Kanak Uma SS : Kuch Ranjishein!! Final part updt pg 33 - Page 22

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much blue fo the update
Romance is in the air. You gave me goosebumps when Uma hold Kanak's hand and said He likes her sandalwood frangrance in her hands. It's like a frozen moment to me where their eyes locked and I loved that scene.

Uma's clever answer is wonderful " I like watching What I am seeing"... Cheeky answer..





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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey there Blue !!
I loved reading this story of yours in a go. You have a very different style of narrating a story, having minimum dialogues and more of descriptive words. Your story has a very different plot and we as viewers can't predict what'll happen next, so that is what makes it very interesting.

Update soon...😆😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Thank you so much blue fo the update

Romance is in the air. You gave me goosebumps when Uma hold Kanak's hand and said He likes her sandalwood frangrance in her hands. It's like a frozen moment to me where their eyes locked and I loved that scene.

Uma's clever answer is wonderful " I like watching What I am seeing"... Cheeky answer..







Hey there Manasa
Thank you for reading and a lovely comment.
This update made it today only because of you. So thank you for pushing me and reminding me 😉

That holding her hand in the rain is my favorite part too... but the rain washes away the past and makes way for new beginnings stole the show for me. - how Uma made rain a symbol to wash away his misery and start fresh. But Kanak who usually could look through him, doesn't understand 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Blue Kanum romance has started Chandan ki Mehek sounds very romantic uma holding her hands 😳 Kanak blushing And the rain sequence adds more beauty to the story .Wow u always fascinate me with ur sstyle of writing 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: VividDiamond

Hey there Blue !!

I loved reading this story of yours in a go. You have a very different style of narrating a story, having minimum dialogues and more of descriptive words. Your story has a very different plot and we as viewers can't predict what'll happen next, so that is what makes it very interesting.

Update soon...😆😊



Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I am glad you took time to read it all in a go... it's a lot of boring stuff in between 😆
And I am supper happy that you liked the story and how it's going so far...

Thank you.
Will definitely try to update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg Blue... awesome update my super star writer ⭐️⭐️👏
Love each and every line, love the rain, fragrance of earth after rain. Love is in the air, uma and kanak are so into each other that they forget their past life. I am so excited for the future story and past of uma must be very interesting .
Thanks a lot Blue!! God bless you!! Keep writing!! ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Hi Blue Kanum romance has started Chandan ki Mehek sounds very romantic uma holding her hands 😳 Kanak blushing And the rain sequence adds more beauty to the story .Wow u always fascinate me with ur sstyle of writing 🤗



Hey there Divya
Thank you for reading and a lovely comment.
Yeah i have started the romance angle, it's very very subtle and weird in a sense... it's a state of confusion for both of them. One is staying away, while other is on a different track, he likes what he is seeing 😉
Keep reading.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey bluey ,


Loved the update . I am falling short of adjectives and may be should consult a thesaurus soon to make my comment not monotonous. Great that the romance is slowly and steadily seeping in . Your Uma is so smart yaar " He likes what he is seeing " . Rain did its magic and brought in a romantic mood and Uma confessed he liked something about her but then they were washed away too soon as reality strikes him . Both of them are caught between their worlds and I hope they find their island soon amidst their ocean of pain and struggles . Do grace us with your midweek update we shall all be chuffed .


Luv n regards

Sahana


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Omg Blue... awesome update my super star writer⭐️⭐️👏

Love each and every line, love the rain, fragrance of earth after rain. Love is in the air, uma and kanak are so into each other that they forget their past life. I am so excited for the future story and past of uma must be very interesting .
Thanks a lot Blue!! God bless you!! Keep writing!!⭐️



Hey there Mansi - my superstar reader 🤗
Thank you for reading and for such a sweet n beautiful comment.
Yes all the elements of romance are there be it the silence, the rain or the privacy, Uma has wanted to step forward but that one time Kanak was to look through him, she didn't see.
He was talking in undertones, which Kanak couldn't understand as of yet. And she went on to say stuff that she thought was relatable according to her. They had a moment which just passed by, both of them unable to.

Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dear blue

Gentle reminder and request for tomorrow's update that you promised.


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