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Posted: 16 years ago
hey pari...sorry for late rply bt this update was awesome...not only bani and heer even i was feeling like slapping tht stupid prem... post the next part soon...would love to see prem wooing heer but please make him realize soon...


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Posted: 16 years ago
waitingggggggggggg for da update asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heer hann

hahaha ullu prem kitna un romentic hain!hahaha!prem take a lesson from me!lol! just kidding loved this part n also loved this un romentic prem hahaha!i m sure he is gona improve loved this update as usual do continue very soon!

Don't worry, he will learn to romance our Heer until she wfeels weak in her knees soon enough and then no wone will be able to hide... Thanks! Hopefully you will like the next one..

Originally posted by: riks1

hey pari nice update and thanx a lot for the pm now to the update what was that!!!!! prem asking heer to marry him just like that... why the hell doesn't he believe in love........ is it some mystery from the past? i can't believe ki our prem can be so unromantic

You will find out the history soon enough... and our Prem being unromantic... don't worry not for long, soon enough he is going to make us all weak in our knees especially Heer... 😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Okay Pari! That looks very entertaining.. I cannot believe Prem asked Heer to marry him like that! Still waiting to see Rahul's position in all of this..

Love,
Radz

Haha I know stupid prem right! haha well about rahul... i hadn't planned on bringing him back for a few updates so I will see what i can do 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Thapanee

hey great update i really really enjoyed reading this part, bani and armaan are cute giving ideas to prem hope he realizes soon tht he is in love with heer

Heey thanks! I am glad you liked it and hopefully Prem learns fast otherwise poor Heer...

Originally posted by: destinny

very very cute update. eagerly waiting for next one. Do Update SOON

Thanks! Will be updating right after the comments, glad you like it!

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum super update
loved it
prem propose in the kitchen


Haha, if a guy ever proposed to me in a kitchen he is going to get a long lecture on how completely UNromantic that is! but hopefully next time Prem will do better...

Originally posted by: Penzee2007

that was so cute (epically Prem)!!!!!!!!!!!!

wait does he love heer or is he gonna realize or is he gonna confess to her?????????????
I really want to know.......
well overall that awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Glad you liked it... Prem does not know what he feels for Heer... he likes her but not the way she likes him... at least not yet...
hopefully soon he realizes that he is in love with her...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~sweet Ash~

hi pari! i love this update.

the whole wooing scenario going on is amazing.
cant what u hav in store for their dinner date.
Bani wanting 2 slap prem is cute.
hopefully heer will say yes.
looking 4ward 2 the nxt part
ayesha

Thanks! The dinner is somewhat humorous and i hope all of you like it! haha and hopefully the wooing will turn out to be how i planned it out...

Originally posted by: sweetprincezz

i loved it....continue soon
thanks for the pm

No problemo! And will updating soon, thanks...

Originally posted by: munam_13

hey pari...sorry for late rply bt this update was awesome...not only bani and heer even i was feeling like slapping tht stupid prem... post the next part soon...would love to see prem wooing heer but please make him realize soon...


bbye
tc
priyo

Heeey no problem at all! Haha I think everyone felt like slapping Prem at that update but the next one will make everyone fall in love with him all over again... Posting the next part soon, hopefully you will like it =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
HEEEY FOLKS!! I am done with midterms!! Okay, I am lying I have one thursday but I am trying to procrastinate as much as I can 😉

Here is the next update and I was going to divide this into two parts but I have decided to give you guys a treat 😛

Dontcha just love me... LOL 😆

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Part 8

Heer saw Prem approaching her and hoped that Bani or Armaan would come and rescue her before it was too late. The smile on Prem's face widened making Heer even more confused.

"What are you doing tonight Heer?" Prem asked as he picked up her duppatta and put it on her.

Heer looked at the dupatta and back at Prem and finally managed, "Nothing why?"

"Good, then be ready at 6." Prem picked up the phone to dial and make a reservation.

"Oh okay, I am guessing the other two are free too," Heer sighed with huge relief. She started to walk out of the room.

Prem smiled and spoke into the phone, "Hi, can I make a reservation for two? Thanks its Prem Juneja."

Heer looked up, "For two? Why aren't Bani and Armaan coming?"

Prem hung up, "It's our date, what are they going to do?"

"Date…" Heer coughed and fumbled with words, "What are you talking about?"

"I realized you were right, you deserve better and I am going to try and be the better that you deserve. Now will you help me with that or not?" Prem extended his hand forward.

Heer stared and found herself saying, "I know why you are doing this but you don't have to feel guilty. I told you how I feel and I don't expect it back so stop."

"I am doing it for me more than for you, so say yes because you want my misery to end." Prem knew Heer's weakness now, him.

Heer sighed, it was worth a shot right, "Fine, 6 it is."

Prem kissed Heer's hand softly and let her be for a while. He went outside wondering if he was doing the right thing or was he just raising her hopes.

Six came too quickly and though Heer had agreed, she had also decided that she was going to make him work for it all. She looked at the gorgeous dress in her closet and wondered if she should wear that or not.

Prem was downstairs, waiting for Heer to come down. He looked up and was shocked, he had expected her to wear a dress or at least dress cordially, instead she was coming down wearing ragged, torn jeans and a bright top.

Heer tried to control her laughter at Prem's face. She had decided that this was the first step to make him work for this date and her company, she was done being taken for granted.

Prem hid his thoughts by the time Heer came downstairs and he offered his hand and the two of them went out of the house together.

Heer laughed as they sat inside the car, and Prem decided to play along "What is so amusing?"

Heer stopped laughing and turned all serious, "You look like you just came out of a magazine and I look like a mess, I hope you don't regret going with me."

Prem laughed, "I am going for your company not to see your fashion style. And anyways, I still think you look gorgeous in a very ragged way."

Heer blushed despite trying to control her emotions, "So, how was work today? And your girl friend… does she know we are out here?"

Prem looked straight at the road, "Do you really think I am the type of guy who would have a girlfriend and still ask you out?"

Heer smiled, "Do you think I am the type of girl who would go out with a man who did that?"

"Oo, I will take that as a compliment." Prem felt a rush of feelings when he turned to see Heer's hair flying all over her face because of the wind. She looked so serene despite the clothes.

The two of them went inside the restaurant causing people to turn faces. Heer felt shy all of a sudden, but she had to continue on just to see Prem's reaction. The two of them sat down and the waiter came and gave them a weird look.

The two ladies sitting next to Prem and Heer were staring at Heer in amazement, "What a good looking boy and look at the type of girl he is here with. She looks like a mess, they don't match at all."

Prem got up and walked towards them to Heer's surprise. He tapped the lady on the shoulder, "Did you say something?"

The lady mumbled some things, "I am sorry, I didn't know I was that loud."

"Well, you were. And anyway, I think that we look awesome together and you said we don't match?" Prem loosened his tie, ripped off a few buttons off his shirt, put his hand through his hair making it a mess. "Now do we look made for each other? I thought so."

Prem sat down and Heer stared at him in shock. She was still quite unsure of whether to laugh at him or be awed by what he just did. "You look cute with your hair a mess and your shirt not tucked in."

Prem and Heer looked at each other in silence for a few seconds and then burst into laughter annoying the two ladies who got up and left in a big huff.

The dinner was not awkward for even one second as they thought it might have been. Before anything else, Heer and Prem were best friends so having something to talk about was never hard.

Heer was shocked at how much she didn't know about Prem despite living with him, "What did he do then?"

"Nothing, he just got up, went in front of everyone and yelled at the poor guy." Prem stated, he was telling her a story from work.

"And no one did anything?" Heer was appalled at how these union workers teamed up against a poor man and made him steal for them and take the blame on himself.

"No, no one knew the truth at the time. The union workers had planted enough evidence against the poor guy." Prem was taken back by the amount of sympathy Heer felt for this man. He should have known, she would see tears in someone else's eyes and feel the pain herself.

"Well is he okay now?" Heer couldn't believe people would stoop so low in this world for money.

Prem smiled and put his hand on hers, "He is perfectly fine. His daughter is getting married tomorrow and I was invited, do you want to go? I didn't plan on going alone"

"To meet a man who allowed himself to go to jail just to save his family, of course." Heer was excited, it had been sometime since they had gone to a wedding. She loved the atmosphere, it made her feel complete. Family running all over the place, cousins cracking stupid jokes, friends teasing each other, and two people uniting to become one.

Prem saw the image of a beautiful wedding in Heer's eyes, "It's not that grand or anything. They are a small family with a low income."

"Prem, it is the emotions that make a wedding so beautiful. Hell, even a court marriage could be turned romantic, all you need is two people who want to be with each other for the rest of their lives." Heer felt awkward as soon as she said that but did not let me seen on her face.

Just then a girl came up to the table and put her hand on Prem's shoulder, "Prem, what a pleasant surprise."

Heer did not like the smile that spread across Prem's face as he got up to hug the girl, "What are you doing here?"

"Playing cricket, silly of course I am here for dinner." The girl was still holding Prem's hand and standing at a close proximity.

Heer coughed, making her presence be known. Prem turned to Heer and realized where he was standing, "Heer this is Ash and Ash this is Heer."

Ash turned towards Heer and gave a somewhat friendly smile, "Okay Prem, I will see you at work tomorrow."

Prem sat back down and was enjoying Heer's expression, "Isn't she sweet?"

"Sweet my foot," Heer didn't want to be affected but she was, "Who is she?"

"Remember I told you I had a girlfriend? It's her." Prem saw the change in Heer's face and controlled his laughter.

"Her? Does she know you guys are broken up because she was standing pretty damn close." Heer wondered whether Prem was tagging both of them along.

Prem put on a serious face, "Actually, I did tell her yesterday that we should break up and she was fine with it but this morning at work she came and hugged me and asked me when we are going on our next date. I swear I think she is bipolar."

Heer looked at Prem confused, "So she thinks you guys are together? Prem, what are we? Are we friends out for dinner, or are we dating, what are we doing?"

"You are my girlfriend. We have established that much." Prem was wondering where Heer was heading with this.

"Okay, let's go." Heer got up and took Prem's hand.

"Where exactly are we going?" Prem had just been joking about Ash being bipolar. After he had told her that he was with Heer, she had simply backed away and said they were better as friends.

Heer was in no mood to listen. She walked up to Ash and her boyfriend and pretended to walk by them but accidently bumping into Ash. Ash dropped her drink all over her dress and turned to Heer with an angry face.

Heer suddenly put a sorry face on, "Oh I am so sorry, I didn't mean to do that."

Ash turned and saw the person and smiled, "It's okay."

Heer didn't like Ash at all, she was too nice. "No seriously, I am very sorry. Here take my card, my name is Heer and this here is MY BOYFRIEND Prem. Buy a new dress and send me the bill, it's the least I could do."

With that said Heer walked away with Prem. As soon as they were out of the store, Prem could no longer keep his laughter in.

Heer turned to Prem, "What are you laughing at?"

"Heer, you are insane!" Prem couldn't believe what had just happened.

"She had to know that you were my boyfriend. I am not the type who shares boyfriends." Heer was confused and why Prem was still laughing.

"Sweetheart, I was just kidding about the whole bipolar thing. She knows who you were but she is probably wondering why I am with you now." Prem was still trying hard to control his laughter as he went towards Heer to draw her into a hug.

"Thanks for making a fool out of me," Heer punched Prem slightly as she backed away from him. She started to walk away.

Prem saw the dent in the road, "Be caref…" before he could finish Heer was down on her knees yelling with pain.

"Ouch, stupid heels, great they broke now." Heer took the shoes off.

"Why were you wearing heels as it is? You wore ripped jeans with 3 inch heels?" Prem tried to move her foot to make sure it wasn't broken or badly damaged.

Heer laughed, "Because Bani said that if I wore heels I would look taller than you and I was going for the worst looking couple certificate today."

"See what you get for trying to embarrass me, now I have to pick you up. It's not as easy as they show it on TV, you are big and my back will probably break carrying you." Prem said it jokingly.

Heer pushed Prem's hand away, "I can do it myself. And anyway, its not as if all the girls enjoy being picked up like they show it on TV. Most of the times it's the girls who end up taking care of the guys."

"Oh yah, then why are you the one with the swollen foot?" Prem laughed as he swooped Heer up, "Yah, it's definitely not as easy as they make it seem…"

"Shut up," Heer laughed even as she said it because people were starting to stare at her and despite all her attempts she heard aunties around them say, "What a cute couple."

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And.... did you guys find it funny? Like it? Hate it... let me know =)

-Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
its awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice update, their date was really funny, and cute, waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey!
Awesome update!
I loved it!
Ohh!
Heer was sooo funny dressing up in ripped jeans adn bright top and 3 inch heels! hahaha, and when she bumped into Ash....couldn't stop laughing!
and then when Prem and Heer were talking at the end....hehe!
Can't wait till the next update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
cute and funny update....... would really like to see Heer in ripped jeans hehehe

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