Tere Liyee....... updated 16-09-2009

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

loved it yaar hope you will update the next part soon😃 cant wait to know what happenes next

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

I loved how you used that song...that's one of my favorite. I first heard it on KDMHMD: between Heer and Prem...once upon a time, when I use to watch that show. I must say it suits yuvi really well too.

I look forward to reading the next part. Thanks 4 posting!😃

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srilu

@srilu_123

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Part 23

Yug and vrinda are still in the room..

Yug sees vrinda is tired..

He also feels hungry..

And some how he manages to find some biscuits for them..

He returns back with biscuits

And he sees vrinda is sleeping lying her head to a wall

He sees she closed her eyes.

Windows are open..so wind is blowing .

Locks of hair on her face

He forget the sourroundings.on seeing her face..

Kya ho jata hai..jab mein usee dekhoo.

Kyon dil mein kaboo nahi hota,,,,,,,,,,

Kyon apni apko nahi rok sakta hoo.

Jab usko dard hota toh chot muje hota.

Kya banjaran aurat joo kaha..kya yehi who ladkihai.

Jo mein intezaar karta hoon

And suddenly winds blow fast and doors start shutting.yug moves to close the doors..

Meantime yug sees vrinda is disturbing and he goes near and puts his coat over herand comes back to the place

At that time.vrinda also wakes upand he sees yug is sleeping..she finds the coat and she smiles..and sees yug.suddenly she finds yug hand as it is tuckedshe goes near to him tears some part of chuneryand ties it with it.and says inner..

Kudh ko bharadur aur madad karne wala samajtha haipar pagal hai kudh ki bare mein bilkul nahi sochta hai.and she smiles

And suddenly remembers the cloth she tied Is red.and she remembers her chachi words

One day vrinda sees her maa tying red cloth to the mandir's tree..

Vrinda:maa yeh aap kya kar rahe why ur tieing red clothto the tree.

Chachi:vrinda didi ko kaam hai mein tumhebataungi kyon laal cloth pyar ki nisaani hai.aur suhaag kiisliye jab bhi laal duppatta kisi ajnabee ko mat dena..

Vrinda sees this and thinks

Vrinda:what 's wrong with me

By that time payal and also rakhi wakes.

Payal:why I had this dream.why I dreamed of red cloth.what is its meaning..

First the laal chunery udnana aur phir laal duppatta ki sapnakya hai hey.

Yeh kya ho raha hai.

She comes to the window and prays

Hey takurjii..kahi anee wali ki ghadi ki

Chunauti nahikya hosakta hai.muje guruji se baat karne hogi

And she sleeps

Next day morning yug wakes up and sees vrinda is still sleeping and he sees the red cloth tied to his hand.he smiles at her

At that time vrinda also wakes up and both listens some sound.and a person opens the door..and finds both yug and vrinda.

Yug and vrinda surprised where maya .is suspicious

Pooja and mahi hugs vrinda.

And yug meets karan and brij.

Maya gives a angrily look at vrinda

As she is wearing yug's coat..

Part ends..

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

thanks a lot hun you have no idea how much this was needed after finding out about the SPA nominees this was something i really needed to get my mind off it

hope you will update soon hun want to know what happenes next😃

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Palwasha Najeeb

@purplepal

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Wow amazing!!!! I wish in the serial at a certain point YuVi get stuck in a room like this!!

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srilu

@srilu_123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Part 24

Vrinda and yug keep on looking at each other

And both are thinking a same point

Yug:what happening to me everytime why I think of her

Why it is like there is a internal part going separate from me,,,,,,,,

It is like my heart is going with her

At the same time vrinda also in the same state.

Kyon uski chedna muje itna acchaa lagta hai..

Kyon mere ankeheen hamesha use ki raa dekh thi hai

Kyon ahhat be uski mein jhoom uttah tha huun

Yeh kya hora raha mein muje.

Yeh kya hora hai muje

Kya hey eh.

Vrinda sit inside the bus,,,,,,,,

And yug also sit inside the bus

Both faces are so dull.//////

Even maya is talking rubbish to him..but yug is lost in his world/////////

Brij looked at yug

At the same time pooja is also talking to vrindabut she also lost in her world

At the time winds blow.

Vrinda buses reaches delhi..

And yug reaches mumbai

Everyone gets down

Vrinda gets down but it is raining..and her bag drops.

She bows to remove the bag..as a hand gives to her..

She looks and surprised.to find yug smiling at her..

Yug moves to his place..

He gets into the car.

He sees some kids are playing

Suddenly he stops his car..

As between the kids he sees vrinda

Vrinda surprised to see yug there

And she sings

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Yug sees vrinda

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Vrinda sings

Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Dildar Sajna Hai Ye Pyaar Sajna

At the same time yug also sings

Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Dildar Sajna Hai Ye Pyaar Sajna

It is same like ddlj.

But different scenes.

Same at the food stall..

Dancing at the rain..

Dekha Na Tune Mudke Bhi Peechhe

Kuchh Der To Main Ruka Tha

Jab Dil Ne Tujhko Rokna Chaaha

Door Tu Ja Chuka Tha

Hua Kya Na Jaana

Ye Dil Kyon

Deewana

Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Dildar Sajna Hai Ye Pyaar Sajna

Ay Vakt Rukja Thamja Thaharja

Vaapas Zara Daud Peechhe

Main Chhod Aayi Khud Ko Jahan Pe

Vo Reh Gaya Mod Peechhe

Kahan Main

Kahan Tu

Ye Kaisa

Hai Jaadu

Arre Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Ho Gaya Hai Tujhka To Pyaar Sajna

Laakh Karle Tu Inkaar Sajna

Dildar Sajna Hai Ye Pyaar Sajna

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Kho Gaya .

Vrinda is looking through the window

Where yug also at the window.

They both are lost

Pooja comes to vrinda

Pooja:what's wrong with you vrinda..

Jab se aaye ho bahut udaas ho..

Kya baat hai..

Vrinda:muje pata nahi.

Pooja:hum is waqt delhi mein hai

Vrinda:I knowlekin tum yeh kya baat kar rahe hoo.

Pooja:kyonki tum jis insaan ki bare mein sochrahi

Hoon wo ajnabi heyha usne tere madad ki hai.is ka matlab yeh nahi..ki too uski khayalon mein doobh rahe hoo.

Vrinda:tune teek kaha thawho agar ek ajnabi hota ..toh mera dil kyon yesa sochti hi.

Kyon yesa lagta hai mein usee barsoon se jante hoon.

Pooja:dekh pooja mein tere sab se acchii saheli hoon..tere hamesha se bala chahian mein ne.mein ne jo suna uske baat tu yeh kayal bi apne dil se nikalegi

Vrinda:kya baat

Pooja:jis ladki ko hum hamesha yug ki saath dekh the hay.who yug ki sirf dost hi nahi balki uski mangetar bi hai.

Vrinda:kya..mangetar..yesi baat hai toh who muje baataya kyon nahi..

Pooja:oh sakta hai..toh uski time pass haykyon ki yeh mumbai ladkee hote yesa

Vrinda remembers yug teasing her..helping in all the troublesallshe goes from there

Pooja thinksI know vrinda I expected the same reaction from you bcause im shocked until I heard the news directly from the girl.

Maya.

Maya .is talking to her friends

Neeta:ok maya now I think ur free.as ur problem is solved.now yug never thought of other girl.

Maya:maya always plans perfect..u know I already informed vrinda's friend about me and yug's relationship.and now the girl definitely never tries to meet yug either In dreams..

She laughs evilly.

But she is unaware as brij listen to her words..

Where yug is busy in unpacking.

He opens the bag and finds the cover .

He sees the shirt..

He remembers the incident,,,,,,,,,,

As at the village.all kids are flewing kites.

Yug once again teased vrinda..vrinda 's dress was untidyso she wored the dress of a village lady..yug teases her as sehher ki bandariya ..in gown ki choria..

She gets angry and while yug went to bathroom for bath.she took the shirt and tored..

After that she saw him in cold..

She felt upsetand she sewing his shirt with her own hands.

Yug smiles on seeing this.

Yug:natchadi hai.gussa karti hai..par

Bahut pyariii haiand he sees lovingly at the shirt

At the time vrinda in her room..

She sees the dancing doll.

Kya pooja ki baat sahi yeh

Maya ka uske saath ristha hai.

Agar yesa hai.toh mere saathwoh tease kyon karta hai..

Eisa ehsaas kyon hai

The lady shown.

She is singing.(donot ask me for tune.

Go on the lyrics..)

Dard mein bhi kushi hai..

Pyar ke liye ek pal bhi kaafi hota hai

Duniya se chupologi usee par apni aap se kaise chupaugi.

Usee kyon doondete hoo har gali mein

Bas ek baar dil mein jaakh kar dekho

Kabi tasveer bankar kabiehsaas ban kar..

Tere saath hai

Baagh kar kaha jaa sakte hoo

Jab dil onki milna jaroore hai.

Yeh khel anookhee hai.

Aa likedhe nayee daastaan

Nayee umange..

Nayee tarane.

Loo gayee wahi poorana mukhedee.

Joo ishik ki marzeee rab ki marzee

Vrinda sees the dancing doll

And yug sees the shirt

part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 16 years ago

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srilu

@srilu_123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

hai

sorry for delay

but pls send comments ......

thank u

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Sadaf

@sadaf.12

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

really good plz update really soon!!!!!!

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srilu

@srilu_123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Part 25

Yug is still in thoughts

At that time brij sees this''''.

Yug ki ankheen eh kehte hai ki who maya se nahi vrinda se pyar karta hai

Par maya kitne boori hai''..

Shayad bhagwaan yug ki zindagi sahi mayane mein vrinda se jood thi'''..

Vrinda uski kismat aur manzil bhi hay'''.

Agar yesi baat hai''.toh muje pehle sachii pata lagana hoga'''..

As yug came back he saw brij at the door'''.

Are brij waha kya kar rahe hoo''''..

Yaha awoo.

Brij:kya baat hai yug is shirt ko itne gor se kyon dekh rahe hoo''.

Yug :yeh kiski pyar bari yadeein jo mere chehre par musraharat de sakti hai''.

Brij:usee miss kar rahe hoo'.

Yug:ha yaar''bahut miss kar rahe hoo'''

Pata hai who mujse jagad thi thi.,aur mein usee tease karta tha tha''..us raat badal mein chand tha''aur who waha so rahe the,,,,,,,,aur mein doorisi taraf so raha tha''achanak mere ankhee khule do dekha ''''asmaan mein chand the'.lekin is ke saath mere bagal mein bhi ek chand tha''..shanty see sukoon se sorahe thi''

Bas use dekha pata nahi mere neend mujse kab root kar chale gaye''

Pehle gussa karna''phir wohi wapas akar mafii magna'''uski phikar,masoomiat, bhola pan'..sab kuch itna achha lagta tha ki use ke alawa mein kisi aur ke bare mein sochana band nahi kar saktha hoonn''.

And the background song'''.

(It is the same song there only first part ..this is the second part)

Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Hmm...

Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Uski narm kirnon mein..tumko dekhta hoon to
Dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa..aa

Meri is tanhai mein...mere is veerane mein
Meri is tanhai mein...aa..aa..aa..aa
Mere is veerane mein...aa..aa..aa..aa
Rang leke tum aayeen..
Phir bhi sochta hoon main...aa..aa..aa..aa
Kya yahan tum sach much ho...aa..aa..aa..aa
Ya ho sirf parchhayee
Khaab jaise banta hai aur toot jaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Uski narm kirnon mein..tumko dekhta hoon to..
Dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Dil dhadak sa jaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Raat ki hatheli par...chand jagmagaata hai
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa..aa
Aa..aa..aa..aa..aa..aa

Brij looks at yug

And he thinks no doubt yug really loves vrinda''.

At that time vrinda also seeing at moon..

She sees pooja who is sleeping'..

And she gets a call'''.that is chachi'';s

Payal:kya baat hai vrinda tum ne phone nayi kiya

Sab kuch teek hai na'..

Vrinda:ha chachi'.mere phone karaab ho gaye''..

And vrinda talks something more and excuses for sleep''

Where payal keeps the phone and thinking the point'.what 's wrong with vrinda 'it ssound she is trying to say something to me but fails to say'''

Meantime vrinda''also thinking'..

Sorry chachi'mein ne apse kuch nahi chapee abtak bachpan aap mere sab se jyada kareeb hai''.lekin jis uljan mein apke vrinda phass gaye hai usse ubarne dejiya''''..

Hey takurji eh sab kuch kya hai'''.

Payal prayers to god'..takurji mere vrinda ka khayal rakahana'''''

And vrinda close her eyes

And also yug''.

Part ends