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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
oh wow!!! awesome intro! totally makes me want to read the ff now! please post the first part soon!!

and if u can.. please pm me!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
i'm speachless aftr reading ur intro and watching the promo..... cant wait for ur updates........

oh god I miss my KASH so much...... but i guess u'll help us to retrieve those beautiful moments again...... jus loved it........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

I really liek ur intro! 👏
And the storyline sounds fantastic too! 😳

Please begin soon and do PM me!


*~*Marisha*~*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
yesh anvr kash ff
im soo excited dnt watch dmg dat much
bt luv readin kash ffs its greta
left a coment on youtueb beatuful
n wooow luvin dis storyline already
cnt wait 4 u to post pat 1 updte sooon plzzz

nizma x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
hey great intro yaar...n wat a video.....i just fell in love with it.....d song is just sooooooooo beautiful...its one of my personal favourites toooooooo.....plzzzzz do update soon....n pm me if u can..
lots of luvvvvvvvvv
maddy 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
hey 😊
lovely intro n concept yaar
its superb
👏
n actually the promo was mindblowing
update fast
n do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
::Some BhaK BhaK 😆 ::
- The song is from the movie Jannat and is called Haan Tu Hain.
- Armaan and Riddhima aren't doctors in this FF. They're just regular people but later on I'll describe their job that they'll be doing 😳
-When I refer to Riddzy's "Outfit" I mean her regular clothes in DMG-not sure of what you call them 😆


..::Part 1..::


      Riddhima waved to Anjali and Muskaan in the airport, signaling that she'll join them in a moment. Anjali and Muskaan stood in the airport doorway, ready to go outside. Riddhima turned and continued her conversation on the phone with her boyfriend, Richie.
Ridz: Richie, jaane ka waqt agaya hai.
Richie: Oh yaar...tum bhi na. Aise chod ker chali gayee jaise mujhe tumhari zarurat nahin hai.
      Riddhima smiled. He sounded like a little child who wanted his mother right by side when he asked.
Riddz: Richie, Muskaan ki shaadi ki preparations hamare sir per hain. We'll keep in touch, okay?
Richie: Okay, jaan. Bye.
       Riddhima hung up on the phone, blushing from her conversation. She always blushed when he called her 'jaan.'
      Anjali sighed impatiently and waved frantically.
Anj: Chal bhi naa, Riddzy!
Muski: Haan na, yaar. Rahul bahaar intezaar ker raha hoga!
      Riddhima laughed at Muskaan.
Riddz: Oh hoo, Rahul ki itni fiker? Tum log chalo, main apna bag leker aati hoon, hmm?


(*)(*)(*)(*)


       Armaan whistled outside the airport, his hand resting on a banister. A girl winked at him as she passed by and he whistled.
A: Hi, beautiful!
      She waved and laughed. Atul looked at Armaan.
Atul: Tu kaise kerta hai yeh, yaar?
Ammy: Kya, whistle?
Atul: Nain, nain-ladkiyun ka pataana!
      Rahul, who stood by their side, looked them both.
Rahul: Chod dho yeh sab. Ab tum bhi ek ladki doondo aur settle ho jao!
      Ammy and Atul both laughed. They put their arms around each other's shoulders and started singing.
A/A: Ek kanwara! Phir gaya maaraaa!
      Rahul rolled his eyes as his phone rang. He looked at the screen.
Rahul: Oh God, Dad ka phone hai. Woh abhi bhi doubt mein hain ki main aur Muskaan shaadi se pehle aise akele Goa mein aye hue hain.
Ammy: Lakein shaadi ki tyari ke liye hi tho aye hain!
Rahul: Yeh Dad ko kaun samjaye? Yahan signal kum hain; main bahaar jaker baat kerta hoon. You recieve the girls.
Ammy: Eh, ehhh! Main ussai kaise pehchanu ga? Pyar tho tu Delhi mein ker aya! Main tho abhi dekhun ga!
      Rahul blushed.
R: Tu dekh tho zara. Sab se alag wohi hogi...
      Armaan and Atul both teasingly whistled as Rahul walked away with his phone. A bunch of girls exited from the gate the boys stood in front of.
Atul: Kaun si hai, Bhabhi Muski?
      Armaan looked at him.
Ammy: Bhabhi Muski?!
Atul: Haan na! Maine suna hai pet names pyar berhate hain!
Ammy: Tu ussai pyar kerna chahta hai?
Atul: Ohhh! Nain, nain! Woh tho meri bhabhi hui na? Main-
      He smiled and blushed, making Armaan make a funny face at him.
Atul: Meri Cinderella tho koi aur hogi.
      Armaan nodded his head slightly.
Ammy: Haan, tu dekh. Koi-koi hogi...tere jaisi.
      He shivered as he said 'tere jaise.' He looked at the girls and searched.
Ammy: Sabse khaas, sabse alag-
      He stopped as he saw some girls walk out. All of them were either wearing jeans or skirts. Except one. She was wearing a pink outfit, her hair open and flying behind her. She was apart from the rest of the girls, walking by herself. She stopped and looked around nervously as if she had lost someone or something.
      Armaan's eyes lit up. He jumped over the banister and ran towards her.
Ammy: BHABHI JI! BHABHI JI!!
      Riddhima looked up, startled. She saw him running towards her. She inched back, her heart beginning to race. Armaan's foot slipped as he fell forward, toppling over her!
Riddz: Aaaaahhh!!!
      They both landed on the ground with a heavy thud. Armaan raised his head and grinned at Riddhima excitedly.
Ammy: Bhaaaabhi jii!!
      Riddhima looked at him for a second with a blank expression. Her eyes finally narrowed as she pushed him across the chest, sending him back up.
Ammy: Oh, bhabhi ji aap tho-
Riddz: BHABHI JI? Tum ho kaun??
      Armaan slapped his head.
Ammy: Oh! Main tho bhool hi gaya! Main aapka Armaan.
      Riddhima raised her eyes.
Riddz: Bathameez! Mera koi aisa armaan nahin hai!
      She walked past him, pushing him. Armaan looked up confusedly.
Ammy: Aisa armaan? Oh-no!
      He walked after her.
Ammy: Mera mathlab tha mera naam Armaan hai!
      He stucked out his hand in front of Riddhima. Riddhima looked at him and then the hand.
Riddz: Tumne agar abhi issi waqt apna haath peeche nahin kiya tho main zor zor se chilaoon gi!
      Armaan bought his hand back quickly.
Ammy: Aray? Bahut ajeeb ho tum tho!
      From behind him, Rahul came jogging, hanging up on his phone.
Rahul: Kyun, mili?
      Riddhima looked at Rahul and clasped her hands together.
Riddz: Rahul!
      Rahul looked her way.
Rahul: Oh! Hii!!
      They both hugged as Riddhima smiled.
Rahul: Muskaan kahan hai?
      Armaan looked at Riddhima.
Ammy: Yeh hai.
Rahul: Kahan?
Ammy: YAHAN!
Rahul: KAHAN?
      Armaan sighed impatiently. He held Riddhima's shoulders and bought her in front of Rahul.
Ammy: YEH!
      Before Rahul responded, Anjali and Muskaan came there and stopped. Rahul looked at Muskaan and smiled, hugging her tightly.
Rahul: Muskaaaaaaan!
      Armaan's eyes opened wide. He slowly turned to Riddhima, surprised.
Ammy: Tho tum kaun ho?
      Riddhima looked at him angrily.
Riddz: Tumse mathlab?
      Armaan raised his eyebrows and shrugged. Atul, who had fallen over a luggage cart, stood up dizzily and walked their way.
Atul: Mujhe lag raha hai-jaise ki-jaise ki main mer chuka hoon-
      They all looked at him, puzzled.
Atul: Shiyad main oopar Baghvan ke paas hoon. Issi liye sab itna safaid hai...
      Walking dizzily, he bumped into Anjali, who looked at him in disgust.
Anjali: Get off me!
      Atul looked up. He stared at her, his eyes open wide. His hands suddenly raised up in the air, knocking Armaan's face.
Atul: Pari! Pari! PARII!!
      Armaan cleared his throat and bought Atul back.
Ammy: Atul, yeh pari nahin hai, yeh-
Anjali: Muskaan ki dost. Anjali.
Atul: AngeL?! Dekha, Armaan, yeh tho Pari hai!
Anjali: Angel nahin Anjali! Stupid! Rahul, let's go, yaar!
      They all walked out, Atul walking behind Anjali shouting pari in her ears. Rahul and Muskaan linked arms, chatting quietly. Riddhima turned and began to walk away.
Ammy: Oh, bhabhi ji!
      Riddhima stopped and turned, her eyes narrowed at him angrily.
Riddz: Maine kaha na, mera naam bhabhi ji nahin hai!
Ammy: Tho phir naam kya hai?
      Riddhima frowned at him.
Riddz: Riddhima. Riddhima Gupta.
      She turned and walked outside. Armaan scratched his head as he looked after her.
Ammy: Rahul, tu ghalat tha. Sabse alag jo ladki hai-woh Muskaan nahin, lakein Riddhima Gupta hai!
      He shrugged and walked outside, following the rest.
      As they reached, they stopped short. Rahul was sitting in the driving seat of the small car, with Muskaan in the passenger seat. Anjali was squashed in the back with Atul gazing at her in awe. Riddhima and Anjali's bags were in the trunk but Muskaan's stuff was loaded next to Atul and Anjali, leaving no room.
Riddz: Hey, guys! Main kahan jaoon?
      Rahul looked up.
Rahul: Oh! Tum Armaan ke saath bait jao na!
      As they drove away, waving, Riddhima looked after them, her eyes almost scared.
      Armaan looked at Riddhima. He bent down to face her. She looked at him irritatedly.
Ammy: Oof, yeh chehra. Aisa lagta hai jaise koi naya mirch masala nikla ho!
      Riddhima turned and looked at him angrily.
Riddz: Car?
      Armaan pointed.
Ammy: Wahan.
      Riddhima turned, walking to the car. Armaan looked after her.
Ammy: Chalti tho aise hai jaise gaari iski ho.
      He followed her to the car as they both sat down. Riddhima shut the door loudly.
Ammy: Araam se! Todo gi kya?
      Riddhima looked at him angrily again.
Riddz: Just drive.
      Armaan looked at her.
Ammy: Ms. Mirchi, main tumhara driver nahin hoon. Araam se baito!
      They both looked at each other, their eyes both irritated of the other. Armaan stepped on the road, leading to a journey which yet he was not even aware of.


-This was just an intro sorta part. The next parts will be more interesting 😳



       
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
lol awesome part dude...armaan already mistaking her pagal...lol omg atul ahah... 😆 😆 😆 i'll try to comment better after i stop the giggles 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

OMG...I cant stop laffing after dis part!
Was seriously very well written! 👏

And veryyyyyy funny! Ur an amazing writer!

Luved the way Armaan knoced Ridz over yelling "BHABHI JI!" 😆
And Atul calling Anjali a pari was just fantastic! 👏

Please continue soon and thanx 4 ur PM! 😳


*~*Marisha*~*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
amazing!
this is hilarious i literally laughed out loud when i read the part with atul hitting armaan in the face screaming pari pari 😆 . it was hilarious. please update soon 😃