Mohabbat Kanuma ff Prologue A and B updated

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Suddenly I got an idea to write this ff, if u want me to write this to pls comment I will write it after ur permission PLOT= This is story of an orphan girl Kanak with her 6 yr old sister,and Uma a billionarere who fall in love at first side. A girl wth haunted past and a sweet caring lover how he make her came out from that haunted past with his love and care In this ff Uma is sweet caring loving not dharmik I m not good at writing this is my second attempt after chat pakori but I will write it only after ur all permission .so pls tell me do u want me to write this ff or not
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Posted: 7 years ago
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please write sounds interesting😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please write...
It looks very interesting..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please write it...very interesting story!
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We are waiting for the update please...

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Character Sketch. Kanak= An Orphan girl leaves in rented house with her 6 yr old sister. Kanak works in a shopping mall as sales girl Uma=A billionare very sweet, caring,loving person a billionare without ego but he dont believe in God Pankhuri=Kanak sister her world revolves around her kanak di . Shiv=Uma 7 yr Old BrOtheR. MasA=A sweet loving Mother
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Prologue. A girl is sleeping peacefully on her bed suddenly she wakes. up bcoz of a nightmare a nightmare or I can say reality her sad and haunted past which turns her life upside down her forehead is cover with sweat she wants to run away from this life she saw on her left side where her small sister is sleeping peacefully her only reason to live she have to live for her sister . Do u want me to continue
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Prologue.2. Uma house. Masa:Uma take this(after arti masa came to Uma with prasad) Uma:masa u know na I don't believe in all this Masa=beta I know one day u will believe in God. Uma=U re my God masa I don't need any other god after saying this he touch masa feet take her blessings After puja everyone is sitting on dinning table waiting for breakfast masa serves food to everyone After breakfast Uma left for his office suddenly he saw a girl in pink suit from his car.she is coming out from temple after s seeing her he forgets all his surrounding her smile mesmerized him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting😃 plz continue livelihood.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...i dont believe that u r second time writer...very good and polished writing

Loved prologues...

Fir aage kya huaa...

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