Love Makes You Crazy -Kanuma SS (14 Parts Complete) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 7-
Uma gazed at a sleeping Kanak.
Feelings of content filled his heart, lifting his hand he placed it on her hair, brushing the lost strays away from her face.
Standing up he walked out ready to work.

Kanak opened one eye to ensure he was gone before opening both eyes and sitting up.
Rubbing her hands together she was excited to start part 2 of her plan.


Leaning on the door she pushed her head in view of Uma.
"Uma, ive been thinking we should get married again"
Uma's head shot up "really, thats great news"
Kanak was shocked, she hadnt expected him to agree, she expected a multitude of excuses because he was invested in her property, not her.

Was there a chance she had been tricked?
"Hello Kanak" Uma waved his hand infront of her face removing her from her thoughts
"Yes"
"What made you decide this"
Kanak sighed "i know, i know that we're divorced"


Uma stood up, fast.
"Who told you this"
Kanak shrugged "doesnt matter, you lied to me"
Uma laughed loudly "and you fell for it"
Kanak gasped in shock.


Throwing herself forward, she swiped the sweat off her forehead, it was just a dream.
She had to continue with her plan and fast.
But how to bring Uma's truth out was something she struggled with and she realised, she would have to get to know him if she wanted to achieve anything.

Kanak walked out from the bathroom.
Droplets of water from her hair fell on the floor.

Draping her sari around her shoulder she focused on the roses on the skirt at the bottom.
It was beautiful, and she felt overjoyed that Uma had left it for her on the bed for her to wake up to.



A beautiful note to her "i hope you will wear this dress , i cant wait to see you wear it"
A part of her couldnt let him down.
She wanted so badly to impress him.

Turning around she faced Uma.
Pressing a kiss to her forehead he cupped her cheek.
"Thank you" he whispered

Shivering at his touch she hated how he affected her.
Falling for this strange man wasnt part of the plan, but still her heart beat so fast whenever he was around.

"Breakfast is ready, shall we go" Uma asked
Kanak nodded and followed Uma downstairs.
Massi sa sat at the top end of the table, Kanak felt very uneasy as she looked toward her but ignored it.

Looking at the food infront of her she started to eat when Massi sa stopped her "Kanak share Uma's food"
Kanak looked toward Uma who kept smiling at her.
Uma leant toward Kanak "they say the love increases if we feed eachother"

Kanak's eyes widened as Uma held the food out to her, allowing him to feed her she swallowed uncomfortably.
Kanak held out some food in her hand as Uma bit into her finger she pulled her hand back quickly.
He smirked at her as the rest of the table looked toward her in confusion.

"Maasi sa, im going to take Kanak to see her family"
Kanak felt excited to hopefully get some answers.
Saying their goodbyes Uma walked Kanak to the car.

"Uma wait" Palomi shouted
Uma turned to face her "have the offerings"
After feeding Uma, Kanak felt a wrath of jealousy consume her body.

Grabbing Uma's hand she pulled him back "we need to go, we will be late"
Uma nodded as Palomi glared at their retreating figures.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 8-
Kanak watched as her family surrounded her, offering hugs to Uma and her.
Although she remembered nothing she felt the love from her family more than ever.

"Did you know, he continued to visit us, even when he thought you were dead" Bhaboo sighed heavily.
This would be the best person to ask about the shop.
"Bhaboo, does Uma want Kanak Mishtaan Bhandar from me"
Bhaboo laughed "no, he had the shop due to some circumstances but gave it back when he found out it was ours, who told you this"

Kanak couldnt keep her eyes off of Uma.
Sitting with her family she watched him make eye contact with her.
At this moment, nothing seemed to matter more than him.
She allowed her feet to lead her to him.
Uma stood up, confused as Kanak wrapped her arms around him

"Im so lucky to have a husband like you, promise me even when i make mistakes that you wont leave me"
Uma was shocked as he saw Kanak's eyes full to the brim with tears.
Bhaboo smiled at them "young love hm"

Kanak pulled away in embarassment but Uma was left with many questions.
Saying their goodbyes they got into the car.
"Kanak is everything okay" Uma asked worridley
Kanak nodded, grasping his hand "better than okay"



As the car drove away, small drips of oil fell from the car.
Aditya picked up his phone "Ma, its done, they wont survive this time"
Nanda cut off the phone as she smiled brightly, finally she would win.


Kanak looked into the rearview mirror as she focused on the oncoming truck.
"Uma that truck is following"
"Kanak dont be silly, theyre just going this way"
The truck sped up and bashed into the back
"UMA" Kanak shouted as his head flew forward banging into the steering wheel as the car toppled over and fell off the cliff.


Aditya jumped out of the truck as he clapped his hands "goodbye brother, goodbye Kanak"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 9-
Uma grabbed Kanak as the window smashed.
They both toppled forward and down the cliff as the car fell into the ocean with a big bang.

"Kanak, Kanak where are you" shouted Uma
Splashing through the water he focused on the scarf in his view and grabbed her before the water could take her away.

Carrying her to dry land he dropped her to the floor "Kanak, Kanak please open your eyes, i cant lose you, not again please Kanak"
It felt like his cries had fell upon deaf ears.

Grabbing her arms he shook her roughly before cradling her in his arms.
Tears poured down his face as his shoulders shook as he sobbed.
"I thought you said men dont cry"

Uma looked down at a smiling Kanak.
Pulling her up he hugged her tightly "i cant lose you Kanak"
Then suddenly he stopped, pulling back he looked at her "you remember" he asked
Kanak nodded.

After thanking the Lord, Uma picked Kanak up "we need a place to stay for the night"
"Uma, i can walk" Kanak said, not really that convincingly.
"I have nearly lost you 3 times now, i wont take anymore chances" Uma's voice was sincere.

Kanak nodded in understanding, resting her head on his shoulder she allowed him to walk her to a safe place.


A loud growl woke Kanak up from her slumber.
Looking around she realised she had been left on a bed of leaves, Uma was nowhere in sight.
Looking forward, bright gleaming eyes faced her, the tiger growled again as it inched closer.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 10-
Uma continued to look for wood to start a fire when he heard Kanak scream his name.

Dropping the wood he ran quickly toward where he had left her.
"Kanak, Kanak where are you"
Suddenly a shoe fell onto his shoulder, more precisley Kanak's shoe.
Looking up into the tree another shoe flew down and hit him in the face.


"Uma, Uma save me, there was a tiger" Kanak begged
"Why didnt you just throw your shoes at it, it would've gone away" Uma replied smugly
Crossing her arms Kanak looked away, the branch cracked with her sudden movement as Kanak fell to the floor.


Standing up she rubbed her leg as Uma was bent over, shoulders shaking
"Uma, what is this? Im injured and youre laughing at me"
Uma looked up, biting his lip to stop from laughing but continued as he saw the twig in her hair.
Slapping him on the arm Kanak huffed loudly "i dreamed of a prince charming and yet all i get is you, what kind of life is this Shiv Ji" Kanak asked as she looked up into the sky


An arm wrapped around her waist, making Kanak jump, Uma rested his chin on her shoulder "a happy one"
Kanak smiled at that as she rested her head onto his and looked at the stars.

A beautiful night, for a beautiful couple, but the pathway to happiness wasnt clear of all obstacles just yet.

Hope you're enjoying so far, please let me know what you think!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi
I have enjoyed reading this😊 please continue. 😊This is good😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Parmeen

Hi

I have enjoyed reading this😊 please continue. 😊This is good😊



Thank you! I will update soon!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai mayakhan..
Awesome update,
I enjoyed the story..
Keep writing dear..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Read all parts in one go.
Story has pace😆...fast & furious...
I liked the fact that misunderstandings didn't last long😃
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai mayakhan..

Awesome update,
I enjoyed the story..
Keep writing dear..


Thank you, i will be updating later on today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Thanks for continuing maya!


No problem! Ill be updating later on

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