New FF: Magical Hearts New Part Pg. 27

Hi guys,

I have never written in the KDMHMD forum before, though I love the show! I figured why not start writing in here with a fanfic to show you guys just how much I love this couple.

This idea has been playing in my mind for a few days and I figured why not put my three favorite couple together in one fanfic. I know it's a long shot, but let's see how this turns out.

I love Prem and Heer, their sweet innocent love (something that I will not change in this fanfic), I love the nok-jhok in Dil Mil Gaye and the chemistry of Jai and Bani.

I like writing, as it gives me a a way to put my ideas and thoughts out there, but I know there will be times when I will have a writer's block. That's when you guys have to help me! I love PMs and comments, so feel free to do both! Look forward to talking to all of you in the future!

Anyway, here is the storyline: (Let me know what you think!! I will start with the first part tommorow if you guys like this)

Four orphans, one orphanage. That's is where this story starts, four friends, four lonely children find comfort in one another.

Prem (19), Heer (18), Armaan (15), and Bani (14) are all stranded and left alone in an orphanage. Prem is old enough to go out and get a job and the four of them promise not to ever leave each other's hands. Prem and Heer take custody of Armaan and Bani and the four of them live in a house that they built with love. It is a small yet comfortable house where the four of them have settled their entire life.

As they grow up, however, they realize that changes are going to come. Thought they were always together in the past, some things gradually change and others are forced to change.

The four of them are best friends above anything. Love, friendship, betrayal are part of everyone's life and it now up to the four of them to group up and realize what it is like to feel all of these.

They are now older, six years have passed since they left the orphanage together, as four, as a family. Things have changed, feelings for each other have developed, and now as they grow old, find love, find happiness, they must look at the change and the people they become.

Hope you guys like it, it is something new that I am trying. Please do let me know what you think' I will post the first part tomorrow if I get a good response. Thanks a lot! =)

Characters:

Ever so Hesitant, Slow and Shy Couple:

Hamesha ladte jhagadte (Always fighting couple):

Pyar Aur Innocent Couple:

-Pari :o)

Sorry will fix the pictures in a few minutes!! =)

-Pari

YEAH SURE, PLZ WRITE I'LL READ IT I LIKED THE STORY LINE. I AM LOOKING FORWARD FOR UR UR FANFIC...
LUV IQRA

very nice intro...i liked ure story..its good..pls start soon 😊

i be waiting for fanfic plz
write ur ff

I like the concept! Can't wait for the first part, it sounds really interesting... 😃

Iqra, Thanks for your comments, hopefully you like what I have in store for all of you.

Sweetprincezz, Thanks, will post the first part tommorow or tonight if possible.

Pooji, thanks alot. I am writing it as we speak.

Kimmu, I am glad you liked the concept, and that is why I wish I don't disappoint!

Thanks guys all of these comments mean a lot and keep me wanting to write more =)

-Pari

ya do post soon i will be waiting for ur story to start 😳

hey pari love the whole concept of your story so please update soon. 😊

I love the concept of ur story its diff. from the rest. pls update soon!😛