AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09 - Page 4

wow sounds good from what i read continue soon cant wait to read more

a very good beginning,...Armaan being so mean is new,.....please continue....

nice consept...........keep it up.............

hey gr8 intro! cant wait to read more! plz pm me when u cont :)

amazing start

Heyy great first part!
I'm definitely sure that the girl was Ridzy....and armaan bhi na...what a jerk...I had a feeling that it was armaan  when I was reading it.
Omg he called her ugly...how dare he...ya know I bet he's soon going to think that she's one of the most beautiful women he's ever seen lol.
Hun you've already got me hooked...please do continue soon.
Thanks soo much for the pm...I hope you'll be able to pm me when you post the next part?
Amazing job once again

~Mira~

hyyyyyyyyy! count me in n armaan being so rude! can't stand it! but i wonder who da gurl hapens too b?????????? neways do PM me da next tym u update!!!!!!!

woww..gr8 start....hmmmmm hope tht girl is nt riddhima...w8ing to see armaan transform into a sweet person...hehhee..actually he is good in any character..pls update soon.

WOW Taira... loved part 1... simply great

ok, so Armaan's the typical flirt... but who was the girl? Ridhima?...well, i hope so...lol... o boy! he called her ugly!... 🤢.... how mean!... well i hope he feels bad soon, nd the check he gave her... well i think she should keep it or something for later.... o man i've alredy started planning out this story in my head😆,...lol... loved the concept

continue soon, nd pm me please

Love,
Irsa

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Wow...amazing start!

 

Ur ff sounds really itneresting...Just wanna knoe whu that girl is!

And Armaan is so cheap!

 

Anyways do continue soon!

 

Ur ff intro is mind-blowing!

 

Do PM me once u do!

 

 

-Marisha