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Very nice shayaari Urmee!! I can't thank you enough for opening this topic. Totally loved your TSPLS story in poetry form. You have penned down each and every single major event that changed Yug's life, and that too in such a sophisticated manner!! Very well done! I loved your other shayari too, in which you mentioned, " Kabhie Kabhie mere dil mei khayaal aata hai ki tu abhi hanumaan reh gaya hai. Teri latakneki aadat abhi gayi nahi hai. Kabhie Kabhie mere dil mei khayaal aata hai, ki ye mooche aur kale kale mote mote chashme sirf meri amaanat hai." These lines were very hilarious and witty! Very well thought dear! Once again, thanks for opening this comedy topic. 😛

vrinda to rajbir:

Originally posted by: rabees011

Very nice shayaari Urmee!! I can't thank you enough for opening this topic. Very well thought dear! Once again, thanks for opening this comedy topic. 😛

yesterday episode reminded me davdas film.so,i'm making a comedy scene of devdas.

characters: vrinda=parvati

chandramukhi=bharti

devdas=yug

vrinda enteres bharti's house.

vrinda:bharti................bharti................bahar ajaaaaaaaaa.aj main tujhe nahi chorungi.

bharti: kya hua?yun bhes ki tarah chilla rehi hain kyun?

vrinda:maine tujhpe rishwas kya .tujhe apni gharme bulaya,tere sath dola re dola kya.aur tune mari rishwas ko football samajh ke uski sath khela?meri bharose ko pani puri samajh ke tikha dalke kha liya?

bhari: us rajbeer ki sath rehke tu bhi pagal hogaya hain.kya bakwas kar rehi hain?

vrinda;teri itni himmat.tune meri ghar se mari pati ka chashma churaya?

bharti:ha.teri pati ka chashma maine churaya.woh cashma ab meri paas hain.kyun ki yug babu(dev babu) ka dil tere paas hain.

vrinda: yug ka dil mere paas nahi hain.tu mujhe meri pati ka chashma de .

bharti:nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii.jabtak tu mujhe yug babu ka dil nahi deta,mein tujhe chashma nahi dunga,nahi dunga,nahi dunga.

vrinda:tujhe dene hoga,dena hoga ,dena hoga.

bharti: nahi.pehle tu mujhe unka dil de.

vrinda: yug ka dil meri paas nahi hain.
bharti:teri nazar teri pati ki sath sath kamjor hogaya.yug babu ka dil teri hi paas hain.

vrinda:(crying)thik hain.mere liye yug ki dil se jyada meri pati ka chashma kimti hain.main tujhe yug ka dil de dunga.tu mujhe meri amanaat lota de.meri pati ke chashma bapas karde>(crying)

bharti:thik hain.yeh le chashma.

vrinda:yeh le yug ka dil.

yug enters the room.

yug:nehiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.vrinduuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu(paru)us chandramukhi ko mera dil mat dena.tumhe tumhari pati ki chashme ki kasam.

bharti:nahiiiiiii.apki dil sirf aur sirf mere paas hoga.

then they three begin to pull the heart towards themselves.then rajbeer comes.

rajbeer:is dil ke liye tune meri chashma churaya.is dil ko to main nahi chorunga.then they three begin fighting for the heart.when they stop fighting they see the heart has divided into many portion.all have a portion of yug's heart on their hands.

yug:tum logo ne meri dil ki sath is tarha se khela?mere dil ko tor diya?nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

vrinda:hai rabba.meri pati ka chashma bhi tut gaya.nahiiiiiiiii.ab kya hoga?(crying) meri pati ka chashmaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Originally posted by: amee2673

vrinda to rajbir:

"tmhari mucho pay mai varee varee...tmharay chashmai pay mai vaari vaari....

tm nay race mai yug sey bazee maree....tmharay chunnu munnu pay mai vaari vaari....

rejbeer to himself.

mainay yug k rastay mai bnaya hai khadda

kyun k mai hoon kabab mai hadda....😊

Once again very well written Urmee!! Good choice of title! Chashma versus heart!!hehe

Originally posted by: amee2673

vrinda to rajbir:

"tmhari mucho pay mai varee varee...tmharay chashmai pay mai vaari vaari....

tm nay race mai yug sey bazee maree....tmharay chunnu munnu pay mai vaari vaari....

😆Very hilarious indeed!😆 I can't believe somebody can actually become vaari vaari on rb's mooch and chashma!!

Originally posted by: urmee

hey,u r most wellcome.😉but the poem of tspls story write another member nz_rockx.not me.😃

Oops!😆I guess my eyesight is becoming kamzoar like rb's!!😆Sorry for that. Anyways bravo nz_rockx! Very well written.👏