The Matchmaker And The SweetMaker Kanuma FF (Part 15 Updated Complete) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Maya...you are took gud👏

New ideas, new plots, fast updates and vamps getting beaten in no time😆.
Update the other parts soon.
Eagerly waiting


Thank you again! I really hope you enjoy the new updates! I thought it was about time to see things from a different point of view!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ThinkTank

Maya this version of Kanum is certainly progressive especially UMA and i enjoyed reading them through ... eagerly waiting for the next updates dear



Thank you, i really hope you enjoy the new updates, I feel like in the show Uma takes a lot of time to move forward, so I thought about writing about Uma when hes already moved forward
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: deejagi

Maya, please update soon dear. Can't wait for long to read the next parts. Full of life in your story


Thank you! I hope you enjoy the new updates, i thought tgis would be a different take on Kanak and Uma
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Parmeen


More more please. This is good



Thank you! I hope you enjoy the other updates!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Dear maya,

I'll make you tea, please give more parts to the story! Very original idea!


Thank you again!! Ive topped up on my tea and updated, I hope you enjoy!:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Hi Maya dear
It was indeed a pleasant surprise or should i saw treat to read your FF.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Maya your imagination runs at supersonic speed 😃 yet the attention to detail is still intact and is crisp to the point .Loving all the parts not to mention pace with which its written absolutely amazing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 14-
The shadows of the darkness crept in as the lightning struck from outside

The light from the television lit up Uma's face as Kanak tried to focus on anything but the television

A shrill scream from the woman on the tv made Kanak jump up , digging her nails into Uma's hand she shoved her face into his arm

"Is it over, is it over"
Uma looked at the tv, it was over but he enjoyed scaring her

"Kanak wait theres something outside"
Kanak squealed as she jumped into his lap "turn it off, turn it off"

Uma laughed as he grabbed the remote and switched the tv off

"Okay its gone"
Kanak shook her head as she still hid her face in his chest

Pushing her hair out of her face , he stroked her hair
"Youre okay, its gone now"

Kanak looked up at Uma , his hand lingered on her cheek
"Uma, I, I dont know what youre doing to me but ive never felt like this before"

Uma kissed her forehead as he stood up, sitting her on the sofa
"We cant get this close again"

Kanak stood up, grabbing his hand "Uma, please dont leave me again"

Uma turned to face her "you remember "
"Bhaboo told me, we dont need to worry about the other people anymore"

Turning to face her he pulled her towards him as he held her close






Part 15-

Nanda walked over to the Rathi household
Going over to Bhaboo she hugged her

"I have brought shagun for Kanak and Uma"
Kanak took her blessings as she hugged Nanda

Uma walked in after her and smiled
Vansh outstretched his hand "if anyone can look after my sister, its you"

Uma shook his hand and thanked him

Rani ran over to Kanak "Im so happy for you, youre marrying Aditya"
Kanak's eyes widened "No, no Uma"

Rani laughed "I'm just teasing you, we all knew this would happen"
Uma walked over "Oh, how so"

Bhaboo smiled "Who do you think calles Aditya back from London, if anything can bring you together its your care for her"

Uma smiled as Kanak grasped his hand

"Turns out you were a preety good matchmaker, you got us together"
Uma laughed "Ill make the sweets for our marriage"

Kanak laughed "You're not that good yet, but its okay ill love you anyway"

Uma wrapped his hand around her waist "Thats good because I love you to"

Here ends the story of the matchmaker and the sweetmaker, I hope you all enjoyed it!

Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi maya...lovely ff...liked it a lot!
Thanks:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Lovely but you ended the story so soon. Please start the new one soon. Pleaseee

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