji aapne ye book padhi hai? Kitni romantic kahani hai na? He realized she had not reached the sad parts. "Maine kaha na ye book akele nahi kisi ke saath padhne wali hai. "Aapne bhi toh akele hi padhi hai na? "Issi liye keh raha hoon. "Aap padhenge mere sath? That night after Moksh was fast asleep, Malhar and Kalyani read the novel together.

In the morning Kalyani woke up to the smell of red roses. A bouquet was kept on her side. Inside there was a note, Kalyani, tum wo ho jo jiske saath maine apni zindagi ki sabse dardbhari kitaab padhi hai ab main uss kitab ko band karke ek nayi kitaab padhna chahta hoon. Main guarantee nahi deta ki uss kitaab ko padhte waqt sirf muskurahatein hogi kabhi kabhi aansoon bhi honge par phir bhi main tumse poochna chahta hoon kya tum mere saath wo kitaab padhogi, umar bhar ke liye?

Kalyani smelled the roses. She looked up and saw him stand at the threshold of their room. They shared a sweet smile. She ran and hugged him. "Ah! "I'm so sorry. Dard hua? "Nahi. "Toh aapki aankhon mein aansoon kyun? "Kalyani, sirf dard mein nahi kisi ka aapke liye saccha pyar dekhkar bhi aankhon mein aasoon aa jaate hain. They held hands and crossed over the threshold to begin a new life.


The End.

Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 6 years ago
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Awesome Chappy yaar😳 mazza as gaya😳 such cute scenes...Kaash something like this happens in show too!!!😳
Edited by elsanna - 6 years ago

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