Wounds Of The Heart (9 Parts Complete) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Hey maya, its good as always! Yes it was not extreme long as your stories are such we want to read more & more! 😃
Trust you maya & I'm sure you'll make everything alright soon! Till then we're waiting & you keep updating! You're amazing! ⭐️

Hey, thank you! I will update very soon! So are you!⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya,

Nice story,
Loved the way u take the story.
Thank u dear

Hey Geetha, thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Awesome story maya its about building of their relationship with unconditional love care trust on each other. I am sure kanak will realize uma is her dream prince whom he waited for she will surely understand uma's true affection and love on her. I am waiting to read how their love and romance grow slowly step by step. 😛

Hey, thank you Divyaa, you always seem to understand my stories and I always appreciate it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TSMSPfan

Love the way story is developing!! Absolutely no hurry elaborate it as per your plan. We are just going with the flow and enjoying things. Don't forget BZ

Hello, thank you again! I wont forget BZ, I promise!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Maya! Like always, the story is awesome, the chapters are too short and our eagerness bigger.
I trust u to the fullest, I won't make u any suggestion, just waiting for updates.🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hindifan

Hi Maya! Like always, the story is awesome, the chapters are too short and our eagerness bigger.

I trust u to the fullest, I won't make u any suggestion, just waiting for updates.🤗

Hello! Thank you, I appreciate it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Maya this story is nice, i m reminded of an old movie by Mani Ratnam, in tamil called Mouna Ragam. Here the story was just the same. It was a cult movie those days. But i guess people on this forum may not be aware of it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4-
Kanak blinked fast, the lights had gone out and she was home alone. Kanak hated the dark, everything looked scarier and when you were alone in it, you felt like you were being watched

The door clinking made Kanak's heart race, her hand held her chest as she stepped forward grabbing a bat Shiv had played with earlier

Lifting it, she slammed it on the person's head. He groaned loudly and fell against the wall, now no longer shrouded in the darkness, the moon lit up his facial features, it was her husband.

"Im sorry, im sorry I didnt know" bringing him to the sofa, she grabbed ice from the freezer, wrapped it up and held it against his head. From the small light on his face, it was easy to see the pain in his eyes, but something made her sure it wasnt because of the injury.

"Why do you hate me" Kanak looked down at Uma, sitting beside her
"I dont, I just dont want this relationship"
Uma hissed before turning away
"Please dont leave I dont like the dark"
With a grunt he sat back down

"Why wont you say my name" "huh"
"You heard me, you dont say my name, why not"
"Well I"
He rolled his eyes and stood up, tired of the look in her eyes whenever her gaze fell upon him

"Uma please" his eyes darkened and he turned back to face her
"Say it again"
Her face flushed and her throat felt dry
"Uma"
He grabbed her hand and pulled her up
"Wont you give me a chance Kanak, just once"

"A chance for what"
"To win your heart"
She looked down at his hand on her waist, she felt dizzy at his proximity
"I cant" "can't what"
"Give you a" she let out a gasp as she felt his lips skim her jugular vein

Her eyes shut tightly, her breathing laboured "Tell me if he made you feel like this" his hand went to her back, she pushed her chest forward, dipping her back as she let out another gasp as he sucked on her neck

"Uma please" "again" he rasped "Say my name again" suddenly he was lying on top of her, his body pinning hers to the sofa
"Uma" she breathed
His hand went to her stomach, tracing up
Without notice, she lifted her hands and rested them on him, one on the back of his neck, the other in his hair

"We have to" she whispered
But his lips moved up to hers and all sane thought left her mind
She trembled in his hold, kissing him back slightly she felt his tounge push into her mouth
It was after all this time some salvation to her pain

Then he pulled back, the weight of his body lifting from hers
The warmth his body offered now leaving her cold and desolate
No, Rajiiv had never made her feel that way

Pulling her legs up beneath her she allowed the tears to fall, the guilt of what she had done washing over her

Do let me know your thoughts!

Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: savithp

Maya this story is nice, i m reminded of an old movie by Mani Ratnam, in tamil called Mouna Ragam. Here the story was just the same. It was a cult movie those days. But i guess people on this forum may not be aware of it.

Hey, thank you! I will have to do some research on it!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayakhan12

Hey, thank you! I will have to do some research on it!


I like your story better dear, lots of romance unlike the old movie where censorship did not allow for those hot scenes 😉

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