Another Shadi, another suhag raath updated final part

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Itching to write A short story my recently born hopes for the show getting closer to perhaps a good conclusion.
Kanak and Uma recently got remarried as per wishes of Massa who is on the road to recovery now. Kanak and Uma just completed the pheras and bent down to take ashirwaad from Massa who is now in a wheelchair and speaking. Saras had decided to proceed with the divorce even though Vansh wanted her back after he learned that Saras and Sara are the same. She wants to continue her education and pursue a career.


Kanak was in their bedroom dressed up as a bride waiting for Uma when a bulb lit in her head And she decided to give Uma a run for his money. She had come prepared but had been debating to take her chances on this fourth wedding night chance or just surrender to her new found love, Uma. She made all the preparations and hid in the restroom behind the clothes rack watching intently as Uma came inside the room. UMa locked the door as he saw his bride sitting on the suhag sage/bed with a long ghoongat. UMa smiled but felt A little nervous so he lifted his hands to God asking to make this a blessed start for them. As he sat on the bed next to the bride, he began speaking, " Kanak we are finally here at the Precipice of life on the same page of love. I want to say I love you with every breath I take and with every heart beat in my chest. Shiv chose you as a blessing for me, something I never understood all this time. Please for give me and just bless me and my family with your unconditional love as you have all these months.
I have a gift for you to show you my love and my willingness to change for you ,...for us..."
As Uma said this, he put a box towards the bride and extended one hand to raise the ghoogat. But under the ghoongat much to Umas shock was a mannequin showing a tongue sticking out !
Uma blurted, " yeh Kanak bhi na, Baaz Nahi aye gi! Phir koi naya khel! " ( Kanak , playing another game now)
Kanak watching from behind the rack kept her hand on her mouth to cover her laughter.
Uma called her name around the room as he looked everywhere. Then it occurred to him to check under the bed. As Uma looked under the bed this time he was sure he saw Kanak hiding underneath. He grabbed the leg to pull Kanak out and catch her when she least expected, " Aha! You really think you can fool me now!"
But when Uma pulled out what he thought was kanak , it turned out to be another mannequin!
UMa was now starting to get agitated at being fooled twice! " Enough Kanak ! " but paused to realize he needed to calm down and think like Kanak to outwit her at her own game.
UMa said loudly enough for Kanak to hear, " Im too tired to play these games! I have to wake up for Brahma morath tomorrow morning so I'll just get ready for bed. " and proceeded to open the bathroom door when he noticed a duputta corner from underneath his clothes rack. But Uma pretended not to look in that way and went on with unbuttoning his kurta and taking it off. THen he proceeded to take off his dhoti and belt. When Uma was left in nothing but his shorts, he announced, " Let me take a quick bath to help with the long days weariness!"
At that point Kanak jumped from behind the rack and yelled , " Baray baysharam ho thum! You just needed an excuse to strip didn't you?"
Uma started laughing while grabbing Kanak and cornering her against the wall, " you haven't even seen how shameless I can be yet, dear! It is our suhag raath after all and I will not let this chance go by this fourth time!"
Kanak pushed him away blushing but hiding it under tough exterior saying, " You have to woo me first !"
Uma answered, " Kanak have we not been through enough trials and tribulations already?"
Kanak just ran around the room expecting Uma to follow but Uma grabbed and put on his dhoti again as he wasn't as daring as he had bragged to be a few seconds ago. Kanak just giggled seeing that but felt a little more comfortable.
Suddenly they heard a knock on the door. It was Suman bringing milk for both of them. She and shiv had collaborated to put some herb in their milk so that they would finally let go of their tough exteriors and be themselves tonight!
Kanak drank her milk quickly because she was very hungry and hadn't gotten enough to eat at the wedding, saying " nobody gives the bride any food to eat at the wedding. "
Suman handed the other glass to Uma saying Massa made it herself with my help in the kitchen and would like you to drink this at once."
Uma was so happy to hear that his mother had sent him the milk personally that he drank it one gulp and handed back the glass to Suman.
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savithp thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Naughty Kanak, feeling sad for Uma, by when will his SR happen?
Please continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was so nice.
Naughty kanak.
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Uma sensed something funny with the milk but it was too late. Before he could say anything , Suman left closing the door behind her. UMa locked the door once again and looked at Kanak who was holding a present for him with her ever bright smile. Uma smiled back as he took the box and opened the ribbon. Kanak said, " it's not as exciting as thAt book you gave me on dharam but it will keep us closer".
Uma found a pager inside the box much to his astonishment. Kanak exclaimed, " This doesn't have any harmful rays like the cell phone but if there is an emergency we can send messages" .
Uma was left speechless indeed and thanked her for being so thoughtful. He then gave her his gift.
Kanak took only a second to open it and looked with shock at Uma , discovering a cell phone inside!
" You don't believe in cell phones, then why this?"
Uma replied, " I guess we were thinking the same thing but respecting each other as well. I just wanted you to have it for staying in touch with your family and FaceTime them whenever you like. And if there is an emergency you can reach me".
By now they were both starting to feel a little euphoric and befuddled.
Kanak put the box on one side and her arms around Uma saying, " you are so handsome but such a dunce!"
UMa replied, a little hurt, " why would you say that ? " as he put his arms around her waist.
" You can't even tell when a girl is madly in love with you!", said Kanak giggling.
" Are you talking about Palomi? I don't know why I didn't realize that" teased Uma.
Kanak now got a little upset and pushed Uma to the bed ending up on top of him." Palomi s love you see and mine you never do!"
Uma smiled naughtily, " so show me your love. I have yet to see it!"
Kanak was too loopy to notice her duputta had fallen off as she lay over Uma s bare chest and beltlesss dhoti. She just perched her lips on Umas lips and ignited a fire in Umas heart that did not extinguish until they had become one. Their marriage was complete and a new chapter was about to begin in the morning as man and wife.
IN Massa s room Suman and shiv confessed to adding just a tiny dose of a herb that numbs the senses and gives a sense of euphoria. When Massa asked why you did that and that Uma was going to be upset tomorrow at them. Suman said, Massa you don't know how stubborn they are and I just wanted them to leave their egos aside and just let each other know what they really feel.

The end...
Love to those that like it and those who don't.🤗

Edited by Iceblue - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing Suhagrat sequence well written ice thank u so much dear for wonderful FF 👏Kanak is too bold and naughty 😉uma will become her addict soon😛Wow waiting to
see the real SR of kanum soonThat herbs did magic and made them as one ❤️Hugs to u dear🤗Sizzling hot pair yaar☺️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks friends for your sweet comments! I blame DEebz for getting me into this suhag raath mode! Thanks for bringing me inspiration through your stories!
Love you all!
Edited by Iceblue - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Never thought that I would comment on a article written about SR but not left with much choice. Great write-up and thanks for naughty and bold Kanak
😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I loved every sequence of your story. It was like a normal but awesome continuation of their life. I recognized Kanak and Uma as our loved characters in the happiest moment of their lives. You are a very talented writer. 👏 Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks! But you all are my muses! Everyone here writes amazing stories! And with great speed as Well!
Much gratitude for your appreciation and encouragement!
Edited by Iceblue - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai ice.
It was wonderful
Hats off👏
Finally uma and kanak, became man and wife.

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