VAMPIRES-for good - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
OOOMMMGGGG AWSUMMM woh ghar le aaya...yaaaayyy..i cnt w8 till she finds out the secret...awww i feel bad fo saksham..hez such a sweetheart😳...cnt w8
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
veru nice sonali its very gud how do u think man so nicely u put boman in between who is the next character r u going to put dont tell me just asked but overall its awesome and dont worry i will start wring my story very soon and u willb the first 1 to comment on tht
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
k guys da next prt
Part~18
every1 is in da sittin hall laughin n crackin jokes n p2 saksh ke sare pole bhi khol rahi hai aur usse guse se lal-pila kar rahi n evn his dad is tellin her everythin abt his childhood...ex:jab yeh bathroom main hotha yeh hamesha Himesh Reshamya ka gana ga kar bahar nikal ta tha who bhi nakh ke sath
dad-ithna sab hotha hai coll main aur yeh nalayak(hittin saksh on da head) mujhe kuch nahi bathata hai
p2 is laughin n saksh is lookin at her wid angry eyes
dad-sach kahu toh bade dino bad mera peat hasi se dukhraha hai....n laughs
saksh(angry)-accha hasi bahuth ho gaya chalo khana khate hai.
p2-khana....i'm sry lekin mujhe lagtha hai ke ab mujhe chalne chahiye.
saksh-r u mad
dad-han beta khana nahi khaogi
p2-nahi uncle...main chalti hun.....warna aapko taqlif hogi
dad-taqlif kaisi.....ur welcum anytym
p2-lekin...
dad-lekin-wekin kuch nahi ur stayin
p2-ok f9
n dad goes da kitchen
p2 is followin him whn saksh pulls her hand n thy lean on da wall
thy r lost in each others eyes.......
slowly saksh goes near her ears n she gets a bit embarrased(but in a happy way)
saksh-p2 main tumse kuch kehna cahtha hun....yeh sabd mare zindagi main bathut maine rakh tha hai...
p2-bolo nah
n she closes her eyes
saksh-I....I...
p2- I?
saksh-I love.....
p2 gets anxious
saksh-I love...ur dress
p2 opens her eyes
p2-kya
saksh laughs
p2 gets a lil sad
p2-tum yehi kehna chahthe the?
saksh-han tumhe kya laga..........main kya kehne wala tha?
p2(sad)-nahi kuch nahi bas aise hi.
saksh-arre batho nah
p2-nahi saksh kuch nahi sach main
saksh-ok as u say madam
saksh holds p2's ears
p2-saksh ao ao kya kar rahai ho tum....chodo nah
saksh-accha tho madam main aisa karu tho dukhtha hai han......aur jab tum mere dad ko sab kuch bathado tho kuch nahi han...
p2 strts laughin
saksh-arre tum hans rah ho
p2-of course ....after5 all tumhare dad ko tumhare karthutho ke bare main patha chal na chahiye nah
saksh-tho sirf mere bure karthutho ke bare main kyun...akhir maine kuch acche karam bhi kiye hai nah woh sab nahi keh sakthi
p2-saksh agar tumne cuch accha kiya hai tabhi bathaungi nah
saksh-matlab....
n strts chasin her
runnin runnin thy reach a room wid a pretty door different 4m da others.
p2 sees da door n stops there
saksh cums 4m bac a hits her on da head
saksh-pakad liya!
but p2 is till starin at da door
saksh-hello(n staps his finger)
p2 cums bac 2 her senses
saksh-kya hua?kaha kho gayi?
p2-nahi kuch nahi.....saksh yeh darwaja..........
saksh-han yeh kamra hame liye bahut important
p2-kyun
saksh-yeh main tumhe abhi nahi batha saktha jab sahi waqt ayega tab bathaonga.....promise
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i'll continue soon
bye
Edited by psjiggy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
wooh afta so long time m here in ur ff n it feelz gr8😛😳 oh mann shona u did it again👏 coz of short of time, i jst could read da last part bt i kinda got da story til nw, i think ash se picha chud gaya humare sakshu ka👏 bt dey havn't proposed each-other yet..???😕 jaldi karo saksh bhaioya, kahi gaadi chut na jaaye😛😆😆 n wat can be da mistry of det darwaza..!!!!🤔 kahi vahaan se bhoot-woot na nikale like 1920 movie😕😆😆 mann kahi tum apne romantic ff ko horror sequence me badlna toh nahi chahti na..?!!!!😕😆 lolz kidin, nice upcmin twist vid diz mystry i must say👏 rockin jaan as alwayz👍🏼 keep it up, m deadly waitin 4 da nxt part n promise 2 visit regulary 4m nw on😳😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
awwwwwwwwwwwwww cuttie jaan ithne dino bad miss u so much yarr....thanx so much dude 4 da comment......after so long........hope 2 hear more 4m u jaan bye....tc......hf...cya

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