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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Slowly Kanak comes to room,and sees key in table,but Uma hears her Anklet sound and asks,still you are here,wait i vl come,Kanak says no no Umaji and dont know what to say remains silent, before Kanak take keys,Uma comes out ususal shirtless,and towel in hand,Kanak sees him and thinks Umaji is too hot ,now how i am going to manage myself to take keys,Uma sees her and asks what are you thinking??????Kanak suddenly Hugs Uma,Uma got little bit shy and asks Kanak what are you doing????what happened???she blaberingly says,just now you told anything for me so i thought of hugging you,Uma smiles,Kanak slowly keeps her hand on table and took keys.Then When Uma tries to hold her,she again pulls and told him,Massisa,Uma turn around,Kanak runs from there.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Then Uma gets ready and finally he search for keys,but couldnt find that,Meanwhile running down Kanak dashes vth Suman,she asks Bhabhisha where are you going this happily she says to ayurvedic centre to get some medicine,Suman says okay but i found an extreme happiness in your face which i see after lot of days,she says nothing shyingly,i know bhabhisha you cant hide anything from me you love dhadhusha a lot and he too loves you lot,Kanak smiles blushingly,bhabhisha can i ask you onething,but Kanak thinks of oil and says Suman i have important work,We will chat later,Suman says okay bhabhisha.Uma confusingly comes out and dashes vth Suman,Suman laughs,Uma says what's there to laugh,Suman says just now bhabhisha dashed like this but one small change,Uma asks what,she dashed in happiness but dhadhusha you look confused,any problem dhadhusha,Uma says nothing important i couldnt find my cupboard keys,Suman says just now i saw it in bhabhisha's hand,Uma shockingly asks what?????,Suman says she went to ayurvedic centre to take some medicine,is there any problem dhadhusha???,Uma rushes without answering Suman,Suman calls dhadhusha but he leaves,Meanwhile in ayurvedic centre,Kanak opens the cupboard and couldnt find oil anywhere,she checks all cupboard,suddenly hears some sound and she moves back and pulls the cupboard all papers fall down,She feels too nervous,and picks all papers,Uma rushes calling Kanak,Kanak,Kanak feels too nervous and picks up all papers,palomi watches all this and when Kanak takes paper and looks too shocked,Uma reaches there and sees Kanak,Uma looks tensed,Palomi smiles........To be continued ......

Do Kanak find out about divorce papers?????Do Palomi succeeded in her Plan??????How will Uma manage this situation will he loose Kanak once again?????

Plz comment after reading friends.Need your support friends.......

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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Feeling like watching our show. 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you sami.Always a good supporter.I am vth full of smile...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajiraji14

Thank you sami.Always a good supporter.I am vth full of smile...

We feel proud to have you and lovely here as creative writers and a big appreciation to you both for your wonderful art of writing skills.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hai friends back to track,


Kanak reads the paper and hides it,then shockingly looks at Uma,Uma tensely enters the room and sees down all files fall off,then feels relaxed seeing that divorce paper file fall somewhat away from Kanak,Kanak asks what Umaji,Why you look tensed,Uma says tensed,nothing like that,but you seems to be shocked,yes Umaji by hearing your loud voice little bit,then Uma asks what are you doing here???For what you opened my cupboard without my permission??,Kanak in little bit angry voice asks so i need permission to open your cupboard,Uma feels little bit nervous and says nothing like that,but before taking keys you should inform me na,i searched for keys so just asked you,then Kanak laughs and narrates abt palomi and her fear,so i thought of keeping oil before you go to massa's room,Uma asks do Palomi said i kept oil in this cupboard,yes Umaji she told me,you vl keep all your important things in your cupboard.Uma says i vl keep important files,medicine vl not be kept here,i vl keep all medicines only in self,Kanak nods,Uma thinks Palomi knows this very well then why she directed Kanak wrongly,What's her intention i should enquire her about this without Kanak's knowledge,Kanak asks what are you thinking Umaji,Uma says just about a thief who stole my keys,smilingly,Kanak smiles and asks so you are saying me thief,Uma says yes ofcourse,Kanak ask say me Umaji,What I stole?????,Uma comes little bit closer,Kanak have few papers in her hand and holds that behind and feels little bit nervous,Uma comes much closer before he says ,Kanak says i am angry on you Umaji and leaves.Palomi sees all this and got too confused,Kanak didnt notice divorce papers,but what did she take from here,so What is Kanak's plan??????,Uma then picks all files and keeps divorce papers safely where Kanak couldnt find and says in any circumstance, Kanak shouldnt find this,here in room Kanak hides the papers in her bag,and says now my job is done,smilingly.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Palomi then goes to Massisa,and asks do you think for sure Kanak lost her Memory,she in shock asks what???,then Palomi narrates how she directed kanak to get oil,even seeing divorce papers,Kanak didnt react and before she says everything,Massisa slaps her and says why did you do this???,how can you test Kanak like this???,same time Uma enters the room and in anger says,So you did purposefully,you planned to test Kanak,Palomi says no no Umasha just for oil i sent her over there,how do i know you kept divorce papers over there,but after seeing Kanak action i felt like that,Uma says,she didnt notice divorce papers becoz all files fall from cupboard and that file was away from Kanak and you know very well where i keep oil,then for what purpose you directed her saying its in cupboard,Palomi thinks how Kanak search for something else,and thrown the divorce file even after noticing that,she thinks if we say this Umasha for sure vl not believe me now what i vl say,Uma again in angry voice asks for reason,Palomi says i am sorry Umasha in haste and tension about oil,i directed her wrongly,Uma says massisa this is not acceptable,just now she should leave the house,thos shocks Massisa and Palomi,Massisa gives three to four tight slaps to Palomi,Uma further adds even that day it may ur consipiracy against Kanak,that leads to misunderstanding between Kanak and massis,that leads to our divorce,You are big conspirer,you are not trustworthy any more so just leave the house,Uma shouts,Massisa says,Uma plz calm down and Massisa makes Uma to sit down and offer him water,Uma hesitantly accepts it,plz Uma dont mess further already things are messed up,Uma in shock asks am i messing vth things massisa,you know what had happened today if Kanak knows about divorce and past,we will lose Kanak once again,Massisa says even by sending Palomi out of home we vl land in same problem Uma,Kanak vl ask reason for this then again she vl come to know the truth which is not good for Kanak's health,by saying this Massisa shows her eyes to Palomi,she apologise cryingly to Uma,Massisa adds i vl take care of Palomi and make her stay away from Kanak from now on,Uma seeing Palomi says just for Kanak's sake and massisa's words i am sparing you but if once again you try to harm Kanak,i vl not show any kind of mercy to you and one more thing from now on you are not the person of my trust so its better to stay away from me and my Kanak.I am leaving you now,it doesnt mean i forgive you,just for shealter you are here,nothing more than that,better never come before me.Before leaving,Uma in anger says,if anyone try to harm Kanak,i wont see any relationship status with them,becoz for Kanak is important then anything else.Uma leaves,Palomi too cryingly leaves from there.Massisa thinks how she noticed,Uma shirt when Palomi start to narrate things,and smiles evily,then she thinks now this Uma changed a lot for Kanak,so to complete my mission i should find new way,i vl do it for sure. Becoz now Palomi too out of this way.Palomi thinks cryingly,what Kanak took from there vthout Umasha's knowledge,today becoz of Kanak i lost Umasha's trust but soon i vl found everything anout Kanak,then i vl give back her,till that i should remain silent.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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In room,Kanak sits sadly in cot,Uma sees her from behind and changes his angry face and asks Are you angry wth me???? Kanak replies yes,little bit,Uma smilingly asks little bit???Kanak asks what i stole from you???Uma sits near her,and make her to face him by keeping his hands on her both cheek and says my heart,Kanak blushes,then after few sec she pulls him and stand up and says even now i am angry,if that so you didnt fullfill your promise,Uma too stands up and again pull her toward him and says we are outing today evening,so now fullfilled my promise,Kanak shockingly asks wow Umaji,but if before she asks,Uma completes Massisa agreed for our outing,Kanak in shock asks how you know this,i was just thinking about this,Uma says i can sense you all time,Kanak asks for sure then tell me what i feel now,Uma says for sure should i tell,Kanak shyingly nods,Uma comes little bit closer holding her in waist and Kanak's hand over Uma's shoulder and he says I LOVE YOU,Kanak blushes,then Uma kisses her in cheek,Kanak blushes too much,and says Umaji today you are in full of romance,Kanak says even i can sense my Pati dev and kisses him in cheek,Uma and kanak smiles. Then its shown,Ladnu bazar,Kanak and Uma comes to saree shop,kanak purchase few sarees,then Uma says i have small work vl b back in 10 mts,Kanak says just 10mts only,Uma smilingly nods and leaves,after Uma leaves,Kanak goes to courier office,and from her takes a post and says to them its urgent,they told her it vl take 3 days to reach,she agrees and pay them,thy gave her recipt,Uma reaches there and checks for Kanak,Kanak from behind vth recipt in her hand calls Umaji and shockingly both see each other......To be continued friends...

What did Kanak post?????Will Uma find about the courier????

Plz friends suggest me with your comments how the track is going on is it intresting or boring????......

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Raji sorry about my so late reply yaar I've been busy with exams and also my account is having problems here every time i have to try 3 times then it lets me login :/

Like S_ami said, reading ur work always feels like we are watching the show..m I have skimmed through bc of time but when i am more free I will definitely read it all and comment again <3 till then pls dont stop writing!! Whatever you do its amazing Raji

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi friends back to the story,

Kanak sees Uma shockingly,Uma ask where you were????she says nothing important and hides the recipt in her bag,Uma then shows Kanak a big teddy,which he bought for her,in teddy's hand it shows LOVE YOU,Kanak is overwhelmed vth happiness and hugs Uma in mid of bazar before everyone,Uma feels happy,but says Kanak this is not our room,Kanak sees him and comes to sense and says sorry Umaji,Uma smiles.Meanwhile Massisa goes to ayurvedic centre and opens Uma's cupboard withoutanyone's knowledge and searches for papers but she couldnt find and got shocked,she searches again and thinks where are the papers???who took that from here????Do Uma did this????with all this questions too confusingly went to kitchen,there Palomi in kitchen completely shattered vth Uma's words,left something in stove and it got burnt,Massisa shouts Palomi,tgen she comes to sense and off the stove.Massisa asks where are you were???still wth Uma's words,she nods yes then again asks Massisa do you really think that Kanak lost her memory???massisa says why you always ask this question???? Just now for this Uma replied you,again you want Uma to answer for this,Palomi says,Massisa i am damn sure that Kanak never lost her memory,she is just acting,Massisa asks how are you sure abouth this?????,Palomi says i saw it vth my own eyes,she opened cupboard bt for sure she didnt search for oil,sge search for something else,eventhough she herself took the divorce papers but kept it again in cupboard and searched for something else,later when she hears Umasha's voice,she herself pushed all papers here and there and took some documents and hidden it,when Umasha reached there,and she never Utter a word about that papers and even about divorce papers,Massisa thinks if Kanak took that paper but for what,What is her intension????,Palomi further adds what papers do Kanak take from there???if we find that out,then Kanak vl be caught red-handed,Massisa says shut your mouth,its none of your business,if once again Uma see this behaviour then even i cant save you anymore,so just now you decide whether you want to be in this house or not and Massisa leaves in confusion from there,after Massisa leaves,Palomi says i vl catch Kanak red-handed and once again vl gain Umasha's trust on me and smiles evily.In room,Massisa thinks if Kanak dont lost her memory,what is her plan to do with Uma's formula files,whether she knows everything about my copyrights over Mattruveda pharma,but how is that possible????i thought only she knows about Aditya???but now it seems,she is making big conspiracy against me,if that so,then,after few sec no no no it cant be liks that,i am thinking too much about this,but after this i should focus on my goal,Uma's long term dream vl b too mine forever and looks evily.Then she rushes to Kanak's room to search for papers but she couldnt find anywhere in room,she searched under bed,pillow,other cupboards,finally she tries to open Kanak's dress cupboard but she couldnt find key,then she thinks it might be here,i should find key before thy come,but she couldnt find key and Suman call her for dinner,and massisa leaves from there in anger.

Here it become night 9pm,still Kanak and Uma doesnt return home,Massisa roams in living room angrily,In bazar Kanak says Uma today i am so so so happy,soon all my dreams vl come true Umaji in happiness suddenly she says I LOVE YOU UMAJI,Uma in shock sees Kanak,why she is behaving this happy just for outing,Kanak notices this and says i feel hungry Umaji,comw let us have dinner,okay come soon its too late we can go home and have dinner,Kanak says no no Umaji,right now i want to have dinner in restuarant,Uma says in resturant,no no Kanak its not good for health,Kanak says plz Umaji,just for one day,plz na,recultanty Uma agrees seeing Kanak's face,then thy both reached home by 10.30pm,Massisa welcomes them saying this soon you both reached home,Uma says sorry Massisa plz forgive me,we thought of reaching early,but it took too much time,Kanak too apologise to massisa just becoz of her,becoz after long time she went for outing do it took time,Massisa sees Kanak to supectively,but finally says okay,and calls Palomi to serve them dinner,Kanak says we had dinner in restuarant,Massisa shockingly asks restuarant,Kanak says yes and massisa sees Uma,he nods sadly,Massisa in anger left to her room.Uma follows her calling Massisa plz listen to me,Kanak looks at them sadly,Palomi today massisa vl show her real face to Kanak,now let me see how she vl escape from this.

In massisa room,Uma apologise to her for his behaviour,massisa in anger says,Uma now a days,you are going too far away from your dharam,you are saying you are doing all these for sake of Kanak,so just for her you vl forget everything what i thought from childhood???,so that means you forgot me Uma,now i came to know that except Kanak,there is no place for anything or anyone,Uma says nothing like that massisa,how can i forget dharam???,i had done everything just to correct my prev.mistake if that day i didnt throw Kanak out,like this nothing would happened,now i stand as culprit before everyone,just i couldnt forgive myself massisa,whenever Kanak smiles at me i am standing in fire massisa,i cant say truth to her in same manner i cant live life like this massisa,he says if i have to follow dharam then i shouldnt lie to my wife for any reason.But if i say truth i vl loose her forever,then even i cant live in this world anymore,now say me massisa what i have do should i follow dharam or save my wife,he loose his temper,Massisa then make Uma to sit down and ask him to calm down,then she offers him water,she thinks if i talk about anything more,Uma vl never trust me,he vl loose his cool so its better to divert him over his work in some other way,then massisa slowly says,i know my Uma can never go against dharam,Uma means dharam,nothing is important for him,than that,but now due to Kanak's situation,you are just changing your path,i can understand you,but Uma if we go like this do you think,ot vl be good for Kanak,Uma looks at massisa,she says we should make even Kanak to understand our dharam path,see she took responsibility as house's elder bahu and doing all her duty happily,so slowly by this way we can bring her as Kanak,whom we think we lost,so from now on i vl take care of Kanak,so now its time for you to reach your goal which you dreamed for many years,you should concentrate on your work,Uma agrees and thanks massisa for understanding him.Massisa smiles wickedly.Meanwhile bhabho calls to Kanak's mobile and she attends and happily says all goes as per plan bhabho.........To be continued friends.

What is Kanak's plan?????will Massisa succeed by catching Kanak red-handed?????

Plz comment after reading friends......need your support......

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