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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Part 28
Brij acchaa bahoo tere love story ke liye ek yesa charcter ko paida kiya jo hey hi nahi'''..
At the room vrinda is so happy'''and she dances'''.
At the same time the banjaran lady sings''.
Jo mat wale milna ko yeh
Mil jaata hai'.
Pyar mohabbat anne ko hay'''.
Toh chali pavan '''.
Who ayee hawa banke'''.
Ararahe hai chand apne chandini ke liye'''..
And vrinda listens to this''..
She behaves so strangely'..
She looks at mirror''.
Suddenly she sees pooja staring strangely at her behavior''
Pooja:vrinda tum teek tho ho''.tab se dekh rahi hoon'''.apne apko dekh kar mushrahi hoo'''..sab teek hai ''''..kya''
Vrinda:haa sab kuch teek hay'''kuch nahi huwa''..
Pooja:nahi jab se who tere chachi ki ane ki kabar sunkar toh to ajeeb behave kar rahi hoo'..
Wohtere chachi ki sahel I hay such main chachi nahi na'''''.
Vrinda:toh nahi jaante who chachi mere liye kya hay''''..
At the time yug and brij goes to the bus'''.
And brij sleeps'..
But yug also in dreams''
At the morning''..yug wakes up and he reaches the top of the bus''brij stops him''he starts the song''..
Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala
Uske Ghar Ka Pata
Ay Hava Tu Bata

Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala

Kya Hai Sama Kya Aasmaan
Masti Mein Hai Saara Jahaan
Khila Khila Hai Mausam
Kya Hai Sama Kya Aasmaan
Masti Mein Hai Saara Jahaan
Khila Khila Hai Mausam
Ye Fiza Sangdali
Ye Ghata Manchali

Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala

Sharmayegi Ghabrayegi
Phir Vo Mere Paas Aayegi
Usay Na Jaane Doonga
Sharmayegi Ghabrayegi
Phir Vo Mere Paas Aayegi
Usay Na Jaane Doonga
Kesuoon Ke Tale
Hum Milenge Gale

Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala
Uske Ghar Ka Pata
Ay Hava Tu Bata
Deewana Main Chala
Usay Dhoondne
Bade Pyaar Se
Deewana Main Chala

Deewana Main Chala
Deewana Main Chala.
He sees vrinda every where''..
And one of the passenger asks brij regarding yug''
He says love'.pyar ishq'''''''mohabbat'..
Yug sees brij and smiles'''..
Where bus stops at a place''.
Yug gets down and he takes some water.and splashes on his face''.he looks down and when he lifts his head he sees vrinda'''.with a towel In her hand,,,,,,,,
(sola baras ki bali ummar ko salam'''..
yaara tere pehli nazar ko salam'''
dil banane wala ko sukriya''''
yaara teere pehli nazar ko salam''')
brij comes to him'.as he is on the same posture''''..
brij taps him''
chali ya yehi par rehna hai'''.
And yug asks how much time to reach delhi'''.
He says few hours''
He takes the red cloth and smiles at it'.and inner'''..im coming to you'''mere manzil bahut kareeb hay'''
At the time he gets a call from his maabua'..
Yug:ha maa bua ''kaise hay aap'
Maabua:yug kaha ho'..kab se koshish kar raha hoo.aur tum ho kaha''''yeh awaaz''
Yug:mein bahar hoo maa bua '''''..
Maabua:bahar'.kaha '''..
Yug:who kisi kaam ki wajah se seher se bahar''
U samaj lijeye mere zindagi ki pass jara hoon'''staring at red cloth'''.aur muje aap ki asshirwaad ki jarorat hai'..
Maabua:mere aashirwaad toh tere saath hamesha hay''tere har kaam kamiyaab hoo''..
Yug:aaj mein bahut kush hoo maa bua''aur bas thodi din mein waha aakar sab kuch bataunga''..
Maabua:yug itna kush toh kabhi nahi tha''
And at the time winds flows and the laal chunery'''''..comes into her hands'''''.
And the voice,,,,,,,,,,
Love had started the journey''..
At that time maya is very much furious''..she is upset''..her friend come sto her'''.
Maya's friend:oh come on maya he just went to delhi'''what 's wrong with u'''''
Maya:no''..i had doubt'..i find something change in yug's eyes''.he is very much happy''.who itna kush hay ki bata nahi saktha''
Maya's friend:par maya'..yug ki family tere saath hay''''uska father tere saath hay''.toh darr kis baat ka hay'''
Maya:ur right 'everyone in the house '''.
Knows that but except one maa bua''..and dadabeer never goes against either maa bua or yug''''there is a strong bond between them,,,,,,,,
And she goes from there''.
Maya>thinking over the incident when the maharajaj ji''jo yug family bahut mante hay''..who anna aur maabua ko samajana ki yug ki zindagi kaas hay''..uska janam kisi makasat hay ''..aur who sach much kaas hay'..
Aur uske liye jo bana who uski 24th birthday par milthe hay'aur uski zindagi ban jaate hay''
And she is worried as this one is the same year'''
Vrinda close her eyes for praying to the god'.
Yug is staringat the cloth''''..
And the idols of Krishna and radha are shown''''..
Part ends'''.

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
hai


sorry for the delay
pls send comments
thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Part 29

Yug is smiling as he is near to his place'''

Vrinda in mean time planning to move from the hostel'..

And she has idea how''''.

At that time'''..

Saawan Barase, Tarase Dil Kyon Naa Nikale Ghar Se Dil
Barakhaa Mein Bhee Dil Pyaasaa Hai, Ye Pyaar Naheen To Kyaa Hai
Dekho Kaise Bekaraar Hain Bhare Baajaar Me
Yaar Yek Yaar Ke Intajaar Me

Yek Mohabbat Kaa Diwaanaa, Dhoondhataa Saa Fire
Koee Chaahat Kaa Najaraanaa, Dilarubaa Ke Liye
Chhamachham Chale Paagal Pawan Aaye Majaa Bheege Balam
Bheege Balam Fisale Kadam Barakhaa Bahar Me

Yek Haseenaa Idhar Dekho Kaisee Bechain Hai
Raastepar Lage Kaise, Us Ke Do Nain Hai
Sach Poochheeye To Mere Yaar, Donon Ke Dil Beikhtiyaar
Beikhtiyaar, Hain Pahalee Baar, Pahalee Bahaar Me''

And she reaches to the mandir'..

Where yug and vrinda are expected to meet''.

As vrinda waiting for yug to come'.

And suddenly she turns to find sadoo'''.

Sadoo:akir tune apne manzil tak pouch gayehoo.leking bahut katineeya hay'

Raukhawat hay'''..bahut faslay hay'.

Unne kaise mitaoogi'..

Vrinda suprises and she feels bad on listening to the sadoo words'.

But sadoo smiles''.jab kisi maqsat se tum logoon ki Milan ho rahe hay'toh darr kis baat ke'.apne pyarr ko itne taqat banade na ki har mushkil ko tumme chota karna hay'..

Kyonki'''.bade saaloonki ki nafrat ko tumloog on ko mitani hay''..is ke liye apne sab kuch daauu pe lagana hoga'.

Vrinda is confused''''.

At that time he sees around''..

And she finds no one'

And she sees even the sadoo also not there'''

She sits at the place'

At that time city is seen'''.lot of atank is there and people are running'''.at that time yug stops one person who is running'.

He says that there agitation going on.

Suddenly it turns to be violation and some goons are turn violet and they are creating hovoos in the place'.so there is 104 section and people are stuck in it'.

Yug asks for place

The person replies shiv mandir'''..

Yug oh no''..vrinda wahi par hay''''.

Ab mein kya karoon'''who waha mere intezaaar kar rahi hay'.aur agar who problem me phass gayee'.toh'oh nahi'.

Some police tries to stop yug..

But yug is very furious he is very much worried.

He manages to escape and starts running'''.

Yug:pata nahi vrinda kitne baje se mere wait kardi hogi'''''.

As vrinda is worried as it is taking long time for yug to come'''.

And all the people are going'''

Vrinda starts crying..and at that time one pandit comes to her'.

Pandit:beti kisi ka intezaar kar rahe hoo kya''.samay bahut kam se..aur bahut deer ho gaye hay'''.ghar chale jaaoo beti''.warna problem pe pas jayoogi''..seher me atank macha uvee hay''abhi abhi pata chala hay''.

Vrinda is moving around''.

And some people come saround and starts throwing stones'''..

Where vrinda is scared'''.and tears are coming from her eyes''''

And some people sees vrinda alone'..

They starts coming towards her.

Suddenly vrinda sees a small girl stucking at the place.she goes to her''.and she hides with the girl'''..and she makes the girl to sit on back side of truck which is laid there'''

She manages to put her''.but when she about to move''..some weird people sees her''.

At that time she runs from there''

She is also running too fast'..

Without knowing she hits on the stone'''and she falls''.

One of the person'''..ready to hit her'''

She closes her eyes''''

At that time vrinda finds a person which is on her to save her'''

He slopes her and holds the hand which is trying to hit her'''.

He is struggling with the person'''.

Vrinda sees the person''.shocked'..

And says yug'''.

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
lovely update yaar i loved it but why did you stop there please update soon want to know what happens next please
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Part 30

Yug sees vrinda

Eyes contact'.one person takes stick to hit vrinda'where yug stops him'''.

She remembers her chachi's words''.

Vrinda:chachi aa p aur chachu kitne acchee lagte hoo saath mein'.aur chachi mein ne suna tha ki aap ne chachu pehle naza r mein apke dewaana huwa aur dadaji se baat karke aap se shaadi ki'.

Payal face turns pale.but she manages to escape but vrinda firms'..

Then she explains'

Payal:vrinda joo insaan apne se jyada humara fikar hay,,,,,,,jo hamera liye kuch bhi kare'

Jisee dekh ne ke baad apne aap ko pata chalta hay ki who hamare liye bana diya gaye'''tab dekh na ..

At that some one comes to hit yug''where vrinda comes in between and the rod hits vrinda and she falls in the hands of yug'.

Yug faces turns pale and he is shocked'''..

His eyes are in huge pain''.vrinda falls''..

Another one comes to hit both them'''.

At that time brij stops them,''..and they run as police siren comes''..and then'''

Yug carries vrinda into his hands'''..

He takes to the place''no one is there '.

He makes her to slide at the place'..

And he brings water and splashes on her face'''.

But her eyes are closed'''''

He removes locks on her face''

Yug :it was mymistake''it takes me so long to come here'''..other wise''''''oh no vrinda is still unconscious I don't knowwhat to do.

He is so worried'''god help me''and he sees vrinda 's bleeding blood is coming from her forehead''he took the red cloth from his pocket''(the same vrinda is tied to him)

And he puts as a bandage''''..oh god it couldb ehelp ful if there is anything to eat..

And he is worried'''

(Soon jhara Soniye soon jhara - 4
Aaj Khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani Dil bhi kutch Keh raha hai ) - 2
Soon jhara Soniye Soon Soon Soon Jharaaaa beetey lamhon ke saaye toh bas yahi tham gaye haiyaad
mujhe aaye teri baateinpalkon ki surkh chadar pe ask bhi jam gaye haiteri
ankhon se na hatti aankheinbebasi ka hai aalam kya karoo main batadhadkanein hai deewani
dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
(Soon jhara Soniye Soon Jharaaaa ) - 2
Aaj Khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani Dil bhi kutch Keh raha hai
(Soon jhara Soniye Soon Jharaaaa) - 2
choom ke apne hoton se tere gam ko chura loolaake
tujhe de doo khushiyan sariapni har beqarari ko seene
main hi chupa lumeri chahtein jaye tujhpe warisehme sehme labon mein ghul gayi hai dua
dhadkanein hai deewani dil bhi kutch keh raha hai
(Soon jhara Soniye Soon Jharaaaa ) - 2
Aaj Khamoshiyon se aa rahi hai sada
Dhadkanein hai deewani Dil bhi kutch Keh raha hai
(Soon jhara Soniye Soon Jharaaaa) - 4

brij comes in''.

he sees yug is worried and he is holding vrinda's hand'

brij comes to him'.

Yug:yaar brij mein vrinda ko ishalat mein nahii dekh saktha hoon'''..kya kuch pata chala'.

Brij:nahi yug mein ne pata kar liye''.jo kuch bhi huwa hay na eh mandir ke aas pass huwa hay,,,,,aur bahar bilkull teek nayee hay''.

Kisis ko ander na bahar jaane diya hay''.

At that yug is more worried'..

Yug:yaar hum dono ka koi worry nayee.kyon ki hum eha ajnabee muje vrinda ki chinta hay'''.

Kyon ek toh who hostel se ayee hay,,,,,,agar hostel mein kisi ko pata chale ki vrinda nayee hay toh problem ajayage''..aur upar se vrinda hosh mein nayee hay,,,,,,,,,

Pata nahi kya karoon'''

At that time he makes an arrangement'''

For fire..and both are worried''

At the morining vrinda awakes''''..

She sees yug'..and alsobrij'..

Inner:chachi ne teek kahe thi thi''..ki us ke saa th mein hamara duniya hay'''uski saath hoo toofan bhi hame kuch nayee kar sakthi hay''vrinda tere yeh who insaan hay'..jiska saath tuje apne poori zindagi ke liye safar karna hay''.yeh hi hay who jis ke liye too bana hay''..hoo is jagah meinbhi tuje eh ehsaas nahi anediya''..tere dard usse dard de deta hay.

Andshe touches her forehead.and she remembers how he protected from her goons'''..at that time yug wakes up'''.

He sees vrinda staring at her'''''

Yug comes to her'.

Yug:vrinda tum teek ho'''.

Vrinda:haa

Yug:tuje beech mein kyon agaye hi hoon'..

Ab chalo'''..

They move from the place'''''..

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
hai
sorry for the delay
i will update soon
pls send comments

thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
hun gr8 update just wish brij wasnt there and it was just YuVi that would have been awsome but yaar its too short please update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
hey... no fair... such a short update...LOL... but is was amazing... love the fight!!! bet yug luks hott when fighting!! enit? plz update soon yaar...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
hello to all
im taking a break for 10 days
as im leaving to tour package.........
on holiday trip
for 1 week
i will start my new updates on 30th june 2009
sorry for delay
i will come back on few days
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok hun and enjoy your trip😃

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